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Unit9
From Here To There
Reading for writing
Language goal
掌握与旅行相关的词汇,综合运用所学目标语言,
提升语言综合运用能力;
理解并实践旅行中保护自身的安全行为;
学会用时间顺序描述自己过去的一段旅行经历,
并与同学分享。
Where did you go on a trip?
...
Lead-in
a village
a city
a mountain
a beach
Who did you go with?
...
your family
your friends
members of a club
How did you go there?
...
by bus
by car
by plane
by bike
by train
What did you do there?
...
set up a tent
fly a kite
climb mountains
What was the weather like?
...
rainy
sunny
windy
cloudy
snowy
How to write a short passage about your trip experience?
A Trip to the North Mountain
Last summer, I went to the North Mountain near my hometown with my family.
In the evening, we arrived at the top of the mountain and set up the tent. It was very quiet, and my parents went to sleep soon. But my brother and I were too excited to sleep. We then went out to watch the stars. Suddenly, it started to rain. We couldn't see very well and my brother fell down on the ground. My parents heard him cry and ran out. My father hugged him and my mother kissed him.The next day, we stayed with our parents along the way. We went fishing and took many photos together.
It was a wonderful trip. Everything was beautiful, but we must always put safety first.
Event sequence
ti
Title
Beginning
Body
End
Title
Beginning
Body
End
Analyze the text structure and match the main idea with each paragraph.
A Trip to the North Mountain
Last summer, I went to the North Mountain near my hometown with my family.
In the evening, we arrived at the top of the mountain and set up the tent. It was very quiet, and my parents went to sleep soon. But my brother and I were too excited to sleep. We then went out to watch the stars. Suddenly, it started to rain. We couldn't see very well and my brother fell down on the ground. My parents heard him cry and ran out. My father hugged him and my mother kissed him.The next day, we stayed with our parents along the way. We went fishing and took many photos together.
It was a wonderful trip. Everything was beautiful, but we must always put safety first.
Specific events that happened during the trip
Feelings about this trip
A summer trip to the North Mountain.
1
2
3
Read for more information.
Para.1 Beginning
Last summer, I went to the North Mountain near my hometown with my family.
Who did the writer go for the trip with?
With his/her family.
Para.1 Beginning
Activity 1
Read the text and complete the sequence chain.
In the evening, we arrived at the top of the mountain and set up the tent. It was very quiet, and my parents went to sleep soon. But my brother and I were too excited to sleep. We then went out to watch the stars. Suddenly, it started to rain. We couldn't see very well and my brother fell down on the ground. My parents heard him cry and ran out. My father hugged him and my mother kissed him.The next day, we stayed with our parents along the way. We went fishing and took many photos together.
In the evening
Then
Later
The next day
We arrived
at the top of the mountain and set up the tent.
We went out to watch the stars.
It starts to rain. We couldn't see very well and my brother fell down on the ground.
We stayed with our parents along the way. We went fishing and took many photos together.
Para.2 Body
Mark T (True) or F (False).
In the evening, we arrived at the top of the mountain and set up the tent. It was very quiet, and my parents went to sleep soon. But my brother and I were too excited to sleep. We then went out to watch the stars. Suddenly, it started to rain. We couldn't see very well and my brother fell down on the ground.My parents heard him cry and ran out. My father hugged him and my mother kissed him. The next day, we stayed with our parents along the way. We went fishing and took many photos together.
1. The family arrived at the top of the mountain in the morning. ( )
2. The writer and their brother went out to watch the stars
because they were too excited to sleep. ( )
3. It started to rain while they were watching the stars. ( )
4. The author’s brother fell down, and their parents comforted him. ( )
5. The next day, the family went swimming and took photos together. ( )
F
in the evening
T
T
T
F
went fishing
Para.2 Body
Read for more information.
Para.3 End
It was a wonderful trip. Everything was beautiful, but
we must always put safety first.
What is the most important during the trip according to the writer?
The most important thing during the trip is safety.
Para.3 End
Read the text and analyze tense.
A Trip to the North Mountain
Last summer, I went to the North Mountain near my hometown with my family.
In the evening, we arrived at the top of the mountain and set up the tent. It was very quiet,and my parents went to sleep soon. But my brother and I were too excited to sleep. We then went out to watch the stars. Suddenly, it started to rain. We couldn't see very well and my brother fell down on the ground. My parents heard him cry and ran out. My father hugged him and my mother kissed him. The next day,we stayed with our parents along the way. We went fishing and took many photos together.
It was a wonderful trip. Everything was beautiful, but we must always put safety first.
不定式 过去式
go —— went
arrive —— arrived
set —— set
is —— was
are —— were
start —— started
can —— could
fall —— fell
hear —— heard
run —— ran
hug —— hugged
kiss —— kissed
stay —— stayed
take —— took
A Trip to the North Mountain
Last summer, I went to the North Mountain near my hometown with my family.
In the evening, we arrived at the top of the mountain and set up the tent. It was very quiet, and my parents went to sleep soon. But my brother and I were too excited to sleep. We then went out to watch the stars.Suddenly, it started to rain. We couldn't see very well and my brother fell down on the ground. My parents heard him cry and ran out. My father hugged him and my mother kissed him. The next day, we stayed with our parents along the way. We went fishing and took many photos together.
It was a wonderful trip. Everything was beautiful,but we must always put safety first.
Language points
1. 去年夏天 last summer
2. 到达 arrive at + 小地点
get to+地点
3. ...的顶端 the top of...
4. 搭建 set up
5. 入睡 go to sleep
6. 太...而不能... too+形容词或副词原 级+to +V原
7. 出去 go out
8. 摔倒 fall down
9. 跑出去 run out
10. 第二天 the next day
11. 在路上 along the way
12. 钓鱼 go fishing
13. 照相 take photos
Pre-writing
Step 1 (审题)
审
(审题
和要点)
主题
一次经历
时态
一般过去时
人称
第一人称
要点
(布局)
第一段:交代事情的时间when、地点where和人物who
A Trip to the zoo
第二段:主体。按照事情的发展顺序行文。
交代清楚事情的起因、经过和结果。
加上过渡词。
第三段:表达感受。
Activity 2
Draw a chain about the sequence of one of your trips.
In the morning
First
Then
Later
Last
We watched tigers and lions.
My dad bought us some bread and water.
We got to the zoo early .
We watched the monkeys playing in the trees.
We went to the panda house. And some pandas
were sleeping
Items (评价项目) Stars
Contents(内容) Family tree
Family introduction
Nice handwriting(书写工整)
Grammar and spelling (语法拼写正确)
Clear structure(结构清晰)
Beautiful sentences(句子优美)
OK ★ Good ★★ Great ★★★
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Edit your draft according to the checklist.
Checklist
Travel is the best teacher.
旅行是最好的老师。
Homework
基础作业
完善关于旅行游记作文,并和同桌相互修改。
提升作业
课后用英语与同学分享自己最难忘的旅行经历。
Homework
Thank you
Activity 1
Retell the text and complete the blanks.
This summer, I _______ the North Mountain near my hometown______________ .
In the evening, we __________________ the mountain and ________________. It was very quiet, and my parents _____________ soon. But my brother and I were too excited to sleep. We then went out to ________________. Suddenly, it started ________. We couldn't _____________ and my brother __________ on the ground. My father _______ him cry and ________. My father ________ him and my mother _________ him. The next day, we ____________ our parents along the way. We ____________ and _________________ together.
It was a _________ trip. Everything was beautiful, but we must always ____________ .
went to
with my family
arrived at the top of
set up the tent
went to sleep
watch the stars
to rain
see very well
fell down
heard
ran out
hugged
kissed
stayed with
went fishing
took many photos
wonderful
put safety first
Writing
Activity 2 And then draft your essay.
TIPS
When you describe an event, e.g. your trip, you can write in time sequence.
A Trip to ______________
_______________________, I went to ___________________________
_____________. It was _______________________________________!
On the morning of ___________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________.I__________________________________________________________.
Step 2 (列提纲)
列
(列提纲)
Title
A Trip to the zoo
Beginning
A wonderful trip to the zoo.
Body
End
Feelings : happy, excited
要点
In the morning: got to the zoo
Event sequence
First: watched the monkeys playing
Then: went to the panda house
Later: watched tigers and lions
At last: enjoyed food before leaving
While-writing
Step 3 (拟稿)
Title
A Trip to ______________
___________, I went to _____________________.
It was___________________!
On the morning of___________________________
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
I______________________________________
the zoo
Beginning
Last Sunday
the zoo with my parents
a wonderful trip
Body
Event sequence
that day, we got to the zoo early.
First, we watched the monkeys playing in the trees.
They are cute. Then, we went to the panda house. There were lots of people there. And some pandas were sleeping. Later, we watched tigers and lions.
Last, my dad bought us some bread and water.
We enjoyed them before leaving.
End
felt happy and excited.
Title
Beginning
Body
End
再次抒情
引出话题
具体介绍
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