Unit 5 Nature's Temper-2025-2026学年八年级英语下册以读促写综合训练（人教版）

**基本信息** 以“自然灾害经历”为主题，构建“阅读输入-方法提炼-写作输出”的以读促写训练体系，系统提升语言表达与逻辑组织能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |美文鉴赏学习|5题（含4问答+1翻译）|信息定位与细节提取|通过地震报道输入灾害描述词汇、时间/地点表达结构| |写作训练|1写作任务|审题（体裁/人称）-框架搭建（思维导图辅助）-语言表达（范文示范）|从阅读材料到个人经历的叙事结构迁移（时间-事件-感受）| |读写综合|3组（每组含阅读题+写作题）|读写结合（阅读获取素材，写作应用结构）|不同灾害场景（海啸/暴雨/暴风雪）下语言运用的横向迁移，强化叙事连贯性与安全知识融合|

2025-2026学年八年级英语下册以读促写综合训练（新教材人教版） Unit 5 Nature's Temper 目录 1. 学习目标 2. 美文鉴赏学习 3. 写作训练（思路点拨） 4. 读写综合 学习目标 描述遇见恶劣天气或自然灾害的经历。 美文鉴赏学习 A strong earthquake hit central Myanmar (缅甸) at 2:20 p.m. on March 28, 2025 (Beijing Time).The earthquake was 7.9 in magnitude (震级) and happened 30 kilometres underground.The center of the earthquake was near Sagaing Region, close to China’s border. The earthquake caused serious problems.In Myanmar, 3,839 people died and 5,105 were hurt.Many buildings in Mandalay and Naypyidaw fell down.Important places like the Sagaing Bridge and Mandalay Airport were destroyed.In Thailand, a tall building in Bangkok collapsed (倒塌), killing three people.In China’s Yunnan Province, two people were slightly hurt. Rescue work was difficult because roads were broken.China sent a medical team with drones (无人机) to help.The United Nations promised $5 million for aid.Scientists say Myanmar is on the Sagaing Fault, where two big earth plates meet.This area often has strong earthquakes. “I told my students two things.First, we should protect ourselves, because it is not a game.Second, we should get ready for everything in time,” said Adelina, a teacher of the middle school.Although all the buildings in the school fell down, everyone was safe. Because both the students and the teachers had learned some life⁃saving skills, they quickly ran out of the buildings. 1. When and where did the earthquake happen? _________________________________________________________ 2.How many people were hurt in Myanmar?  _________________________________________________________ 3.Why was rescue work difficult after the earthquake?  _________________________________________________________ 4.What will you do if you face the earthquake?  ________________________________________________________ 5. 将划线的句子翻译成中文。 _________________________________________________________ 写作训练 上文介绍了2025年3月28日缅甸中部发生的7.9级地震的相关情况。面对地震等自然灾害,人类的力量显得极其渺小。广东是我国自然灾害多发省份,每年夏季都会遭遇台风和暴雨洪涝等自然灾害,请根据以下思维导图提示写一篇文章,讲述一次让你印象深刻的自然灾害经历。 注意: (1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 (3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 An important event that I remember well was__________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路点拨 第一步:审题。体裁:记叙文_________　人称　_________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  第二步:列框架。 参考范文 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 读写综合专练 （1） A.阅读短文，用英文填空或回答问题。（注意每小题的词数要求） On Sunday morning, a strong earthquake hit Indonesia and then a big tsunami followed. It soon went on to other countries in the south and Southeast Asia, as well as East Africa. Tsunamis are especially dangerous for children. By Wednesday, nearly 6,000 people died because of the tsunami. 30% of them were children, and most of them were 5 to 12 years old. In open seas, a tsunami is only one or two metres high. When it is near land, it is as high as 10 metres. Houses and cars near the sea can be taken away by these big waves. Because a tsunami moves fast and can travel to another side of the sea within one day, it may affect (影响) a lot of places. The Pacific Ocean has a lot of strong tsunamis because it is very large in size. Besides, there are many big earthquakes there every year. Luckily, China doesn’t see tsunamis often because its sea floor is quite flat (平的). The islands around China also help the country avoid them. What should you do when there’s a tsunami? Move to a safe place as quickly as possible. If you are near the sea and you feel the earth shake, move to higher ground. Stay away from rivers and seas. 1．How many people died in the tsunami? (不超过3词) ____________ 2．Fill in the blank: The closer a tsunami is to land, ____________. (不超过2词) 3．Fill in the blank: There are lots of tsunamis in the ______ Ocean. (限填1词) 4．Fill in the blank: China rarely has tsunamis because of ____________ and surrounding islands. (不超过4词) 5．What should you do when a tsunami comes? (不超过20词) ________________________________________________________ B. 书面表达 6．假设你是学校英语广播站的播音员，需要报道近期发生的暴风雪事件。请以“A Terrible Snowstorm”为题准备一篇英文广播稿。 要点： 1. 受灾情况：停电、车辆被困、树枝断裂； 2. 防护措施：多穿衣服、使用蜡烛、家人团聚； 3. 心得体会：感到担忧、学会如何避险； 要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；2. 运用过去进行时再现情景；3. 表达通顺，衔接自然，词数 80 左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (2) 请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。 Heavy rain can cause floods and bring trouble to our lives. Here are some tips to stay safe during heavy rain: 1.Stay indoors: Don’t go outside unless it’s necessary. If you have to go out, wear waterproof clothes and shoes. 2.Avoid low-lying areas: Don’t walk or drive through flooded streets. Low-lying places like basements can easily get filled with water. 3.Check your home: Make sure your roof is not leaking and your drains are clear to stop water from coming inside. 4.Prepare emergency supplies: Keep flashlights, batteries, and bottled water at home in case the power goes out. Following these tips can help you stay safe when heavy rain comes! 7．What should you wear if you have to go out during heavy rain? ___________________________________________________________________ 8．Why should you avoid low-lying areas during heavy rain? ___________________________________________________________________ 9．What can you do to stop water from coming into your home? ___________________________________________________________________ 10．What emergency supplies should you keep at home? ___________________________________________________________________ 11．What is the main purpose of these tips? ___________________________________________________________________ B．书面表达 12．你是李华，上周你所在的城市经历了一次暴雨，你成功按照学到的安全知识保护了自己和家里的宠物。请给你的笔友Mike写一封信，讲述这次经历。内容包括： (1) 暴雨发生的时间和情况； (2) 你采取的安全措施； (3) 这次经历让你学到的道理。 作文要求： (1) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 (2) 语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m writing to tell you about a heavy rainstorm that hit my city last week. ________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I learned that being prepared is really important. What about you? Have you ever experienced bad weather? Write back soon! Love, Li Hua （3） A．回答问题 Nature has different kinds of tempers. Sometimes it is warm and gentle. Sometimes it is strong and angry. We can learn about nature’s temper from weather reports. When bad weather comes, we should stay indoors and keep away from windows. We should get ready early with water and food. When we understand nature, we can stay safe and live a happy life. 13．What can we learn from weather reports? ____________________________________________________________ 14．What should we do when bad weather comes? ____________________________________________________________ 15．What should we get ready for bad weather? ____________________________________________________________ 16．How can we stay safe in bad weather? ____________________________________________________________ 17．What can help us live a happy and safe life? ____________________________________________________________ B．书面表达 18．请以My Experience of Bad Weather为题，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 描述一次你经历的恶劣天气（暴雨、大风等） ​2. 写清楚当时你在做什么、家人如何应对 ​3. 写出你学到的安全启示 ​4. 词数80左右，语句通顺，不出现真实信息 My Experience of Bad Weather _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年八年级英语下册以读促写综合训练（新教材人教版） Unit 5 Nature's Temper 目录 1. 学习目标 2. 美文鉴赏学习 3. 写作训练（思路点拨） 4. 读写综合 学习目标 描述遇见恶劣天气或自然灾害的经历。 美文鉴赏学习 A strong earthquake hit central Myanmar (缅甸) at 2:20 p.m. on March 28, 2025 (Beijing Time).The earthquake was 7.9 in magnitude (震级) and happened 30 kilometres underground.The center of the earthquake was near Sagaing Region, close to China’s border. The earthquake caused serious problems.In Myanmar, 3,839 people died and 5,105 were hurt.Many buildings in Mandalay and Naypyidaw fell down.Important places like the Sagaing Bridge and Mandalay Airport were destroyed.In Thailand, a tall building in Bangkok collapsed (倒塌), killing three people.In China’s Yunnan Province, two people were slightly hurt. Rescue work was difficult because roads were broken.China sent a medical team with drones (无人机) to help.The United Nations promised $5 million for aid.Scientists say Myanmar is on the Sagaing Fault, where two big earth plates meet.This area often has strong earthquakes. “I told my students two things.First, we should protect ourselves, because it is not a game.Second, we should get ready for everything in time,” said Adelina, a teacher of the middle school.Although all the buildings in the school fell down, everyone was safe. Because both the students and the teachers had learned some life⁃saving skills, they quickly ran out of the buildings. 1. When and where did the earthquake happen? _________________________________________________________ 2.How many people were hurt in Myanmar?  _________________________________________________________ 3.Why was rescue work difficult after the earthquake?  _________________________________________________________ 4.What will you do if you face the earthquake?  ________________________________________________________ 5. 将划线的句子翻译成中文。 _________________________________________________________ 写作训练 上文介绍了2025年3月28日缅甸中部发生的7.9级地震的相关情况。面对地震等自然灾害,人类的力量显得极其渺小。广东是我国自然灾害多发省份,每年夏季都会遭遇台风和暴雨洪涝等自然灾害,请根据以下思维导图提示写一篇文章,讲述一次让你印象深刻的自然灾害经历。 注意: (1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 (3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 An important event that I remember well was__________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 思路点拨 第一步:审题。体裁:记叙文_________　人称　_________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  第二步:列框架。 参考范文 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 美文鉴赏学习 1．In Nepal. 2．Because of its beauty and challenge. 3．Green forests full of birds, clear rivers with fish and small villages. 4．Local people. 5．It tells us to respect nature and keep trying to achieve our dreams. 写作训练 第一步：第三人称；一般现在时 第三步：1.China's longest river　2.from west to east 3．look like　4.wind through　5.such as　6.care for 第四步： 1．The Yangtze River runs about 6，300 km from west to east, flowing through many provinces. 2．It looks like a huge silver dragon winding through the land. 3．These plants and animals make it a lively ecosystem. 参考范文： The_world_is_very_big.Nature_with_its_amazing_skills_has_made_countless_wonderful_sights_in_different_places_on_earth. The Yangtze River is the largest river in China．(介绍一，1分) And it runs about 6，300 km from west to east, flowing through many provinces．(介绍二，1分) It looks like a huge silver dragon winding through the land．(介绍三，1分) Along its banks, there are thick forests with unique plants like metasequoias．(景观一，1分)Many rare animals live here, such as the finless porpoise and the Yangtze alligator.These plants and animals make it a lively ecosystem．(景观二，1分) But the river faces pollution and overfishing.We must protect it.Let's keep its water clean and care for its creatures, so this great river will keep beautiful．(呼吁，1分) 读写综合专练 （1） A.阅读短文，用英文填空或回答问题。（注意每小题的词数要求） On Sunday morning, a strong earthquake hit Indonesia and then a big tsunami followed. It soon went on to other countries in the south and Southeast Asia, as well as East Africa. Tsunamis are especially dangerous for children. By Wednesday, nearly 6,000 people died because of the tsunami. 30% of them were children, and most of them were 5 to 12 years old. In open seas, a tsunami is only one or two metres high. When it is near land, it is as high as 10 metres. Houses and cars near the sea can be taken away by these big waves. Because a tsunami moves fast and can travel to another side of the sea within one day, it may affect (影响) a lot of places. The Pacific Ocean has a lot of strong tsunamis because it is very large in size. Besides, there are many big earthquakes there every year. Luckily, China doesn’t see tsunamis often because its sea floor is quite flat (平的). The islands around China also help the country avoid them. What should you do when there’s a tsunami? Move to a safe place as quickly as possible. If you are near the sea and you feel the earth shake, move to higher ground. Stay away from rivers and seas. 1．How many people died in the tsunami? (不超过3词) ____________ 2．Fill in the blank: The closer a tsunami is to land, ____________. (不超过2词) 3．Fill in the blank: There are lots of tsunamis in the ______ Ocean. (限填1词) 4．Fill in the blank: China rarely has tsunamis because of ____________ and surrounding islands. (不超过4词) 5．What should you do when a tsunami comes? (不超过20词) ________________________________________________________ B. 书面表达 6．假设你是学校英语广播站的播音员，需要报道近期发生的暴风雪事件。请以“A Terrible Snowstorm”为题准备一篇英文广播稿。 要点： 1. 受灾情况：停电、车辆被困、树枝断裂； 2. 防护措施：多穿衣服、使用蜡烛、家人团聚； 3. 心得体会：感到担忧、学会如何避险； 要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；2. 运用过去进行时再现情景；3. 表达通顺，衔接自然，词数 80 左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (2) 请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。 Heavy rain can cause floods and bring trouble to our lives. Here are some tips to stay safe during heavy rain: 1.Stay indoors: Don’t go outside unless it’s necessary. If you have to go out, wear waterproof clothes and shoes. 2.Avoid low-lying areas: Don’t walk or drive through flooded streets. Low-lying places like basements can easily get filled with water. 3.Check your home: Make sure your roof is not leaking and your drains are clear to stop water from coming inside. 4.Prepare emergency supplies: Keep flashlights, batteries, and bottled water at home in case the power goes out. Following these tips can help you stay safe when heavy rain comes! 7．What should you wear if you have to go out during heavy rain? ___________________________________________________________________ 8．Why should you avoid low-lying areas during heavy rain? ___________________________________________________________________ 9．What can you do to stop water from coming into your home? ___________________________________________________________________ 10．What emergency supplies should you keep at home? ___________________________________________________________________ 11．What is the main purpose of these tips? ___________________________________________________________________ B．书面表达 12．你是李华，上周你所在的城市经历了一次暴雨，你成功按照学到的安全知识保护了自己和家里的宠物。请给你的笔友Mike写一封信，讲述这次经历。内容包括： (1) 暴雨发生的时间和情况； (2) 你采取的安全措施； (3) 这次经历让你学到的道理。 作文要求： (1) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 (2) 语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I’m writing to tell you about a heavy rainstorm that hit my city last week. ________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I learned that being prepared is really important. What about you? Have you ever experienced bad weather? Write back soon! Love, Li Hua （3） A．回答问题 Nature has different kinds of tempers. Sometimes it is warm and gentle. Sometimes it is strong and angry. We can learn about nature’s temper from weather reports. When bad weather comes, we should stay indoors and keep away from windows. We should get ready early with water and food. When we understand nature, we can stay safe and live a happy life. 13．What can we learn from weather reports? ____________________________________________________________ 14．What should we do when bad weather comes? ____________________________________________________________ 15．What should we get ready for bad weather? ____________________________________________________________ 16．How can we stay safe in bad weather? ____________________________________________________________ 17．What can help us live a happy and safe life? ____________________________________________________________ B．书面表达 18．请以My Experience of Bad Weather为题，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 描述一次你经历的恶劣天气（暴雨、大风等） ​2. 写清楚当时你在做什么、家人如何应对 ​3. 写出你学到的安全启示 ​4. 词数80左右，语句通顺，不出现真实信息 My Experience of Bad Weather _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 （1） 1．Nearly 6,000. 2．the higher 3．Pacific 4．its flat sea floor 5．Move to higher ground and stay away from rivers and seas.（答案合理即可） 6．例文： A Terrible Snowstorm Good morning, everyone! Last Friday, a terrible snowstorm hit our city. Strong winds were blowing and heavy snow was falling. Roads were blocked and cars were stuck outside. Some trees broke down and many areas lost power. People stayed indoors and wore warm clothes. Families lit candles and stayed together. I felt worried, but I learned how to keep safe in bad weather. Nature is powerful, but we can face it calmly. That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了海啸的破坏性、对儿童的高危性、形成与传播特点、易发区域以及中国较少受海啸影响的原因，并给出了海啸来临时的安全建议。 1．根据第二段“By Wednesday, nearly 6,000 people died because of the tsunami.”可知，有近6000人死于海啸。故填Nearly 6,000. 2．根据第三段“In open seas, a tsunami is only one or two metres high. When it is near land, it is as high as 10 metres.”可知，海啸越靠近陆地就越高。空处应填“越高”相关的词，此处为“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构，表示“越……就越……”。故填the higher。 3．根据第四段“The Pacific Ocean has a lot of strong tsunamis...”可知，太平洋有很多强烈的海啸。空处应填“太平洋”相关的词。故填Pacific。 4．根据第四段“Luckily, China doesn’t see tsunamis often because its sea floor is quite flat. The islands around China also help the country avoid them.”可知，中国很少发生海啸，是因为海床平坦且周边有岛屿保护。空处应填“平坦的海床”相关的短语。故填its flat sea floor。 5．本题为开放性问答，答案不唯一，言之有理即可。参考答案为Move to higher ground and stay away from rivers and seas. 6．[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时与过去进行时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，并突出重点，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候听众并交代暴风雪发生的时间； 第二步，运用过去进行时再现灾害发生时的情景，描述受灾情况； 第三步，介绍人们的防护措施； 第四步，表达个人感受与收获。 [亮点词汇] ①hit our city袭击我市 ②be stuck被困 ③lose power停电 ④stay indoors待在室内 ⑤keep safe保持安全 [高分句型] ①Strong winds were blowing and heavy snow was falling. (过去进行时的并列结构) ②Families lit candles and stayed together. (一般过去时并列谓语) ③I learned how to keep safe in bad weather. (how+动词不定式结构作宾语) （2） 7．Waterproof clothes and shoes. 8．Because they can easily get filled with water. 9．Make sure the roof isn’t leaking and drains are clear. 10．Flashlights, batteries and bottled water. 11．To help people stay safe during heavy rain. 12．例文 Dear Mike, I’m writing to tell you about a heavy rainstorm that hit my city last week. It started on Wednesday afternoon and lasted for 3 hours. The streets were flooded quickly. I closed all windows at once, moved my cat to a high table, and took out the emergency kit I prepared before. I also turned on the radio to get weather updates. I learned that being prepared is really important. What about you? Have you ever experienced bad weather? Write back soon! Love, Li Hua 【导语】本文是一篇说明文，介绍了暴雨天气可能引发洪水并给生活带来麻烦，同时详细列出了暴雨期间的安全防护建议，帮助人们在暴雨来临时保障自身安全。 7．根据原文“If you have to go out, wear waterproof clothes and shoes.”可知，如果暴雨期间必须外出，应该穿防水的衣服和鞋子，故填Waterproof clothes and shoes. 8．根据原文“Low-lying places like basements can easily get filled with water.”可知，暴雨期间要避开低洼地区是因为这些地方容易积水，故填Because they can easily get filled with water. 9．根据原文“Make sure your roof is not leaking and your drains are clear to stop water from coming inside.”可知，要阻止水进入家中，需确保屋顶不漏水且排水系统通畅，故填Make sure the roof isn’t leaking and drains are clear. 10．根据原文“Keep flashlights, batteries, and bottled water at home in case the power goes out.”可知，应在家中准备手电筒、电池和瓶装水等应急物资，故填Flashlights, batteries and bottled water. 11．根据原文“Here are some tips to stay safe during heavy rain”可知，这些建议的主要目的是帮助人们在暴雨期间保持安全，故填To help people stay safe during heavy rain. 12．[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般过去时； ③提示：围绕“上周城市遭遇的暴雨”展开，向迈克介绍暴雨的发生时间、持续时长和现场状况，讲述自己的具体应对措施，最后分享从这次经历中得到的感悟，并询问对方的相关经历，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明写信目的，告知对方要讲述上周自己所在城市遭遇暴雨的经历； 第二步，介绍暴雨的基本情况，详细讲述自己的应对行动； 第三步，分享从这次暴雨经历中得到的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①heavy rainstorm大暴雨 ②hit袭击，侵袭 ③last持续 ④flooded被水淹没 ⑤emergency kit应急包 ⑥weather updates天气最新消息 ⑦be prepared做好准备 [高分句型] ①I’m writing to tell you about a heavy rainstorm that hit my city last week.（that引导定语从句） ②I learned that being prepared is really important.（that引导宾语从句） ③I closed all windows at once, moved my cat to a high table, and took out the emergency kit I prepared before.（省略that的定语从句） （3） 13．We can learn about nature’s temper. 14．We should stay indoors and keep away from windows. 15．We should get water and food ready. 16．We should learn about nature’s temper and get ready early. 17．Understanding nature can help us. 18．范文 My Experience of Bad Weather Last Friday, I met a strong wind and heavy rain. At that time, I was doing my homework at home. Suddenly, the wind blew hard and it rained heavily. My mother quickly closed all the windows and my father turned off the outdoor lights. We stayed inside and kept away from the glass windows. The bad weather lasted for a short time. From this experience, I know we must stay calm indoors on bad days. It is important to follow safety rules to protect ourselves. 【导语】本文介绍了大自然有不同状态，我们可通过天气预报了解它，并说明了恶劣天气下的防护做法与准备事项，懂得自然就能平安快乐生活。 13．第二段指出：“We can learn about nature’s temper from weather reports.”，说明我们能从天气预报中了解大自然的脾气。 14．第二段指出：“When bad weather comes, we should stay indoors and keep away from windows.”，说明了恶劣天气来临时我们的正确做法。 15．第三段指出：“We should get ready early with water and food.”，表明要提前准备好水和食物应对坏天气。 16．第二、三段讲述了解大自然变化、做好物资准备、躲避危险，能让我们在恶劣天气中保证安全。 17．第三段指出：“When we understand nature, we can stay safe and live a happy life.”，说明了解大自然能让我们安全快乐地生活。 18．写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：记叙文，用一般过去时为主 明确要点：恶劣天气类型（暴雨、大风等）、当时自己的活动、家人的应对方式、学到的安全启示 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：交代时间及遭遇的恶劣天气 主体段：描述自己的活动及家人的应对措施 结尾段：总结安全启示，表达感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：恶劣天气 天气类型：strong wind and heavy rain/storm/thunderstorm/typhoon等 时间表达：last Friday/one day/yesterday evening/last summer等 要点二：自身活动与家人应对 自身活动：doing homework/reading books/watching TV/playing games等 家人应对：closed all the windows/turned off outdoor lights/stayed inside/kept away from glass windows/moved to a safe room等 要点三：安全启示 安全原则：stay calm indoors/follow safety rules/protect ourselves/avoid standing near windows/don’t go outside等 合 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $