内容正文:
人教版必修第一册
Reading for writing
—— write a travel plan to a friend
Unit 2 Travelling around
Terracotta Army is an amazing sight / unbelievable
a must- see attraction
Free-talk to lead in
2
Shaanxi History Museum
is known as a Chinese treasure house
Xi'an City Wall
3
高中英语 必修第一册 UNIT 2 TRAVELLING AROUND
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Thinking
8,000 statues
700,000 people worked
for 40 years
It is an amazing sight
It is amazing that...
It is unbelievable
Why is it so amazing?
高中英语 必修第一册 UNIT 2 TRAVELLING AROUND
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Read Richard's email and fill in the form below.
A travel plan Detailed information
when (leave)
who
where
why
what
the day before the October holiday begins
Richard and his parents
Xi'an
His dad loves history...Terracotta Army is an amazing sight ...
to see the Terracotta Army, and a few other famous sights
Retell email
Richard and _____________ are going to__________.
They are taking_______ and leaving the day before the
October holiday begins, They are planning to see
__________________. They are also going to visit
____________________in Xi’an.Such as...
his parents
Xi’an
the Terracotta Army
several other places
With whom? Where to go? How?When? What to do?
a train
高中英语 必修第一册 UNIT 2 TRAVELLING AROUND
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Beautiful Qiandongnan
1.Shibing Shamu River
2.Zhenyuan Wuyang River
3.Kaili Xiasi ancient city
4.Shibing YunTai Mountain
5.Leishan Xijiang Miao village(welcoming toasts)
6.Congjiang Baba Dong village(岜扒侗寨)
7.Liping Zhaoxing Dong village(The Dong chorus)
Have a good trip.
Iced sweet wine.
Sour soup fish
......
假定你是Xiao Li ,国庆节就要到了,你打算和你的同学去黔东南旅游。请你写信给你的好友Richard,分享你的旅行计划。
内容包括:
1. 计划旅行的时间、地点,人物;
2.参观的景点,出发时间、交通工具等;
3. 你的期待。
参考词汇:西江千户苗寨:Xijiang Miao Village 镇远古城 Zhenyuan ancient city
Dear Richard
_______________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________ Yours, Xiao Li
writing
想一想
审题:体裁,人称,时态,分段
体裁 (type):a travel plan
人称(person): the first /second person
时态(tense) the future tense
分段(paragraph) 3 paragraphs
假定你是Xiao Li ,国庆节就要到了,你打算和你的同学去黔东南旅游。请你写信给你的好友Richard,分享你的旅行计划。内容包括:
1. 计划旅行的时间、地点,人物;
2.参观的景点,出发时间、交通工具等;
3. 你的期待。
计划做某事:_____________
迫不及待地:_____________
国庆节:_____________
四天的旅行:_________
一个惊人的景观:________
plan to do sth
can’t wait to do
National Day
a four-day trip
an amazing sight
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1.国庆节就要到了,我打算和我的同学去黔东南旅游(plan to do)。
2.我们将于10月1日出发,进行4天的旅行。
连词成句:
National Day is coming,my classmates and I are planning to visit Qian Dongnan .
We will set out on 1 October for a four-day trip .
3.镇远古城是令人难以置信的。
4.旅行不仅是一种经历而且还是一种教育。
连词成句:
Zhenyuan ancient city is unbelievable.
Travel is not only a part of experience but also a part of education.
writing outline:
para1:Where to go, with whom,
para2: when to go, how to go
why to go, what to do
para3:Final thoughts
shall/will + do
be going to
be + doing
时态(tense)
Exchange drafts. Assess each other’s work
according to the checklist.
√ Does the writer use the present continuous
tense for future plans?
√ Are all the words spelt correctly?
√ Is handwriting nice ?
Dear Richard,
I am delighted to hear from you. National Day is coming,my classmates and I are planning to visit Qian Dongnan. Now I am writing an email to tell you our travel plan.
Qian Dongnan is so amazing that I can’t wait to go. We will set out on 1 October for a four-day trip,and we are taking a train and a bus . There are many famous sights.To me, Zhenyuan ancient city is unbelievable, where we can enjoy the night view and go drifting in Gao Guohe. We will also visit several other places in Qian Dongnan,such as Xijiang Miao Village, I have heard that it is an amazing sight .
In a word, Qian Dongnan is worth visiting, and I’m looking forward to your coming . Travel is not only a part of experience but also a part of education, Do you think so?
I am the image spokesman(形象代言人) of Beautiful Qiandongnan
There is no doubt that Beautiful Qiandongnan is a perfect destination for all ages for all seasons.It is worth visiting.
beautiful scenery, wonderful man
Travel?
please show me your travel plan.
Wherever you go, whatever you do, homework always follows you.
Step1 审题:体裁,人称,时态,分段
Tips-写作四部曲:
Step3 连词成句
Step2 确定关键词
Step4 连句成篇,增加开头(purpose), 结尾和过渡词
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