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专题12 书面表达满分范文14篇
一、话题作文
1.(2025七年级下·上海黄浦·期末)Write in at least 60 words about the topic “My ways to protect trees”.(以“我保护树的方法”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
1. Why do you protect trees?
2. What are your ways to protect trees?
3. How do you feel about helping trees?
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二、书信作文
2.(2025七年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
你是动物保护协会的成员,在了解野生动物的处境后,想代表野生动物向保护中心写一封求助信,并以所代表的动物名称作为落款。以下问题供参考:
1.你是哪只动物?
2.你写信的目的是什么?
3.你面临什么问题?
4.你需要什么帮助?
Dear Wildlife Protection Centre,
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Yours,
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3.(2025七年级下·上海金山·期末)Write at least 55 words after reading the following situation and choosing one aspect.(请你阅读以下情境后选择其中一个方面写一封至少55个单词的推荐信。注意:不得出现考生真实信息,如:学校名称,考生姓名等。)
暑假将至,花园学校为助力学生度过一个充实且健康的假期,正精心策划一场主题为“微小行动,改变世界”的夏令营活动。目前,学校已向同学们征集了诸多建议。其中,有的同学提议举办日常生活中助人为乐小故事演讲活动;也有同学建议走进自然,投身野生动物保护工作;还有同学认为当务之急是关注环境,从护树、植树等行动做起。假如你是该校学生李东,请你向负责此次夏令营活动的陈老师写一封推荐信,推荐一个你认为切实可行的活动,并结合自身相关经历和感受说明理由。
注明:抄袭阅读语篇中语句,不得分。
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三、材料作文
4.(2025七年级下·上海静安·期末)Honesty is always the best policy. Write a blog post about an honest choice you made. Write at least 60 words. (请写一篇不少于60词的博客,描述你的一次有关诚实的选择,标点符号不占格。)
提示:生活中,我们常面临诚实与隐瞒的抉择,如损坏物品、发现错误等。正如谚语所说,诚实总是上策。请描述你的一次选择经历,并谈谈你的感悟与收获。
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分)
Suggested questions:
1. What happened?
2. What did you choose to do?
3. How did you feel?
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5.(2025七年级下·上海徐汇·期末)目前, 野生动物们正面临着各种威胁,很多动物已经濒临灭绝。但也有很多人意识到了保护动物的重要性。作为中学生的我们,同样可以在生活中尽我们所能地保护动物。请你以“how can we protect wild animals?”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的作文。标题已给出。以下问题供参考:
Suggested questions:
1. Is it important to protect wild animals?
2. What are main threats to wild animals?
3. How can we protect wild animals as middle school students?
(注意:文中不得出现考生姓名及其它相关真实信息。否则不予评分。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.(2025七年级下·上海崇明·期末)Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Protect endangered animals” (以“保护濒危动物”为题写一篇不少于 60 词的短文)
Suggested questions:
(1) What can animals do for humans?
(2) Why are some animals endangered?
(3) What can we do to protect them?
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Protect endangered animals Animals are our friends. They make our world beautiful and help keep nature healthy. For example, pandas are lovely and tigers are powerful. But sadly, many animals like them are endangered now. Why? Because people cut down too many trees, destroying their homes. Also, some people hunt too many animals or pollute the environment. We must protect them! First, we can learn about endangered animals. Second, we should stop buying things made from them. Third, we need to protect forests and keep rivers clean.
Let’s all help save these amazing animals!
7.(2025七年级下·上海嘉定·期末)在“根与芽”(Roots and Shoots)项目中,每个小组都会选择三类让世界变得更美好的项目:一类帮助人类,一类帮助动物,还有一类改善我们共同生活的环境。
陆遥正在学校网站论坛上发帖,邀请大家分享自己关于帮助他人、帮助动物或者改善环境的经历。请结合你的个人经历,选择一个方面在论坛回帖,谈谈你在这个过程中的经历和收获。
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一、话题作文
8.(2025七年级下·上海松江·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (请根据以下信息,写一篇不少于60个单词的短文,标点符号不占格)
孔子教导我们“言必行,行必果”。诚信,是刻在中华民族血脉里的精神基因,是跨越千年时空的文明传承。在我们的生活中,诚信同样闪烁着耀眼的光芒—或许是考试时抵制诱惑的坚守,或许是犯错后主动承认错误的勇气,又或许是拾金不昧彰显美德。请你以“An experience of being honest”为题,回顾发生在你身上的一次有关诚信的经历,并谈谈你从这次经历中明白了什么道理。
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二、书信作文
9.(2025七年级下·上海静安·期末)Write a letter for help on behalf of wild animals to humans, at least 60 words. (代表野生动物向人类写一封求救信,不少于60个词,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. self-introduction;(自我介绍)
2. writing purpose;(写信目的)
3. problem/cause;(问题和起因)
4. request。(诉求)
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10.(2025七年级下·上海闵行·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文。)
初一生活即将过去,在这一年里,你一定收获了不少来自同学和老师的帮助。请你给他/她写一封感谢信,以表达你对他/她的感激之情。内容包括以下要点:
1. What happened to you?
2. What did he/ she do to help you?
3. How did you feel about the help?
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六、材料作文
11.(2025七年级下·上海徐汇·期末)随着环境问题的日益严重,我们每个人都应该成为环保的行动者。假设你校微信公众号将推出一系列以“保护环境,从我做起”为主题的文章。请根据以下思维导图,撰写一篇英文短文,分享你对如何参与环保活动的看法和建议。
要求:
短文应包含思维导图中提到的至少一个问题,简单介绍这个问题的现状,造成这种状况的原因以及如何采取有效的应对措施。字数不少于60词,短文开头已给出,但不计入总字数。
开头:
The earth is the only planet that we can live on. However, our earth is facing serious environmental problems.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12.(2025七年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ is important”. (以“________是重要的”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. What is important to you/ to humans?
2. Why is it important?
3. Can you give at least one example to explain its importance?
补全标题(参考示例:Helping others.../ Being honest/ Protecting wild animals等)
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13.(2025七年级下·上海虹口·期末)Write at least 50 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
诚信是生活中一项重要的品质。在第二部分的语篇中,我们读到了一个关于诚信的故事。故事中的David因为不诚信的行为最终受到了惩罚。同学们,在你们的日常生活中,是否遇到过类似的情况?
●如果你经历过类似的情况,你是怎么处理的?且写出你这么做的原因和你的想法。
●如果你是David,再给你一次机会,你会怎么做?且写出你这么做的原因和你受到的启发。
选择以上情境中的一个,结合单元大问题Why is honesty the best policy?完成一篇不少于50词的短文。
Choose one of the following sentences and begin your writing:
● I remember one day ...
● If I were David, I would ...
注意:1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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14.(2025七年级下·上海普陀·期末)Lucy从科学家们的故事中获得了知识与启发。事实上,本学期的英语课本中也有不少了不起的人物值得大家学习。请选择其中一人,谈谈你从他/她身上学到了什么,并简要介绍你是如何在日常生活中践行的。
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人物
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信守承诺的父子
Unit 5
尊重自然与野生动物的男孩Sam
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为环保谏言献策的学生Yang,护林员Mrs. Liu和教师Mr. Wu
根据要求写一篇不少于60个词的短文(标点符号不占格)
(注意:短文中不得出现个人任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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专题12 书面表达满分范文14篇
一、话题作文
1.(2025七年级下·上海黄浦·期末)Write in at least 60 words about the topic “My ways to protect trees”.(以“我保护树的方法”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questions:
1. Why do you protect trees?
2. What are your ways to protect trees?
3. How do you feel about helping trees?
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【答案】例文
My ways to protect trees
Trees are very important to us. They can clean the air and keep the earth cool. They also provide us with many things, such as wood, fruit, medicine and so on.
But trees are in great danger now. People cut down and burn millions of trees every year. So we must do something to protect them. But what can we do?
I think we must stop people from cutting down the trees. And we should plant more trees. If everyone does something for trees, our world will be better. Let’s do our best to protect trees.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:文章紧扣 “保护树木” 这一核心要点,先说明树木的重要性,再指出其面临的危险,最后给出保护方法,没有遗漏关键信息,内容简洁明了,符合字数要求,同时也通过列举树木提供的东西等细节,让内容更充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍树木的重要性;
第二步,阐述树木当前面临的危险,即人们每年砍伐和焚烧数百万棵树,引出需要保护树木的必要性;
第三步,提出保护树木的方法,包括阻止人们砍伐树木和种植更多树木,并呼吁大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①clean the air净化空气
②keep the earth cool保持地球凉爽
③provide...with...为……提供……
[高分句型]
①I think we must stop people from cutting down the trees.(宾语从句)
②If everyone does something for trees, our world will be better.(条件状语从句)
二、书信作文
2.(2025七年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
你是动物保护协会的成员,在了解野生动物的处境后,想代表野生动物向保护中心写一封求助信,并以所代表的动物名称作为落款。以下问题供参考:
1.你是哪只动物?
2.你写信的目的是什么?
3.你面临什么问题?
4.你需要什么帮助?
Dear Wildlife Protection Centre,
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Yours,
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【答案】 Dear Wildlife Protection Centre,
I am a giant panda from Sichuan. My home is being destroyed by deforestation, and my bamboo food sources are disappearing. Many of my friends have lost their habitats and struggle to survive. I’m writing to ask for your help. Please protect our forests and stop illegal logging. We also need more bamboo plantations to ensure our food supply. Your efforts can save us from extinction. Thank you for your kindness and support.
Yours,
Panda
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:求助信(野生动物保护);
②时态:一般现在时(描述现状)和一般将来时(请求帮助);
③提示:以动物第一人称叙述,明确问题并提出具体需求。
【写作步骤】
第一步:自我介绍(动物身份和栖息地);
第二步:描述问题(栖息地破坏、食物短缺);
第三步:提出请求(保护森林、禁止伐木、种植竹林)。
【亮点词汇】
①struggle to survive 为生存而挣扎
②food supply 食物供应
【高分句型】
①My home is being destroyed by deforestation, and my bamboo food sources are disappearing.(现在进行时被动语态)
②We also need more bamboo plantations to ensure our food supply.(不定式作目的状语)
3.(2025七年级下·上海金山·期末)Write at least 55 words after reading the following situation and choosing one aspect.(请你阅读以下情境后选择其中一个方面写一封至少55个单词的推荐信。注意:不得出现考生真实信息,如:学校名称,考生姓名等。)
暑假将至,花园学校为助力学生度过一个充实且健康的假期,正精心策划一场主题为“微小行动,改变世界”的夏令营活动。目前,学校已向同学们征集了诸多建议。其中,有的同学提议举办日常生活中助人为乐小故事演讲活动;也有同学建议走进自然,投身野生动物保护工作;还有同学认为当务之急是关注环境,从护树、植树等行动做起。假如你是该校学生李东,请你向负责此次夏令营活动的陈老师写一封推荐信,推荐一个你认为切实可行的活动,并结合自身相关经历和感受说明理由。
注明:抄袭阅读语篇中语句,不得分。
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【答案】Dear Mr. Chen,
I’m Li Dong. I think the “Tree-Planting and Caring Activity” is a great choice for the summer camp.
Last year, I helped plant a small tree in my neighborhood. Every weekend, I watered it and watched it grow. It was so amazing to see the little tree become strong. Through this, I learned that taking care of trees is an easy but meaningful thing. In this activity, we can plant new trees and take care of the existing ones in our school. We’ll learn how to water, fertilize and protect them. These small actions can make our environment greener. Let’s use our hands to change the world a bit!
Hope you’ll consider my idea.
Yours
Li Dong
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:书信体作文,属于建议推荐类,围绕夏令营活动推荐具体行动方案
②时态:以一般现在时为主阐述观点、建议,用一般过去时叙述自身相关经历
③提示:紧扣“微小行动,改变世界”夏令营主题,结合自身经历推荐植树护树活动,内容契合要求,逻辑清晰
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇称呼并自我介绍,直接点明推荐的活动
第二步,叙述自身相关经历,阐述从经历中获得的感悟,说明推荐活动的具体内容和意义
第三步,结尾表达希望对方考虑建议的诉求
[亮点词汇]
①neighborhood小区
②meaningful有意义的
③fertilize施肥
[高分句型]
①I learned that taking care of trees is an easy but meaningful thing.(that引导的宾语从句)
②It was so amazing to see the little tree become strong.(it+be+形容词+to do sth.句型)
③These small actions can make our environment greener. Let’s use our hands to change the world a bit!(let’s do sth.结构)
三、材料作文
4.(2025七年级下·上海静安·期末)Honesty is always the best policy. Write a blog post about an honest choice you made. Write at least 60 words. (请写一篇不少于60词的博客,描述你的一次有关诚实的选择,标点符号不占格。)
提示:生活中,我们常面临诚实与隐瞒的抉择,如损坏物品、发现错误等。正如谚语所说,诚实总是上策。请描述你的一次选择经历,并谈谈你的感悟与收获。
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分)
Suggested questions:
1. What happened?
2. What did you choose to do?
3. How did you feel?
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【答案】例文
Last week, I accidentally broke my classmate Lily’s favorite cup during a group study. At first, I was scared and thought of hiding it. But then, I remembered “Honesty is the best policy”.
I went to Lily, told her the truth, and apologized. She was surprised but said it was okay.
I felt relieved and proud. This choice taught me that honesty brings peace of mind, and true friends value honesty over mistakes.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:事件引入,简述“打碎同学杯子”事件,抛出“想隐瞒”与“诚实”的矛盾;
第二步:描述“想起谚语,主动找同学坦白、道歉”的过程,呈现诚实选择;
第三步:总结诚实带来的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①at first起初
②bring peace of mind带来内心的平静
[高分句型]
①This choice taught me that honesty brings peace of mind, and true friends value honesty over mistakes. (宾语从句)
5.(2025七年级下·上海徐汇·期末)目前, 野生动物们正面临着各种威胁,很多动物已经濒临灭绝。但也有很多人意识到了保护动物的重要性。作为中学生的我们,同样可以在生活中尽我们所能地保护动物。请你以“how can we protect wild animals?”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的作文。标题已给出。以下问题供参考:
Suggested questions:
1. Is it important to protect wild animals?
2. What are main threats to wild animals?
3. How can we protect wild animals as middle school students?
(注意:文中不得出现考生姓名及其它相关真实信息。否则不予评分。) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
How Can We Protect Wild Animals?
It is very important to protect wild animals because they play a key role in keeping the balance of nature. However, many animals are in danger due to habitat loss, pollution, and illegal hunting.
As middle school students, we can help in many ways. First, we should avoid buying products made from wild animals, such as ivory or fur. Second, we can reduce waste to protect their habitats. Also, learning and sharing knowledge about endangered animals can raise the awareness of protecting wild animals.
Let’s work together to protect wild animals and our planet!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我们如何保护野生动物的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“保护野生动物的重要性、对野生动物的威胁、如何保护野生动物等”几个方面重点介绍我们如何保护野生动物的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①play a role in doing sth在做某事方面起作用;
②due to由于;
③avoid doing sth避免做某事;
④such as例如。
[高分句型]
①It is very important to protect wild animals because they play a key role in keeping the balance of nature. (“It is+形容词+to do sth”句型)
②Second, we can reduce waste to protect their habitats. (动词不定式作目的状语)
6.(2025七年级下·上海崇明·期末)Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Protect endangered animals” (以“保护濒危动物”为题写一篇不少于 60 词的短文)
Suggested questions:
(1) What can animals do for humans?
(2) Why are some animals endangered?
(3) What can we do to protect them?
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【答案】例文
Protect endangered animals Animals are our friends. They make our world beautiful and help keep nature healthy. For example, pandas are lovely and tigers are powerful. But sadly, many animals like them are endangered now. Why? Because people cut down too many trees, destroying their homes. Also, some people hunt too many animals or pollute the environment. We must protect them! First, we can learn about endangered animals. Second, we should stop buying things made from them. Third, we need to protect forests and keep rivers clean.
Let’s all help save these amazing animals!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍动物为人类所做的事情;
第二步:分析有些动物濒危的原因;
第三步:阐述我们如何做来保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①For example比如
②cut down砍伐
③stop doing sth.停止做某事
[高分句型]
Let’s all help save these amazing animals! (祈使句)
7.(2025七年级下·上海嘉定·期末)在“根与芽”(Roots and Shoots)项目中,每个小组都会选择三类让世界变得更美好的项目:一类帮助人类,一类帮助动物,还有一类改善我们共同生活的环境。
陆遥正在学校网站论坛上发帖,邀请大家分享自己关于帮助他人、帮助动物或者改善环境的经历。请结合你的个人经历,选择一个方面在论坛回帖,谈谈你在这个过程中的经历和收获。
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In Roots and Shoots, every group chooses three kinds of projects to make the world better. One to help people, one to help animals, and one to help the environment that we all share.
Do you have any experiences about ______ or ______? Please share with us!
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【答案】例文
Me ×××
16 June
I have a special experience. I used to go to the Old People’s Home to help the old people. I was very happy to talk with them, because most of them were lonely. I also helped them do some cleaning. I learned a lot from them. I know that I should respect the old and be good to them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分享自己助人的经历;
第二步,分享感悟并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做
②talk with和……谈话
[高分句型]
①I was very happy to talk with them, because most of them were lonely. (原因状语从句)
②I know that I should respect the old and be good to them.(宾语从句)
一、话题作文
8.(2025七年级下·上海松江·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (请根据以下信息,写一篇不少于60个单词的短文,标点符号不占格)
孔子教导我们“言必行,行必果”。诚信,是刻在中华民族血脉里的精神基因,是跨越千年时空的文明传承。在我们的生活中,诚信同样闪烁着耀眼的光芒—或许是考试时抵制诱惑的坚守,或许是犯错后主动承认错误的勇气,又或许是拾金不昧彰显美德。请你以“An experience of being honest”为题,回顾发生在你身上的一次有关诚信的经历,并谈谈你从这次经历中明白了什么道理。
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【答案】范文:
An Experience of Being Honest
Last month, I found a wallet in the school playground. It was full of money and had a student card inside. I didn’t hesitate and gave it to our teacher. Later, the owner was very thankful. From this experience, I understood that being honest brings trust and respect. Honesty is not only a virtue but also a light that guides our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文,围绕“诚信”展开;
②时态:主要使用一般过去时讲述事情经过,结尾使用一般现在时总结感悟;
③提示:图文内容为写作提供了方向,考生需选取典型事件(如拾金不昧、主动承认错误等),围绕“诚实”展开叙述,并结合事件总结所得启示。
[写作步骤]
第一步,交代故事发生的时间、地点及背景;
第二步,描述事件的起因、经过和结果,突出“诚信”行为;
第三步,结合事件表达自己的体会或感悟,升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
① be full of 充满
② not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① I understood that being honest brings trust and respect. (宾语从句)
② Honesty is not only a virtue but also a light that guides our lives.(定语从句)
二、书信作文
9.(2025七年级下·上海静安·期末)Write a letter for help on behalf of wild animals to humans, at least 60 words. (代表野生动物向人类写一封求救信,不少于60个词,标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. self-introduction;(自我介绍)
2. writing purpose;(写信目的)
3. problem/cause;(问题和起因)
4. request。(诉求)
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【答案】例文
Dear Humans,
We are your wild neighbors—deer running through forests, birds singing in trees, and fish swimming in rivers. Today, we write to you with heavy hearts. Our homes are disappearing because you cut down trees and build cities. Many of us are dying from polluted water and air. Some are even killed illegally for fur or meat.
We just want to live in peace. Please stop destroying our habitats. Protect rivers and forests. Say no to illegal hunting. We share this earth with you. Let’s make it a home for all living things.
Your wild friends
July 13, 2025
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要使用一般现在时;
③提示:围绕野生动物的生存困境及诉求展开,清晰传达了栖息地破坏、污染、非法猎杀等问题,以及希望人类保护它们的愿望。
[写作步骤]
第一步,以野生动物的身份自我介绍,并阐述当前面临的生存危机,包括栖息地消失、因污染死亡、遭非法猎杀等具体问题。
第二步,表达野生动物的诉求,希望人类停止破坏栖息地、保护河流森林、拒绝非法猎杀,呼吁共同守护地球家园。
[亮点词汇]
①wild neighbors野生邻居
②disappearing消失
③illegally非法地
④in peace和平地
[高分句型]
①Our homes are disappearing because you cut down trees and build cities.(because引导原因状语从句)
②Let’s make it a home for all living things.(let’s引导祈使句)
10.(2025七年级下·上海闵行·期末)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文。)
初一生活即将过去,在这一年里,你一定收获了不少来自同学和老师的帮助。请你给他/她写一封感谢信,以表达你对他/她的感激之情。内容包括以下要点:
1. What happened to you?
2. What did he/ she do to help you?
3. How did you feel about the help?
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【答案】例文:
Dear Ms. Wang,
As my first year in junior high is ending, I want to thank you for your help.
Last term, I had difficulty in English. I often found it hard to understand grammar rules. You noticed this and spent lunch breaks explaining them to me. You also gave me extra exercises to practice. Your kindness made me feel warm and confident. Now, my English has improved a lot. I truly appreciate your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封感谢信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时及一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表述写信的目的是表达感激之情;
第二步,表述老师如何帮助自己及对自己的影响;
第三步,表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty in在某有困难方面
②explain sth to sb把某事解释给某人听
[高分句型]
I often found it hard to understand grammar rules.(it作形式宾语)
六、材料作文
11.(2025七年级下·上海徐汇·期末)随着环境问题的日益严重,我们每个人都应该成为环保的行动者。假设你校微信公众号将推出一系列以“保护环境,从我做起”为主题的文章。请根据以下思维导图,撰写一篇英文短文,分享你对如何参与环保活动的看法和建议。
要求:
短文应包含思维导图中提到的至少一个问题,简单介绍这个问题的现状,造成这种状况的原因以及如何采取有效的应对措施。字数不少于60词,短文开头已给出,但不计入总字数。
开头:
The earth is the only planet that we can live on. However, our earth is facing serious environmental problems.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
The earth is the only planet that we can live on. However, our earth is facing serious environmental problems. For example, air pollution is becoming more and more serious. Factories release a large amount of waste gas into the air, and cars also emit a lot of harmful gases. This has a bad impact on our health and the environment.
First, we should walk, ride bikes or use public transportation instead of riding in cars when we go to school. Driving less helps reduce air pollution. Second, we should sort waste before throwing it away and then put it into its proper dustbin. Third, we should take good care of trees and flowers. Don’t walk on grass or pick flowers. What’s more, we should save energy. We should shut off the electricity or taps when we are not using them.
I believe that if everyone takes action, the environment will change for the better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,选择思维导图中提到的至少一个问题,简单介绍这个问题的现状以及造成这种状况的原因;
第二步,阐述如何采取有效的应对措施;
第三步,描述对未来的期望,如果大家可以按倡议去做,未来的环境会更好。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替
②take good care of照顾得很好
③what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①Driving less helps reduce air pollution.(动名词短语作主语)
②I believe that if everyone takes action, the environment will change for the better.(宾语从句;if条件状语从句)
12.(2025七年级下·上海浦东新·期末)Write at least 60 words on the topic “________ is important”. (以“________是重要的”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. What is important to you/ to humans?
2. Why is it important?
3. Can you give at least one example to explain its importance?
补全标题(参考示例:Helping others.../ Being honest/ Protecting wild animals等)
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【答案】例文:
Honesty is important
Honesty is very important to me. It means telling the truth and not cheating. It is important because it helps people trust each other. If we are honest, others will believe us and want to be our friends. For example, if I find a lost wallet, I should return it to the owner. This shows honesty and makes the owner very happy. Being honest makes the world a better place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中的要求,均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开门见山,点明“诚实最重要”;
第二步:阐述重要的原因以及通过具体事例来说明诚实的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①tell the truth说实话
②for example比如
③return sth to sb返还给某人
[高分句型]
①If we are honest, others will believe us and want to be our friends. (条件状语从句)
②This shows honesty and makes the owner very happy. (宾语从句)
13.(2025七年级下·上海虹口·期末)Write at least 50 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
诚信是生活中一项重要的品质。在第二部分的语篇中,我们读到了一个关于诚信的故事。故事中的David因为不诚信的行为最终受到了惩罚。同学们,在你们的日常生活中,是否遇到过类似的情况?
●如果你经历过类似的情况,你是怎么处理的?且写出你这么做的原因和你的想法。
●如果你是David,再给你一次机会,你会怎么做?且写出你这么做的原因和你受到的启发。
选择以上情境中的一个,结合单元大问题Why is honesty the best policy?完成一篇不少于50词的短文。
Choose one of the following sentences and begin your writing:
● I remember one day ...
● If I were David, I would ...
注意:1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
I remember one day that I was going to take an important exam. When I got to the school gate, I realized that I forgot to bring my ruler for that exam. I decided to buy a new one in the nearby shop. When I came back to the school, the exam had already begun. I hid the new ruler in my hand and felt very nervous. After the exam, I honestly told my teacher the truth. To my surprise, the teacher praised me for my honesty.
In my opinion, honesty is the best policy. It is not enough to just do the right things. It is more important to be honest about what we have done, no matter whether it is good or bad. When we are in trouble, honesty can help us solve the problem and even save our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述清晰并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,叙述自己的一次关于诚信的经历及自己如何处理的;
第二步,表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①to one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是
②in one’s opinion在某人看来
③in trouble处于困境中
[高分句型]
When I got to the school gate, I realized that I forgot to bring my ruler for that exam. (when引导时间状语从句;that引导宾语从句)
14.(2025七年级下·上海普陀·期末)Lucy从科学家们的故事中获得了知识与启发。事实上,本学期的英语课本中也有不少了不起的人物值得大家学习。请选择其中一人,谈谈你从他/她身上学到了什么,并简要介绍你是如何在日常生活中践行的。
单元
人物
Unit 4
信守承诺的父子
Unit 5
尊重自然与野生动物的男孩Sam
Unit 6
为环保谏言献策的学生Yang,护林员Mrs. Liu和教师Mr. Wu
根据要求写一篇不少于60个词的短文(标点符号不占格)
(注意:短文中不得出现个人任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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【答案】
例文:
From Unit 5, Sam, who respects nature and wildlife, inspires me deeply. He shows that every living thing in nature deserves care.
In daily life, I practice this by not littering in parks or forests. When I see injured small animals, I contact the wildlife rescue center promptly. Also, I tell my friends about the importance of protecting nature, encouraging them to join in. Respecting nature is protecting our home.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:确定人物与核心品质;
第二步:阐述日常践行;
第三步:强调尊重自然的意义,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①deserve care值得被关爱
②encourage them to join in鼓励他们参与
[高分句型]
①From Unit 5, Sam, who respects nature and wildlife, inspires me deeply. (who引导的定语从句)
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一、话题作文
1.
【答案】例文
My ways to protect trees
Trees are very important to us. They can clean the air and keep the earth cool. They also provide us with many things, such as wood, fruit, medicine and so on.
But trees are in great danger now. People cut down and burn millions of trees every year. So we must do something to protect them. But what can we do?
I think we must stop people from cutting down the trees. And we should plant more trees. If everyone does something for trees, our world will be better. Let’s do our best to protect trees.
二、书信作文
2.
【答案】 Dear Wildlife Protection Centre,
I am a giant panda from Sichuan. My home is being destroyed by deforestation, and my bamboo food sources are disappearing. Many of my friends have lost their habitats and struggle to survive. I’m writing to ask for your help. Please protect our forests and stop illegal logging. We also need more bamboo plantations to ensure our food supply. Your efforts can save us from extinction. Thank you for your kindness and support.
Yours,
Panda
3.
【答案】Dear Mr. Chen,
I’m Li Dong. I think the “Tree-Planting and Caring Activity” is a great choice for the summer camp.
Last year, I helped plant a small tree in my neighborhood. Every weekend, I watered it and watched it grow. It was so amazing to see the little tree become strong. Through this, I learned that taking care of trees is an easy but meaningful thing. In this activity, we can plant new trees and take care of the existing ones in our school. We’ll learn how to water, fertilize and protect them. These small actions can make our environment greener. Let’s use our hands to change the world a bit!
Hope you’ll consider my idea.
Yours
Li Dong
三、材料作文
4.
【答案】例文
Last week, I accidentally broke my classmate Lily’s favorite cup during a group study. At first, I was scared and thought of hiding it. But then, I remembered “Honesty is the best policy”.
I went to Lily, told her the truth, and apologized. She was surprised but said it was okay.
I felt relieved and proud. This choice taught me that honesty brings peace of mind, and true friends value honesty over mistakes.
5.
【答案】例文:
How Can We Protect Wild Animals?
It is very important to protect wild animals because they play a key role in keeping the balance of nature. However, many animals are in danger due to habitat loss, pollution, and illegal hunting.
As middle school students, we can help in many ways. First, we should avoid buying products made from wild animals, such as ivory or fur. Second, we can reduce waste to protect their habitats. Also, learning and sharing knowledge about endangered animals can raise the awareness of protecting wild animals.
Let’s work together to protect wild animals and our planet!
6.
【答案】例文
Protect endangered animals Animals are our friends. They make our world beautiful and help keep nature healthy. For example, pandas are lovely and tigers are powerful. But sadly, many animals like them are endangered now. Why? Because people cut down too many trees, destroying their homes. Also, some people hunt too many animals or pollute the environment. We must protect them! First, we can learn about endangered animals. Second, we should stop buying things made from them. Third, we need to protect forests and keep rivers clean.
Let’s all help save these amazing animals!
7.
【答案】例文
Me ×××
16 June
I have a special experience. I used to go to the Old People’s Home to help the old people. I was very happy to talk with them, because most of them were lonely. I also helped them do some cleaning. I learned a lot from them. I know that I should respect the old and be good to them.
一、话题作文
8.
【答案】范文:
An Experience of Being Honest
Last month, I found a wallet in the school playground. It was full of money and had a student card inside. I didn’t hesitate and gave it to our teacher. Later, the owner was very thankful. From this experience, I understood that being honest brings trust and respect. Honesty is not only a virtue but also a light that guides our lives.
二、书信作文
9.
【答案】例文
Dear Humans,
We are your wild neighbors—deer running through forests, birds singing in trees, and fish swimming in rivers. Today, we write to you with heavy hearts. Our homes are disappearing because you cut down trees and build cities. Many of us are dying from polluted water and air. Some are even killed illegally for fur or meat.
We just want to live in peace. Please stop destroying our habitats. Protect rivers and forests. Say no to illegal hunting. We share this earth with you. Let’s make it a home for all living things.
Your wild friends
July 13, 2025
10.
【答案】例文:
Dear Ms. Wang,
As my first year in junior high is ending, I want to thank you for your help.
Last term, I had difficulty in English. I often found it hard to understand grammar rules. You noticed this and spent lunch breaks explaining them to me. You also gave me extra exercises to practice. Your kindness made me feel warm and confident. Now, my English has improved a lot. I truly appreciate your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
六、材料作文
11.
【答案】例文:
The earth is the only planet that we can live on. However, our earth is facing serious environmental problems. For example, air pollution is becoming more and more serious. Factories release a large amount of waste gas into the air, and cars also emit a lot of harmful gases. This has a bad impact on our health and the environment.
First, we should walk, ride bikes or use public transportation instead of riding in cars when we go to school. Driving less helps reduce air pollution. Second, we should sort waste before throwing it away and then put it into its proper dustbin. Third, we should take good care of trees and flowers. Don’t walk on grass or pick flowers. What’s more, we should save energy. We should shut off the electricity or taps when we are not using them.
I believe that if everyone takes action, the environment will change for the better.
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Honesty is important
Honesty is very important to me. It means telling the truth and not cheating. It is important because it helps people trust each other. If we are honest, others will believe us and want to be our friends. For example, if I find a lost wallet, I should return it to the owner. This shows honesty and makes the owner very happy. Being honest makes the world a better place.
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I remember one day that I was going to take an important exam. When I got to the school gate, I realized that I forgot to bring my ruler for that exam. I decided to buy a new one in the nearby shop. When I came back to the school, the exam had already begun. I hid the new ruler in my hand and felt very nervous. After the exam, I honestly told my teacher the truth. To my surprise, the teacher praised me for my honesty.
In my opinion, honesty is the best policy. It is not enough to just do the right things. It is more important to be honest about what we have done, no matter whether it is good or bad. When we are in trouble, honesty can help us solve the problem and even save our lives.
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例文:
From Unit 5, Sam, who respects nature and wildlife, inspires me deeply. He shows that every living thing in nature deserves care.
In daily life, I practice this by not littering in parks or forests. When I see injured small animals, I contact the wildlife rescue center promptly. Also, I tell my friends about the importance of protecting nature, encouraging them to join in. Respecting nature is protecting our home.
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