Unit 6 Rain or Shine 书面表达专练-2025-2026学年七年级英语下学期满分冲刺专练（人教版）

2025-2026学年七年级英语下学期满分冲刺专练（人教版2024） Unit 6 Rain or Shine 书面表达专练 【写作主题】 本单元的话题是“天气和活动”,要求学生学会运用本单元所学知识及语法,写一篇文章描述天气状况和家人正在进行的活动。 【语言点拨】 1. 介绍天气状况： sunny but cool 晴朗但凉爽 rainy and cold 多雨且寒冷 cloudy but warm 多云但温暖 windy and cool 多风且凉爽 snowy and cold 多雪且寒冷 warm but rainy 温暖但多雨 It is a cool day and the sun is shining.这是凉爽的一天，阳光普照。 2. 描述一家人正在进行的活动： watching a movie 正在看电影 reading newspapers 正在看报纸 writing a postcard 正在写明信片 sitting on the chair 正坐在椅子上 cooking in the kitchen 正在厨房里煮饭 running with parents 正在和父母一起跑步 drinking orange juice 正在喝橙汁 3. 喜欢的天气及原因： windy days 有风的日子 fly kites in the park 在公园里放风筝 When the sun shines, I feel happy and relaxed.当阳光普照时，我感到快乐和放松。 I like snowy days because I enjoy playing outside in the snow.我喜欢下雪天，因为我喜欢在外面的雪地里玩耍。 【作文专练】 1．假设你是李华，参加学校组织的英语演讲比赛。请根据所给提示，以“The four seasons in my hometown”为题写一篇演讲稿。 要点如下：1.天气的特征；2.从事的活动；3.你的感受。 注意：1.词数70左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The four seasons in my hometown My hometown is in the northeast of China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，这些天你正在北京游玩。请你根据提示,给你的英国朋友杰克(Jack)发一封邮件，告诉他北京的天气状况和你的度假情况。 提示： 1. 北京天气晴朗； 2. 我和朋友们正在游览长城； 3. 我感到…… 要求：不少于70词。 参考词汇：the Great Wall长城; hope希望; have a rest休息; relaxed放松的 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是Bob，今天天气晴朗，你和家人到公园野餐。现在是下午两点，一家人正享受着惬意的午后时光。请你根据下面的图文提示，以”My Happy Family Time”为题写一篇不少于70词的短文，介绍你和家人各自正在做的事情。 要求： （1）短文须包含图文所有信息，可适当拓展； （2）不得出现真实的个人信息。 My Happy Family Time. What are you doing? How’s the weather? What are your family doing? How do you feel? My Happy Family Time ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是埃米( Amy)， 你正在爬华山。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍今天的天气情况、你和其他游客正在进行的活动以及你的感受。 要求: 1.语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥。 2. 不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Today I’m visiting Mount Hua. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是来自英国的Jenny，现在在哈尔滨上学，今天收到妈妈发来的电子邮件，询问你学校当地的天气和你的身体及生活情况。请你用英语给你妈妈回复邮件。 写作要点： 1. What’s the weather like? 2. What are you and your friends doing? 3. How are you feeling? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3. 词数70左右，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mom, How is it going with you? I am very glad to get your e-mail. I’m___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jenny 6．假如你是魏华, 你正在加拿大的姑妈家度假。请根据下表信息，给你上海的同学李涛写一封信, 词数不少于70词。 Where Weather Activities Feelings Canada cold; snowing visit my aunt; ski; make a snowman relaxed; have a good time ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如今天是周日，现在是下午五点，外面正在下雨，你和家人正在做什么？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文来描述一下你们的活动。 提示： 1.What’s the weather like？　　　　 2.What are you doing? 3.What do you think of rainy days? 要求：70词左右，可适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李华，你和父母正在杭州度假，今天你们游览杭州西湖 (the West Lake)。请你根据以下要点提示给朋友Steve写一张明信片。 要点：1. What’s the weather like in Hangzhou? 2. What are you doing in Hangzhou? 3. Are you having a good time? 要求：回答要点提示问题，可适当发挥；词数不少于80 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Steve, How’s it going? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua To Steve Wood 8/47 Willis Street Kingsford NSW, Sydney, Australia 9．假如你是学校英语广播站的记者，你们班正在组织一次海滩游玩活动。请根据以下提示问题为本次活动做一次英文报道。 What’s the weather like there? What are your classmates doing there? How do your classmates feel about playing on the beach? Something more about the activities on the beach. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数70词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Now it’s 10 o’clock in the morning. The whole class is on the beach. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设今天是星期天，你是电视台的天气预报员Li Hua，现在是上午10点，请你根据下面的信息提示，用英语撰写一篇实时天气播报稿，描述当前长沙的天气状况及人们的活动情况。 Season summer Month July Weather sunny and hot Temperature 30℃ Activities take photos, take a walk, go shopping, run after each other, eat ice cream… Places Orange Isle (橘子洲头), Wuyi Square (五一广场)... Advice put on sunglasses, use sunscreen (防晒霜) 要求： 1. 内容包含提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写工整； 3. 70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning from Changsha in Hunan province. Here is the live weather report. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．例文： The four seasons in my hometown My hometown is in the northeast of China. The seasons here are very different. Spring is warm and windy. Trees turn green and flowers come out. I often fly kites with friends in the park. Summer is hot but fun. I like swimming in the river and eating ice-cream. Autumn is cool and golden. The leaves fall, and we go hiking to enjoy the view. Winter is cold and snowy. I love making snowmen and skiing with my family. Every season brings me joy. I love my hometown and its beautiful seasons! 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：主要使用一般现在时； ③提示：需涵盖四季的天气特征、相关活动及个人感受，语言生动，结构清晰，富有画面感。   [写作步骤]   第一步，点明家乡地理位置（中国东北）； 第二步，总体评价四季特点（非常不同）； 第三步，依次介绍春、夏、秋、冬的天气特征和对应活动； 第四步，总结每个季节带来的快乐，表达对家乡的热爱。   [亮点词汇]   ①in the northeast of在……东北部 ②turn green变绿 ③come out绽放 ④fly kites放风筝 ⑤go hiking去徒步 [高分句型]   ①Trees turn green and flowers come out. (and连接并列结构) ②I like swimming in the river and eating ice-cream. (like doing sth.结构，and连接并列动名词短语作宾语) 2．例文: Dear Jack, How are you? I’m having a great time in Beijing these days. It’s sunny today. I’m visiting the Great Wall with my friends Jenny and Bill. The Great Wall is one of China’s symbols. It looks really great. I hope you can visit it some day. It’s afternoon right now. We are having a rest on the Great Wall. Jenny and Bill are taking photos. I’m writing to you. I feel very happy and relaxed here. Yours, Li Hua 【总体分析】①题材：电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：描述北京天气、游览长城及个人感受。 【写作步骤】第一步：问候并说明地点，描述天气； 第二步：介绍当前活动（游览长城）及细节； 第三步：表达感受和祝愿。 【亮点词汇】①sunny晴朗的 ②visiting游览 ③excited兴奋的 ④symbol标志 【高分句型】①I’m visiting the Great Wall with my friends Jenny and Bill.（运用了现在进行时描述当前活动） ②I hope you can visit it some day.（运用了宾语从句表达愿望） 3．例文： My Happy Family Time I’m Bob. It’s sunny today. I go to the park for a picnic with my family. It is two o’clock in the afternoon. My mum is reading a book. My sister Lisa is jumping rope. My brother is jogging on the road. I’m playing the guitar. I feel happy. My father is taking photos of us. We’re all having a good time. How I wish time could stop at this moment! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文； ②时态：时态为“现在进行时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山，引出话题； 第二步：详细描述具体的家庭时光发生的事件、地点、各自的活动等相关信息； 第三步：书写结尾，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①sunny晴朗的 ②reading a book读书 ③taking photos照相 ④having a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①How I wish time could stop at this moment!(感叹句) 4．例文： Today I’m visiting Mount Hua with my family. Mount Hua is beautiful in the sunlight and it's a good time to climb a mountain. The weather is sunny and cool. There are lots of tourists here on vacation. Although climbing is hard, some people are still climbing and they are in high spirits. Some people are talking and laughing, and others are taking a rest at the rest area. I’m tired and hungry, but I keep on climbing. I really enjoy the amazing experience. 【总体分析】①题材：日记/游记 ②时态：一般现在时 ③提示：介绍天气、游客活动及个人感受，需适当发挥。 【写作步骤】第一步：描述天气和整体场景。 第二步：用“Some... Others...”结构介绍不同游客的活动。 第三步：写自己的活动和感受，结尾表达情感。 【亮点词汇】①tourists 游客 ②spirits精神 ③experience经验 【高分句型】①Although climbing is hard, some people are still climbing and they are in high spirits.（运用了although引导让步状语从句） ②Some people are talking and laughing, and others are taking a rest at the rest area（运用了Some... Others...句型） 5．例文： Dear Mom, How is it going with you? I am very glad to get your e-mail. I’m well now. I exercise in Harbin everyday. I think I’m taller now than last year. The weather in Harbin is very cold and sometimes it is snowy and freezing. But I like the weather here, because I like the sports in Harbin. We can go ice skating with our friends in Harbin. That’s really fun. At the moment, it’s snowing. And we are making a snowman outside. Some students are playing with the snow balls. We are having a great time. Winter is white here. Everything is white. I like the beautiful sights in Harbin. And I like the colourful school life here. Best wishes! Yours, Jenny 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”； ③提示：文章围绕“天气、活动、感受”三个核心要点展开，内容完整，逻辑连贯，符合书信格式。 【写作步骤】第一步：开头问候，承接题目给出的开头，问候妈妈近况，引出回复内容； 第二步：主体内容包括天气描述、活动介绍、感受表达； 第三步：结尾祝福，送上祝福，落款署名。 【亮点词汇】①snowy下雪的 ②make a snowman堆雪人 ③freezing极冷的 ④go ice skating去滑冰 ⑤colourful school life丰富多彩的校园生活 【高分句型】①I think I’m taller now than last year. (than引导比较级) ②At the moment, it's snowing. And we are making a snowman outside. (现在进行时) 6．例文： Dear Li Tao, How are you? I’m having a great time in Canada! I’m staying at my aunt’s house. The weather here is very cold and it’s snowing heavily now. Everything outside is white and beautiful. I do many fun things every day. I often visit my aunt and we cook together. Sometimes I go skiing with my cousins. It’s exciting! Yesterday we made a big snowman in the garden. We used carrots for its nose and stones for its eyes. It looked so funny! I feel very relaxed and happy here. The winter vacation is really wonderful. I miss you. See you soon! Yours, Wei Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：需涵盖地点（加拿大）、天气（寒冷、下雪）、活动（探望姑妈、滑雪、堆雪人）及感受（放松、开心），内容生动，语言亲切。   [写作步骤]   第一步，问候并引出度假地点（加拿大姑妈家）； 第二步，描述当地天气（寒冷、大雪）； 第三步，列举日常活动（探望姑妈、一起做饭、与表兄妹滑雪）； 第四步，分享一次具体趣事（堆雪人，用胡萝卜当鼻子、石头当眼睛）； 第五步，表达感受（放松、快乐）及对朋友的思念； 第六步，礼貌结尾。   [亮点词汇]   ①have a great time玩得很开心 ②stay at one’s house住在某人家 ③snow heavily下大雪 ④go skiing去滑雪 ⑤make a snowman堆雪人 ⑥feel relaxed感到放松 [高分句型]   ①Everything outside is white and beautiful. (简单句，生动描绘雪景) ②Sometimes I go skiing with my cousins. (sometimes表示频率) ③We used carrots for its nose and stones for its eyes. (used...for...结构说明材料用途) 7．例文： Today is Sunday. It’s five o’clock in the afternoon now. It’s raining outside, and all of my family are at home. My father is working on the computer. My mother is cooking in the kitchen. What about me? I’m watching TV. I like rainy days because we can have a good time at home together. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时、现在进行时； ③提示：描述天气、家人和自己的活动，以及对雨天的看法。 【写作步骤】 第一步，用2-3句交代时间、天气和地点（周日、下午五点、下雨、在家）； 第二步，用现在进行时分别描述父亲、母亲和“我”的活动； 第三步，用1-2句表达对雨天的感受和看法。 【亮点词汇】 ①raining下雨 ②cooking烹饪 ③have a good time玩得开心 【高分句型】 ①What about me?（运用了What about引出“我”的活动） ②I like rainy days because we can have a good time at home together.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 8．例文： Dear Steve, How’s it going? I’m on vacation with my parents in Hangzhou now. The weather here is sunny and warm, just perfect for a trip. Right now, we’re visiting the West Lake. We’re walking along the lake and enjoying the beautiful sights. Some boats are on the water, and the trees around the lake are green and lovely. We’re taking lots of photos to remember this great time. We also plan to try some delicious local food. We’re having a wonderful time here. I hope you can visit Hangzhou with me someday. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“现在进行时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：按照提示的问题介绍游览杭州西湖的内容，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要介绍杭州的天气； 第二步，详细描述在杭州的行动； 第三步，总结是否度过愉快的时光。 [亮点词汇] ①walking along the lake沿着湖边散步 ②local food当地食物 ③lots of许多 [高分句型] ①Some boats are on the water, and the trees around the lake are green and lovely. (and并列句) ②I hope you can visit Hangzhou with me someday. (宾语从句) 9．例文： Now it’s 10 o’clock in the morning. The whole class is on the beach. The weather is sunny and warm, which is perfect for playing and relaxing outside. What are my classmates doing at the moment?Look! Some girls are flying kites along the beach. Some boys are sunbathing under the soft sunlight. Other classmates are playing beach volleyball in high spirits. Our teachers, Miss Li and Miss Yang, are taking a walk by the sea. The beach really feels like a wonderful place to enjoy oneself. All the students feel happy to play there. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：根据四个问题描述天气、同学活动、感受及更多细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步：描述天气（晴朗温暖）。 第二步：用Some...Others...结构介绍同学们的不同活动。 第三步：表达感受并补充其他活动，以感叹句结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①gentle wind微风 ②collecting shells捡贝壳 ③sandcastles沙堡 [高分句型] ①Some classmates are playing beach volleyball happily.（运用了现在进行时描述活动） ②Everyone feels excited and relaxed because the beach is so wonderful.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） ③What a fun day!（运用了感叹句表达强烈情感） 10．例文： Good morning from Changsha in Hunan province. Here is the live weather report. It’s summer now, and we’re in July. It’s 10 a.m. right now and the weather here is sunny and hot, with a temperature of 30℃. Places like Orange Isle and Wuyi Square are lively with people. You can see many people taking photos of the views or taking a walk; some kids are running after each other and laughing. There are also people eating ice cream to cool off, and a few are going shopping in the small stores around these places. When you head out, remember to put on sunglasses and use sunscreen. That’s all for today’s weather. Have a great day! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一则天气预报，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍当前长沙的天气状况及人们的活动情况，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，以给定的天气预报常用开头引出播报； 第二步，介绍天气状况并描述人们的活动； 第三步，结尾进行温馨提示。 [亮点词汇] ①take photos拍照 ②take a walk散步 ③put on佩戴 [高分句型] ①When you head out, remember to put on sunglasses and use sunscreen.（when引导的时间状语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $