2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---花园治愈新生 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had spent fifteen years advancing in my corporate career in Seattle but the corner office and six-figure salary had left me empty. When my marriage ended, I decided it was time for a different kind of life. I bought a cottage in the Idaho countryside, and prepared to start over. The property came with two elderly neighbors whose land bordered my own. Arnold was eighty-five, with weathered hands from a lifetime of work. Rena moved slowly beside him. They had a magnificent garden - rows of tomatoes, corn, and flowers in every color. But I noticed right away that it was suffering. The weeds were winning, and some rows looked untended. One afternoon, I found Arnold struggling to lift a bag of fertilizer. I carried it for him, and we stood talking for a while. “You need a garden,” Arnold said. “And I need someone to work this land. These old bones can't do what they used to.” The arrangement made perfect sense. I would plant, irrigate, and weed. They would teach me what to do and we could share the harvest. As summer progressed, I found myself arriving earlier each day. I sweated my way through the garden. And when I sat by the creek (小河沟) for a break, I would just to play in the water. Slowly, I began to notice things I had never noticed before: the sound of wind moving through corn, the determination of a pumpkin vine pushing through dry soil. The constant noise in my head-the deadlines, the endless to-do lists - began to quiet. Arnold noticed my change, “The garden needs you. And you need it, too.” He was right. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 One morning, I arrived to find the creek had flooded the garden overnight. ________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ By autumn, the garden had yielded a rich harvest. _________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Worked in Seattle corporate industry for 15 years--- _________________ --- Moved to Idaho countryside to restart life--- _________________ --- Made a deal with elderly neighbors to tend their garden and share harvest--- _________________ --- The garden calmed my anxious mind and healed me 4. 细节问答 Why did the writer leave Seattle? ：___________________________________ What was wrong with Arnold and Rena’s garden?：_________________________________ What agreement did the writer and the elderly neighbors reach?：________________________________________________ What change did the writer experience while working in the garden?：__________________________________________ What did Arnold comment on the writer and the garden?：_____________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者厌倦城市高压职场生活、婚姻结束，决定乡村重启人生→_________________ →发现年迈邻居的花园无人打理、日渐荒芜→主动帮忙后与邻居达成合作，我打理花园、邻居传授经验、共享收成→_________________ →田园劳作治愈我的焦虑与内耗，内心逐渐平静→（续写）突发洪水重创花园，我和邻居携手补救→（续写）秋日丰收，我彻底与生活和解，收获治愈与新生 6．情感线 empty and restless→___________→peaceful and relaxed→___________→grateful and fulfilled（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 治愈成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: One morning, I arrived to find the creek had flooded the garden overnight. 衔接句1——What damage did the flood cause? How did I and the neighbors deal with it? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: By autumn, the garden had yielded a rich harvest. 衔接句2——What did we gain from the harvest? What realization did I have? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：一天早上，我发现小溪一夜暴涨淹没了花园。 →①洪水损毁作物、花园一片狼藉→②我和两位老人不慌不忙，合力清理修缮→③我们坚守打理，静待作物重新生长； 第二段：到了秋天，花园迎来了丰硕的收成。 →①蔬果繁花丰收，我们共享劳动成果→②我彻底摆脱城市焦虑，内心丰盈平和→③领悟朴素劳作治愈人生，平凡自有力量。 四.段落续写 One morning, I arrived to find the creek had flooded the garden overnight. ________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ By autumn, the garden had yielded a rich harvest. _________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（厌倦城市浮华、在田园劳作中治愈自我的都市人）；Arnold & Rena（年迈善良、擅长园艺、温暖治愈的乡村老人） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 Worked in Seattle corporate industry for 15 years--- Felt empty and suffered broken marriage--- Moved to Idaho countryside to restart life--- Met elderly neighbors with a neglected garden--- Made a deal with elderly neighbors to tend their garden and share harvest--- Worked in the garden and felt inner peace--- The garden calmed my anxious mind and healed me 4. 细节问答 Why did the writer leave Seattle? ：High-end corporate life left him empty, and his marriage ended, so he wanted a new life. What was wrong with Arnold and Rena’s garden?：The garden was overgrown with weeds and partly untended due to the couple’s old age. What agreement did the writer and the elderly neighbors reach?：The writer tended the garden while the couple taught him gardening skills, and they shared the harvest together. What change did the writer experience while working in the garden?：The writer’s inner anxiety and pressure faded away, and he regained peace of mind. What did Arnold comment on the writer and the garden?：Arnold said the garden and the writer needed each other. What does the story tell us?：Simple labor and closeness to nature can heal inner restlessness and bring true peace and fulfillment. 5．情节线 作者厌倦城市高压职场生活、婚姻结束，决定乡村重启人生→迁居爱达荷乡村，结识年迈邻居→发现年迈邻居的花园无人打理、日渐荒芜→主动帮忙后与邻居达成合作，我打理花园、邻居传授经验、共享收成→深耕田园劳作，慢慢感受自然美好→田园劳作治愈我的焦虑与内耗，内心逐渐平静→（续写）突发洪水重创花园，我和邻居携手补救、耐心修护→（续写）秋日丰收，我彻底与生活和解，收获治愈与新生 6．情感线 empty and restless→hopeful and relieved→peaceful and relaxed→shocked but determined→grateful and fulfilled（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：主人公厌倦空洞的城市职场生活，移居乡村后帮年迈邻居打理花园，在田园劳作中抚平内心焦虑，即便遭遇洪水灾害，依旧坚持修护，最终收获丰收与内心的丰盈安宁。 英文：Feeling empty with urban career life, the writer moved to the countryside, tended an elderly couple’s garden and gained inner peace. Though the garden was flooded, they repaired it together and finally got a fruitful harvest, obtaining true healing from simple rural life. 8. 句式 状语从句：When I stayed in the garden working hard every day, I gradually got rid of my anxiety. 非谓语动词：I stood in the garden, staring at the messy field caused by the flood. 定语从句：The garden that I took good care of brought me endless peace and warmth. 并列句：I cleared the weeds, drained the water and replanted the damaged seedlings patiently. 9. 本文主题 治愈成长类：远离浮华、扎根生活，朴素的劳作与自然的力量能够治愈内心荒芜，平凡日常亦能丰盈人生。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: One morning, I arrived to find the creek had flooded the garden overnight. 衔接句1：The flood destroyed many crops and made the garden a mess. I worked together with Arnold and Rena to clean and repair the garden actively. Paragraph 2: By autumn, the garden had yielded a rich harvest. 衔接句2：We shared the sweet harvest happily, and I realized that simple labor and kindness brought me true happiness and inner peace. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：一天早上，我发现小溪一夜暴涨淹没了花园。 →①洪水损毁作物、花园一片狼藉，我满心惋惜→②我和两位老人不慌不忙，合力排水、清理、补种→③我们悉心照料残留植株，不放弃耕耘； 第二段：到了秋天，花园迎来了丰硕的收成。 →①蔬果饱满、鲜花盛放，收获满满→②我们共享劳动果实，相处温暖融洽→③我彻底治愈内心空洞，读懂平凡生活的真谛。 四.段落续写（标准范文，150词左右） One morning, I arrived to find the creek had flooded the garden overnight. The entire field was soaked, with tender seedlings washed away and ripe tomatoes lying in the muddy water. Fearing the elderly couple would feel upset, I hurried to their house. Surprisingly, they were calm and optimistic. Without hesitation, we teamed up to fix the garden. I drained the stagnant water and cleared the mud, while Arnold and Rena instructed me to replant sturdy seedlings. We spent the whole day restoring the garden bit by bit. By autumn, the garden had yielded a rich harvest. Rows of corn stood tall, and bright tomatoes and colorful flowers filled the garden. We shared the abundant harvest together, enjoying the sweet fruits of our joint efforts. Looking at the lively garden and the couple’s warm smiles, I felt unprecedented peace and fulfillment. I finally understood that true happiness never lies in high salary or fancy position, but in simple labor, sincere companionship and the peace of heart from ordinary life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $