2026年北京海淀初三一模英语写作指导及高分范文

2026年北京海淀初三一模英语写作指导及高分范文 写 作 任 务 假设你是李华。毕业将至，你校英语社团正在举办毕业季校园照片征集活动，定格初中美好时光。请你选择一张你最想分享的照片，用英语描述照片里的画面，并说明你选择这张照片的原因。 提示词语：moment, enjoy, growth, proud, unforgettable 提示信息：• Describe the picture you want to share.• Why do you choose it? 思 路 点 拨 第一步：审题主题分享初中校园照片，涵盖照片画面描述和选择原因阐述。 人称第一人称“I”。时态一般现在时和一般过去时相结合，描述照片内容用一般过去时，阐述选择原因等用一般现在时。 第二步：写作提纲 开头承接“Among all my photos, I'd like to share one that means the most to me.”，引出要分享的照片。中间画面描述按照一定顺序，如从整体到局部，描述照片中的人物、场景、动作等，运用提示词。 原因阐述说明照片记录的难忘时刻，对自己成长的意义，或让自己感到骄傲的地方等。 结尾总结对这张照片的情感或对初中时光的怀念。 第三步：选词组句 可能用到的词语及中文解释： · moment [ˈməʊmənt]n. a particular point in time. 时刻；瞬间 · enjoy [ɪnˈdʒɔɪ]v. to get pleasure from something. 享受；欣赏 · growth [ɡrəʊθ]n. the process of developing or growing. 成长；生长 · proud [praʊd]adj. feeling pleasure or satisfaction over something regarded as a good accomplishment. 骄傲的；自豪的 · unforgettable [ˌʌnfəˈɡetəbl]adj. too important or interesting to be forgotten. 难忘的 高分作文一： Among all my photos, I'd like to share one that means the most to me. It was taken on the school sports meeting. In the picture, my classmates and I were running in the relay race. We were all trying our best, with sweat on our faces but smiles in our eyes. I choose this photo because it captures an unforgettable moment. It reminds me of the time when we practiced together after school. We encouraged each other and grew together. I'm really proud of our teamwork. This photo represents our growth and friendship during junior high school. 在我所有的照片中，我想分享一张对我意义最重大的。它是在学校运动会上拍摄的。照片中，我和同学们正在参加接力赛跑。我们都在全力以赴，脸上挂着汗水，但眼中带着笑容。 我选择这张照片是因为它捕捉了一个难忘的瞬间。它让我想起我们放学后一起练习的时光。我们互相鼓励，共同成长。我为我们的团队合作感到非常骄傲。这张照片代表了我们在初中期间的成长和友谊。 高分作文二： Among all my photos, I'd like to share one that means the most to me.  The photo shows our class having a picnic in the school garden. Some students were preparing food, some were chatting happily, and others were enjoying the beautiful scenery. Everyone looked so relaxed and happy. I choose it because it's an unforgettable moment in my junior high school life. It was a time when we could forget about study pressure and just enjoy ourselves. This picnic witnessed our growth and the precious friendship among us. I'm proud to have such wonderful classmates. 在我所有的照片中，我想分享一张对我意义最重大的。它是在学校运动会上拍摄的。照片中，我和同学们正在参加接力赛跑。我们都在全力以赴，脸上挂着汗水，但眼中带着笑容。 我选择这张照片是因为它捕捉了一个难忘的瞬间。它让我想起我们放学后一起练习的时光。我们互相鼓励，共同成长。我为我们的团队合作感到非常骄傲。这张照片代表了我们在初中期间的成长和友谊。 好 句 背 诵 以下是上面高分作文摘取的优秀的表达： 1.“It was taken on the school sports meeting.”简洁地交代了照片拍摄的背景，为后文描述照片内容做铺垫，使用被动语态“was taken”，表达自然。 2.“We were all trying our best, with sweat on our faces but smiles in our eyes.” 生动地描绘了照片中人物的状态，“with...”结构的使用，使句子画面感更强，很好地展现了当时的场景。 3.“This photo represents our growth and friendship during junior high school.” 直接点明了照片的意义，“represent”一词准确表达了照片所承载的内涵，总结性强。 4.“Some students were preparing food, some were chatting happily, and others were enjoying the beautiful scenery.” 运用“some... some... others...”的句型，条理清晰地描述了照片中不同同学的活动，使画面丰富且有序。 5.“It was a time when we could forget about study pressure and just enjoy ourselves.” 用“when”引导的定语从句，进一步说明了这个时刻的特点，强调了野餐时光的轻松愉快。 6.“I'm proud to have such wonderful classmates.” 直接表达了对同学的赞美和自豪之情，语言简洁有力，升华了情感。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $