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Unit 4 Honesty 第3课时 Section 1 (Reading II) 教学设计
一、教学分析
分析维度
内容阐释
授课教材
沪教牛津版(五四学制)(2024)七年级下册
授课题目
Unit 4 Honesty Section 1 (Reading II)
课时
第3课时(共8课时,本课为第3课时)
课型
阅读深析课
主题情境
人与社会——诚实守信与道德选择
【单元整体定位与课时衔接】
本单元以“Honesty”(诚实)为主题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴下的“道德修养与价值选择”子主题,核心大观念为“诚实是个人成长的基石,也是构建信任社会的核心”。
本课时作为阅读课的第二课时,在第2课时整体感知文本内容的基础上,聚焦于深度阅读与语言运用,主要任务包括:
1. 文本深度分析——分析叙事散文的文体特征、写作手法(细节描写、心理描写、对比手法)和语言特点
2. 核心语言点精讲与运用——掌握重点短语和句型,能够在真实语境中正确运用
3. 人物心理与主题意义深化——分析父子对话中的教育智慧,深入理解“无人监督时的正直”这一核心主题
4. 文本复述与观点表达——根据故事脉络复述内容,运用所学语言表达对主题的理解
课时衔接说明:
衔接方向
内容说明
第2课时
→本课时
学生在第2课时已整体感知故事情节,了解了主人公面临“留下还是放走大鱼”的道德两难选择。本课时将深入分析语言点和写作手法,挖掘“无人监督时的正直”这一深层主题。
本课时
→第4—5课时
本课时学习的核心短语(be required to do, think about, be aware of)和第6课时写作以及后续口语道歉表达形成语言积累;故事中的“选择”主题为第4课时选择疑问句的学习提供语境素材。
二、深度语篇研读
分析维度
内容阐释
What
语篇以第一人称叙述,回忆作者少年时期与父亲在湖边钓鱼的经历。夜幕降临时,他钓到了一条巨大的鲈鱼——这是他见过的最大的鱼。然而父亲看了一眼手表,发现还不到当地规定的鲈鱼开钓时间。父亲要求他将鱼放回湖中。尽管四周空无一人,没有人会知道,男孩经过内心的挣扎,最终还是听从父亲的话将鱼放回水中。这次经历成为他“终身受益的一课”。多年后他深刻领悟到:当我们做出正直的选择时,不是因为有摄像头或旁观者,而是因为我们知道什么是正确的事情并坚持做它。
Why
作者通过回忆少年时期的钓鱼经历,传递了“诚实不是因为有人在看,而是因为知道什么是对的并且坚持它”的核心价值观。文章通过具体的“道德两难”情境,让读者体会诚实选择的艰难与价值,引导学生理解:真正的正直不需要观众,而是内心的自我要求。
How
采用第一人称叙事散文体裁,以时间顺序展开。语言简洁而富有感染力,运用细节描写(月光下的鲈鱼、父亲的表、空无一人的湖边)增强画面感,运用心理描写展现男孩内心的挣扎。语篇运用一般过去时叙述过去事件,结尾部分使用一般现在时阐述普适道理。文中核心短语(at first, catch sight of, be required to do, think about, be aware of)为学习提供了丰富的语境素材。
三、学情分析
维度
描述
已有基础
学生在第2课时已初步阅读故事,整体把握了情节发展和主要信息,了解了核心词汇的基本含义。学生对“诚实”主题有了初步认识。
存在问题
1. 对核心短语(be required to do, be aware of等)的用法理解不够深入,运用不够熟练。2. 对叙事散文的写作手法(细节描写、心理描写、对比手法)的分析经验较少。3. 在复述故事时,语言组织不够连贯,人称代词使用混乱。4. 对“无人监督时的正直”这一深层主题的理解不够深刻,难以用英语准确表达。
发展需求
需要深入理解核心短语的用法,掌握描述道德选择和内心活动的多样化表达;需要学习分析叙事散文的写作手法;需要通过复述和讨论提升语言组织和口语表达能力;需要在主题探究中深化对“诚实”内涵的理解。
四、核心素养目标
素养维度
教学目标(本课时)
语言能力
深入理解并运用核心短语:be required to do, think about, be aware of, at first, catch sight of, get away with等;掌握重点句型:There were no others around, so no one would ever know. / This was the most important lesson of my life.;能运用目标语言复述故事并表达对主题的理解。
学习能力
通过精读策略,学习从文本中分析写作手法(细节描写、心理描写、对比手法);通过复述活动提升信息整合和口语表达能力;通过小组合作探究,提升自主学习和合作交流能力。
思维品质
通过分析父子对话,理解父亲的教育智慧——不是空洞说教,而是让孩子在实际行动中体验诚实;通过探讨“Why did the boy finally let the fish go?”分析其心理变化过程,培养因果推理能力;通过“无人监督时仍坚持做正确的事”这一主题,培养从外在约束到内在自律的认知进阶。
文化意识
理解“正直不需要观众”这一普世价值观;通过父亲的教育方式,理解“以身作则”在道德教育中的意义;深化对“诚实是品格,不是表演”的认识。
五、教学重点与难点
项目
内容
教学重点
1. 掌握核心短语和重点句型的用法,能够在语境中正确运用。2. 分析叙事散文的写作手法(细节描写、心理描写、对比手法)。3. 深入理解“无人监督时的正直”这一核心主题。4. 完成故事复述。
教学难点
1. 分析“空无一人”的环境描写对突出主题的作用——正直不是因为有监督,而是因为知道什么是对的。2. 体会男孩从“想要留下鱼”到“放走鱼”的心理变化过程。3. 在复述和讨论中综合运用所学语言知识。
六、教学方法
任务型教学法、合作探究法、归纳法、精读教学法、情境教学法、对比分析法。
七、教学准备
类别
内容
教学课件
PPT课件(含文本结构图、写作手法分析图、核心短语归纳表、复述思维导图)
教具
核心短语练习单、复述思维导图模板
八、教学过程
Step 1: Lead-in & Revision 导入与复习 (5 mins)
Activity 1: 快速问答——复习故事基本信息
教师通过快速问答,帮助学生回顾第2课时所学内容:
1. “What is the story about?” (A boy who caught a huge bass but had to let it go)
2. “Why did the father ask the boy to put the fish back?” (Because it was not yet the legal fishing season)
3. “Was there anyone else around?” (No, no one else was there)
4. “What did the boy do in the end?” (He let the fish go back into the lake)
5. “Why was this experience a ‘lifetime lesson’ for him?” (It taught him the importance of doing the right thing even when no one is watching)
Activity 2: 故事要素回顾
教师呈现第2课时完成的信息采集表格,引导学生快速回顾故事要素:
要素
内容
When
night
Where
by the lake
Who
the boy and his father
What
caught a huge bass, had to let it go
Why
fishing season hadn’t started
Result
let the fish go
Lesson
do the right thing even when no one is watching
设计意图:通过快速问答和要素回顾,激活学生对文本内容的记忆,为本课时的深度阅读和语言学习做好铺垫。
Step 2: Language Focus 核心语言点精讲 (10 mins)
教学策略提示:核心语言点精讲采用“原句呈现—归纳规律—即时训练”三步走,强调在语境中自然习得。本课时选取与主题紧密相关的核心短语进行重点讲解。
Language Point 1: at first
1. 原句呈现:
“At first, the boy was very excited about the huge fish.”
2. 讲解用法:
at first = in the beginning(起初,开始的时候)
常用于描述最初的状态,暗示后面会有变化
3. 对比辨析:
at first 强调“最初”,常与后来发生的事情对比
first 强调顺序上的“第一”
4. 例句展示:
At first, he wanted to keep the fish. But then he realized it was wrong.
At first, I didn’t like the idea. Later, I changed my mind.
5. 练习:完成句子
(1) ______, he was happy, but then he felt sorry. (At first)
(2) ______, let me introduce myself. (First)
Language Point 2: catch sight of
1. 原句呈现:
“He caught sight of a huge bass at the end of his line.”
2. 讲解用法:
catch sight of = see suddenly or briefly(看见;瞥见)
强调“突然看见”或“短暂看见”
3. 同义表达:
see, notice, spot
4. 例句展示:
I caught sight of a deer running across the road.
She caught sight of her friend in the crowd.
5. 练习:完成句子
(1) He ______ a familiar face in the crowd. (caught sight of)
(2) She ______ of a wallet on the ground. (caught sight)
Language Point 3: be required to do
1. 原句呈现:
“He was required to put the fish back because it wasn’t the legal fishing season.”
2. 讲解用法:
be required to do = be expected or ordered to do something(被要求做某事)
常用于描述因规则、法律或规定而产生的义务
3. 常见搭配:
be required by law(法律规定)
be required to follow the rules(被要求遵守规则)
4. 例句展示:
All students are required to wear school uniforms.
You are required to return the books on time.
5. 练习:完成句子
(1) Visitors ______ show their ID cards. (are required to)
(2) The boy ______ put the fish back. (was required to)
Language Point 4: think about
1. 原句呈现:
“He thought about keeping the fish because no one would know.”
2. 讲解用法:
think about = consider(考虑)
区分 think about(考虑)与 think of(想到)
3. 语境拓展:
He thought about keeping the fish, but he knew it was wrong.
I’m thinking about what to do next.
4. 练习:完成句子
(1) He ______ keeping the fish for a long time. (thought about)
(2) What do you ______ the plan? (think of/think about)
Language Point 5: be aware of
1. 原句呈现:
“Later, he became aware of the importance of doing the right thing.”
2. 讲解用法:
be aware of = know or realize something(意识到;知道)
后接名词、代词或名词短语
3. 常见搭配:
be aware of the importance(意识到重要性)
be aware of the consequences(意识到后果)
4. 例句展示:
He was not aware of the danger.
Are you aware of the school rules?
5. 练习:完成句子
(1) He ______ the importance of honesty. (was aware of)
(2) We should ______ our responsibilities. (be aware of)
Language Point 6: get away with
1. 原句呈现:
“He thought he could get away with keeping the fish since no one was around.”
2. 讲解用法:
get away with = escape punishment for doing something wrong(做错事而未被惩罚)
3. 语境拓展:
He thought he could get away with cheating on the test, but he was caught.
No one saw him take the money, so he thought he could get away with it.
4. 例句展示:
You can’t get away with breaking the rules.
The thief thought he could get away with the crime, but he was arrested.
5. 练习:完成句子
(1) He didn’t want to cheat because he knew he couldn’t ______ it. (get away with)
(2) No one saw him, so he thought he could ______ lying. (get away with)
Step 3: Writing Techniques Analysis 写作手法赏析 (8 mins)
Activity 1: 细节描写——画面感与真实感的营造
1. 教师引导学生找出文中的细节描写,分析其作用:
细节描写
作用
“the huge bass shone in the moonlight”
突出鱼的美丽和珍贵,增强“留下”的诱惑力
“the father looked at his watch”
暗示规则意识,为父亲的决定做铺垫
“No one was around. No one would ever know.”
强调“无人监督”的环境,突出道德两难的困境
2. 教师引导学生思考:为什么作者要反复强调“No one was around”?如果没有这个细节,故事的意义会有什么不同?
Activity 2: 心理描写——展现内心挣扎
1. 教师引导学生找出文中描写男孩内心活动的句子:
“He had never caught such a huge fish before. He wanted to keep it.”
“He thought about keeping the fish because no one would know.”
“He struggled with his feelings, but finally did the right thing.”
2. 教师引导学生分析心理描写的作用——让读者感同身受,理解诚实选择的艰难。
Activity 3: 对比手法——突出主题
1. 教师引导学生分析文中的对比手法:
对比维度
对比内容
作用
内心矛盾
want to keep vs. know it’s wrong
展现内心挣扎
外部环境
no one around vs. doing the right thing
突出“正直不需要观众”
短期利益 vs 长期价值
win a prize vs. a lifetime lesson
升华主题
2. 教师提问:“What does the contrast between ‘no one would ever know’ and ‘he did the right thing’ tell us about honesty?”
设计意图:通过写作手法赏析,培养学生的文学鉴赏能力,帮助理解作者的写作意图和主题表达。
Step 4: Character Analysis & Theme Deepening 人物分析与主题深化 (8 mins)
Activity 1: 父子对话分析——父亲的教育智慧
1. 教师引导学生聚焦父子对话,分析父亲的教育方式:
父亲的表现
教育智慧
没有直接命令,而是指出事实
让孩子自己思考,培养判断力
没有打骂,只有一句简单的要求
以身作则,信任孩子
没有监督孩子是否照做
让孩子在无人监督时自己做出选择
2. 教师提问:“Why didn’t the father keep watching to make sure the boy put the fish back? What does this tell us about his parenting?”
3. 学生讨论后,教师总结:“真正的教育不是监督,而是培养孩子的内在道德感。父亲相信儿子能够做出正确的选择。”
Activity 2: 主题深化——Why is it a ‘lifetime lesson’?
1. 教师引导学生深入探讨故事成为“终身受益的一课”的原因:
原因
分析
情境的真实性
不是说教,而是亲身体验
选择的艰难性
留下鱼有巨大诱惑,放走鱼需要勇气
无人监督的环境
教会孩子在无人看见时仍然正直
父亲的信任
让孩子感受到被尊重和信任
2. 教师引导学生总结核心主题:“Honesty is not about getting caught or not — it’s about doing what is right even when no one is watching.”
Activity 3: 价值思辨——“We may think we have gotten away with a wrong act...”
1. 教师引导学生讨论这句话的含义:为什么“以为自己逃脱了惩罚”其实是错误的认知?
2. 学生分享观点后,教师总结:真正的惩罚不是来自外界,而是来自内心的愧疚。正直的人不会因为没人看见就做错事,因为他们内心知道什么是对的。
设计意图:通过父子对话分析,理解父亲的教育智慧;主题深化帮助学生把握文章核心思想;价值思辨环节引导学生反思“诚实”的本质——不是因为害怕惩罚,而是因为知道什么是对的。
Step 5: Retelling — The Lifetime Lesson 课文复述 (8 mins)
Activity 1: 复述思维导图
教师呈现复述思维导图,帮助学生构建复述框架:
A Lifetime Lesson
│
┌────────────────────────────────────┐
│ │ │
Setting Conflict Resolution
(背景) (冲突) (解决)
│ │ │
night caught huge bass let the fish go
by the lake no one around learned a lifetime lesson
father and son wanted to keep honesty is doing right
fishing season but knew it was wrong
Hasn’t started
Activity 2: 过渡词引导复述
教师提供复述框架,学生根据框架和思维导图复述故事内容:
复述框架:
“One night, a boy went fishing with his father by the lake. Suddenly, he caught a huge bass. He was very excited because it was the biggest fish he had ever seen.
However, his father looked at his watch and said it wasn’t the legal fishing season yet. The boy was required to put the fish back. At first, he wanted to keep it. There was no one around, so no one would ever know. He thought about keeping it.
But then, he became aware of what was right. After a struggle, he decided to let the fish go.
Many years later, he realized that this was the most important lesson of his life. He learned that honesty is not about getting caught or not——it’s about doing what is right even when no one is watching.”
Activity 3: 学生复述展示
1. 学生两人一组,利用过渡词和思维导图互相复述故事。
2. 教师鼓励学生使用本课所学的核心短语(at first, catch sight of, be required to do, think about, be aware of 等)。
3. 邀请2—3名学生上台复述,教师点评,关注过渡词的运用和语言的准确性。
设计意图:通过过渡词引导的复述训练,提升学生语言组织和连贯表达能力;思维导图搭建复述框架,降低难度;复述展示提升口语表达能力。
Step 6: Extension — Real-life Application “Moral Dilemmas” 拓展与思辨 (5 mins)
Activity 1: 情境思辨——“你会怎么做?”
1. 教师呈现两个与学生生活相关的“道德两难”情境:
情境
问题
考试中看到好朋友偷看答案
你会怎么做?为什么?
在商店里,店员多找了钱
你会怎么做?为什么?
2. 学生4人一组讨论,运用本课所学核心短语和主题思想进行表达:
“I would ______ because even though no one would know, I believe in doing the right thing.”
“At first, I might think about keeping it, but then I would realize that...”
3. 邀请小组代表分享讨论结果。
Activity 2: 教师总结与语言积累引导
教师总结本节课所学:
“Today we explored the deeper meaning of the story. The boy faced a moment when no one was watching — the perfect chance to get away with something. But he chose to do the right thing. That choice made all the difference.”
“The father didn’t preach; he simply pointed out what was right and trusted his son to make the right choice. That’s true education.”
“The phrases we learned — ‘at first’, ‘catch sight of’, ‘be required to do’, ‘think about’, ‘be aware of’—will help you describe similar situations. And the most important lesson from this story: Honesty is not about getting caught——it’s about who you are when no one is looking.”
设计意图:通过情境思辨将故事主题与学生实际生活建立联系,培养批判性思维和口语表达能力;教师总结强化核心主题和语言积累。
Step 7: Summary & Homework 总结与作业 (4 mins)
1. 知识总结
教师引导学生回顾本节课所学:
类别
内容
核心短语
at first, catch sight of, be required to do, think about, be aware of, get away with
写作手法
细节描写、心理描写、对比手法
人物分析
父亲的教育智慧(信任而非监督);儿子的内心挣扎与成长
核心主题
Honesty is not about getting caught——it’s about doing what is right even when no one is watching.
拓展应用
将主题思想应用于现实生活中的道德两难情境
2. 当堂检测
根据提示完成句子:
(1) The boy ______ a huge fish at the end of his line. (caught sight of)
(2) Fishing rules said he ______ put the fish back. (was required to)
(3) He ______ keeping the fish because no one would know. (thought about)
(4) Later, he ______ the importance of doing the right thing. (became aware of)
(5) No one saw him, so he thought he could ______ it. (get away with)
参考答案:caught sight of / was required to / thought about / became aware of / get away with
3. 单元项目预告
教师预告第7课时项目任务——制定班级“诚信契约”,鼓励学生结合本课所学思考班级中可以共同遵守的诚信约定。
4. 作业布置
分层
作业内容
基础作业
1. 听录音跟读课文,模仿正确的语音语调。2. 抄写本节课的6个核心短语,各造一个句子。
拓展作业
根据本节课完成的思维导图,用英文写一段80词左右的短文,复述故事并说明“为什么这是一堂终身受益的课”。
挑战作业
以“A lesson from the story”为题,写一篇80词左右的英文短文,结合你自己的经历,谈谈你对“无人监督时的正直”这一主题的理解。
九、板书设计
Unit 4 Honesty
Section 1 (Reading II) — A lifetime lesson (深析)
一、Key Phrases(核心短语)
at first 起初
catch sight of 看见,瞥见
be required to do 被要求做
think about 考虑
be aware of 意识到
get away with 逃脱惩罚
二、Writing Techniques(写作手法)
① 细节描写(Detail Description)——月光下的鱼,父亲的表,空无一人的湖
② 心理描写(Psychological Description)——内心的挣扎
③ 对比手法(Contrast)——想要留下 vs. 知道是错的;无人监督 vs. 坚持正确
三、Father’s Wisdom(父亲的教育智慧)
→ 没有监督,而是信任
→ 不是命令,而是让孩子自己选择
→ 培养内在道德感,而非外在约束
四、Core Theme(核心主题)
Honesty is not about getting caught or not——
It’s about doing what is right even when no one is watching.
五、Class Slogan
“Be the same person when no one is watching.”
十、教学评价
评价维度
评价标准
评价方式
语言知识
能正确理解并运用6个核心短语
课堂提问、当堂检测
写作手法
能说出至少2种写作手法及作用
课堂提问
人物分析
能分析父亲的教育智慧和儿子的心理变化
课堂提问、小组讨论
主题理解
能理解“无人监督时的正直”这一核心主题
小组讨论发言
课文复述
能借助思维导图和过渡词完整复述故事
复述展示
课堂参与
积极参与复述、讨论和拓展活动
课堂观察
十一、教学反思
反思维度
记录要点
亮点
核心短语分组教学便于系统化积累;写作手法分析提升文学鉴赏能力;父子对话分析揭示“信任而非监督”的教育智慧;主题深化紧扣“无人监督时的正直”这一核心价值观;情境思辨将故事主题与学生实际生活建立联系,培养批判性思维;情感升华传递“诚实是品格,不是表演”的理念。
不足
部分学生对 get away with 的用法理解不够深入;写作手法分析时间略紧;复述时部分学生仍依赖教材语句,语言替换能力不足。
改进
后续教学中可通过更多语境化练习强化短语辨析;增加写作手法分析的专项练习;提供更多复述句型的替换选择。
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