2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---马拉松蜕变的故事 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题，围绕文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）和情节构造核心考点，按“解构-重构”逻辑构建知识网络，通过细节问答和任务驱动设计，引导学生自主分析文本要素，形成从理解到表达的完整认知框架。 亮点在于诊断性文本分析和进阶式续写训练，开篇设置细节问答自测文本理解，续写框架引导逻辑构建，培养思维品质和学习能力。每个模块配有情感线梳理和主题提炼任务，帮助学生建立个性化写作策略，教师可通过学情精准指导，提升备考实效。

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 If someone had told me in June that I would take part in a marathon event, I would have laughed. Yet there I was on an October morning with a medal around my neck. Okay, it was only the 4.2K race, and I walked more than I ran. But I still did it. Did I mention that I weigh around 300 pounds? I also have asthma, but medication helps. What’s more, I live with four anxiety disorders. Social anxiety makes me deadly afraid of people’s judgment. But in August, I decided that registering for the 4.2K event of our local marathon would be a great motivator to get in shape. So I signed up and started walking every day. I told only a few people — my family and some trusted friends. Training went well until mid-September, when work got so exhausting that I could barely do anything. Still, I kept going. The real struggle came when I went to pick up my race number. I kept wondering what others would think. I didn’t have the usual runner’s profile. When I saw the T-shirt table, I turned away quickly. There were no shirts that would fit me. That made me doubt myself again. What was I doing here? The 4.2K was the “popular event,” with families and young children. But I was willing to bet that not many obese people had registered. The night before the race, I had nightmares. When I woke up, I considered not going. Then I realized I had forgotten to wash my best running pants. Walmart opened at 8 a. m., and the race wasn’t until 10 a. m. I drove there, bought a pair, and headed to the starting line. Once there, I quickly found that people didn’t really care about me; they were focused on their own experience. That relaxed me a little, but not completely. Soon I found myself at the back of the pack. Those real athletes must be wondering what I was doing there. But it was too late to turn back. I started walking, my earphones playing loud music to drown out possible hurtful comments. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 However, it turned out that the voices I was afraid of never came. ___________________________________________________________________________ When I finally crossed the finish line, I heard someone calling my name. ___________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I suffered from obesity, asthma and anxiety disorders--- _________________ --- I kept daily walking training despite tired work--- _________________ --- I doubted myself for my figure and lack of suitable clothes--- _________________ --- I bought new pants and went to the starting line nervously 4. 细节问答 What physical and mental troubles did the author have? ：___________________________________ Why did the author sign up for the 4.2K marathon?：_________________________________ What made the author doubt himself before the race?：________________________________________________ How did the author feel the night before and on the race morning?：__________________________________________ What did the author do to avoid possible hurtful comments?：_____________________________________________ What was the author’s state at the starting line?：_________________________________________________ What will the author experience during the race?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者身患肥胖、哮喘，伴有严重社交焦虑，害怕他人评价→_________________ →作者坚持日常步行训练，即便工作疲惫也不放弃→_________________ →赛前因没有合身参赛服、自卑身材产生自我怀疑，甚至想弃赛→_________________ →作者购置新裤子前往赛场，紧张地站在队伍最后，开启赛程→（续写）赛场无人非议，作者坚持完成比赛→（续写）冲线收获鼓励，突破自我、实现蜕变 6．情感线 I：inferior and anxious→___________→doubtful and scared→___________→nervous and hesitant→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：__________________________________________________________________ 英文：__________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式积累 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；虚拟语气 ___________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1: However, it turned out that the voices I was afraid of never came. 衔接句1——What did the author see and feel during the race? What did he do? ___________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: When I finally crossed the finish line, I heard someone calling my name. 衔接句2——Who called the author? What encouragement did he get? What change did he have? ___________________________________________________________________________ 三、段落续写框架 第一段：然而，我害怕的非议之声并未出现。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：当我终于冲过终点线时，我听到有人喊我的名字。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四、段落续写（写作区） However, it turned out that the voices I was afraid of never came. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I finally crossed the finish line, I heard someone calling my name. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（身患肥胖、哮喘、社交焦虑，自卑怯懦但勇敢坚韧、敢于突破自我的主人公）；other runners（友善、专注自我的参赛选手） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 I suffered from obesity, asthma and anxiety disorders---I signed up for a 4.2K marathon to get fit --- I kept daily walking training despite tired work--- I failed to get a suitable race T-shirt and doubted myself --- I doubted myself for my figure and lack of suitable clothes--- I struggled with fear and wanted to give up but finally insisted --- I bought new pants and went to the starting line nervously 4. 细节问答 What physical and mental troubles did the author have? ：The author was obese, suffered from asthma and four anxiety disorders, especially social anxiety. Why did the author sign up for the 4.2K marathon?：He wanted to motivate himself to get in shape and make a change. What made the author doubt himself before the race?：He was overweight with no suitable race T-shirts and feared being judged by other runners. How did the author feel the night before and on the race morning?：He suffered nightmares, felt scared and inferior, and even wanted to skip the race. What did the author do to avoid possible hurtful comments?：He wore earphones playing loud music to block out possible bad remarks. What was the author’s state at the starting line?：He stood at the back of the crowd, nervous and self-conscious, afraid of others’ judgment. What will the author experience during the race?：He would receive no prejudice from others, keep moving forward bravely and stick to the finish line. What does the story tell us?：True growth lies in breaking self-doubt, bravely challenging ourselves and not being defined by others or our imperfections. 5．情节线 作者身患肥胖、哮喘，伴有严重社交焦虑，害怕他人评价→为改变自己、强身健体，报名参加4.2公里马拉松赛事→作者坚持日常步行训练，即便工作疲惫也不放弃→领取赛事物资时无合身衣服，因身材自卑，陷入自我怀疑→赛前因没有合身参赛服、自卑身材产生自我怀疑，甚至想弃赛→彻夜焦虑、做噩梦，一度想放弃比赛，最终坚持前往赛场→作者购置新裤子前往赛场，紧张地站在队伍最后，开启赛程→（续写）赛场无人非议，作者坚持完成比赛→（续写）冲线收获鼓励，突破自我、实现蜕变 6．情感线 I：inferior and anxious→determined→doubtful and scared→hesitant and panicked→nervous and hesitant→relieved and confident（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：一位饱受肥胖、哮喘和社交焦虑困扰的普通人，为改变自我报名马拉松赛事，赛前极度自卑、畏惧他人眼光，最终勇敢参赛，在无人偏见的赛场中突破自我、完成蜕变。 英文：A person troubled by obesity, asthma and social anxiety signed up for a marathon to change himself. Though plagued by self-doubt and fear of others' judgment before the race, he finally finished the race bravely and achieved self-breakthrough. 8. 句式积累 虚拟语气：If someone had told me in June that I would take part in a marathon event, I would have laughed. 状语从句：Training went well until mid-September, when work got so exhausting that I could barely do anything. 宾语从句：I kept wondering what others would think. 非谓语：I started walking, my earphones playing loud music to drown out possible hurtful comments. 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：不必被自身缺陷和他人眼光定义，勇敢突破自我、直面恐惧，每一次坚持都是自我成长与蜕变。 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1: However, it turned out that the voices I was afraid of never came. 衔接句1——What did the author see and feel during the race? What did he do? Other runners focused on their own races instead of judging me. I relaxed gradually, kept walking steadily and ignored my inner anxiety. Paragraph 2: When I finally crossed the finish line, I heard someone calling my name. 衔接句2——Who called the author? What encouragement did he get? What change did he have? My family and friends were cheering for me. Their encouragement gave me great strength, and I realized I had defeated my biggest enemy—myself. 三、段落续写框架 第一段：然而，我害怕的非议之声并未出现。 →①身边选手专注比赛，无人关注、评判我的身材→②我逐渐放松心态，关掉焦虑，稳步向前行进→③途中收获陌生人的善意鼓励，更加坚定前行； 第二段：当我终于冲过终点线时，我听到有人喊我的名字。 →④家人和朋友在终点为我欢呼喝彩→⑤我接过奖牌，内心满是震撼与感动，彻底摆脱自卑→⑥我领悟到真正的胜利是突破自我，完成成长蜕变。 四、段落续写（范文） However, it turned out that the voices I was afraid of never came. All the runners were buried in their own races, cheering and encouraging each other along the way. No one stared at me or judged my figure. Gradually, I took off my earphones and calmed down. I kept walking steadily, ignoring my inner anxiety and tiredness. Some passers-by even smiled and cheered for me, which warmed my heart and gave me great strength. I persisted step by step, refusing to give up halfway. When I finally crossed the finish line, I heard someone calling my name. It was my family and trusted friends, who had come to cheer for me. They rushed over to hug me and praised me for my bravery and perseverance. Holding the medal in my hand, I was filled with pride and joy. I realized that I had defeated my biggest enemy—my self-doubt and fear. This race taught me that true success is not about being perfect, but about daring to challenge and improve myself. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $