Unit 8 Follow your interests 兴趣爱好与梦想（单元写作精练）英语新教材沪教版七年级下册

**基本信息** 以“兴趣爱好与梦想”为主题，构建“词汇-句型-仿写-篇章”四层写作训练体系，通过结构化步骤培养语言组织与逻辑表达能力，契合初中英语核心素养中语言能力与思维品质的发展要求。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材|4类词汇、20+短语、8句名言|按“名词-动词-形容词-副词”分类记忆，短语与话题场景绑定|从基础词汇到情感表达，构建话题词汇网络| |仿写训练|8个基础仿写+1个进阶模板|“原句解构-替换要素-语境迁移”三步仿写，进阶模板嵌入“经历-感受-展望”逻辑链|从单句模仿到篇章框架搭建，实现语言输出能力梯度提升| |写作步骤|4步（审题-谋篇-成文-修改）|“三段式”结构（开头点题+中间述因+结尾展望），自我检查清单聚焦语法与逻辑|按“内容完整度-表达准确性-情感连贯性”优化写作流程| |题型通关|5类写作题（个人介绍/爱好与职业/小组汇报等）|话题迁移法，核心框架适配不同写作任务（如演讲、征文）|覆盖中考高频写作场景，强化知识应用的灵活性|

Unit 8 Follow your interests兴趣爱好与梦想 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 为《Teen Life Magazine》杂志撰写一篇文章，介绍你最喜欢的爱好(Writing an article about your favourite hobby)，核心内容需包含： 1.你的爱好是什么？ 2. 你为什么喜欢它？（发展过程、个人感受、未来展望） 本单元相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 名词:hobby；interest；pleasure；skill；talent；dream；spirit；progress；wisdom；pleasure... 动词:relax；enjoy；practice；improve；develop；cultivate；achieve；share；train；succeed... 形容词:creative；confident；patient；active；brave；colorful；meaningful；wonderful；cheerful；energetic... 副词:gradually；truly；fully；easily；happily；actually；seriously；extremely；greatly；deeply... 短语 favourite hobby 最喜欢的爱好 fall in love with 爱上 take lessons 上课 practise every day 每天练习 get better and better 变得越来越好 a big part of my life 我生活中的重要部分 forget worries 忘记烦恼 express true feelings 表达真实情感 keep trying 不断尝试 never give up 永不放弃 bring joy 带来快乐 in the future 在未来 lifelong friend 终生朋友 enjoy writing 喜欢写作 keep a diary 写日记 improve skills 提高技能 in free time 在空闲时间 make progress 取得进步 feel relaxed 感到放松 make friends 交朋友 do sports 做运动 play the piano 弹钢琴 draw pictures 画画 listen to music 听音乐 take photos 拍照 build confidence 树立自信 make life colorful 让生活丰富多彩 achieve dreams 实现梦想 句型 Para. 1 开头 + 发展过程 1.My favourite hobby is… I first fell in love with it when I was… years old. （我最喜欢的爱好是…，我第一次爱上它是在我… 岁的时候。） 2.I started to… after I watched… on TV, and then I began to take lessons and practise every day. （在我在电视上看了… 之后，我开始…，然后我开始上课并每天练习。） 3.As time went by, I got better and better at it, and it became a big part of my life. （随着时间的推移，我越来越擅长它，它也成了我生活中重要的一部分。） Para. 2 原因与感受 1.I love this hobby mainly because it makes me feel happy and free. （我喜欢这个爱好主要是因为它让我感到快乐和自由。） 2.When I…, I can forget all my worries and just enjoy myself. It also helps me express my true feelings. （当我… 的时候，我可以忘记所有烦恼，尽情享受。它也帮助我表达真实的情感。） 3.Besides, it teaches me to keep trying and never give up, which makes me more confident. （此外，它教会我不断尝试、永不放弃，这让我变得更自信。） Para. 3 结尾与展望 1.I will keep this hobby forever, because it brings me so much joy. （我会永远坚持这个爱好，因为它给我带来了太多快乐。） 2.In the future, I hope to become a… who can share my love for… with more people. （未来，我希望能成为一名…，和更多人分享我对… 的热爱。） 3.This hobby is not just a pastime for me, but a lifelong friend that will always stay with me. （对我来说，这个爱好不只是一种消遣，更是一个会一直陪伴我的终身朋友。） 名言 1.Interest is the best teacher.兴趣是最好的老师。—— 爱因斯坦 2.Happy is the man who is living by his hobby.醉心于自己爱好的人是幸福的。—— 萧伯纳 3.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。（谚语） 4.Every man has his hobbyhorse.人各有所好。（谚语） 5.Interest will not lie.兴趣不会说谎。（谚语） 6.A man without a hobby is like a bird without wings.没有爱好的人，就像没有翅膀的鸟。 7.Cultivating a hobby makes life more meaningful.培养爱好，让生命更有意义。 8.Follow your interests and they will lead you to happiness.追随兴趣，它们会带你走向幸福。 优美句子 仿 （一）基础仿写 原句1：My favourite hobby is writing.我最喜欢的爱好是写作。 仿句1： .我最喜欢的爱好是读书。 原句2：I first fell in love with it when I was ten years old.我十岁时第一次爱上它。 仿句2： .我三年级时第一次对它产生兴趣。 原句3：I started to practise writing after I watched a show on TV.在电视上看了一个节目后，我开始练习写作。 仿句3： .在老师告诉我画画很有趣后，我开始学习画画。 原句4：As time went by, I got better and better at it.随着时间流逝，我越来越擅长它。 仿句4： .随着时间流逝，我在这方面进步得越来越大。 原句5：It makes me feel relaxed and free from pressure.它让我感到放松，远离压力。 仿句5： .它带给我平静，让我充满活力。 原句6：When I write, I can forget all my worries.当我写作时，我能忘记所有烦恼。 仿句6： .当做我热爱的事时，我能完全享受其中。 原句7：It helps me express my true feelings clearly.它帮我清晰地表达真实情感。 仿句7： .它教会我要自信，永不放弃。 原句8：In the future, I hope to be a writer and share my stories.未来，我希望成为一名作家，分享我的故事。 仿句8： .我会永远坚持我的爱好，让生活更丰富多彩。 （二）进阶仿写 My Favourite Hobby Different people have different hobbies. My favourite hobby is __________ (爱好：reading/playing basketball/listening to music/taking photos/drawing). I first fell in love with it when I was __________ (年龄：ten/nine/eight) years old. I started to __________ (做这件事) __________ (频率：every day/after school/on weekends) and kept practising in my free time. As time went by, I made great progress and it became __________ (重要程度：a big part/a necessary part) of my life. I love this hobby mainly because it makes me feel __________ (感受：happy/relaxed/confident/energetic/peaceful). When I __________ (做这件事), I can forget all my worries and __________ (额外收获：enjoy myself/feel free). It also helps me __________ (收获 1：improve skills/express feelings/make friends/learn knowledge). Besides, it teaches me to __________ (品质：keep trying/never give up/be patient/be brave), which makes me __________ (改变：more confident/more creative/more careful). I will keep this hobby forever. In the future, I hope to __________ (梦想：become a good…/do better in…/take more…/write more…) and share my love for it with more people. I believe __________ (爱好) will make my life __________ (结果：more colourful/more meaningful/more wonderful). 范文参考 My Favourite Hobby 写作步骤 懂 Step 1 审题立意（明确方向，不跑偏） 时态：一般过去时 + 一般现在时 + 一般将来时 写作要点： ① 点明自己最喜欢的爱好 ② 介绍爱好的发展过程（何时开始、如何练习） ③ 说明喜欢的原因与个人感受、收获 ④ 表达未来展望与梦想 Step 2 谋篇布局（搭建框架，填内容） 核心要求：按“开头-中间-结尾”三段式搭建框架，合理分配内容，逻辑清晰。 段落 核心作用 内容要点（用单元句型） 词数建议 开头（1-2句） 引出话题、点明爱好 My favourite hobby is… I first fell in love with it when I was… years old. As time went by, it became a big part of my life. 20-30 中间（3-4句） 说明原因、谈感受 I love t... mainly because it makes me feel happy and free. When I…, I can forget all my worries. It also helps me express my true feelings. Besides, it makes me more confident. 50-60 结尾（2-3句） 总结、展望未来 I will keep… In the future, I hope to… 20-30 Step 3 While-writing (串句成文) 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。 Step 4 Post - writing ： 1.自我检查清单： ①语法检查：人称一致、时态正确、名词单复数无误。 ②拼写检查：所有词汇拼写精准，无字母漏写、错写。 ③语句检查：句子通顺，连接词使用合理，无中式英语。 ④细节检查：词数是否达标，结尾情感明确，内容贴合主题。 2. 同伴互评：两人一组，根据“内容完整度、语法正确性、表达流畅度”打分，并提出修改建议（如：可增加活动过程的细节描述）。 3. 教师点评：选取2-3篇优秀范文和1-2篇典型问题作文，重点讲解亮点表达和常见错误 4. 点评后，同学对自己的作文进行修改，然后完成定稿。 题型通关 练 Passage 1 不同的人拥有不同的爱好，爱好能丰富我们的生活，也能助力我们成长。请你以 My favourite hobby 为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容要点： 1.介绍你最喜欢的爱好是什么； 2.讲述你接触并坚持这项爱好的经历； 3.谈谈这项爱好带给你的收获； 4.说说你今后打算如何继续发展这项爱好。 要求： 1.词数不少于 80 词； 2.语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯； 2.不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 每个人都有自己的爱好， 一些人甚至希望将自己的爱好变成未来的职业。假定你是学生李辉，即将参加学校组织的演讲比赛，请根据下列提示谈谈如何把爱好变成职业。 要点如下：(1)介绍你的爱好； (2)此爱好对未来职业的帮助； (3)表达希望。 注意：(1)词数为80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。 Dear friends, Everyone has a hobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 Mr.Li组织你们全班同学分四人小组进行话题讨论。请你写一篇英语短文汇报你们四人小组的分享内容，需包括以下要点。 Group Member Hobby Reason Career Li Mei playing with animals patient; take care of animal expert Wang Tian travelling take photos; make friends with tour guide Zhao Feng reading books be full of fun; learn about knowledge writer You （请补充） （请补充至少一个原因） （请补充） 注意： （1）词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出, 不计入词数）; （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。 Dear Mr.Li and classmates, I am glad to be here to talk about our group members’ hobbies and careers in the future._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! Passage 4 英语课上, 同学们正在准备举行以 “真实的自我” 为主题的演讲活动。请你以张迪的名义写一篇演讲词, 向同学们介绍一下自己。提示: 1. What do you look like? 2. What are your hobbies and strong points? 3. How do you improve yourself? 4. What is your dream for the future? 注意: 1.短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名; 3.语言连贯，语法正确，书写工整词数:80 个左右(开头和结尾已 经给出,不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I’m Zhang Di, and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your attention! Passage 5 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的短文。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。演讲的开头已给出，不记入总词数。 下周学校要召开一个题为“My hobby and my future!”的英语演讲比赛，班级推荐你参赛，请准备一篇演讲稿。首先谈谈你的一项爱好；说说你是怎么做的，有哪些收获；再想想你今后将如何进一步发展这一爱好。 My hobby and my future! Different people have different hobbies. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 8 Follow your interests兴趣爱好与梦想 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 为《Teen Life Magazine》杂志撰写一篇文章，介绍你最喜欢的爱好(Writing an article about your favourite hobby)，核心内容需包含： 1.你的爱好是什么？ 2. 你为什么喜欢它？（发展过程、个人感受、未来展望） 本单元相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 名词:hobby；interest；pleasure；skill；talent；dream；spirit；progress；wisdom；pleasure... 动词:relax；enjoy；practice；improve；develop；cultivate；achieve；share；train；succeed... 形容词:creative；confident；patient；active；brave；colorful；meaningful；wonderful；cheerful；energetic... 副词:gradually；truly；fully；easily；happily；actually；seriously；extremely；greatly；deeply... 短语 favourite hobby 最喜欢的爱好 fall in love with 爱上 take lessons 上课 practise every day 每天练习 get better and better 变得越来越好 a big part of my life 我生活中的重要部分 forget worries 忘记烦恼 express true feelings 表达真实情感 keep trying 不断尝试 never give up 永不放弃 bring joy 带来快乐 in the future 在未来 lifelong friend 终生朋友 enjoy writing 喜欢写作 keep a diary 写日记 improve skills 提高技能 in free time 在空闲时间 make progress 取得进步 feel relaxed 感到放松 make friends 交朋友 do sports 做运动 play the piano 弹钢琴 draw pictures 画画 listen to music 听音乐 take photos 拍照 build confidence 树立自信 make life colorful 让生活丰富多彩 achieve dreams 实现梦想 句型 Para. 1 开头 + 发展过程 1.My favourite hobby is… I first fell in love with it when I was… years old. （我最喜欢的爱好是…，我第一次爱上它是在我… 岁的时候。） 2.I started to… after I watched… on TV, and then I began to take lessons and practise every day. （在我在电视上看了… 之后，我开始…，然后我开始上课并每天练习。） 3.As time went by, I got better and better at it, and it became a big part of my life. （随着时间的推移，我越来越擅长它，它也成了我生活中重要的一部分。） Para. 2 原因与感受 1.I love this hobby mainly because it makes me feel happy and free. （我喜欢这个爱好主要是因为它让我感到快乐和自由。） 2.When I…, I can forget all my worries and just enjoy myself. It also helps me express my true feelings. （当我… 的时候，我可以忘记所有烦恼，尽情享受。它也帮助我表达真实的情感。） 3.Besides, it teaches me to keep trying and never give up, which makes me more confident. （此外，它教会我不断尝试、永不放弃，这让我变得更自信。） Para. 3 结尾与展望 1.I will keep this hobby forever, because it brings me so much joy. （我会永远坚持这个爱好，因为它给我带来了太多快乐。） 2.In the future, I hope to become a… who can share my love for… with more people. （未来，我希望能成为一名…，和更多人分享我对… 的热爱。） 3.This hobby is not just a pastime for me, but a lifelong friend that will always stay with me. （对我来说，这个爱好不只是一种消遣，更是一个会一直陪伴我的终身朋友。） 名言 1.Interest is the best teacher.兴趣是最好的老师。—— 爱因斯坦 2.Happy is the man who is living by his hobby.醉心于自己爱好的人是幸福的。—— 萧伯纳 3.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。（谚语） 4.Every man has his hobbyhorse.人各有所好。（谚语） 5.Interest will not lie.兴趣不会说谎。（谚语） 6.A man without a hobby is like a bird without wings.没有爱好的人，就像没有翅膀的鸟。 7.Cultivating a hobby makes life more meaningful.培养爱好，让生命更有意义。 8.Follow your interests and they will lead you to happiness.追随兴趣，它们会带你走向幸福。 优美句子 仿 （一）基础仿写 原句1：My favourite hobby is writing.我最喜欢的爱好是写作。 仿句1：My favourite hobby is reading books.我最喜欢的爱好是读书。 原句2：I first fell in love with it when I was ten years old.我十岁时第一次爱上它。 仿句2：I first became interested in it when I was in Grade 3.我三年级时第一次对它产生兴趣。 原句3：I started to practise writing after I watched a show on TV.在电视上看了一个节目后，我开始练习写作。 仿句3：I began to learn drawing after my teacher told me it was fun.在老师告诉我画画很有趣后，我开始学习画画。 原句4：As time went by, I got better and better at it.随着时间流逝，我越来越擅长它。 仿句4：As time went by, I improved more and more in it. 随着时间流逝，我在这方面进步得越来越大。 原句5：It makes me feel relaxed and free from pressure.它让我感到放松，远离压力。 仿句5：It brings me peace and makes me full of energy.它带给我平静，让我充满活力。 原句6：When I write, I can forget all my worries.当我写作时，我能忘记所有烦恼。 仿句6：When I do what I love, I can enjoy myself completely.当做我热爱的事时，我能完全享受其中。 原句7：It helps me express my true feelings clearly.它帮我清晰地表达真实情感。 仿句7：It teaches me to be confident and never give up.它教会我要自信，永不放弃。 原句8：In the future, I hope to be a writer and share my stories.未来，我希望成为一名作家，分享我的故事。 仿句8：I will keep my hobby forever and make my life more colourful.我会永远坚持我的爱好，让生活更丰富多彩。 （二）进阶仿写 My Favourite Hobby Different people have different hobbies. My favourite hobby is __________ (爱好：reading/playing basketball/listening to music/taking photos/drawing). I first fell in love with it when I was __________ (年龄：ten/nine/eight) years old. I started to __________ (做这件事) __________ (频率：every day/after school/on weekends) and kept practising in my free time. As time went by, I made great progress and it became __________ (重要程度：a big part/a necessary part) of my life. I love this hobby mainly because it makes me feel __________ (感受：happy/relaxed/confident/energetic/peaceful). When I __________ (做这件事), I can forget all my worries and __________ (额外收获：enjoy myself/feel free). It also helps me __________ (收获 1：improve skills/express feelings/make friends/learn knowledge). Besides, it teaches me to __________ (品质：keep trying/never give up/be patient/be brave), which makes me __________ (改变：more confident/more creative/more careful). I will keep this hobby forever. In the future, I hope to __________ (梦想：become a good…/do better in…/take more…/write more…) and share my love for it with more people. I believe __________ (爱好) will make my life __________ (结果：more colourful/more meaningful/more wonderful). 范文参考 My Favourite Hobby Different people have different hobbies. My favourite hobby is playing basketball. I first fell in love with it when I was nine years old. I started to play basketball after school and kept practising in my free time. As time went by, I made great progress and it became a big part of my life. I love this hobby mainly because it makes me feel energetic. When I play basketball, I can forget all my worries and feel free. It also helps me make friends. Besides, it teaches me to never give up, which makes me more confident. I will keep this hobby forever. In the future, I hope to do better in basketball and share my love for it with more people. I believe playing basketball will make my life more colourful. 写作步骤 懂 Step 1 审题立意（明确方向，不跑偏） 时态：一般过去时 + 一般现在时 + 一般将来时 写作要点： ① 点明自己最喜欢的爱好 ② 介绍爱好的发展过程（何时开始、如何练习） ③ 说明喜欢的原因与个人感受、收获 ④ 表达未来展望与梦想 Step 2 谋篇布局（搭建框架，填内容） 核心要求：按“开头-中间-结尾”三段式搭建框架，合理分配内容，逻辑清晰。 段落 核心作用 内容要点（用单元句型） 词数建议 开头（1-2句） 引出话题、点明爱好 My favourite hobby is… I first fell in love with it when I was… years old. As time went by, it became a big part of my life. 20-30 中间（3-4句） 说明原因、谈感受 I love t... mainly because it makes me feel happy and free. When I…, I can forget all my worries. It also helps me express my true feelings. Besides, it makes me more confident. 50-60 结尾（2-3句） 总结、展望未来 I will keep… In the future, I hope to… 20-30 Step 3 While-writing (串句成文) 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。 Step 4 Post - writing ： 1.自我检查清单： ①语法检查：人称一致、时态正确、名词单复数无误。 ②拼写检查：所有词汇拼写精准，无字母漏写、错写。 ③语句检查：句子通顺，连接词使用合理，无中式英语。 ④细节检查：词数是否达标，结尾情感明确，内容贴合主题。 2. 同伴互评：两人一组，根据“内容完整度、语法正确性、表达流畅度”打分，并提出修改建议（如：可增加活动过程的细节描述）。 3. 教师点评：选取2-3篇优秀范文和1-2篇典型问题作文，重点讲解亮点表达和常见错误 4. 点评后，同学对自己的作文进行修改，然后完成定稿。 题型通关 练 Passage 1 不同的人拥有不同的爱好，爱好能丰富我们的生活，也能助力我们成长。请你以 My favourite hobby 为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容要点： 1.介绍你最喜欢的爱好是什么； 2.讲述你接触并坚持这项爱好的经历； 3.谈谈这项爱好带给你的收获； 4.说说你今后打算如何继续发展这项爱好。 要求： 1.词数不少于 80 词； 2.语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯； 2.不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My favourite hobby Different people have different hobbies. My favourite hobby is writing. I first fell in love with writing when I was ten. At first, I just wrote down my daily feelings. Later I kept practising writing articles in my free time. Gradually, I made great progress. Writing brings me lots of benefits. It helps me forget my stress and express my real thoughts. It also improves my writing skills and makes me more patient. I will keep practising writing from now on. I plan to read more good articles and learn more writing skills. I hope I can become a great writer in the future and bring warm stories to more people. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇爱好类话题作文； ②时态：以一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时混合使用； ③提示：紧扣写作爱好主题，完整涵盖经历、收获、未来计划，语言地道流畅，符合写作答题规范。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇引出话题，点明自己最喜欢的爱好是写作； 第二步，叙述爱上写作的时间与日常坚持练习的过程； 第三步，阐述写作给自己带来的身心与能力方面的收获； 第四步，写明未来坚持发展爱好的计划与个人理想。 [亮点词汇] ①fall in love with 爱上 ②write down 写下 ③keep practising 坚持练习 ④in one's free time 在空闲时间 ⑤make great progress 取得巨大进步 ⑥from now on 从现在起 ⑦in the future 在将来 [高分句型] ①I first fell in love with writing when I was ten.（when 引导时间状语从句） ②It helps me forget my stress and express my real thoughts.（it 作形式主语经典句型） ③I hope I can become a great writer in the future and bring warm stories to more people.（hope 引导宾语从句） Passage 2 每个人都有自己的爱好， 一些人甚至希望将自己的爱好变成未来的职业。假定你是学生李辉，即将参加学校组织的演讲比赛，请根据下列提示谈谈如何把爱好变成职业。 要点如下：(1)介绍你的爱好； (2)此爱好对未来职业的帮助； (3)表达希望。 注意：(1)词数为80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。 Dear friends, Everyone has a hobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear friends,   Everyone has a hobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is reading novels. When I am absorbed in reading, I can feel a sense of well-being and peace in mind. So I want to change it into my future job—a writer. I think reading is of great help to my future job. Because it enables me to lay solid foundation for my writing. Besides that, reading not only broadens my eyes but also makes me become a well-rounded individual. I hope my dream will be achieved one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简述自己的爱好； 第二步，讲述此爱好对未来职业的帮助； 第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be of great help很有帮助 ②lay solid foundation打下扎实基础 ③not only...but also...不但……而且…… [高分句型] ①When I am absorbed in reading, I can feel a sense of well-being and peace in mind.(时间状语从句) Passage 3 Mr.Li组织你们全班同学分四人小组进行话题讨论。请你写一篇英语短文汇报你们四人小组的分享内容，需包括以下要点。 Group Member Hobby Reason Career Li Mei playing with animals patient; take care of animal expert Wang Tian travelling take photos; make friends with tour guide Zhao Feng reading books be full of fun; learn about knowledge writer You （请补充） （请补充至少一个原因） （请补充） 注意： （1）词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出, 不计入词数）; （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。 Dear Mr.Li and classmates, I am glad to be here to talk about our group members’ hobbies and careers in the future._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【答案】例文 Dear Mr.Li and classmates, I am glad to be here to talk about our group members’ hobbies and careers in the future. Li Mei likes playing with animals because she thinks they are cute. She is patient enough to take care of them. She wants to be an animal expert in the future.Wang Tian likes to travel.He likes taking pictures and making friends with different people.He wants to be a tour guide.Zhao Feng likes reading, because books are full of fun.He wants to learn about knowledge.He wants to be a writer.I want to be a teacher because I want to help children who need help. Thank you for listening ! 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇汇报你们四人小组关于自己的爱好，喜欢它的原因及将来的工作，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。 2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态，人称用第一人称和第三人称单数。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。 Passage 4 英语课上, 同学们正在准备举行以 “真实的自我” 为主题的演讲活动。请你以张迪的名义写一篇演讲词, 向同学们介绍一下自己。提示: 1. What do you look like? 2. What are your hobbies and strong points? 3. How do you improve yourself? 4. What is your dream for the future? 注意: 1.短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥; 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名; 3.语言连贯，语法正确，书写工整词数:80 个左右(开头和结尾已 经给出,不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I’m Zhang Di, and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your attention! 【答案】例文      Hello, everyone! I’m fifteen. I’m tall and thin. I’m a kind and helpful person. I like to help others when they’re in trouble. I like sports. I like musicians who write their own lyrics. I can sing and dance so well that I give performances at our school party. I like reading more books. It not only increases my knowledge but also opens my mind. I want to be a teacher. I’ll make friends with my kids. I want to teach them everything I know! Thanks for your attention! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接开头，描述外貌特征； 第二步：具体介绍爱好和优点，并说明具体活动； 第三步：说明提升方法，并过渡到未来梦想； 第四步：表达结尾，致谢。 [亮点词汇] ①be in trouble处于困境 ②so…that…如此……以至于…… ③make friends交朋友 [高分句型] ①I can sing and dance so well that I give performances at our school party.（结果状语从句） ②I like to help others when they’re in trouble.（时间状语从句） ③I like musicians who write their own lyrics.（定语从句） Passage 5 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的短文。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。演讲的开头已给出，不记入总词数。 下周学校要召开一个题为“My hobby and my future!”的英语演讲比赛，班级推荐你参赛，请准备一篇演讲稿。首先谈谈你的一项爱好；说说你是怎么做的，有哪些收获；再想想你今后将如何进一步发展这一爱好。 My hobby and my future! Different people have different hobbies. 【答案】例文： My hobby and my future! Different people have different hobbies. Of all the hobbies, I like drawing most. It does bring me happiness. When I was a little kid, I was interested in those lines and colors which gave me a beautiful world on paper. To begin with, I spent much time drawing simple animals. Then I took courses so that I could improve my skills. After several years, I could express my feelings with my beautiful pictures. Besides, I find it a good way to relax myself now. In the future, I believe drawing will play a more important role in my life because I want to be a fashion designer who always shows beauty of life to others. In order to realize my dream, I am going to learn more drawing skills. So my friends, hold on to your hobbies. They will make your life richer and more colorful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：紧扣主题，在写作时应注意演讲稿的格式，同时应注意符合题意，注意语言的准确性和连贯性，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。不同的人有不同的爱好； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍在爱好上具体所做的事，同时所取得的收获，以及如何进一步发展个人的爱好； 第三步，书写结语。阐述自己希望大家都保持自己的热爱的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事 ③play an important role in在……中扮演一个重要的角色 [高分句型] ①When I was a little kid, I was interested in those lines and colors which gave me a beautiful world on paper. （which引导的定语从句） ②Besides, I find it a good way to relax myself now.（宾语从句） 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $