2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---忠犬救援-写导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写专题，系统梳理文本分析（角色、视角、时空线）、情节构造、情感逻辑等核心考点，通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题链设计，引导学生自主构建“文本理解-情节发展-情感表达”的知识网络，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维引导设计，如开篇设置“细节问答”自测工具，学生通过回答关键问题（如事故原因、角色行为）定位文本理解薄弱点，结合“续写框架”任务单（如衔接句设计、情节发展步骤）提升逻辑思维与语言表达能力，培养语言能力和思维品质。每个模块配有参考答案对比反思，帮助学生自主总结提升，教师可依据学情精准指导，支持个性化复习。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One lovely weekend, my husband Max took me and our two-year-old daughter Ila for a picnic in the suburbs of Philadelphia. Also accompanying us was our ten-month-old Labrador (拉布拉多犬) D’Argo. He was a dog I picked up on a rainy night. Over the years, he had changed from a shy, frightened puppy into a gentle and loyal companion. After our picnic, I safely fastened Ila into her car seat and waved D’Argo inside. But as I closed the door with a soft click, panic shot through me — D’Argo had accidentally stepped on the remote (遥控器), locking them both inside. Max hurried over, his face turning pale. “Where’s the key?” he asked anxiously. I pointed to the driver’s seat, where the only key, attached to the remote door lock control, was lying along with my purse. April afternoons are warm, and the temperature inside a parked car rises quickly. In just a few minutes, Ila’s cheeks turned pink and sweaty. Her little hands held the seat belt tightly. D’Argo jumped restlessly from the front seat to the back, barking loudly as if he had been begging for help. “Let’s break it open!” Max said, prying (撬动) at the lock with a thick branch, but the door stayed shut. “It’s no use,” I whispered, heart sinking. “Call 911!” Fifteen minutes later, the police car finally arrived. The officer tried to open the lock with a metal tool but failed. Soon, two more officers arrived, but they couldn’t unlock the door either. Ila’s face was flushed and shiny. Drops of sweat rolled down her cheeks, and she started crying for me. I hit the window helplessly. Seeing this, D’Argo jumped to her side at once, rubbing his head against her small hand gently and licking her tears to make her feel better. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The officers finally suggested breaking the front driver’s window to get them out. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I gratefully held D’Argo in my arms, and brushed the glass pieces off his body gently. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 My family and our Labrador D’Argo went for a picnic--- _________________ ---D’Argo locked the girl and himself in the car by accident--- _________________ ---the car turned hot and Ila suffered from heat and fear--- _________________ ---police arrived but failed to unlock the car---D’Argo comforted the scared little girl 4. 细节问答 How did the author get the dog D’Argo? ：___________________________________ What accident happened after the picnic?：_________________________________ Why was the situation extremely dangerous?：________________________________________________ What did Max try to do to rescue them?：__________________________________________ What was the result of the police’s rescue attempts?：_____________________________________________ How did D’Argo protect and comfort Ila in the hot car?：_________________________________________________ What would the officers do to save Ila and D’Argo?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 一家人带着拉布拉多犬阿戈郊外野餐→_________________ →狗狗误碰遥控器，将自己和小女孩锁在车内→车内升温、孩子燥热哭闹，一家人尝试撬锁无果→_________________ →警察到场多次尝试开锁均失败→危急时刻狗狗温柔安抚受惊的小女孩→（续写）警方决定砸窗救援，成功救出二人→（续写）主人满心感恩，体悟狗狗的忠诚与陪伴 6．情感线 relaxed and joyful→___________→anxious and desperate→___________→touched and relieved→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The officers finally suggested breaking the front driver’s window to get them out. 衔接句1——How did they break the window? What happened after that? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I gratefully held D’Argo in my arms, and brushed the glass pieces off his body gently. 衔接句2——How did the author feel? What did she realize? What was the ending? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：警察最终建议砸开驾驶座车窗救人。 ①__________________________→②成功打开车门，众人立刻救出燥热哭泣的小女孩→③阿戈虽然受惊、身上沾有碎玻璃，却始终守护在孩子身旁； 第二段：我满怀感激地抱住阿戈，轻轻拂去它身上的碎玻璃。 ①我温柔安抚狗狗和受惊的女儿，内心满是感动与愧疚→②__________________________________→③自此我更加珍惜这份温暖真挚的陪伴。 四.段落续写 The officers finally suggested breaking the front driver’s window to get them out. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I gratefully held D’Argo in my arms, and brushed the glass pieces off his body gently. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 The author（温柔细心、深爱家人的母亲）；Max（焦急负责的父亲）；Ila（年幼柔弱、受惊燥热的小女孩）；D’Argo（温顺忠诚、危难守护主人的拉布拉多犬）；police officers（专业负责、及时救援的警察） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 My family and our Labrador D’Argo went for a picnic--- D’Argo grew from a shy puppy into a loyal family companion ---D’Argo locked the girl and himself in the car by accident--- inside temperature rose sharply, putting Ila in great danger ---the car turned hot and Ila suffered from heat and fear--- Max tried to pry the car door open but failed ---police arrived but failed to unlock the car---D’Argo comforted the scared little girl 4. 细节问答 How did the author get the dog D’Argo? ：The author picked him up on a rainy night. What accident happened after the picnic?：D’Argo accidentally stepped on the remote, locking himself and little Ila inside the car with the only key left in the car. Why was the situation extremely dangerous?：The afternoon was warm, and the temperature inside the parked car rose rapidly, threatening Ila’s safety. What did Max try to do to rescue them?：He tried to pry the car lock open with a thick branch, but it didn’t work. What was the result of the police’s rescue attempts?：The police tried different tools to unlock the car door but all failed. How did D’Argo protect and comfort Ila in the hot car?：He rubbed his head against Ila’s hand and licked her tears gently to calm her down. What would the officers do to save Ila and D’Argo?：They decided to break the car window to rescue the trapped girl and dog. What does the story tell us?：Dogs are loyal friends of human beings, and sincere companionship can bring warmth and strength in danger. 5．情节线 一家人带着拉布拉多犬阿戈郊外野餐→曾经弱小的狗狗已然成长为温顺忠诚的家人 →狗狗误碰遥控器，将自己和小女孩锁在车内→车内升温、孩子燥热哭闹，一家人尝试撬锁无果→紧急报警后警察到场，多次开锁救援均失败 →警察到场多次尝试开锁均失败→危急时刻狗狗温柔安抚受惊的小女孩→（续写）警方决定砸窗救援，成功救出被困的一人一犬→（续写）主人满心感恩，深深体会到狗狗的忠诚与珍贵陪伴 6．情感线 relaxed and joyful→shocked and panicked→anxious and desperate→helpless and worried→touched and relieved→grateful and cherished（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者一家郊外野餐时，狗狗意外将自己和年幼的女儿锁在高温车内，众人和警察多次救援无果，危急时刻狗狗温柔安抚受惊的孩子，最终警方砸窗救人，作者深深感念狗狗的忠诚守护。 英文：A loyal Labrador accidentally locked itself and the author’s little daughter in a hot car. After several failed rescue attempts, the dog comforted the scared girl tenderly. Finally, the police broke the window to save them, making the author cherish the precious companionship of the dog. 8. 句式 状语从句：As I closed the car door, panic shot through my heart. 非谓语动词：Ila’s cheeks turned pink and sweaty, suffering from the high temperature inside the car. 宾语从句：We knew that staying in the hot car would be extremely dangerous for little Ila. 定语从句：D’Argo was a loyal dog that had accompanied our family for a long time. 并列句：The temperature rose quickly, and the little girl cried helplessly in the car. 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：万物皆有灵性，忠诚的陪伴不分物种，危难时刻的守护最是温暖动人。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The officers finally suggested breaking the front driver’s window to get them out. 衔接句1——How did they break the window? What happened after that? The officers acted quickly, carefully broke the window and opened the car door. They successfully rescued the tired and scared Ila and D’Argo from the hot car. Paragraph 2: I gratefully held D’Argo in my arms, and brushed the glass pieces off his body gently. 衔接句2——How did the author feel? What did she realize? What was the ending? I was deeply touched by D’Argo’s loyalty. I realized he was not just a pet, but a reliable family member who guarded our family in danger. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：警察最终建议砸开驾驶座车窗救人。 ①警察做好防护，小心砸破车窗避免误伤孩子与狗狗→②迅速拉开车门，将闷热哭闹的小女孩抱出车内→③阿戈紧随其后跳出，虽沾有碎玻璃却安然无恙； 第二段：我满怀感激地抱住阿戈，轻轻拂去它身上的碎玻璃。 ①我温柔安抚受惊的女儿与乖巧的狗狗，满心感动→②危难之际阿戈不离不弃、温柔守护孩子→③我愈发珍惜这份跨越物种的温暖陪伴，心怀感恩。 四.段落续写（标准范文） The officers finally suggested breaking the front driver’s window to get them out. Considering the rising temperature and the child’s dangerous situation, the officers acted without hesitation. They covered the car window area to prevent broken glass from hurting Ila and D’Argo, then carefully broke the driver’s window. The moment the window shattered, fresh air flooded in. The officers quickly opened the door and pulled the exhausted little Ila out of the car. Meanwhile, D’Argo jumped out safely, shaking off the heat and fear. I gratefully held D’Argo in my arms, and brushed the glass pieces off his body gently. Looking at his slightly injured fur and tired eyes, I was filled with overwhelming gratitude. Despite his own fear in the hot enclosed car, D’Argo had devoted himself to comforting my little daughter selflessly. It was his tenderness that calmed the scared child down. I realized D’Argo was far more than a pet. He was a loyal family guardian, who always accompanied and protected our family with all his sincerity. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $