内容正文:
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I want every high school student to know: You don’t have to be perfect. You don’t have to join in many extracurricular activities or get perfect test scores. What matters is that you work hard, believe in yourself, and let your true self shine. I was once a girl who doubted whether I could ever get into Harvard University, but with hard work and a little faith, I made it. And so can you.
In high school, such a belief felt out of reach to me. Those days were full of self-doubt. I would spend hours watching videos of students online talking about their perfect extracurricular activities — ten clubs, volunteer work abroad, internships at big companies — and compare myself to them. I only had a few after-school activities: attending the book club, tutoring younger students in math, and playing on the girls’ soccer team. My test scores were good, but not perfect. Every time I saw those “perfect” numbers online, I felt like I was falling behind, and I even thought about giving up my dream of going to a top university.
Everything changed the day my teacher, Cathy, pulled me aside. She noticed I was feeling down and asked me what was troubling me. I told her about my doubts, the numbers and activities that made me feel inadequate (缺乏信心的). She smiled and handed me a brochure about Harvard’s admissions process. “Ana,” she said gently, “colleges like Harvard don’t just look at numbers. They look at the whole person — your struggles, your efforts, your growth, and the opportunities you’ve had. You don’t have to be perfect; you just have to be yourself.” Those words hit me like a ray of light. For the first time, I realized that my background, my hard work, and my unique story were not weaknesses — they were part of who I was, and they mattered.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
From that day on, I stopped comparing myself to others and focused on doing my best.
When applying to colleges, I hesitated before adding Harvard.
一、文本分析
1.角色
________________________________________________________
2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
The author wants to tell students that perfection is not necessary and true self and hard work matter most--- _________________ --- The author felt inferior by comparing her ordinary experience with others’ perfect resumes--- _________________ --- She fell into self-doubt and even wanted to give up her top-university dream--- _________________ --- Teacher Cathy enlightened her that colleges value a student’s whole self rather than perfect data
4. 细节问答
What is the author’s core opinion for high school students? :
___________________________________
Why did the author feel inadequate in high school?:
_________________________________
What kind of after-school activities did the author take part in?:
________________________________________________
What was the author’s academic performance like?:
__________________________________________
What negative thought did the author have due to self-doubt?:
_____________________________________________
How did Teacher Cathy help the author out of trouble?:
_________________________________________________
What important truth did the author realize at last?:
________________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:
________________________________________________
5.情节线
作者现身说法,告诉高中生不必追求完美,努力与真我最为珍贵→_________________ →高中时期的作者频繁对比网上优秀学霸的完美履历→自身经历普通、成绩并非顶尖,陷入严重自我怀疑→甚至萌生放弃名校梦想的念头→老师Cathy及时开导,点明名校看重完整的个人与成长经历而非冰冷数据→_________________ →作者幡然醒悟,明白自身的努力与独特经历是独一无二的闪光点→(续写)作者不再内耗攀比,专注自我、踏实沉淀、稳步成长→(续写)申请季勇敢冲刺哈佛,凭借真实独特的自我成功圆梦
6.情感线
I:inferior and doubtful→___________→enlightened and relieved
→___________→confident and proud(续写)
State:self-denial and lost→___________→self-acceptance and breakthrough(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式积累
(摘抄文中宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、并列句)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9. 本文主题
成长励志自我接纳类:_______________________________________
二、情节构造
Paragraph 1: From that day on, I stopped comparing myself to others and focused on doing my best.
衔接句1——What positive changes did the author have? What efforts did she make and how did she grow?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: When applying to colleges, I hesitated before adding Harvard.
衔接句2——What decision did the author finally make? What was the result? What truth did she confirm?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、段落续写框架
第一段:从那天起,我不再和别人攀比,专注全力以赴。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:申请大学时,填报哈佛之前我犹豫了许久。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
四、段落续写(150词左右)
From that day on, I stopped comparing myself to others and focused on doing my best.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When applying to colleges, I hesitated before adding Harvard.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
Ana(曾经自卑内耗、爱与人攀比,后接纳自我、踏实努力、勇敢追梦、成功圆梦哈佛的主人公);Cathy(温柔睿智、善于引导、帮助学生走出自我内耗的良师)
2.视角
第一人称
3.时空线
The author wants to tell students that perfection is not necessary and true self and hard work matter most--- She shares her own growth experience to encourage teenagers --- The author felt inferior by comparing her ordinary experience with others’ perfect resumes--- She was trapped in self-doubt and anxiety --- She fell into self-doubt and even wanted to give up her top-university dream--- Her negative state was noticed by her teacher --- Teacher Cathy enlightened her that colleges value a student’s whole self rather than perfect data
4. 细节问答
What is the author’s core opinion for high school students? :Students don’t need to be perfect. What matters is working hard, self-belief and showing one’s true self.
Why did the author feel inadequate in high school?:She compared her ordinary activities and imperfect scores with others’ perfect resumes and felt she fell behind.
What kind of after-school activities did the author take part in?:She joined the book club, tutored younger students in math and played on the girls’ soccer team.
What was the author’s academic performance like?:Her test scores were good, but not perfect.
What negative thought did the author have due to self-doubt?:She once wanted to give up her dream of being admitted to a top university.
How did Teacher Cathy help the author out of trouble?:She told the author that universities value students’ overall growth, efforts and unique stories instead of perfect data.
What important truth did the author realize at last?:Her ordinary background, continuous efforts and unique growth experience were her most precious strengths.
What does the story tell us?:True excellence lies in self-acceptance and persistent efforts rather than blind perfection. Being your true self is the most valuable asset.
5.情节线
作者现身说法,告诉高中生不必追求完美,努力与真我最为珍贵→作者结合自身经历,鼓励学生接纳自我、勇敢追梦→高中时期的作者频繁对比网上优秀学霸的完美履历→自身经历普通、成绩并非顶尖,陷入严重自我怀疑→甚至萌生放弃名校梦想的念头→老师Cathy及时开导,点明名校看重完整的个人与成长经历而非冰冷数据→一席话驱散作者迷茫,让其彻底醒悟→作者幡然醒悟,明白自身的努力与独特经历是独一无二的闪光点→(续写)作者不再内耗攀比,专注自我成长,认真对待学习与每一项活动,踏实沉淀→(续写)申请季克服犹豫、勇敢冲刺哈佛,凭借真实的自我与成长经历成功录取,印证追梦真谛
6.情感线
I:inferior and doubtful→anxious and lost→enlightened and relieved→diligent and confident→confident and proud(续写)
State:self-denial and lost→awakened and determined→self-acceptance and breakthrough(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:曾经因不够完美而自卑内耗、怀疑自我的作者,在老师的开导下走出攀比误区,学会接纳不完美的自己,专注自身努力与成长,勇敢追逐名校梦想,最终圆梦哈佛,领悟到真我与坚持的价值。
英文:Trapped in self-doubt and blind comparison for lacking perfect resumes and scores, the author was enlightened by her teacher. She learned to accept her true self, focused on self-improvement, bravely applied for Harvard and finally achieved her dream through persistent efforts.
8. 句式积累
状语从句:What matters is that you work hard, believe in yourself, and let your true self shine.
非谓语动词:I would spend hours watching videos of students online talking about their perfect experiences.
宾语从句:I doubted whether I could ever get into Harvard University.
定语从句:Those words hit me like a ray of light that cleared up all my confusion.
并列句:My test scores were good, but not perfect.
9. 本文主题
成长励志自我接纳类:拒绝盲目攀比、接纳不完美的自我,坚持努力、坚守本心、专注自我成长,每个人都能活出独特光芒、实现自我突破。
二、情节构造
Paragraph 1: From that day on, I stopped comparing myself to others and focused on doing my best.
衔接句1:Free from unnecessary comparison and self-doubt, I devoted myself to studying and participating in activities wholeheartedly, accumulating steady progress and unique growth experience.
Paragraph 2: When applying to colleges, I hesitated before adding Harvard.
衔接句2:I overcame my inner inferiority, bravely submitted my application with my true growth story, and finally received the admission offer, proving that sincerity and efforts beat blind perfection.
三、段落续写框架
第一段:从那天起,我不再和别人攀比,专注全力以赴。
→①彻底摆脱攀比内耗,放下自卑与焦虑,心态愈发从容坚定→②全身心投入学习与社团活动,认真沉淀、稳步提升自我→③在平凡的经历中积攒专属自己的成长与闪光点;
第二段:申请大学时,填报哈佛之前我犹豫了许久。
→①过往的自卑让我心生怯懦,迟迟不敢冲刺顶尖名校→②回忆老师的教诲与自己的坚持,最终勇敢递交申请→③成功圆梦哈佛,深刻领悟:努力与真我,方是最好的答卷。
四、段落续写范文(150词左右)
From that day on, I stopped comparing myself to others and focused on doing my best.
I let go of unnecessary anxiety and self-denial. Instead of pursuing so-called perfect resumes, I devoted myself wholeheartedly to my studies and spare-time activities. I read earnestly in the book club, patiently tutored younger students and trained hard on the soccer field. Every day I spared no effort to improve myself and recorded my growth and struggles carefully. Gradually, I became more confident, mature and steady, embracing my unique life journey bravely.
When applying to colleges, I hesitated before adding Harvard.
The memory of my past self-doubt still lingered, making me question my competence. However, Cathy’s enlightening words echoed in my mind. I finally plucked up my courage and submitted my application, showing my true efforts and growth story sincerely. Eventually, I received the admission offer from Harvard. This precious experience taught me a lifelong lesson: Perfection is not the standard of excellence. Believing in yourself and keeping working hard can make ordinary people shine brightly.
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