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In late February, the Van Heerden family’s dog Coco disappeared from their home, leaving the family, especially the young brothers sad. The two brothers had grown inseparable from Coco. They spent nights searching their neighborhood, posting “Lost Dog” posters on every street. They even left a bowl of food and a blanket (毯子) by the door each night, refusing to let hope fade entirely. At the same time, they reported their dog’s missing to the police station.
As time passed week by week, the family gradually lost their original optimism (乐观), yet their daily practice of holding onto hope remained unshaken. “We knew Coco might be gone,” Helen Van Heerden recalled, “but those small acts kept us connected to the possibility of her return. “The brothers’ dedication (奉献) — staying up late to check parks and small streets, asking neighbors for clues — proved that love can last a long time.
The good news came on a Saturday morning in mid-March. As the family packed for a weekend trip, Helen’s phone rang. Alicia Thomas, an officer from the police station, spoke in a rush, “We’ve found Coco! A woman named Joy Matodzi rescued her — she’s safe.”
Alicia Thomas told them the whole story. Weeks earlier, Joy Matodzi, an animal lover who ran a small vegetable stand, was walking home when she saw a man mistreating a trembling dog on a dirt road. When she saw its silver collar (颈圈) and its tearful eyes, she immediately knew that she must help that dog. She was sure that no pet should be treated like trash. When the man demanded $15 to free the dog, Joy paid without hesitation, and then she rushed to the police station to report it.
After Alicia Thomas detailed the story, she asked the Van Heerden family to come to the police station to bring the dog home.
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The family gave up their trip and drove to the police station in high spirits.
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Inspired by what Joy did, the two brothers decided to help animals in need.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
The family’s dog Coco went missing--- ________________________________ --- The family kept searching and never gave up hope---_____________________________---Joy saved Coco kindly and reported to the police---The police informed them that Coco was found ---
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4. 细节问答
How did the family feel after Coco disappeared? :___________________________________
What did the family do to find Coco?:_________________________________
How did the family’s feelings change over time?:________________________________________________
Who saved Coco and what kind of person is she?:__________________________________________
What did Joy do to rescue Coco?:_____________________________________________
What news did the police bring to the family?:_________________________________________________
What quality does Joy have?:________________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
Van Heerden家的狗狗Coco意外走失,全家万分难过→_________________ →兄弟二人坚持夜夜寻找、张贴海报、默默守候,始终心怀希望→时光流逝,家人乐观渐减但从未放弃→_________________ →警察来电告知狗狗被善良的Joy救下,平安无事→得知Joy善意救助狗狗的完整经过→_________________ →(续写)全家欣喜奔赴警局,与狗狗重逢、当面致谢Joy→(续写)兄弟二人深受感召,主动投身救助弱势动物的公益事业
6.情感线
Family:sad and anxious→___________→hopeful and thrilled→___________→grateful and warm(续写)
Joy:kind and sympathetic→___________→warm and influential(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式
宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句
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9. 本文主题
温情励志类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: The family gave up their trip and drove to the police station in high spirits.
衔接句1——What happened when the family met Coco and Joy?
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Paragraph 2: Inspired by what Joy did, the two brothers decided to help animals in need.
衔接句2——What did the brothers do to help animals? What was the ending?
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三.段落续写框架
第一段:一家人放弃旅行,兴高采烈地驱车前往警局。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:受到Joy善举的启发,兄弟俩决定帮助有需要的动物。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________。
四.段落续写
The family gave up their trip and drove to the police station in high spirits.
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Inspired by what Joy did, the two brothers decided to help animals in need.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
Van Heerden一家(深情善良、不离不弃、珍视陪伴的一家人);The two brothers(执着专一、深爱宠物、懂得感恩的少年);Joy Matodzi(热爱动物、心地善良、果断热忱、无私助人的好心人);Police officer(尽职尽责、传递温暖的警务人员)
2.视角
第三人称
3.时空线
The family’s dog Coco went missing--- The family searched everywhere and held on to hope firmly --- The family kept searching and never gave up hope--- They gradually lost optimism but never stopped trying ---Joy saved Coco kindly and reported to the police--- The police informed them that Coco was found ---
The police told them Joy’s rescue story
4. 细节问答
How did the family feel after Coco disappeared? :They felt extremely sad, especially the two young brothers.
What did the family do to find Coco?:They searched neighborhoods at night, posted lost-dog posters, left food and a blanket at the door and reported the case to the police.
How did the family’s feelings change over time?:They gradually lost optimism as time went by, but they still held onto hope.
Who saved Coco and what kind of person is she?:Joy Matodzi, an animal-loving and kind-hearted woman running a vegetable stand saved Coco.
What did Joy do to rescue Coco?:She paid $15 to free the mistreated dog and reported the situation to the police at once.
What news did the police bring to the family?:The police told them their missing dog Coco was found safe and they could pick it up.
What quality does Joy have?:She is kind, warm-hearted, responsible and full of love for small lives.
What does the story tell us?:Kindness can warm lives, and good deeds can be passed on to spread love and warmth.
5.情节线
Van Heerden家的狗狗Coco意外走失,全家万分难过→兄弟二人全力以赴四处寻找,日复一日坚守希望 →兄弟二人坚持夜夜寻找、张贴海报、默默守候,始终心怀希望→时光流逝,家人乐观渐减但从未放弃→三月中旬,家人意外接到警局寻回狗狗的喜讯 →警察来电告知狗狗被善良的Joy救下,平安无事→得知Joy善意救助狗狗的完整经过→家人满心欢喜,准备前往警局接回爱犬 →(续写)全家欣喜奔赴警局,与狗狗重逢、当面致谢Joy→(续写)兄弟二人深受感召,主动投身救助弱势动物的公益事业
6.情感线
Family:sad and anxious→persistent and hopeful→hopeful and thrilled→grateful and touched→grateful and warm(续写)
Joy:kind and sympathetic→determined and generous→warm and influential(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:Van Heerden一家的爱犬走失后,家人从未放弃寻找、坚守希望,最终狗狗被善良的Joy花钱救下并交由警局,一家人成功寻回爱犬,兄弟二人深受感召,主动传递善意、帮助流浪动物。
英文:After the Van Heerden family’s dog got lost, they kept searching firmly and never abandoned hope. Finally, their dog was rescued by a kind woman Joy. Deeply moved by her kindness, the two brothers decided to pass on the warmth and help stray animals in need.
8. 句式
状语从句:As time passed week by week, the family gradually lost their original optimism.
非谓语动词:the Van Heerden family’s dog Coco disappeared from their home, leaving the family sad.
宾语从句:she immediately knew that she must help that dog.
定语从句:Joy Matodzi, an animal lover who ran a small vegetable stand, helped the mistreated dog.
并列句:She paid without hesitation, and then she rushed to the police station to report it.
9. 本文主题
温情传递类:善意不分大小,微小的善举能够拯救生命、温暖他人,爱与温暖可以不断传承、生生不息。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: The family gave up their trip and drove to the police station in high spirits.
衔接句1——What happened when the family met Coco and Joy?
They reunited with Coco happily, expressed sincere gratitude to Joy, and were deeply touched by her selfless kindness.
Paragraph 2: Inspired by what Joy did, the two brothers decided to help animals in need.
衔接句2——What did the brothers do to help animals? What was the ending?
They spared time to care for stray animals, collected donations and spread animal-protection awareness to pass on kindness.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:一家人放弃旅行,兴高采烈地驱车前往警局。
→①一家人火速赶往警局,终于见到安然无恙的Coco→②爱犬飞奔相拥,家人欣喜落泪,久悬的心终于放下→③全家真诚感谢Joy的慷慨相助与温柔善意;
第二段:受到Joy善举的启发,兄弟俩决定帮助有需要的动物。
→①兄弟二人被深深打动,决心效仿Joy传递善意→②他们主动关爱流浪动物、筹集物资、宣传保护理念→③小小善举不断传递,温暖更多弱小生命。
四.段落续写(满分范文)
The family gave up their trip and drove to the police station in high spirits. Upon arriving, they caught sight of Coco immediately. The moment Coco spotted its owners, it bounded towards them excitedly, wagging its tail and barking happily. The two brothers hugged their beloved dog tightly, tears of joy rolling down their cheeks. They also met Joy and thanked her sincerely for her kindness and generosity. They were extremely grateful that Joy had saved and protected Coco at her own cost.
Inspired by what Joy did, the two brothers decided to help animals in need. They began to devote their spare time to caring for stray animals. They prepared food and water for homeless animals nearby and made posters to call on people to protect small lives. They also raised money to help abandoned or mistreated animals. By spreading kindness and warmth, they hoped more animals could get love and care. It was Joy’s good deed that taught them the true meaning of kindness and passing on love.
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