摘要:
该初中英语讲义聚焦中考书面表达“个人经历与感悟”核心考点,围绕“挑战-行动-发现”逻辑链构建知识框架,整合提示词运用与句型训练。通过“词汇积累-句型解析-范文赏析-实战仿写”四环节设计,以英语演讲、长跑等真题范文为例,帮助学生突破叙事类写作难点,体现复习的系统性与针对性。
亮点在于“语言能力与思维品质双提升”策略,如通过“used to be not good at...+practice+discovery”句型模板训练,强化语言表达的逻辑性(语言能力),引导学生分析经历中的成长过程(思维品质)。设置“核心句型仿写+提示词情景应用”分层练习,配合范文翻译对照与即时反馈,确保高效复习。助力学生掌握写作模板,教师可灵活调控进度,提升应考能力。
内容正文:
2026年北京市通州区九年级英语一模写作范文
书面表达题目:
请根据所给的中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于 50 词的英语文段写作。文中已给出的内容不计入总词数。所给提示词仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名、姓名和地名。
生活中处处有挑战,只有勇敢面对,才能发现潜力,超越自我。
假设你是李华,你校英语社团公众号打算做一期以“My Discovery”为主题的推送。请用英语向同学们介绍你一个自我发现、自我超越的经历以及你在此过程中的感受和收获。
提示词语:
· not good at, nervous, practice, confidence, grow
提示信息:
· What was your experience/discovery?
· What have you learned from it?
写作范文
(1) 范文 1
My Discovery
I used to be not good at speaking English in public. Every time I stood up, I felt so nervous that my mind went blank. However, I decided to face this challenge. I practiced speaking every morning until I could say sentences fluently. Gradually, I gained more confidence. Finally, I gave a successful speech in front of my class. That was the moment when I discovered my hidden ability. From this experience, I learned that if we keep trying, we can always grow stronger.
【好词汇】
· not good at - 不擅长
· in public - 在公共场合
· so...that... - 如此……以至于……
· go blank - 变得空白
· decide to do - 决定做某事
· face the challenge - 面对挑战
· give a speech - 发表演讲
· hidden ability - 隐藏的能力
【写作句子结构】
· used to be not good at...
· 翻译:过去不擅长……
· 例句:I used to be not good at math problems.
· 例句翻译:我过去不擅长数学题。
· felt so + 形容词 + that + 句子
· 翻译:感到如此……以至于……
· 例句:She felt so tired that she fell asleep quickly.
· 例句翻译:她感到如此疲倦以至于很快就睡着了。
· That was the moment when...
· 翻译:就在那时……
· 例句:That was the moment when I realized my mistake.
· 例句翻译:就在那时我意识到了自己的错误。
· if we keep doing..., we can...
· 翻译:如果我们坚持做……,我们就能……
· 例句:If we keep practicing, we can improve our grades.
· 例句翻译:如果我们坚持练习,我们就能提高成绩。
【范文翻译】
我的发现
我过去不擅长在公共场合说英语。每次站起来,我都感到非常紧张,大脑一片空白。然而,我决定面对这个挑战。我每天早上练习说英语,直到能流利地说出句子。渐渐地,我获得了更多自信。最后,我在全班面前做了一次成功的演讲。就在那一刻,我发现了自己隐藏的能力。从这次经历中,我学到了如果我们不断尝试,我们总能变得更强。
(2) 范文 2
My Discovery
I remember that I was not good at running long distances. Every time we had PE class, I felt nervous because I always fell behind. One day, my teacher told me that practice makes perfect. So I started to run every afternoon after school. Although my legs hurt a lot, I never gave up. After two months, I could run 800 meters without stopping. I discovered that everyone has great potential inside themselves. What I have learned is that as long as we face difficulties bravely, we can achieve what we never thought possible.
【好词汇】
· fall behind - 落后
· practice makes perfect - 熟能生巧
· give up - 放弃
· without stopping - 不停歇
· great potential - 巨大的潜力
· as long as - 只要
· achieve - 实现
· never thought possible - 从未想过可能的
【写作句子结构】
· I remember that...
· 翻译:我记得……
· 例句:I remember that we met each other last summer.
· 例句翻译:我记得我们去年夏天见过面。
· Every time + 句子, 主句
· 翻译:每次……的时候,……
· 例句:Every time I read this book, I learn something new.
· 例句翻译:每次读这本书,我都能学到新东西。
· Although + 句子, 主句
· 翻译:虽然……,但是……
· 例句:Although it was raining hard, they continued the game.
· 例句翻译:虽然雨下得很大,他们还是继续了比赛。
· as long as + 句子, 主句
· 翻译:只要……,就……
· 例句:As long as you work hard, you will succeed.
· 例句翻译:只要你努力,你就会成功。
【范文翻译】
我的发现
我记得自己不擅长跑长距离。每次上体育课,我都很紧张,因为我总是落后。有一天,老师告诉我熟能生巧。于是我每天下午放学后开始跑步。虽然腿很疼,但我从未放弃。两个月后,我能不停歇地跑800米了。我发现每个人内心都有巨大的潜力。我学到的是,只要我们勇敢面对困难,我们就能实现从未想过可能的事情。
(3) 范文 3
My Discovery
Last term, I found that I was not good at solving math word problems. Whenever I saw a long problem, my heart beat fast and I felt nervous. But my mum said that nobody is born perfect. So I decided to practice ten problems every night before sleep. Sometimes I wanted to stop, but I told myself that I should keep going. After three weeks, I could solve most problems correctly. I discovered that my real limit was only in my mind. This experience taught me that when we push ourselves, we can grow beyond our old selves.
【好词汇】
· solve problems - 解决问题
· word problem - 应用题
· heart beat fast - 心跳加速
· be born perfect - 生来完美
· keep going - 坚持下去
· correctly - 正确地
· real limit - 真正的限制
· push ourselves - 鞭策自己
【写作句子结构】
· I found that...
· 翻译:我发现……
· 例句:I found that she was very friendly.
· 例句翻译:我发现她很友好。
· Whenever + 句子, 主句
· 翻译:每当……的时候,……
· 例句:Whenever I feel sad, I listen to music.
· 例句翻译:每当我感到难过时,我就听音乐。
· ..., but I told myself that...
· 翻译:……,但我告诉自己……
· 例句:It was hard, but I told myself that I could finish it.
· 例句翻译:这很难,但我告诉自己我能完成。
· This experience taught me that...
· 翻译:这次经历教会了我……
· 例句:This experience taught me that honesty is important.
· 例句翻译:这次经历教会了我诚实很重要。
【范文翻译】
我的发现
上学期,我发现自己不擅长解数学应用题。每当我看到长题目时,我的心就跳得很快,感到很紧张。但妈妈说没有人是生来完美的。于是我决定每晚睡前练习十道题。有时我想停下来,但我告诉自己要坚持下去。三周后,我能正确解出大部分题目了。我发现真正的限制只存在于我的脑海中。这次经历教会了我,当我们鞭策自己时,我们就能超越旧的自我。
(4) 范文 4
My Discovery
My discovery came from learning to play the guitar. At first, I was not good at it at all. My fingers were slow and the sound was terrible. I felt so nervous before each lesson that I wanted to give up. Then my friend reminded me that everyone starts from zero. So I practiced for twenty minutes every day without missing a single day. After two months, I could play a complete song. I discovered that I had more patience than I thought. The biggest thing I have learned is that confidence grows when we take small steps every day.
【好词汇】
· at first - 起初
· not...at all - 一点也不
· remind - 提醒
· start from zero - 从零开始
· without missing a single day - 一天都不落下
· a complete song - 一首完整的歌
· patience - 耐心
· take small steps - 迈小步
【写作句子结构】
· I felt so + 形容词 + that...
· 翻译:我感到如此……以至于……
· 例句:He felt so happy that he laughed out loud.
· 例句翻译:他感到如此开心以至于大声笑了出来。
· The biggest thing I have learned is that...
· 翻译:我学到的最重要的一点是……
· 例句:The biggest thing I have learned is that time is precious.
· 例句翻译:我学到的最重要的一点是时间很宝贵。
· ...when we take small steps every day.
· 翻译:当我们每天迈出一小步时……
· 例句:Progress happens when we take small steps every day.
· 例句翻译:当我们每天迈出一小步时,进步就发生了。
【范文翻译】
我的发现
我的发现来自于学习弹吉他。起初,我一点也不擅长。我的手指很慢,声音也很难听。每次课前我都非常紧张,以至于想放弃。然后我的朋友提醒我,每个人都是从零开始的。所以我每天练习二十分钟,一天都不落下。两个月后,我能弹奏一首完整的歌了。我发现自己比想象中更有耐心。我学到的最重要的一点是,当我们每天迈出一小步时,自信就会增长。
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