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初三下册作文汇总
旅游话题(一)威海
假如你是李明,你的朋友Mike要去威海旅行,写一封信给Mike 介绍一下威海。
要点如下:
1. 沿海城市,盛产海鲜等;
2. 景点:石岛赤山风景名胜区(Shidao Chishan Scenic Area)、无染寺(Wuran Temple)等;
3. 交通方便,有公交车、出租车等,但使用共享单车更便利。
Dear Mike
I am a student from Weihai. Welcome to Weihai for a visit. Here are my suggestions to you.
Weihai lies in the northeast of Shandong, China. It’s a beautiful city near the sea. Weihai is famous for seafood. If you come here, you can enjoy seafood. And Weihai has a lot of beautiful sighs, including Shidao Chisan Scenic Area and Wuran Temple. I am sure that you will fall in love with the natural beauty here.
Transportation is very convenient. you can take the bus or the taxi to most places around Weihai, but it’s more convenient to ride shared bikes. I’m sure that you’ll have great fun if you travels in Weihai.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours
Li Ming
作文分析:
这篇文章主要介绍威海旅行,包括3方面内容:地理位置,旅游景点,出行
高分单词:
suggestion建议 northeast东北
seafood海鲜 including包括
natural自然的 transportation交通
convenient便利
高分短语:
lie in位于 be famous for因为…而著名,
fall in love with爱上 natural beauty大自然的美
shared bikes共享单车 be helpful to对…有帮助
高分句式:
1. Weihai lies in the northeast of Shandong, China.
此句点明威海的位置,可以作为万能句来背诵。
2. Weihai has a lot of beautiful sighs, including……
此句式可以用来描述旅游景点。
3. I am sure that you will fall in love with the natural beauty here.
此句式可以用来描述景点后的心情,也可以作为万能句背诵。
旅游话题(二)烟台
I'm Li hua from Yantai. Welcome to Yantai for a visit. Let me introduce my hometown to you.
Yantai is in the northeast of Shandong, China. It's a beautiful city near the sea. (地理位置)The weather is warm in spring, but it's cold in winter. Sometimes it snows. So it's best for you to pack some warm clothes when you come.(天气) Yantai is famous for its seafood, apples and fish dumplings so you can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. What’s more, Yantai has lots of beautiful sights, including Penglai Pavilion Tourist Area and Kunyu Mountain. (景点)It's very easy to take the bus and the taxi to most places around Yantai, but it's more convenient to ride shared bikes.(交通方式)
I'm sure that you'll have great fun if you travel in Yantai. I hope you will like my hometown.
作文分析:
这篇文章主要介绍烟台旅行,包括以下方面内容:地理位置,天气状况,饮食,旅游景点,出行
高分单词:
Introduce介绍 northeast东北
seafood海鲜 including包括
pack打包 convenient便利
高分短语:
lie in位于 be famous for因为…而著名,
fish dumplings鱼饺 more convenient更加便利
shared bikes共享单车 have fun玩得开心
高分句式:
4. Yantai lies in the northeast of Shandong, China.
此句点明威海的位置,可以作为万能句来背诵。
5. Yantai has a lot of beautiful sighs, including……
此句式可以用来描述旅游景点。
6. I'm sure that you'll have great fun if you travel in Yantai.
此句式可以用来描述景点后的心情,也可以作为万能句背诵。
如何学英语
假如你是李雷,你的朋友李华正在学习英语,请你就英语学习方面给他写封电子邮件,向他介绍一下如何学好英语。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you? I am very glad to receive your letter. Now let me tell you something about how to learn English well.
First of all, learning English needs hard work and takes time, so you should spend as much time as you can. What’s more, it’s important to take every chance to practice English. Remember“Practice makes perfect.”Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You can learn a lot from mistakes. Last but not least, you’d better watch English films and TV programs. It’s a good way to improve your English.
Whether or not you can learn English well depends on your learning habits. If we work hard, I am sure we will learn English well. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Lei
作文分析:
这篇文章主要学习英语的方式
高分单词:
receive接收 chance机会
mistakes错误 whether是否
pack打包 convenient便利
高分短语:
takes time花费时间 take every chance to抓住每一次机会
as much as you can尽可能 Practice makes perfect熟能生巧
be afraid of害怕做某事 making mistakes.犯错误
looking forward to期待做某事
高分句式:
1. you should spend as much time as you can
使用了as much as you can 的句式,使得句式结构高级
Remember“Practice makes perfect.”
此句式用到了谚语。使得文章高级。
2. Whether or not you can learn English well depends on your learning habits.
此句式用到很多固定表达whether or not,depend on,learning habits
闲谈
你的同学 Tom 即将去参加朋友聚会,但是对于如何在聚会上与陌生人沟通感到有压力。你能给他讲一下闲聊的优点以及如何闲聊吗?
要点如下:
闲聊的优点
如何闲聊
1. 促进理解
1. 保持微笑
2. 打破沉默
2. 避开私人话题
How to Break the Ice?
Small talk is a common form of communication. It can help people know about each other and it is a good way to “break the ice”. Though small talk is not necessary, it makes others feel relaxed and it passes time nicely.
But how to make small talk? First, I think it is important to smile and keep the conversations light and humorous. Second, private subjects should be avoided. Instead, the weather is always a safe topic. It’s not too personal and everybody feels comfortable talking about it. The most important thing is to give the other person a chance to speak and listen to what they have to say.
作文分析:
这篇文章主要介绍如何与陌生人开启对话,打破沉默
高分单词:
form形式 communication交流
necessary有必要 light轻便的
humorous幽默的 avoid避免
高分短语:
a common form of一种常见的形式 a good way to do 一个做某事的好方法
private subject私密话题 feel comfortable doing做某事很舒服
give sb a chance to do给某人一个做某事的机会
高分句式:
1. Small talk is a common form of communication
Small talk的定义
2. it is important to smile and keep the conversations light and humorous.
此句用到了it is +形容词 for sb to do 的句式
3. The most important thing is to give the other person a chance to speak and listen to what they have to say.
此句式用到了最高级,give sb a chance等重要句式
袁隆平(人物介绍)
请根据以下信息,以 "Yuan Longping" 为题写一篇英语短文介绍袁隆平。
年份
事件
1930
born in Beijing
1950-1953
studied in Southwest Agricultural College
1964
made a special study of rice
1974
developed a new kind of rice
1980s
travelled around the world and gave advice about growing rice
2004
won the World Food Prize
2019
received the Medal of the Republic
2021
died
写作要求
1. 短文必须包含以上主要内容,100词左右,可适当发挥;
2. 结构完整,语句通顺正确,上下文连贯,书写认真。
Yuan Longping
The greatest man in my heart is Yuan Longping. He is a great scientist and he is called the “father of hybrid rice”.
He was born in Beijing in 1930. He studied in Southwest Agricultural College from 1950 to 1953. He made a special study of rice in 1964 and in 1974, he developed a new kind of rice—Hybrid Rice. In the 1980s, Yuan travelled around the world and gave advice about growing rice. He won the World Food Prize in 2004. He also received the Medal of the Republic in 2019. In 2021, he died in Changsha at the age of 91.
He made great contributions to the world. With his efforts,many countries grow more rice than before. He is a great scientist who is worthy of the praise of the world. Yuan Longping will live in my heart forever.
作文分析:
这篇文章主要介绍重要人物袁隆平
高分单词:
scientist科学家 receive接收;收到
contribution贡献 effort努力
worthy值得的 praise表扬
高分短语:
travelled around the world环游世界 a good way to do
made great contributions to做出巨大贡献
with one’s efforts在某人的努力下
be worthy of 值得
高分句式:
1. He made great contributions to the world.
此句式可以作为万能句式,用来介绍做出贡献的名人。
2. He is a great …… who is worthy of the praise of the world.
此句式可以作为万能句式,用来介绍做出贡献的名人。
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