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该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写专题，系统梳理文本分析（角色、视角、时空线）、情节构造、语言表达（从句、非谓语等）核心考点，通过问题链（细节问答）和任务单（续写框架）引导学生自主构建“文本理解-情节发展-语言输出”知识网络，体现考点梳理的系统性与层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维品质培养，开篇设置文本分析细节问答（如角色情感变化、情节转折点）帮助学生自测理解，通过续写框架（衔接句设计、段落步骤分解）引导逻辑分析与创造，培养学生语言能力与学习能力。每个模块配反思总结表，助力个性化知识内化，教师可依学情精准指导，提升备考实效。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “If you can take good care of my kitten for a whole week, I’ll give you that limited‑edition anime figure you’ve been talking about,” my next‑door aunt said with a warm smile.It was exactly the motivation I had been longing for. I was crazy about collecting anime figures, and that rare figure was my biggest wish for months. I prepared carefully in advance. I learned basic kitten‑raising knowledge online day by day, and bought delicate cat snacks and soft toys in preparation. Every day after school, I rushed home the moment classes ended. I fed the kitten on time, played gentle games with it and cleaned its little nest patiently. I poured all my spare time and patience into looking after it, and I was convinced I would do a perfect job. Everything went smoothly until the sixth day. I went out to take out trash carelessly, leaving the door unlocked. When I came back minutes later, the cute kitten had run out and disappeared. I searched every corner of the community anxiously for hours, calling its name again and again, yet there was no sign of it. Panic swept over me. I was afraid of losing the precious figure I desired so much. When the aunt called to ask about the kitten later that day, I lied without hesitation, saying the kitten was fine and stayed obediently with me. When the week ended, the aunt came to my home. I told her the fake story about the well‑behaved kitten with a nervous smile. She praised me for my sense of responsibility and handed the shiny figure box to me happily. My hands trembled as I held the box. I was excited to get the figure, but a strong sense of guilt haunted me deeply for my lie. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Later that night, I sat by my desk alone, trapped in endless inner struggle. ________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, I plucked up my courage to go to the aunt’s house and tell her the whole truth. ________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The aunt promised a limited-edition anime figure if the author looked after her kitten for a week--- _________________ --- The author made full preparations and took good care of the kitten--- _________________ --- The author’s carelessness caused the kitten to escape and disappear--- _________________ --- The author lied to the aunt out of fear of losing the figure--- _________________ --- The author got the figure but suffered from strong guilt 4. 细节问答 What reward did the aunt promise the author? ：___________________________________ Why did the author want the figure so much?：_________________________________ How did the author prepare for and look after the kitten?：________________________________________________ What mistake did the author make on the sixth day?：__________________________________________ Why did the author choose to lie to the aunt?：_____________________________________________ How did the author feel after getting the figure?：_________________________________________________ What kind of quality does the author show in the end?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 邻居阿姨许诺作者，照顾小猫一周就赠送限量动漫手办→_________________ →作者满心期待，精心筹备、用心照料小猫，一切顺利→第六天作者粗心忘锁门，导致小猫走失、遍寻无果→_________________ →因害怕失去心仪手办，作者选择向阿姨撒谎隐瞒真相→一周期满，作者骗取奖励，得到手办却满心愧疚、备受煎熬→_________________ →（续写）作者彻夜内心挣扎，无法心安，决定坦诚认错→（续写）作者主动坦白道歉，得到谅解，收获诚信与成长 6．情感线 The author：excited and motivated→___________→anxious and panicked→___________→guilty and uneasy→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；独立主格 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Later that night, I sat by my desk alone, trapped in endless inner struggle. 衔接句1——What did the author think and decide during the inner struggle? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The next morning, I plucked up my courage to go to the aunt’s house and tell her the whole truth. 衔接句2——How did the aunt react and what lesson did the author learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：深夜，我独自坐在书桌前，陷入无尽的内心挣扎。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：第二天早上，我鼓起勇气来到阿姨家，坦白了全部真相。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________。 四.段落续写 Later that night, I sat by my desk alone, trapped in endless inner struggle. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, I plucked up my courage to go to the aunt’s house and tell her the whole truth. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 作者：热爱收藏手办、做事认真细心、犯错后愧疚不安、敢于直面错误、知错能改的学生；邻居阿姨：温柔善良、待人真诚、宽容大度、善于包容他人的长辈 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The aunt promised a limited-edition anime figure if the author looked after her kitten for a week--- The author was greatly motivated and determined to finish the task perfectly --- The author made full preparations and took good care of the kitten--- The author devoted all spare time to caring for the kitten smoothly --- The author’s carelessness caused the kitten to escape and disappear--- The author searched everywhere but failed to find the kitten --- The author lied to the aunt out of fear of losing the figure--- The author covered up the mistake with a fake story --- The author got the figure but suffered from strong guilt 4. 细节问答 What reward did the aunt promise the author? ：The aunt promised to give the author a limited-edition anime figure that he had longed for months. Why did the author want the figure so much?：The author was crazy about collecting anime figures and the figure was extremely rare. How did the author prepare for and look after the kitten?：He learned raising knowledge online, bought cat supplies, fed, accompanied and cleaned for the kitten patiently every day. What mistake did the author make on the sixth day?：He carelessly left the door unlocked when taking out trash, causing the kitten to run away and disappear. Why did the author choose to lie to the aunt?：He feared that he would lose the precious limited-edition figure if the truth was known. How did the author feel after getting the figure?：He felt excited to own the figure but was haunted by deep guilt for his lie. What kind of quality does the author show in the end?：He showed the precious quality of being honest, brave to admit mistakes and take responsibility. What does the story tell us?：Honesty is the most precious virtue. Facing mistakes bravely and correcting them is true growth. 5．情节线 邻居阿姨许诺作者，照顾小猫一周就赠送限量动漫手办→作者备受鼓舞，下定决心认真完成照料任务 →作者满心期待，精心筹备、用心照料小猫，一切顺利→第六天作者粗心忘锁门，导致小猫走失、遍寻无果→极度恐慌的作者害怕失去心仪奖励，动了撒谎的念头 →因害怕失去心仪手办，作者选择向阿姨撒谎隐瞒真相→一周期满，作者骗取奖励，得到手办却满心愧疚、备受煎熬→虚假的喜悦无法掩盖内心的不安，作者陷入深深的自我挣扎 →（续写）作者彻夜内心挣扎，无法心安，决定坦诚认错→（续写）作者主动坦白道歉，得到谅解，收获诚信与成长 6．情感线 The author：excited and motivated→calm and devoted→anxious and panicked→nervous and guilty→guilty and uneasy→relieved and mature（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者为获得限量手办用心照料邻居小猫，却因疏忽导致小猫走失，为保住奖励撒谎隐瞒，获奖后内心愧疚不安，最终鼓起勇气坦诚认错，明白了诚信远比物质奖励更加珍贵。 英文：The author took good care of his neighbor’s kitten for a precious anime figure but lost it due to carelessness. He lied to cover his mistake out of fear. Finally, he plucked up courage to confess his fault and learned that honesty outweighs material rewards. 8. 句式 条件状语从句：If you can take good care of my kitten for a whole week, I’ll give you that limited-edition anime figure. 非谓语动词：I went out to take out trash carelessly, leaving the door unlocked. 定语从句：I was afraid of losing the precious figure I desired so much. 定语从句：I held the shiny figure box that I had longed for months. 分词作状语：Trapped in endless guilt, I couldn’t fall asleep that night. 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：物质奖励终究虚幻，诚信做人、直面过错、勇于担责，才是最珍贵的成长财富。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Later that night, I sat by my desk alone, trapped in endless inner struggle. 衔接句1——What did the author think and decide during the inner struggle? The shiny figure brought him no joy but constant guilt. He realized lies could only bring temporary comfort and decided to confess the truth the next day. Paragraph 2: The next morning, I plucked up my courage to go to the aunt’s house and tell her the whole truth. 衔接句2——How did the aunt react and what lesson did the author learn? The aunt forgave his mistake for his honesty and courage. The author learned that honesty is the best policy and grew into a more responsible person. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：深夜，我独自坐在书桌前，陷入无尽的内心挣扎。 →①看着心心念念的手办，内心毫无喜悦只剩煎熬→②反思自己的错误，明白谎言只会加重负罪感→③下定决心，次日主动坦白认错、承担责任； 第二段：第二天早上，我鼓起勇气来到阿姨家，坦白了全部真相。 →①我诚恳道歉，全盘托出小猫走失和撒谎的经过→②阿姨宽容谅解，肯定我的坦诚与勇气→③我领悟诚信真谛，完成自我成长。 四.段落续写（满分范文） Later that night, I sat by my desk alone, trapped in endless inner struggle. Staring at the attractive anime figure, I felt no happiness at all. Instead, the sense of guilt kept torturing me. I admitted that my carelessness led to the kitten’s disappearance, and my lie betrayed the aunt’s trust. It was unfair to gain the reward with dishonesty. After long thinking, I realized that a precious figure was never worth losing honesty. I made up my mind to apologize sincerely and tell her the whole truth the next day. The next morning, I plucked up my courage to go to the aunt’s house and tell her the whole truth. Nervous but determined, I explained my carelessness, the kitten’s disappearance and my shameful lie, begging for her forgiveness. To my surprise, the aunt smiled gently and praised me for my courage to admit mistakes. She forgave me totally. This experience taught me a valuable lesson. True growth lies in taking responsibility for faults. Honesty, far more precious than any limited-edition gift, will guide me to be a better person. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $