2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---暗夜执笔，终遇星光 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，系统梳理文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造、续写框架等要素，按“文本解构-情节发展-语言表达”逻辑构建知识网络，通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题导向设计，引导学生自主提炼续写规律，形成完整解题思路。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层指导结合，如“细节问答”模块帮助学生自测文本理解漏洞，“续写框架”提供从衔接句到段落逻辑的方法指导，培养学生语言能力与思维品质。每个环节配有反思总结表，支持个性化知识内化，教师可依据学情精准辅导，有效提升学生自主复习效率与备考实效。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I'm not sure how severe my insomnia (失眠) really is. In one sense, it is serious because it started back in middle school, meaning I've struggled with it for nearly thirty years now. I've had migraines since childhood, which often come with eye pressure and nausea. Perhaps it was these headaches that opened the door to insomnia, gradually leading to more and more sleepless nights. For me, staying up until one or two in the morning has become the norm. My friends all think my insomnia is quite severe, as the dark circles under my eyes—almost reaching my cheeks—have become my most prominent feature. Yet, compared to friends whose daily lives are significantly disrupted by insomnia, my case seems milder. While I may not take it too seriously mentally, the distress and trouble caused by insomnia are objectively real. It's somewhat bearable if I can manage one or two hours of sleep in a night, but when I get no sleep at all, the next day's physical and mental state is severely affected, forcing me to find ways to cope. Initially, I tried clearing my mind, but I found it hard to control my wandering thoughts. My brain would endlessly ponder questions like "What is the end of the universe?" or "What is the meaning of life?"—the more I thought, the less I could sleep. So, I turned to reading. For a while, Freud’s The Interpretation of Dreams became a sleep aid; I’d drift off while reading it. Unfortunately, that only helped for a limited time. One late night, in complete silence, my mind was unusually clear, and sleep was nowhere in sight. Emotions and reflections I hadn’t processed during the day flooded my mind. I thought, instead of lying there anxious, why not get up and write these thoughts down? So I did. I grabbed a piece of paper and a pen and began jotting down my scattered thoughts aimlessly. Miraculously, the moment the pen touched the paper, those restless emotions seemed to untangle, and my anxiety slowly faded. When I finally put the pen down, I felt an unprecedented sense of relaxation and fell asleep almost immediately. Even though there wasn’t much time left to sleep, I woke up the next day feeling unexpectedly energetic—something I had never anticipated. 注意： （1）所续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Since then, my nights have become my personal writing time. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One day, it occurred to me to try submitting my writing to a publishing house. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I suffered from insomnia for nearly thirty years--- _________________ --- I tried relaxing mind and reading to fall asleep--- _________________ --- I tried writing down scattered thoughts and it worked 4. 细节问答 How long has the author suffered from insomnia? ：___________________________________ What problems does insomnia bring to the author?：_________________________________ What methods did the author try to treat insomnia at first?：________________________________________________ What unexpected way helped the author relieve anxiety and fall asleep?：__________________________________________ What was the author’s feeling after writing down thoughts and falling asleep?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者饱受近三十年失眠困扰，失眠带来身心困扰→_________________ →尝试放空大脑、读书助眠，效果短暂且有限→偶然深夜提笔记录思绪，有效缓解焦虑、改善睡眠→_________________ →（续写）坚持夜间写作，沉淀自我、治愈自我→（续写）投稿成功，领悟缺憾亦是馈赠 6．情感线 troubled and anxious→___________→helpless→___________→relieved and hopeful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长感悟类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Since then, my nights have become my personal writing time. 衔接句1——What did the author do every night? What changes took place? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: One day, it occurred to me to try submitting my writing to a publishing house. 衔接句2——What was the result of submission? What did the author realize? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：从那以后，夜晚成了我专属的写作时光。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：有一天，我突发奇想，尝试向出版社投稿。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Since then, my nights have become my personal writing time. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One day, it occurred to me to try submitting my writing to a publishing house. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 我：长期饱受失眠困扰、积极自救、善于反思生活、心态乐观、敢于尝试突破，将人生困境转化为成长机遇 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 I suffered from insomnia for nearly thirty years--- insomnia caused physical and mental troubles--- I tried relaxing mind and reading to fall asleep--- traditional methods failed to work long--- I tried writing down scattered thoughts and it worked 4. 细节问答 How long has the author suffered from insomnia? ：The author has suffered from insomnia for nearly thirty years since middle school. What problems does insomnia bring to the author?：It causes migraines, eye pressure, nausea, poor mental and physical state and obvious dark circles under eyes. What methods did the author try to treat insomnia at first?：The author tried emptying the mind and reading books to fight insomnia. What unexpected way helped the author relieve anxiety and fall asleep?：Writing down scattered thoughts and emotions on paper eased anxiety greatly and helped her fall asleep soundly. What was the author’s feeling after writing down thoughts and falling asleep?：She felt extremely relaxed and surprisingly energetic the next day. 5．情节线 作者自中学起饱受三十年失眠困扰，身心备受折磨→尝试放空思绪、读书助眠，效果短暂无法根治→深夜无眠时偶然提笔记录思绪，成功缓解焦虑、改善睡眠→养成夜间写作习惯，积累大量文字素材→（续写）坚持深夜写作，治愈自我、沉淀内心→（续写）大胆投稿收获成功，感悟困境成就自我 6．情感线 troubled and anxious→helpless and confused→helpless→shocked and relieved→relieved and hopeful→grateful and insightful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者常年受失眠困扰，多种助眠方式收效甚微，偶然发现书写思绪可以缓解焦虑、帮助入眠，长期坚持写作后投稿成功，最终明白生活中的困境也能成为成就自我的独特财富。 英文：Suffering from persistent insomnia for thirty years and failing to get rid of it with common methods, the author accidentally found writing an effective cure. By keeping writing at night and submitting works, she achieved success and realized that life’s troubles can turn into valuable treasures. 8. 句式 状语从句：While I may not take it too seriously mentally, the distress and trouble caused by insomnia are objectively real. 非谓语动词：I began jotting down my scattered thoughts aimlessly. 宾语从句：I found it hard to control my wandering thoughts. 定语从句：I've had migraines since childhood, which often come with eye pressure and nausea. 并列句：The more I thought, the less I could sleep. 9. 本文主题 成长感悟类：人生困境并非全然磨难，换一种方式接纳与转化，缺憾与挫折也能成为成长的契机与独特的人生馈赠。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Since then, my nights have become my personal writing time. 衔接句1：I kept writing every sleepless night, recorded my true feelings, and gradually cured my anxiety and insomnia while accumulating plenty of wonderful articles. Paragraph 2: One day, it occurred to me to try submitting my writing to a publishing house. 衔接句2：My works were published and well received, making me understand that the long-term insomnia once troubling me has shaped my unique life value. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：从那以后，夜晚成了我专属的写作时光。 →①我每一个无眠的夜晚都会静坐书写，记录日常思绪与人生感悟→②长期坚持下，焦虑逐渐消散，失眠大幅改善，积累了大量文稿→③深夜独处写作，成为治愈自己的专属方式； 第二段：有一天，我突发奇想，尝试向出版社投稿。 →①我整理自己的文字作品，鼓起勇气向出版社投稿→②稿件顺利出版，收获读者的认可与喜爱→③我心生感悟，昔日的磨难最终成就了更好的自己。 四.段落续写（标准范文） Since then, my nights have become my personal writing time. Whenever I stayed awake at night, I would sit quietly at my desk and write down my random thoughts and inner feelings. Gradually, writing became my best companion in sleepless nights. It effectively calmed my restless mind and relieved my long-term anxiety. As I stuck to this habit, I not only gained peace of mind but also accumulated a large number of sincere and touching articles, and my insomnia got much better unexpectedly. One day, it occurred to me to try submitting my writing to a publishing house. To my great joy, my collection of articles was accepted and published soon. My works won wide praise from readers, who said my words brought them comfort and strength. I was deeply moved. It dawned on me that there is no absolute misfortune in life. The insomnia that had troubled me for decades was no longer a curse, but a precious experience that helped me discover my talent and harvest an unexpected life success. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $