摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“传递善意”主题,整合常用表达(如reach out to, race against time)、记叙文写作框架及课文视频资源,通过故事复述、问题解答等活动搭建学习支架,衔接从语言理解到写作输出的学习脉络。
其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养,以“善意循环”为主线,通过Retell the story任务训练叙事逻辑,写作模板(三段式结构)和目标句型(如It was…when I…)引导规范表达,评价量表多维度支持教学反馈。既提升学生语言应用与逻辑思维,又为教师提供清晰教学路径与评价工具。
内容正文:
Unit 4 Helping out
Developing ideas
reading for writing
第二课时
1
1.正在上音乐课
2.地面剧烈摇晃
3.被甩到地上
4.猛地站起来
5.冲出去
6.震惊地发现……
7.化为碎片 / 成为废墟
8.害怕得浑身发抖
9.永远无法忘记
10.被……深深打动
11.下定决心要……
常用表达
1.be having a music lesson
2.the ground shook hard
3.be thrown to the floor
4.jump to my feet
5.rush outside
6.be shocked to find...
7.be reduced to pieces
8.be shaking all over with fear
9.can never forget
10.be deeply touched by...
11.make up one’s mind to...
Language points
1.依然记得……的温暖
2.向我伸出援手
3.争分夺秒
4.尽可能多地救人
5.需要支援
6.报名帮忙
7.伸出援助之手
8.给了我很多帮助
9.绝不轻松
10.爱衍生爱
11.善意与仁慈的循环
常用表达
1.still remember the warmth of...
2.reach out to me
3.race against time to do
4.save as many people as possible
5.need support
6.sign up to help
7.offer a helping hand
8.give me a lot of help
9.by no means easy
10.Love leads to love.
11.a circle of goodwill and
kindness
Language points
学习活动
学习理解
应用实践
迁移创新
Retell the story.
...leads to...
...creates...
...happened
be thrown to
be shocked to
reduce to piece
...was shaking...
reached out to...saved....
...never forget...
...race against time to...
be deeply touched by...
...made up my mind to...
...graduated..
and become...
...gave... a lot of help...
...connection..
had offered a helping hand...
12 years ago
...heard...support...
...signed up to...
...still remembered...
The circle of good will
Pass on help
5
学习活动
学习理解
应用实践
迁移创新
1. What does “jumped to my feet” mean?
Because they wanted to save as many people as possible during the earthquake.
When someone shows kindness, it inspires others to do the same. This can create a chain of helpful and caring actions that keeps going.
It means “stood up quickly / immediately”. (一下子跳起来)
2. Why did the soldiers, firemen, doctors and nurses “race against time”?
3. How do you understand “the circle of goodwill”?
Answer the questions.
Pass on help
6
学习活动
学习理解
应用实践
迁移创新
Think and share
1. Why did the writer decide to become a medical worker?
Because she was deeply touched by the courage and hard work of the doctors and nurses She made up her mind to become one of them to help others
2. What kind of person do you think she is?
I think she is ... because...
grateful, kind,
determined,
and willing to help others.
学习活动
学习理解
应用实践
迁移创新
Learning to think for question 1 Sometimes there is a cause-and-effect relationship between two ideas. This may help you understand someone's feelings or decision.
学习活动
学习理解
应用实践
迁移创新
who
Do you know your own experience or any other people passing on help?
when
where
what
how
Let’s share.
9
While-writing
Write a story about a person passing on help.
5
3.体裁:
Step 1:
1.人称:
2.时态:
第一人称
一般过去时
记叙文
1
2
3
审
Write a story about a person passing on help.
三、写作框架(三段式结构)
第一段:开头(事件背景:我遇到困难,得到他人帮助)
交代时间、场景,描述自己遇到的困境,他人伸出援手帮助自己。
第二段:中间(内心触动+立志行动)
讲述被帮助后的感动,下定决心传递善意,努力成长、帮助他人。
第三段:结尾(传递善意+主题升华)
讲述自己主动帮助他人,感悟善意循环,点明a circle of goodwill主题。
1. 核心词汇(要求至少选用4个)
reach out to, save, race against time, a helping hand, offer, kindness, a circle of goodwill, connection, deeply touched ,by no means ,be shocked to do
目标句型(必须套用)
1. It was … when I … (描述事件发生时间)
2. I was deeply touched by … (表达内心触动)
3. So I made up my mind to … (表达立志/决心)
4. It’s time for me to … (传递善意)
5. Love leads to love, and so creates a circle of goodwill and kindness.(结尾升华)
Pass on kindness
It was last winter when I fell down on my way to school. I was badly hurt and felt helpless. Just then, my classmate Lily reached out to me and helped me stand up. She walked with me to the clinic.
I was deeply touched by her kindness. So I made up my mind to help others in need. I always try my best to be ready to give a helping hand to my classmates.
Last week, a new student lost his books. I helped him look for them. It was time for me to offer a helping hand. Love leads to love, and so creates a circle of goodwill and kindness.
It was on a difficult day that I fell into trouble and had no one to turn to. I was shaking with fear and didn’t know what to do. At that moment, someone warm reached out to me. They raced against time to offer me a helping hand and pulled me out of trouble.
I was completely deeply touched by their selfless kindness. The special connection between us changed my life greatly. I made up my mind to become a person who always brings warmth to others. Day after day, I keep doing small good things for people in need.
Kindness is never a one-way gift. When we pass love around, love will come back to us. As the saying goes, love leads to love, and it makes a lasting, endless circle of goodwill and kindness in our life.
写作模板 Pass on kindness
It was ______ (时间) when I ______ (遇到的困难). I was so ______ (心情). Just then, ______ (人物) reached out to me and ______ (他人的帮助行为). I was saved at last.
I was deeply touched by his/her ______ (品质/行为). So I made up my mind to ______ (我的决心). I tried my best to ______ (为目标做出的努力).
One day, I heard someone needed help. Right away, I signed up to help. It was time for me to offer a helping hand. I believe love leads to love, and so creates a circle of goodwill and kindness.
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