Unit 6 Rain or Shine 书面表达10篇（单元话题：天气）-2025-2026学年七年级英语下册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

**基本信息** 聚焦“天气”主题，通过基础与重难分层训练，系统提升书面表达能力，融合语言运用与跨文化思维。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |基础语篇练习|5篇（表格整合、简单演讲稿等）|聚焦基础分值，考查天气描述、简单活动及情景表达|从单一人物天气活动（表格）到个人喜好阐述（演讲稿），逐步构建“天气-活动-感受”基础表达逻辑| |重难语篇练习|5篇（跨文化邮件、多季节综合描述等）|突破高分瓶颈，涉及家乡气候、跨文化沟通及多维度信息整合|从单一场景到多季节综合，从本土到跨文化语境，深化“天气-文化-行为”关联思维，提升复杂信息组织能力|

Unit 6 Rain or Shine 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 天气 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．假如你是王薇,你有很多朋友在不同的城市，你给他们打电话聊天，同时了解到他们所在城市的天气情况以及现在正在做的事。请你根据以下表格内容，写一篇英语短文对你所了解的情况做个总结。 人物 地点 天气 活动 李婷 北京 有风、寒冷 听音乐 王舒 苏州 多云、温暖 遛狗 张强 深圳 晴、热 弹钢琴 要求:1. 必须包含表格内的所有内容，可适当发挥，使文章内容通顺、完整； 2. 词数不少于60。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，你校正在开展以“My Favorite Weather”为题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：你最喜爱的天气类型、喜爱此天气的原因以及你在这种天气状况下经常做的活动。 提示词语：snow, sunny, beautiful, swimming, kite, snowman 内容提示： ● What kind of weather do you like? ● Why do you like this kind of weather? ● What do you usually do in this kind of weather? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李华，请以“My Favorite Season (季节)”为题写一份演讲稿，参加《英语周报》举办的演讲比赛。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1. 你最喜欢的季节 (spring/ summer/ autumn/ winter 四季任选其一)； 2. 天气的状况、景色的变化、人们常见的活动； 3. 你的行为和活动。 My Favorite Season Dear friends, I am Li Hua. I am happy to speak here today. My favorite season is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 4．请以“My Favorite Weather” 为题，写一篇短文。内容包括：你最喜欢的天气是什么；你喜欢这种天气的原因；在这种天气下你通常会做的事情；这种天气给你带来的感受。 要求：1. 词数80-120词； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．根据以下提示，写一篇60 - 80词左右的短文。 1. 今天天气晴朗，你和你的朋友们在公园里玩。 2. 有的在放风筝，有的在踢足球，有的在划船。 3. 你们都玩得很开心。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．根据中文提示写一篇60词左右介绍你家乡气候的短文。要点如下： 1.我的家乡黄石春天气候温暖，万物开始生长； 2.夏天是最热的季节，每到夏天人们到长江或磁湖去游泳解暑； 3.黄石的秋天就像春天一样，不冷也不热； 4.黄石的冬天天气非常寒冷，几乎每年都下雪，人们穿着厚衣服。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是李辉，正在澳大利亚。请给你的妈妈写一封邮件描述澳大利亚的天气情况以及人们此时的活动。 注意： (1)词数为60左右； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (4)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Mom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I miss you and Dad. Yours, Li Hui 8．今天是星期天，外面下着雪，天气很冷，但很多孩子在户外玩耍。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文，描述孩子们的活动。 写作要点： （1）How’s the weather today? （2）What are the children doing? （3）How do they feel? 写作要求： （1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）词数：70词左右； （3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：Sunday, snowy, cold, have a snowball fight (打雪仗), skate, build a snowman ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 重难语篇练习 9．假设你是王杰，作为交换生，你正在加拿大多伦多 (Toronto) 学习和生活。你在北京的老朋友杨林发来电子邮件，询问当地的天气状况以及你的生活情况。请你根据提示给杨林回一封电子邮件。 要点： 1. 多伦多现在是冬季，天气多风而且很冷，人们都戴着帽子，穿着保暖的衣服； 2. 今天多伦多下雪了，现在你正在和同学们在公园里玩。有的在堆雪人，有的在滑冰，一个朋友正在拍照。 注意： 1. 表达正确，语句通顺连贯； 2. 词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Yang Lin, Thank you for your e-mail. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Jie 10．假如你是张华，你的英国笔友Mike给你发来邮件说他想了解你家乡一年中的天气情况及适宜进行的各种活动，以便他决定明年何时来你家乡度假。请你给他回一封邮件，告诉他相关情况。 内容要点： Months Weather and temperature Activities From March to May Sunny and warm, rainy sometimes; 12℃-21℃ Ride a bike From June to September Sunny and hot; 29℃-39℃ Go swimming From October to November Cool, windy sometimes; 10℃-18℃ Rock climbing From December to February Freezing cold, snowy sometimes; -2℃-5℃ Build snowmen 要求： 1.邮件应包括所有的内容要点，可适当拓展，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2.邮件中不能出现真实的人名、校名； 3.词数不少于70（邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, Happy to get your e-mail. Let me tell you what the weather is like and what we can do in my hometown in a year. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. I’m looking forward to your visit to my hometown! Yours, Zhang Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 6 Rain or Shine 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 天气 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．假如你是王薇,你有很多朋友在不同的城市，你给他们打电话聊天，同时了解到他们所在城市的天气情况以及现在正在做的事。请你根据以下表格内容，写一篇英语短文对你所了解的情况做个总结。 人物 地点 天气 活动 李婷 北京 有风、寒冷 听音乐 王舒 苏州 多云、温暖 遛狗 张强 深圳 晴、热 弹钢琴 要求:1. 必须包含表格内的所有内容，可适当发挥，使文章内容通顺、完整； 2. 词数不少于60。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: These three people are my friends. Let’s see how the weather is in their places and what they are doing now. Li Ting comes from Beijing. The weather in Beijing is windy and cold. She is listening to music in her room. Wang Shu lives in Suzhou. It’s cloudy and warm there. She is walking her dog in the park. What about Zhang Qiang? He is in Shenzhen now. He is playing the piano at home, because it is sunny and too hot outside. Different cities have different weather. My friends are having a good time. 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体和时态：信息介绍类记叙文，用现在进行时为主，辅以一般现在时描述天气和地点 明确要点： 人物（李婷、王舒、张强）、所在城市（北京、苏州、深圳） 各城市天气状况（有风寒冷/多云温暖/晴朗炎热） 人物正在进行的活动（听音乐/遛狗/弹钢琴） 确定人称：以第一人称 I（王薇）的视角介绍，整体以第三人称描述朋友的情况 注意事项：需涵盖所有表格信息，适当发挥衔接句，保证行文流畅 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引入主题，说明自己正在和不同城市的朋友打电话，了解他们的近况 主体段：按顺序分别介绍三位朋友所在的城市、当地天气和正在做的事，可适当补充细节（如天气与活动的关联） 结尾段：简单总结不同城市的天气差异和朋友们的活动，表达对朋友的关心或感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍李婷（北京） 地点与天气：comes from Beijing/lives in Beijing/windy and cold等 活动内容：listen to music/enjoying music等 细节补充：too cold to go out/stay at home等 要点二：介绍王舒（苏州） 地点与天气：lives in Suzhou/in Suzhou/cloudy and warm等 活动内容：walk her dog in the park/walking with her dog等 细节补充：nice/feel good等 要点三：介绍张强（深圳） 地点与天气：in Shenzhen/stay in Shenzhen/sunny and very hot等 活动内容：play the piano/practice the piano等 细节补充：too hot outside/stay indoors等 2．假如你是李华，你校正在开展以“My Favorite Weather”为题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：你最喜爱的天气类型、喜爱此天气的原因以及你在这种天气状况下经常做的活动。 提示词语：snow, sunny, beautiful, swimming, kite, snowman 内容提示： ● What kind of weather do you like? ● Why do you like this kind of weather? ● What do you usually do in this kind of weather? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favorite weather is sunny weather. I love it because it is bright and warm, making every day feel cheerful and lively. The sun shines brightly, and the sky is blue with white clouds, which looks really beautiful. On sunny days, I usually do many interesting things with my friends. In summer, we often go swimming in the pool to cool down. On weekends, we fly kites in the park, and the wind carries our kites high in the sky. Sometimes I also read books in the yard under the sun. Sunny weather brings me happiness and energy, so it is my favorite kind of weather. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①喜爱的天气+原因；②对应天气下的活动 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意：用上提示词，不透露个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明主题 主体段：分写原因、活动 结尾段：总结升华 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：最喜爱的天气及原因 天气选择：sunny weather/sunny days 原因描述：bright and warm/look really beautiful/warm and cheerful/very pretty 要点二：该天气下常做的活动 活动内容：go swimmingfly kites/read books/swim in the pool/fly a kite/read outdoors 3．假如你是李华，请以“My Favorite Season (季节)”为题写一份演讲稿，参加《英语周报》举办的演讲比赛。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1. 你最喜欢的季节 (spring/ summer/ autumn/ winter 四季任选其一)； 2. 天气的状况、景色的变化、人们常见的活动； 3. 你的行为和活动。 My Favorite Season Dear friends, I am Li Hua. I am happy to speak here today. My favorite season is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【答案】例文 My Favorite Season Dear friends, I am Li Hua. I am happy to speak here today. My favorite season is spring, and let me tell you the reasons. I think spring is the best season because it is a beautiful season. There are lots of beautiful flowers in spring, and the weather is not too hot or too cold. People start to do sports outside after a long winter, and some children fly kites. I also like flying kites because I think it is interesting. In spring, I also go to the park to go for a walk. There are many cute and lively animals in the park in spring. That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接给出的开头，点明自己最喜欢的季节是春天； 第二步：介绍喜欢春天的原因、春天的天气、景色以及活动等； 第三步：承接给出的结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of大量的 ②start to do sports开始做运动 ③fly kites放风筝 ④go for a walk散步 [高分句型] ①I think spring is the best season because it is a beautiful season. (省略that的宾语从句) ②I also like flying kites because I think it is interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句) 4．请以“My Favorite Weather” 为题，写一篇短文。内容包括：你最喜欢的天气是什么；你喜欢这种天气的原因；在这种天气下你通常会做的事情；这种天气给你带来的感受。 要求：1. 词数80-120词； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Weather My favorite weather is sunny weather. There are several reasons why I love it so much. First of all, when the sun is shining, everything seems more lively. The warm sunlight makes me feel energetic and positive. On sunny days, I usually go outdoors to do various activities. I like to go for a jog in the park, breathing in the fresh air and enjoying the beautiful scenery around me. Sometimes, I also go on a picnic with my family or friends. We spread a blanket on the grass, eat delicious food, and chat happily. It’s a great way to relax and enjoy each other’s company. Sunny weather always brings me a sense of happiness and comfort. It makes me feel like all my troubles are gone. I can play freely outside without worrying about getting wet or cold. The bright blue sky and the golden sun make the world look so beautiful. It gives me a feeling of hope and makes me look forward to new things. In short, sunny days are my favorite because they make my life more colorful and enjoyable. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：点明自己喜欢晴天及其原因； 第二步：介绍自己在晴天喜欢做的事情； 第三步：介绍晴天给自己的感受； 第四步：再次表明喜欢晴天。 [亮点词汇] ①First of all首先 ②makes me feel energetic and positive让我觉得精力充沛，积极向上 ③go for a jog去慢跑 ④go on a picnic去野餐 ⑤a sense of happiness and comfort一种幸福和舒适的感觉 [高分句型] ①First of all, when the sun is shining, everything seems more lively. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②In short, sunny days are my favorite because they make my life more colorful and enjoyable. (because引导的原因状语从句) 5．根据以下提示，写一篇60 - 80词左右的短文。 1. 今天天气晴朗，你和你的朋友们在公园里玩。 2. 有的在放风筝，有的在踢足球，有的在划船。 3. 你们都玩得很开心。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 It’s a sunny day today. I’m in the park with my friends. We are having a great time. Some of my friends are flying kites. They look so beautiful in the sky. Some are playing football on the grass. Others are boating on the lake. Everyone is enjoying the nice day. We really have a lot of fun. 【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“现在进行时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，表示天气晴朗，你和朋友正在公园玩； 第二步，介绍公园里朋友们正在做的事情； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 【亮点词汇】①have a great time玩得开心 ②on the grass在草地上 ③enjoy享受 【高分句型】①Some of my friends are flying kites. They look so beautiful in the sky. Some are playing football on the grass. （现在进行时） 6．根据中文提示写一篇60词左右介绍你家乡气候的短文。要点如下： 1.我的家乡黄石春天气候温暖，万物开始生长； 2.夏天是最热的季节，每到夏天人们到长江或磁湖去游泳解暑； 3.黄石的秋天就像春天一样，不冷也不热； 4.黄石的冬天天气非常寒冷，几乎每年都下雪，人们穿着厚衣服。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Huangshi is my hometown. The weather is warm in spring. Everything begins to grow in spring. Summer is the hottest season. When summer comes, many people go swimming in Changjiang River to make them cool. Autumn is just the same as spring. It’s neither hot nor cold. Winter is very cold in Huang shi. It snows every year. People wear warm clothes in winter. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的家乡，总起全文； 第二步，根据题干的要点，描述家乡的四季。 [亮点词汇] ①the same as和……一样 ②neither…nor既不……也不 [高分句型] ①When summer comes, many people go swimming in Changjiang River to make them cool.（时间状语从句） 7．假设你是李辉，正在澳大利亚。请给你的妈妈写一封邮件描述澳大利亚的天气情况以及人们此时的活动。 注意： (1)词数为60左右； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (4)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Mom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I miss you and Dad. Yours, Li Hui 【答案】Dear Mom,     It’s sunny and warm here in Australia. December is summer, so people enjoy swimming at the beaches or having picnics in parks. Many wear hats and sunglasses to stay cool. Sometimes it rains suddenly, but the air stays fresh. Families barbecue in their gardens, and kids play cricket on the grass. I heard that Bondi Beach is the most popular spot for surfing. On weekends, crowds surf there or hike in the mountains. I even tried surfing last week—it was fun but challenging! The evenings are breezy, perfect for walks.     I miss you and Dad.                                                                                                                                                                        Yours,                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为一般现在时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山，问候并点明所在地点和天气状况 ，引出在澳大利亚的生活话题； 第二步：具体阐述澳大利亚当地不同场景下人们的活动，分享自己尝试冲浪的经历；同时描写不同时段的天气和人们的活动； 第三步：书写结语，表达对父母的思念之情。 [亮点词汇] ①enjoy swimming喜爱游泳 ②on weekends在周末 [高分句型]   ①I heard that Bondi Beach is the most popular spot for surfing.（宾语从句） 8．今天是星期天，外面下着雪，天气很冷，但很多孩子在户外玩耍。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文，描述孩子们的活动。 写作要点： （1）How’s the weather today? （2）What are the children doing? （3）How do they feel? 写作要求： （1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； （2）词数：70词左右； （3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：Sunday, snowy, cold, have a snowball fight (打雪仗), skate, build a snowman ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: It’s Sunday today. It’s snowing outside, and it’s very cold. Many people are staying in the house to keep warm. But some children are wearing their warm clothes and playing in the snow excitedly. Look at the children outside! Some are skating on the ice, some are running in the snow, some are having a snowball fight, and others are building a snowman. There’s a boy taking a carrot with him. It is the snowman’s nose! Although the weather is cold, all of the children feel very happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，用于描述当前的天气和孩子们的活动； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括天气情况、孩子们的活动以及他们的感受，考生应注意包含所有要点并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述天气情况。根据提示，描述今天是星期天，天气下雪且寒冷； 第二步，具体阐述孩子们的活动。根据提示，描述孩子们在户外玩耍，有的打雪仗，有的滑冰，还有的堆雪人； 第三步，表达孩子们的感受。描述孩子们虽然天气冷，但玩得很开心。 [亮点词汇] ①having a snowball fight打雪仗 ②wearing their warm clothes穿着暖和的衣服 [高分句型] ①Some are skating on the ice, some are running in the snow, some are having a snowball fight, and others are building a snowman.（“Some...some...some...and others...”句型，描述不同孩子的不同活动） 重难语篇练习 9．假设你是王杰，作为交换生，你正在加拿大多伦多 (Toronto) 学习和生活。你在北京的老朋友杨林发来电子邮件，询问当地的天气状况以及你的生活情况。请你根据提示给杨林回一封电子邮件。 要点： 1. 多伦多现在是冬季，天气多风而且很冷，人们都戴着帽子，穿着保暖的衣服； 2. 今天多伦多下雪了，现在你正在和同学们在公园里玩。有的在堆雪人，有的在滑冰，一个朋友正在拍照。 注意： 1. 表达正确，语句通顺连贯； 2. 词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Yang Lin, Thank you for your e-mail. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Jie 【答案】例文： Dear Yang Lin, Thank you for your e-mail. It’s winter in Toronto. The weather here is windy and cold. People wear hats and warm clothes. Today it’s snowing. I’m playing with my classmates in the park. I think it’s very interesting. Some are making a snowman. Some are skating. A friend of mine is taking photos. She likes taking photos. We’re having a great time. Yours, Wang Jie 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和现在进行时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍当地的天气状况。 第二步，介绍自己的生活情况。 [亮点词汇] ①make a snowman堆雪人 ②take photos照相 ③have a great time玩得高兴 [高分句型] I think it’s very interesting. (宾语从句) 10．假如你是张华，你的英国笔友Mike给你发来邮件说他想了解你家乡一年中的天气情况及适宜进行的各种活动，以便他决定明年何时来你家乡度假。请你给他回一封邮件，告诉他相关情况。 内容要点： Months Weather and temperature Activities From March to May Sunny and warm, rainy sometimes; 12℃-21℃ Ride a bike From June to September Sunny and hot; 29℃-39℃ Go swimming From October to November Cool, windy sometimes; 10℃-18℃ Rock climbing From December to February Freezing cold, snowy sometimes; -2℃-5℃ Build snowmen 要求： 1.邮件应包括所有的内容要点，可适当拓展，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2.邮件中不能出现真实的人名、校名； 3.词数不少于70（邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, Happy to get your e-mail. Let me tell you what the weather is like and what we can do in my hometown in a year. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. I’m looking forward to your visit to my hometown! Yours, Zhang Hua 【答案】 例文： Dear Mike, Happy to get your e-mail. Let me tell you what the weather is like and what we can do in my hometown in a year. From March to May, it is sunny and warm with temperatures between 12℃ and 21℃, though it rains sometimes. It’s a perfect time to ride a bike. Then from June to September, the weather becomes sunny and hot, about 29℃ to 39℃. You can go swimming to cool down. Next, from October to November, it is cool, sometimes windy, with temperatures from 10℃ to 18℃. Rock climbing is a great activity then. Finally, from December to February, it is freezing cold, sometimes snowy, and the temperature is between -2℃ and 5℃. We often build snowmen for fun. That’s all. I’m looking forward to your visit to my hometown! Yours, Zhang Hua 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件，用一般现在时 明确要点：详细描述家乡每个季节的天气特点、温度范围以及适合进行的活动 确定人称：第一人称和第三人称 注意事项：要准确描述天气和温度，语言表达要清晰流畅，符合书信的格式规范 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：通过表达收到对方邮件的喜悦，引出要介绍家乡天气和活动的主题 主体段：按照季节顺序，依次描述每个季节的天气、温度和适合开展的活动 结尾段：表达对对方来家乡参观的期待 [第三步：要点展示] 要点一：每个季节的天气特点 具体特点：sunny and warm/sunny and hot/cool, sometimes windy/freezing cold, sometimes snowy/extremely hot等 要点二：温度范围 温度范围：between 12℃ and 21℃/about 29℃ to 39℃/from 10℃ to 18℃/there is a significant temperature difference等 要点三：每个季节进行的活动 具体活动：ride a bike/go swimming/rock climbing/build snowmen/fly kites/make snowmen for fun等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $