2026年春期北京燕山初三一模英语写作指导及范文

该初中英语中考复习学案聚焦写作核心考点，覆盖图表说明与建议、记叙文写作两大任务，按“审题-提纲-选词组句-范文赏析-好句积累”分层构建知识网络，通过提示问题（如What can you learn from the results?）和任务驱动引导学生自主梳理写作逻辑，形成“描述-分析-表达”的能力体系。 亮点在于“过程性写作指导”与“核心素养融合”设计，如任务一提供图表数据解读框架，任务二设置“经历叙述-感悟提炼”模板，配套提示词语（manage, prepare等）和高分句型（如From the results, we can learn that...），培养语言能力与思维品质。学生可通过范文对比自主诊断表达短板，教师能依据提纲设计、词汇运用等表现实施分层指导，助力个性化复习与高效备考。

2026年春期北京燕山初三一模英语写作指导及范文 写 作 任 务一 题目① 假设你是李华，你们班的英语课正在开展研究性学习。你选择研究同学们如何平衡社团活动与中考备考的情况，为此你对班里40名同学进行了问卷调查，下图是部分统计结果。请用英语写一篇短文，简要说明图表内容，并对班级同学平衡社团活动与中考备考提出建议。 提示词语：show, join, manage, helpful, prepare, develop 提示问题：● What can you learn from the results? ● Offer your advice to your classmates. I did a survey on balancing club activities and exam preparation. 思 路 点 拨 第一步：审题 内容要点：描述图表展示的不同选择的人数情况；根据结果提出平衡社团活动与中考备考的建议。文体：说明文。人称：第一人称。 · 时态：一般现在时。 第二步：写作提纲 · 开头：直接表明做了关于平衡社团活动与考试准备的调查。 · 中间：详细说明图表中“把兴趣放在首位”“平衡得很好”“停止社团活动”这三类选择的具体人数情况，然后根据结果提出自己的建议，如合理安排时间、明确不同阶段重点等。 · 结尾：总结平衡好两者关系的重要性。 第三步：选词组句可能用到的词语及中文解释： · manage [ˈmænɪdʒ] v. to succeed in doing or dealing with something difficult，成功做某事或处理困难的事情。例如：manage time（合理安排时间） · helpful [ˈhelpfl] adj. giving or ready to give help，给予帮助或乐于助人的。例如：helpful advice（有用的建议） · prepare [prɪˈpeə(r)] v. to make or get something ready for something that will happen in the future，为未来将发生的事情做好或准备好某事。例如：prepare for exams（备考） · develop [dɪˈveləp] v. to gradually grow or become bigger, more advanced, stronger, etc.; to make something do this，逐渐发展、成长或变得更强大等；使某物这样做。例如：develop good habits（养成好习惯） 高分作文一： I did a survey on balancing club activities and exam preparation. According to the chart, 6 students put interests first, 26 managed to balance well, and 8 stopped club activities. From the results, we can learn that most students can balance club activities and exam preparation well. Here is my advice. First, we should make a reasonable plan. We can list the time for club activities and study separately. Second, we need to know what is more important at different times. When exams are coming, we should focus more on studying. Third, we can also ask teachers or parents for some helpful suggestions. In a word, only by balancing club activities and exam preparation well can we develop in an all - round way.  我做了一个关于平衡社团活动与考试准备的调查。根据图表，6名学生把兴趣放在首位，26名学生设法平衡得很好，8名学生停止了社团活动。 从结果中我们可以得知，大多数学生能够很好地平衡社团活动和考试准备。以下是我的建议。首先，我们应该制定一个合理的计划。我们可以分别列出社团活动和学习的时间。其次，我们需要知道在不同时间什么更重要。当考试临近时，我们应该更多地关注学习。第三，我们也可以向老师或家长寻求一些有用的建议。 总之，只有平衡好社团活动和考试准备，我们才能全面发展。 高分作文二： I did a survey on balancing club activities and exam preparation. The chart shows that 6 students put interests first, 26 balanced well, and 8 stopped club activities. We can learn from the results that most classmates can handle the relationship between club activities and exam preparation properly. To balance them better, we can do the following. On one hand, we should manage our time wisely. For example, we can use碎片化时间 (fragmented time) for some simple club - related tasks during study breaks. On the other hand, we should prepare for exams regularly. Don't wait until the last minute. Also, joining club activities can actually be helpful for our study. It can relax us and improve our learning efficiency. In conclusion, we should find a proper way to balance club activities and exam preparation. 我做了一个关于平衡社团活动与考试准备的调查。图表显示，6名学生把兴趣放在首位，26名学生平衡得很好，8名学生停止了社团活动。 从结果中我们可以了解到，大多数同学能够正确处理社团活动和考试准备之间的关系。为了更好地平衡两者，我们可以做以下事情。一方面，我们应该明智地管理我们的时间。例如，我们可以在学习间隙利用碎片化时间做一些与社团相关的简单任务。另一方面，我们应该定期为考试做准备。不要等到最后一刻。此外，参加社团活动实际上对我们的学习有帮助。它可以让我们放松并提高我们的学习效率。 总之，我们应该找到一种合适的方法来平衡社团活动和考试准备。 好 句 背 诵 以下是上面高分作文摘取的优秀的表达： · “From the results, we can learn that most students can balance club activities and exam preparation well.”直接引出从图表结果中得出的关键信息，简洁明了地开启下文建议部分，是文章逻辑衔接的重要语句。 · “First, we should make a reasonable plan. We can list the time for club activities and study separately.”提出了第一条建议，先提出制定计划的总体方向，再说明计划的具体做法，条理清晰，具有很强的可操作性。 · “In a word, only by balancing club activities and exam preparation well can we develop in an all - round way.”总结全文，强调平衡两者关系的重要性，使用“in a word”进行总结，使文章结构完整。 · “We can learn from the results that most classmates can handle the relationship between club activities and exam preparation properly.”清晰地阐述了从图表中获取的信息，为后文提出平衡两者的建议做铺垫，表达自然流畅。 · “On one hand, we should manage our time wisely. For example, we can use fragmented time for some simple club - related tasks during study breaks.”具体地给出了平衡两者的方法，通过举例“利用碎片化时间做简单社团任务”，使建议更具实用性和可操作性。 · “In conclusion, we should find a proper way to balance club activities and exam preparation.”简洁地总结全文，再次强调要找到平衡两者的方法，使文章主题得到升华。 写 作 任 务二 生活中处处有挑战，只有勇敢面对，才能发现潜力，超越自我。 假设你是李华，你校英语社团公众号打算做一期以“My Discovery”为主题的推送。请用英语向同学们介绍你一个自我发现、自我超越的经历以及你在此过程中的感受和收获。 提示词语：not good at, nervous, practice, confidence, grow 内容提示：What was your experience/discovery? What have you learned from it? 思 路 点 拨 第一步：审题 体裁：记叙文，需叙述经历并阐述感悟。 内容：清晰描述自我发现和超越的具体经历，包括之前的状态、面对挑战时的表现、采取的行动等；明确说明从该经历中学到的东西。 人称：第一人称。 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时结合，叙述经历用一般过去时，阐述感悟用一般现在时。 第二步：写作提纲 开头：直接引入要讲述的自我发现和超越的经历。 中间：详细描述经历，比如曾经不擅长某事，面对相关挑战时会紧张，然后讲述自己如何通过练习等方式去克服，最终实现自我超越。 结尾：总结从这次经历中获得的感受和收获。 第三步：选词组句 challenge [ˈtʃælɪndʒ] n. 挑战（a new or difficult task that tests one's ability and skill） overcome [ˌəʊvəˈkʌm] v. 克服（to successfully deal with or gain control of a problem or difficulty） potential [pəˈtenʃl] n. 潜力（the ability that someone has to develop or succeed in the future） improvement [ɪmˈpruːvmənt] n. 进步，改进（the act of improving or the state of being improved） 高分作文一： I'd like to share my experience of self - discovery and self - transcendence. I used to be not good at giving speeches in public. Whenever I had to speak in front of others, I would feel extremely nervous. To overcome this, I practiced a lot. I read aloud every day and joined a speaking club. With continuous practice, I became more confident. Finally, I successfully gave a wonderful speech in front of the whole school. From this experience, I learned that everyone has potential. We should face challenges bravely to discover and realize our potential. 我想要分享一下我自我发现和自我超越的经历。我过去不擅长在公众面前演讲。每当我不得不在别人面前讲话时，我都会感到非常紧张。 为了克服这一点，我进行了大量练习。我每天大声朗读并加入了一个演讲俱乐部。通过不断练习，我变得更加自信。最后，我在全校师生面前成功发表了一次精彩的演讲。 从这次经历中，我学到了每个人都有潜力。我们应该勇敢面对挑战，以发现并实现我们的潜力。 高分作文二： I want to talk about my discovery and experience of self - transcendence. I was not good at playing basketball at first. When playing with others, I was always nervous and made many mistakes. I didn't give up. I practiced shooting and dribbling every day after school. Gradually, I saw my improvement. I grew more confident and started to play better. In a recent game, I even scored some key points. I've learned that as long as we keep trying, we can overcome difficulties and grow. 我想谈谈我自我超越的发现和经历。一开始我不擅长打篮球。和别人一起打球时，我总是很紧张，会犯很多错误。 我没有放弃。每天放学后我都练习投篮和运球。渐渐地，我看到了自己的进步。我变得更加自信，开始打得更好。在最近的一场比赛中，我甚至投进了几个关键球。 我学到了只要我们不断尝试，我们就能克服困难并成长。 好 句 背 诵 以下是上面高分作文摘取的优秀的表达： Whenever I had to speak in front of others, I would feel extremely nervous. “whenever”引导时间状语从句，清晰地描述了特定情境下自己的状态，“extremely”强调了紧张的程度，使表达更生动。 From this experience, I learned that everyone has potential. “from this experience”点明感悟来源，“that everyone has potential”是宾语从句，简洁明了地阐述了学到的道理。 I practiced shooting and dribbling every day after school. 简单直接地描述了自己为提升篮球技能所采取的行动，“every day after school”明确了练习的时间。 I've learned that as long as we keep trying, we can overcome difficulties and grow. “as long as”引导条件状语从句，清晰地表达了条件和结果的关系，“overcome difficulties and grow”准确概括了坚持尝试的积极影响。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $