2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---藏在饼干里的温柔 导学案

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As my father grew older, he became increasingly frugal (节俭) — a habit that often annoyed me. He even kept snack wrappers to reuse, and I used to think he was being stingy (小气的). One afternoon at the grocery, as we walked down the cookie aisle, I noticed he lingered before the expensive shortbread (黄油酥饼) he loved, the kind he never bought for himself. So I suggested buying it for him. He nodded but hesitated, then added softly, “Actually, your mom used to buy Nadine’s cookies.” I’d never heard of this brand and rolled my eyes secretly, yet I agreed to look for them to end his hesitation. We split up to search: I checked the lower shelves while he scanned the higher ones. I bent down impatiently, glancing carelessly around, but found no sign of Nadine’s. After quickly scanning the labels, I told him I couldn’t find them, expecting him to give up. But he sighed softly, his face clouded over with a hint of disappointment. Noticing that, I decided to ask the clerk for help. When I asked the clerk about Nadine’s, he looked confused and said they didn’t carry it. “We have Sandies,” he added casually. Suddenly, my father’s eyes lit up with pure joy — he pointed at the Sandies and exclaimed, “That’s it!” He then sheepishly explained that he’d named them after his childhood babysitter, Nadine, and had called them “Nadine’s” for decades. As I watched him smile softly while picking up the packages, my earlier annoyance faded away, and a faint curiosity took hold. In that moment, I suddenly realized how little I knew about him. A month later, I saved up my pocket money and bought a tin of authentic UK shortbread as a gift. My father thanked me warmly, but as he set the tin on the coffee table, I heard him mumble to himself, “Why do I need these?” I frowned, confused and a little hurt. Just then, I spotted six unopened packs of Sandies on the table. I began to wonder why these simple cookies mattered more to him than my supposedly expensive gift. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Seeing my mixed expressions, Dad started to explain. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I held the unopened pack of Sandies tightly. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Dad became frugal and annoyed me--- _________________ --- Dad looked for Nadine’s cookies in the grocery--- _________________ --- I found the cookies were named after Dad’s babysitter Nadine--- _________________ --- I bought expensive shortbread for Dad but felt confused at his reaction 4. 细节问答 What did the author think of her father’s frugal habit? ：___________________________________ Why did Dad want to buy Nadine’s cookies?：_________________________________ What are Nadine’s cookies actually?：________________________________________________ How did the author feel when searching for the cookies at first?：__________________________________________ What gift did the author prepare for her father?：_____________________________________________ Why did the author feel confused and hurt?：_________________________________________________ What is the true meaning of the ordinary cookies for Dad?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 父亲日渐节俭，我一直误以为他小气、令人反感→_________________ →超市购物时，父亲执着寻找名为Nadine’s的饼干，满脸失落→我询问店员，得知饼干背后是父亲童年的温情回忆→_________________ →我攒钱买昂贵进口酥饼送给父亲，却发现他囤着普通饼干，心生委屈与困惑→（续写）_________________ →（续写）读懂父爱与温柔，学会理解与珍惜 6．情感线 I：annoyed and judgmental→___________→curious→___________（续写）→grateful and understanding Dad：stingy-looking and reserved→___________→joyful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式积累 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 亲情温情类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Seeing my mixed expressions, Dad started to explain. 衔接句1——What did Dad explain about the ordinary cookies? What memories did they hold? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I held the unopened pack of Sandies tightly. 衔接句2——How did I feel after knowing the truth? What change and understanding did I gain? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：看到我复杂的神情，父亲开口解释。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：我紧紧握着那包未开封的饼干。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Paragraph 1: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（起初误解父亲、主观片面，后懂得反思、学会理解亲情的孩子）；Father（外表节俭吝啬、内心温柔怀旧、珍视过往温情与家人的深沉父亲）；Nadine（父亲童年善良温柔的保姆，是父亲温暖的童年记忆） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 Dad became frugal and annoyed me--- I always misunderstood Dad as a stingy man --- Dad looked for Nadine’s cookies in the grocery--- Dad felt disappointed when we failed to find them at first --- I found the cookies were named after Dad’s babysitter Nadine--- I felt curious about Dad’s hidden warm memories --- I bought expensive shortbread for Dad but felt confused at his reaction 4. 细节问答 What did the author think of her father’s frugal habit? ：She thought her father was stingy and his frugal habit always annoyed her. Why did Dad want to buy Nadine’s cookies?：The cookies reminded him of his kind childhood babysitter Nadine and carried his warm childhood memories. What are Nadine’s cookies actually?：They are ordinary Sandies, which Dad named after his childhood babysitter decades ago. How did the author feel when searching for the cookies at first?：She was impatient and thought her father was making unnecessary fuss. What gift did the author prepare for her father?：She saved up pocket money and bought a tin of authentic UK shortbread. Why did the author feel confused and hurt?：Her father seemed ungrateful for her expensive gift but kept ordinary Sandies, making her feel her heart was wasted. What is the true meaning of the ordinary cookies for Dad?：They are not just cookies, but precious memories of kindness and warmth from his childhood. What does the story tell us?：We should never judge others superficially; trivial things often hold deep feelings, and family love needs understanding and appreciation. 5．情节线 父亲日渐节俭，我一直误以为他小气、令人反感→超市购物，父亲执着寻找专属童年记忆的饼干 →超市购物时，父亲执着寻找名为Nadine’s的饼干，满脸失落→我询问店员，得知饼干背后是父亲童年的温情回忆→我对刻板印象中的父亲产生好奇，意识到自己从不了解他 →我攒钱买昂贵进口酥饼送给父亲，却发现他囤着普通饼干，心生委屈与困惑→（续写）父亲讲述饼干承载的童年温暖与感恩 →（续写）读懂父爱与温柔，学会理解与珍惜平凡的深情 6．情感线 I：annoyed and judgmental→impatient→curious→confused and hurt（续写）→grateful and understanding Dad：stingy-looking and reserved→disappointed→joyful→soft and affectionate（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：我一直误解节俭的父亲小气自私，直到发现他执着珍藏普通饼干，这些饼干承载着他对童年保姆的温暖回忆，最终我读懂平凡物件里藏着的深沉温柔与真挚情感。 英文：The author once misunderstood her frugal father as a stingy man. Later, she learned that the ordinary cookies her father cherished held warm childhood memories, which helped her break prejudice and understand the hidden deep affection of her father. 8. 句式积累 状语从句：As my father grew older, he became increasingly frugal. 非谓语动词：I noticed he lingered before the expensive shortbread he loved. 宾语从句：He then sheepishly explained that he’d named them after his childhood babysitter. 定语从句：The expensive shortbread that I bought was less meaningful than the ordinary Sandies. 独立主格：He sighed softly, his face clouded over with a hint of disappointment. 9. 本文主题 亲情温情类：不要以表面偏见评判亲人，平凡的物件承载着珍贵的回忆与深沉的爱意，理解与共情是亲情最美的底色。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Seeing my mixed expressions, Dad started to explain. 衔接句1：Dad told me that Nadine once accompanied and comforted his lonely childhood, and these ordinary cookies were the only reminder of her kindness, far more precious than fancy gifts. Paragraph 2: I held the unopened pack of Sandies tightly. 衔接句2：I abandoned my prejudice against Dad’s frugality, truly understood his deep feelings, and learned to cherish the trivial but warm love hidden in daily life. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：看到我复杂的神情，父亲开口解释。 →①父亲温柔讲述童年往事，保姆Nadine曾给予他温暖陪伴→②普通饼干是他唯一的念想，承载着珍贵善意→③昂贵的礼物无法替代独一无二的童年温情； 第二段：我紧紧握着那包未开封的饼干。 →①我终于打破偏见，读懂父亲节俭背后的温柔与感恩→②为自己之前的误解感到愧疚，内心满是动容→③我学会用心观察亲人，珍惜平凡生活里的深沉爱意。 四.段落续写 Paragraph 1: Seeing my mixed expressions, Dad started to explain. He told me softly that he had a lonely childhood without constant company of his parents. It was Nadine, his kind babysitter, who always bought Sandies to comfort him and accompanied him through his tough days. Those simple cookies were the only warm memory from his childhood. Fancy expensive shortbread was nice, but it could never replace the unique warmth and gratitude hidden in these ordinary packs of Sandies. Paragraph 2: I held the unopened pack of Sandies tightly. Shame and warmth flooded my heart simultaneously. I had always judged my father merely by his frugal appearance and blindly thought he was stingy. In fact, he was just a man who cherished every bit of kindness and memory in life. I hugged my father gently, realizing true preciousness lies not in expensive gifts, but in the sincere feelings hidden in trivial things. From then on, I learned to understand and appreciate my father’s unique tenderness. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $