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Unit 7
A Day to Remember
Section B(2a —2b)
Read Sam’s diary entry and write a one-sentence summary of what he did on that day.
n. (日记的)一则;入口
Let’s review
Sam’s School trip
Where
______
How
It was ______ but great ____!
Farm
tiring
fun
Explored the farm → Learnt how food goes from the _____ to our ______ → ______ some strawberries → Cut ________ and ________ from tomato plants → _______ plants → _______ vegetables at home → Wrote a _____ _____ for the day
fields
tables
Picked
branches
leaves
Watered
Cooked
diary entry
What
Farming _____ _____! We should
not waste any food,
because every grain comes from _____ _____.
isn’t
easy
hard work
Learnt
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Writing
My School Trip
1. Where did you go?
2. What did you do /
see?
3. How did you feel?
4. What did you learn?
Make notes about your last school trip.
2a
2b Write a diary entry about the school trip. Use your notes in 2a and the expressions to help you.
Friday, 7 June
I had a really good day today. Our class went on a school trip to a natural history museum.
When I walked into the museum, I was amazed by what I saw. There were huge dinosaur skeletons. They looked both scary and interesting. I also saw some models of planets. The colours and details of those planets were so good.
I was very interested and curious during the whole visit. I also learnt some interesting facts about dinosaurs and planets. This trip to the natural museum was really fun.
What a day!
where
what I felt
what I learnt
what I saw
How do we write a diary about school trip?
Beginning
Body
Ending
School
trip
Where did you go?
How did you feel?
When was the activity?
What did you do/ see?
What did you learn?
How did you feel?
What did you learn?
How did you feel?
Where did you go?
原文:Today we went on a school trip to a farm!
Today, our school organized us to go on a trip on a farm.
Today, our teacher took us to a farm for the school trip.
Today, our teacher took us for the school trip, with the purpose of visiting the farm.
What did you do?
加时间顺序词: In the morning, we packed our bags and went to the park. First, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery. Then, we started on the hiking trail. In the afternoon, we relaxed at a scenic lakeside. Finally, we gathered for a group photo.
How do we make the sentence longer and better?
中心句+细节描述: In the morning, we wandered through the park. There were spacious lawns dotted with blooming flowers, picnic tables, and children's laughter echoing joyfully.
What did you do?
How do we make the sentence longer and better?
中心句+细节描述: In the morning, we wandered through the park. There were spacious lawns dotted with blooming flowers, picnic tables, and children’s laughter echoing joyfully.
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中心句+细节描述: In the morning, we wandered through the park. There were spacious lawns dotted with blooming flowers, picnic tables, and children's laughter echoing joyfully.
What did you do?
How do we make the sentence longer and better?
灵活运用各种连词: We had a picnic with delicious food. But I lost my hat when we were playing around. However, it didn’t matter because we had so much fun. The park was beautiful, with colorful flowers and tall trees. We took lots of photos, sang songs on the bus ride back and played group games together.
What did you do?
meet up with 和······碰头
go on a school trip 参加学校旅行
visit a science museum 参观科学博物馆
pick strawberries 摘草莓
take photos 拍照
go to an exhibition 去看展览
talks to robots 和机器人说话
Phrases related to school trips
What did you learn?
原文:One thing I learnt today…
补充:
I realized/ discovered that …
Through this trip, I learnt that …
The most valuable lesson I gained from this school trip was ...
My experience on this trip taught me ...
The trip reminded me of …
What did you learn?
原文:It made me think of the saying …
补充:
The saying “...” came to my mind.
It reminded me of the proverb that states, “...”
I was reminded of the saying, “...”.
The saying “...” popped into my head.
It brought to mind the timeless saying, “...”
How did you feel?
原文: tiring, great fun, interested
补充: excited(兴奋的) thrilled(极为兴奋的)
delighted(高兴的) joyful(充满喜悦的)
content(满足的) relaxed(放松的)
calm(平静的) peaceful(宁静的)
curious(好奇的) fascinated(着迷的)
impressed(印象深刻的) adventurous(喜欢冒险的)
Word Bank
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How did you feel?
We felt tired but happy.
What a(n) (…) day!
It was really a tiring but exciting/interesting/… trip.
Today was really a day to remember.
Sentence Bank
16
Add more
In the morning/ afternoon/ evening; At night/ noon
Before/ After/ During breakfast/ lunch/ dinner
At 9 o’clock/ 9 a.m./ 5 a.m. (具体时间)
First of all/ First/ Then/ After that/ Next/ Eventually/ Finally/ Following that/ Meanwhile
Task 7: Write an outline.
Beginning
Our class went on a school trip to a farm last Sunday. It was really a tiring but interesting trip.
Body
In the morning, we went to … and watched … Then we visited … We took quite a few photos there. Finally …
Ending
I truly enjoyed every moment of this trip, and it reminded me of …
One possible version
Friday, 6 June
I had a really good day today. Our class went on a school trip to an art museum. There was an art exhibition. I saw different kinds of art works, like some paintings of excellent artists. All of the paintings are so wonderful, and we were interested in them. Through the trip, I
learnt many things about art. I felt tired but happy. Today was really a day to remember.
Friday, 6 June
I had a great day today. Our class went on a school trip to a science museum.
When we got there, a guide welcomed us and took us around. First, we saw some old things. It was fun to know how people used them long ago. Then, we went to the modern - tech area. There were robots doing different things. We even got to play with a small robot!
Sample Writing
After that, we watched a 3-D movie about space. It seemed we were really in space.We had lunch in the museum's dining place. The food was good.Before we left, we bought some gifts in the gift shop.
What a day! I love this school trip.
Criteria
(评价标准) Description
(具体要求) Score (分数)
Content(内容) beginning ★★
body ★★★★
ending ★★
Structure (结构) fluent and organized ★★★
Language(语言) spelling and grammar ★★
Writing(书写) clear and neat ★★
Symbol Aspect
Good sentences
Missing words(漏词)
Mistakes(错误)
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文章修改标记
Diary content:
Date
Beginning = What did you do? + Where did you go?
+ How did you feel?
Body = When + What did you see/do?
+ What did you learn? + What did you feel?
Ending = What did you learn? + How did you feel?
Summary
Polish your diary according to your partners’ advice.
Write a diary today.
Homework
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