2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---与猫咪相伴的治愈时光 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，通过文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）系统梳理情节线与情感线，构建“理解-分析-创造”的知识网络，以问题导向设计细节问答任务，引导学生自主推导故事逻辑，形成完整的叙事认知框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层任务设计，如通过“细节问答”自测文本理解能力，“情节构造”任务培养思维品质，续写框架助力语言能力提升。每个模块含反思总结表，学生可个性化梳理薄弱环节，教师能依据学情精准指导，有效培养自主复习能力，实现因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At twenty-four, I moved to America, a massive 11,000 kilometers away from my homeland. The initial excitement of a new start soon faded, replaced by the harsh reality of fitting into an unfamiliar environment. Since I worked from home, my world was reduced to the four walls of my small apartment and a glowing laptop screen. I spent my days in video meetings where people spoke a language that was still a bit too fast for me to fully grasp. When the screens went dark, the silence of the rooms seemed to echo my own growing sense of displacement. I was physically in a new country, but mentally, I was still searching for a place to land. Desperate to break this suffocating (令人窒息的) isolation, I signed up as a volunteer at a local animal shelter. My supervisor, a kind woman named Sarah, introduced me to the residents. In the farthest corner of the cat section, she stopped before a small cage. “This is Luna,” she whispered. “She was found abandoned in a rainy alley. She’s terrified of everything.” Luna was a small, grey-and-white cat with large, lonely green eyes. Whenever I approached, she would cower (畏缩) in the corner, her tiny body shaking at the slightest sound. Sarah told me that my only task was to help Luna feel safe again. For the first two weeks, I sat outside her cage for hours every day. I brought my laptop and worked there, or I would speak to her softly about the home I missed, describing the busy streets and the scent of my mother’s cooking. I wanted to comfort her, but the invisible wall between us remained. One stormy afternoon, a sudden crash of thunder shook the shelter’s roof. The lights flickered, and the animals began to cry out in fear. I looked at Luna, who trembled more than ever, her breath coming in quick, tiny gasps (喘气) as she tried to hide behind a small wooden box in her cage. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I opened the cage door and sat quietly beside her. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Luna’s progress soon began to change me as well. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I moved to America and felt lonely and isolated--- _________________ --- I became a volunteer at a local animal shelter--- _________________ --- I met a scared abandoned cat Luna and tried to comfort her--- _________________ --- A storm came and scared Luna badly 4. 细节问答 Why did the author feel lonely in America? ：___________________________________ What did the author do to get rid of isolation?：_________________________________ What was wrong with Luna?：________________________________________________ How did the author accompany Luna in the first two weeks?：__________________________________________ What happened on the stormy afternoon?：_____________________________________________ What was the barrier between the author and Luna at first?：_________________________________________________ What mutual influence will exist between the author and Luna?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者远赴美国生活，深陷孤独与陌生感→_________________ →为摆脱孤独，作者报名成为动物收容所志愿者→_________________ →遇见被遗弃、极度胆小怕生的猫咪露娜→作者长期温柔陪伴，却始终无法拉近距离→暴雨雷声惊吓露娜→_________________ →（续写）作者主动安抚露娜，打破彼此隔阂→（续写）双向治愈，彼此救赎，作者走出孤独 6．情感线 I：excited→___________→lonely and suffocating→___________→gentle and hopeful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：__________________________________________________________________ 英文：__________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式积累 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I opened the cage door and sat quietly beside her. 衔接句1——What did the author do to comfort Luna? How did their bond form? ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Luna’s progress soon began to change me as well. 衔接句2——How did Luna heal the author? What positive changes did the author get? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我打开笼门，安静地坐在她身旁。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：露娜的改变，也慢慢治愈了我。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写（150词左右） I opened the cage door and sat quietly beside her. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Luna’s progress soon began to change me as well. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（远赴异国、内心孤独、温柔善良、富有耐心的异乡人）；Luna（被遗弃、胆小怯懦、缺乏安全感的流浪猫咪）；Sarah（善良热心的收容所主管） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 I moved to America and felt lonely and isolated--- suffered from strong sense of displacement and isolation --- I became a volunteer at a local animal shelter--- met a frightened abandoned cat named Luna --- I met a scared abandoned cat Luna and tried to comfort her--- accompanied Luna patiently but failed to break the barrier --- A storm came and scared Luna badly 4. 细节问答 Why did the author feel lonely in America? ：She lived far away from homeland, struggled with the unfamiliar environment and language, and had no social contact. What did the author do to get rid of isolation?：She signed up as a volunteer at a local animal shelter. What was wrong with Luna?：She was abandoned, terrified of everything and extremely timid and insecure. How did the author accompany Luna in the first two weeks?：She sat outside the cage working or talking softly about her hometown to Luna every day. What happened on the stormy afternoon?：A heavy storm with thunder hit, frightening all animals especially Luna. What was the barrier between the author and Luna at first?：Luna was too scared to trust others, keeping an invisible distance from the author. What mutual influence will exist between the author and Luna?：The author’s patience heals Luna, and Luna’s company helps the author walk out of loneliness. What does the story tell us?：Kindness and companionship are mutual healing; warming others also lights up our own life. 5．情节线 作者远赴美国生活，深陷孤独与陌生感→新鲜感褪去，陷入异国独处的压抑与无归属感 →为摆脱孤独，作者报名成为动物收容所志愿者→邂逅胆小怕生、曾遭遗弃的猫咪露娜 →遇见被遗弃、极度胆小怕生的猫咪露娜→作者长期温柔陪伴，却始终无法拉近距离→暴雨雷声惊吓露娜→作者主动靠近安抚，打破二者之间的隔阂 →（续写）作者主动安抚露娜，打破彼此隔阂→（续写）双向治愈，彼此救赎，作者走出孤独 6．情感线 I：excited→lost and displaced→lonely and suffocating→hopeful and gentle→gentle and hopeful→healed and peaceful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：远赴美国的作者深陷异国孤独，成为动物收容所志愿者后耐心陪伴胆小的流浪猫露娜，在一次暴雨中主动安抚受惊的猫咪，最终实现双向治愈，彼此温暖救赎。 英文：Living alone in a foreign country, the author suffered from severe loneliness. She volunteered in an animal shelter and patiently accompanied a scared abandoned cat Luna, and they finally healed each other with sincere companionship. 8. 句式积累 状语从句：The initial excitement of a new start soon faded, replaced by the harsh reality of fitting into an unfamiliar environment. 非谓语动词：Whenever I approached, she would cower in the corner, her tiny body shaking at the slightest sound. 宾语从句：Sarah told me that my only task was to help Luna feel safe again. 定语从句：I spent my days in video meetings where people spoke a language that was still a bit too fast for me to fully grasp. 并列句：The lights flickered, and the animals began to cry out in fear. 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：陪伴是双向的治愈，温柔善待万物，在温暖他人的同时，也能救赎自己、治愈孤独。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I opened the cage door and sat quietly beside her. 衔接句1——What did the author do to comfort Luna? How did their bond form? The author stroked Luna gently, whispered soft words to calm her fear, and Luna finally dared to get close and trust the author. Paragraph 2: Luna’s progress soon began to change me as well. 衔接句2——How did Luna heal the author? What positive changes did the author get? Luna’s trust and company drove away the author’s loneliness, helping her adapt to the new life and find spiritual belonging. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我打开笼门，安静地坐在她身旁。 →①轻声安抚、温柔抚摸，耐心消解露娜的恐惧→②露娜逐渐放松戒备，主动靠近作者→③二者打破隔阂，建立信任与羁绊； 第二段：露娜的改变，也慢慢治愈了我。 →①露娜的亲近与陪伴驱散了我的异国孤独→②我逐渐融入生活，内心不再漂泊迷茫→③双向治愈，温柔陪伴成就彼此的温暖救赎。 四.段落续写范文（150词左右） I opened the cage door and sat quietly beside her. Ignoring the rolling thunder outside, I lowered my voice and kept talking softly to her. I gently stretched out my hand, waiting patiently for her to relax. After a long while, Luna stopped trembling. Hesitantly, she lifted her head and sniffed my fingers carefully. Finally, she gathered her courage and leaned against my leg, seeking warmth and safety. It was the first time she had trusted me completely, which filled my heart with tenderness. Luna’s progress soon began to change me as well. As Luna grew brave and outgoing with my company, my own loneliness gradually faded away. I no longer felt displaced in the foreign country. Every day’s accompanying became the most peaceful and warm moment in my life. The bond between us taught me that warmth and trust are mutual. By giving kindness to heal a scared little life, I finally found my own spiritual home in this strange land. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $