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专题03 书面表达背默及训练
Unit1
本单元的主题是“闲暇时间的活动”,要求学生能够运用所学的词汇、语法及句式描述个人在休闲时间的爱好,并探讨放松对生活的重要性。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①休闲活动的类型与内容(如运动、艺术、科技等);②参与活动的体验与感受;③兴趣爱好对个人成长的积极影响。
中考书面表达与此主题相关的命题形式多样,例如在论坛回帖中分享个人爱好、撰写日记记录兴趣培养过程、通过书信向朋友推荐有益的休闲活动等。写作内容通常涵盖以下要点:休闲活动的类型与细节,结合个人经历说明兴趣的起源,强调兴趣爱好对身心健康、技能提升或人际交往的作用等。
1.写作实例
在繁忙的学习生活中,你是如何度过宝贵的空闲时间的呢?有没有哪件事能够让你放松身心,给你带来乐趣和自信呢?请以“One thing I always do in my free time”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己在空闲时间总是做的一件事。
要点:(1)你在空闲时间喜欢做什么事?
(2)你为什么喜欢做这件事?
(3)你从这件事中收获了什么?
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等);4.词数不少于80。
One thing I always do in my free time
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One thing I always do in my free time
Hobbies are like keys to a peaceful mind. They help me balance study and life while I discover hidden talents.
My favourite free-time activity is cycling. I started this activity when I was nine, after receiving a blue bicycle as a gift. At first, I wobbled and fell often, but my father taught me to keep trying. Now, I ride through parks and quiet streets every weekend.It lets me feel the wind on my face and enjoy nature’s beauty. Watching cherry blossoms while cycling in spring always lifts my spirits. I find it fun to explore new routes, and it makes me really happy when I reach the top of a hill after a tough climb. Cycling also helps me stay energetic and focused on school tasks.
This hobby not only keeps me healthy but also teaches me to embrace challenges bravely. Every ride reminds me that effort leads to rewarding views.
随堂训练
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下表是哈尔滨市某中学八年级学生业余活动的调查结果。假设你是李冰,你的英国笔友Mike看了这个调查结果以后想了解你是如何安排你的业余活动的。请你给他写一封回信,介绍你的业余活动, 并告诉他你喜欢该活动的原因。词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
What do you do in your free time?
Doing sports
Reading books
Using electronic products
(电子产品)
Taking art lessons
Others
20%
15%
35%
10%
20%
Dear Mike,
How are you doing? Knowing that you’re interested in my free-time activities, let me tell you about them.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Bing
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Dear Mike,
How are you doing? Knowing that you’re interested in my free-time activities, let me tell you about them.
I like to spend my spare time doing sports. Sports keep me healthy, and they help me feel less stressed. They also make it easier for me to focus in class. After school, I usually play basketball or run in the park. Besides sports, I enjoy reading books in my free time. It’s a good way to relax, and it broadens my horizons. Reading not only makes my language skills better but also improves my thinking ability.
In short, I spend most of my free time doing sports and reading. I think these activities help me grow.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Bing
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请你写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的业余活动,内容需包含:
1. 你最喜欢的业余活动是什么;
2. 你是何时、如何开始这项活动的;
3. 你平时会怎样参与这项活动;
4. 你喜欢它的原因(比如帮助放松、锻炼技能等)。
要求:80-100词
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My Favorite Free-Time Activity
My favorite free-time activity is reading. I started it when I was 10 years old. My mom bought me a storybook about animals and introduced reading to me, and I soon fell in love with it.
Every day, I choose to read for 30 minutes before bed. On weekends, I often go to the library to borrow new books—they let me explore different worlds. Sometimes, I also take notes to remember interesting parts.
Reading helps me to relax after a busy school day. It also teaches me new words and broadens my horizons. That’s why it’s the best activity for my spare time.
我最喜欢的业余活动是阅读,从10岁起就开始坚持了。当时妈妈给我买了一本关于动物的故事书,带我走进了阅读的世界,我很快就爱上了这项活动。
每天晚上睡前,我都会选择读30分钟书;到了周末,我常去图书馆借新书——这些书能带我探索各种各样不同的世界。有时候,我还会记笔记,把书中有趣的部分记录下来。
忙碌的学校生活结束后,阅读能帮我放松身心;它还能让我认识新单词,开阔我的眼界。这就是为什么阅读是我业余时间里最棒的活动。
Unit2
本单元的主题是“保持健康”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和表达,谈论健康问题、提供建议。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①描述健康问题与身体状况;②针对不适症状给出合理建议;③分析日常生活中的安全隐患,并讨论预防措施。
1.写作实例
假设你是李华,最近有许多人感染了甲型流感病毒 (influenza A virus)。请你根据以下表格中的提示,以“How to prevent the influenza A virus”为题,谈谈我们应该怎样预防甲
型流感病毒。
How to prevent the influenza A virus
wash our hands often
do some sports, such as...
wear masks (口罩)
eat healthy food and drink more water
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数不少于80。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
How to prevent the influenza A virus
Many people have the influenza A virus these days. What should we do to prevent it?
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How to prevent the influenza A virus
Many people have the influenza A virus these days. What should we do to prevent it? It’s important for us to take steps to stay healthy.
First, keep hands clean. Wash them often with soap, especially before eating and after touching public things. Second, wear masks in busy places. They can help stop the virus from spreading. Also, do sports regularly, like walking or playing basketball, to make our bodies strong. Eating healthy food like fruits and vegetables, and drinking more water are good too. Try not to stay close to people who are sick, and avoid crowded places when possible.
In short, small habits make a big difference. Following these tips can protect us and others. Let's take care of ourselves and stay away from the virus.
随堂训练
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假如你是李华,请阅读你朋友Mike发来的邮件,并用英语写一封回信。在回信中至少给出三条切实可行的保护视力的建议(如控制使用电子产品的时间,在运动、饮食等方面养成好习惯)。词数不少于100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
Is everything going well? I’ve been spending a lot of time reading and using electronic devices lately. Now I have become nearsighted. What should I do to protect my eyes and improve my eyesight (视力)? Would you please give me some advice?
All the best,
Mike
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear about your eyesight problem. But don’t worry.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
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Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear about your eyesight problem. But don’t worry. Here are some tips to help you.
First, it’s important to control the time you spend in reading and using electronic devices. Take breaks every 20 minutes. Look at something green or far away to relax your eyes. Second, you can do more outdoor activities. What’s more, you should develop some good habits. Go to bed early and try to sleep for at least 8 hours every night. You should eat more vegetables and fruits. They are good for your health. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes. Lastly, you should have your eyes examined regularly to make sure your eyes stay healthy.
Don’t worry! Stick to these habits, and your eyes will surely feel more comfortable day by day. Take care of yourself!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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请围绕“日常如何保持健康与安全”写一篇短文,内容需包含:
1. 列举2-3个日常中常见的健康/安全风险(如用眼疲劳、厨房意外等);
2. 针对每个风险给出具体的建议(使用本单元的建议表达);
3. 呼吁大家重视日常的健康与安全,学会照顾自己(运用反身代词)。
要求:80-100词
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How to Stay Healthy and Safe in Daily Life
Daily life has small health and safety risks, but we can avoid them with simple steps. First, many teens have eye strain from too much screen time. We should take a 10-minute break every hour to look at distant things and shouldn’t rub our eyes with dirty hands.
Besides, traffic safety matters when going to school. We should walk on the sidewalk and wait for the green light, and shouldn’t run across the road in a hurry. Also, eating too much junk food is bad—we should have a balanced diet with more vegetables and fruit.
Health and safety are not small things. Let’s learn to protect ourselves well and live a happy, healthy life.
日常生活中存在一些潜在的健康和安全隐患,但我们可以通过简单的方法避免它们。首先,很多青少年因为长时间看电子屏幕,会出现眼睛疲劳的问题。我们应该每小时休息10分钟,远眺远处的景物,而且不要用脏手揉眼睛。
此外,上学路上的交通安全也很重要。我们要走人行道、等绿灯,不能匆忙横穿马路。另外,吃太多垃圾食品对身体不好——我们应该保持均衡饮食,多吃蔬菜和水果。
健康与安全绝非小事。让我们学会好好保护自己,过幸福健康的生活。
Unit3
本单元的主题是“情绪管理”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和句式,谈论生活中的不同情绪,向情绪低落的朋友提供建议,或向帮助自己的人表示感谢。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①描述让自己产生某种情绪的具体经历;②分析情绪产生的原因;③以感谢信的形式阐述他人帮助自己应对情绪的具体经历并表达感激之情。
写作实例
假如你是外国语学校的学生李华,在外教Mr. Brown的帮助下,你的性格发生了很大变化,你变得积极开朗,并在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛 (English Opera Competition) 中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信,主要内容包括:
1.对Mr. Brown表示感谢;
2.简述自己的变化;
3.简述Mr. Brown对你的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果;4.邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。
要求:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.须包含所有要点提示,可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;3.信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mr. Brown,
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Dear Mr. Brown,
Thank you so much for helping me become a better person! Your care and encouragement have made a big difference in my life.
I used to be shy and quiet. I was afraid to speak in front of others and hardly made friends. In your classes, you always smiled at me and asked questions to make me talk. When I was too nervous to answer, you said, “It’s okay to make mistakes!”Once, you stayed with me for an hour to prepare for the English Opera Competition, teaching me how to express emotions through voice and gestures. Bit by bit, I gained confidence and started to enjoy speaking English and making friends. Last week, I won first prize in the competition!
None of these would have happened without you. I hope you can come to my home for dinner this weekend. My parents want to thank you too! Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours, Li Hua
随堂训练
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你的好朋友因期中考试临近,正被压力困扰,请你分享一些解压小技巧来帮助他缓解紧张情绪,并鼓励他一起冲刺好成绩。短文内容不得少于80词。
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I know you’re stressed about the coming mid-term exams, but don’t worry. Here’s how you can feel better.
First, make a study plan wisely. Allocate your time to each subject, like 30 minutes to math and 20 minutes to English. You can also write down your plan so that you stay organized. Second, don’t keep worries to yourself. Share with others instead. After all, a problem shared is a problem halved. Lastly, take short breaks. Although exams are important, taking care of yourself is also necessary.
Let’s study together. I’m here to support you so that we can overcome this challenge together.
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请围绕“如何应对负面情绪”写一篇短文,内容需包含:
1. 列举2-3种青少年常见的负面情绪(如stressed、lonely等)及产生的原因;
2. 针对每种情绪给出具体的调节建议(需使用so that引导的目的状语从句);
3. 呼吁大家学会积极管理情绪,保持良好心态。
要求:80-100词
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How to Deal with Negative Feelings
Teens often face negative feelings, and knowing how to handle them is important. First, many of us feel stressed when we have too much homework or exams. We can make a study plan so that we don’t leave work until the last minute and feel overwhelmed.
Second, some may feel lonely when their friends are busy. We can join a club or hobby group so that we can meet new people who share our interests. Sometimes, we might also feel sad about small failures—talking to parents or teachers can help so that we don’t keep the sadness to ourselves.
Negative feelings are normal. Let’s learn to deal with them wisely, and we’ll always stay in a good mood.
青少年常常会遇到负面情绪,而学会如何应对这些情绪十分重要。首先,当作业太多或面临考试时,很多人会感到压力。我们可以制定一份学习计划,这样就不会把任务拖到最后一刻,导致自己不知所措。
其次,当朋友忙碌时,有些人可能会感到孤独。我们可以加入社团或兴趣小组,这样就能认识更多和我们有共同兴趣的新朋友。有时候,我们也会因为小小的失败而难过——和父母或老师聊一聊会很有帮助,这样我们就不用把悲伤藏在心里。
负面情绪是很正常的。让我们学会明智地处理它们,这样就能一直保持好心情。
Unit4
本单元的主题是“自然奇观”,要求学生能够通过列数字、作比较等写作手法,向读者介绍一种自然景观。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①介绍自然奇观的基本信息;②运用数据对比突出其“独特性”;③描述人类与自然奇观的互动;④呼吁敬畏与保护自然。
写作实例
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人,因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示问题:Which places of interest should I visit? How can I get there? What’s it famous for?
要求:1.内容应包含所有提示,可适当发挥;2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;3.100词左右。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
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Dear Mary,
I.m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. I highly recommend visiting Qinghai Lake, one of the most stunning places here.
Located in the northeastern part of Qinghai Province, Qinghai Lake covers an area of over 4,500 square kilometers, making it China’s largest inland saltwater lake. Its deepest point reaches around 26 meters, holding a huge amount of water. You can ride a bike along the 360-kilometer-long lakeside road, taste delicious local yogurt, or take a boat trip to Bird Island. Every year, from April to June, over 100,000 migratory birds, like bar-headed geese and brown-headed gulls, gather there. Taking a high-speed train to Xining and then a bus to the lake is a convenient choice.
I’m sure this place will bring you unforgettable memories. Looking forward to your arrival!
随堂训练
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请根据下面表格中的信息, 以The Niagara Falls为题写一篇100词左右的短文。
Where
northeast of North America
Description
two parts:
Horseshoe Falls: the larger part is in Canada, 56 metres in height, 675 metres in width;
American Falls: the smaller part is in America, over 50 metres in height, more than 300 metres in width
Evaluation
one of the greatest wonders in the world, source of hydroelectric(水力发电的) power
The Niagara Falls
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The Niagara Falls
Located in northeast of North America, the Niagara Falls is one of the most amazing natural wonders in the world. It consists of two main parts: the larger Horseshoe Falls on the Canadian side, which is about 56 metres high and 675 metres wide, and the smaller American Falls in the United States, with a height of over 50 metres and a width of more than 300 metres. Every year, millions of visitors come to see the breathtaking view and powerful flow of the falls.
The Niagara Falls is not only a beautiful sight but also an important source of hydroelectric power. It is truly a magnificent gift from nature.
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请你写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的一处自然奇观,内容需包含:
1. 这处自然奇观的名称及所处位置;
2. 它的2-3个独特特点(需使用形容词/副词的最高级);
3. 它吸引你的原因(可结合其景观、意义等)。
要求:80-100词
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My Favorite Natural Wonder
My favorite natural wonder is the Guilin Scenery in Guangxi, China. It’s famous for its unique limestone peaks and clear Li River, which look like a living painting.
What makes it special? First, the peaks are the most magical I’ve ever seen—they stand tall and strange, with green trees covering their tops. Second, the Li River’s water is the clearest in many places; you can even see small fish swimming under the surface. Third, the sunrise over the peaks is the most peaceful sight, turning the sky soft pink and orange.
I love it because it lets me feel close to nature. Taking a bamboo raft on the river makes me forget all worries. It’s truly a gift from nature.
我最喜欢的自然奇观是中国广西的桂林山水。它以独特的石灰岩山峰和清澈的漓江闻名,景致宛如一幅活的画卷。
它的特别之处在哪里呢?首先,这里的山峰是我见过最神奇的——它们挺拔奇特,山顶覆盖着翠绿的树木。其次,漓江的水在很多地方都格外清澈,你甚至能看到小鱼在水面下游动。再者,山峰之上的日出是最宁静的景象,会将天空染成柔和的粉橙色。
我喜爱桂林山水,因为它能让我感受到与自然的紧密联结。在江上乘坐竹筏,所有烦恼都会烟消云散。它无疑是大自然馈赠的珍宝。
Unit5
本单元的主题是“自然灾害”,要求学生以第一人称叙事,结合过去进行时,生动展现一天中因天气或灾害引发的系列事件。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①以时间为线索,描述从清晨到晚上的具体经历;②运用“while+过去进行时”“when+一般过去时/过去进行时”等结构,衔接事件发展;③融入环境描写和个人感受。
写作实例
2025年5月12日是第17个全国防灾减灾日,结合你所经历的一次自然灾害,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈令你印象深刻的事以及你的感受。
要求:1.词数不少于80;2.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁;3.短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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In my memory, countless days have passed by, but there’s one day I’ll never forget—the day a huge rainstorm unexpectedly hit my hometown, turning everything upside down.
It started early in the morning. When I was cheerfully getting ready for school, dark clouds suddenly covered the sky like a giant black blanket. Thunder rumbled in the distance. Soon, heavy rain poured down. The raindrops were as big as coins.
While I was struggling to walk to school with an umbrella, strong winds, as if they were angry beasts, blew it away in an instant. I got completely wet. Classes were canceled because of the rising flood. I felt so scared that I held my mom's hand tightly, hoping the rainstorm would stop soon.
This day taught me nature’s power and the importance of being prepared. It’s truly a day to remember, one that left a deep mark on my heart.
随堂训练
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假如你是李明,你的城市曾经经历了一场大型自然灾害(如地震、洪水或台风等)。今年是该自然灾害发生三周年,学校想做一个专题活动,提醒人们积极应对自然灾害。请根据以下提示写一篇英语发言稿,讲述那场灾害发生的情况、人们的反应以及你从中学到的经验。
提示:
1.灾害的类型、发生时间及地点;
2.你和家人/朋友的感受及反应;
3.克服困难及灾后情况的描述;
4.从中学到的经验或你的感悟。
注意:
1.短文须包含上述提示信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数不少于80(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
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Hello, I’m Li Ming. Three years ago, a terrible earthquake hit our city.
While I was having a maths class, the ground shook very hard and things around me began to move from side to side. My classmates and I rushed out of the classroom at once. I was so scared that I searched for my teachers and friends everywhere. One of my friends found me. We stayed together and helped each other. Later, volunteers came, and we got out of danger. I broke my left leg in the earthquake. Thanks to the doctors’ treatment in time, I recovered at last. Life slowly went back to normal.
This disaster has taught me that we should always stay calm, face it with courage, and never give up.
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请围绕“自然灾害中的安全防护”写一篇短文,内容需包含:
1. 列举2种青少年常见的自然灾害(如flood、snowstorm);
2. 针对每种灾害,给出具体的安全准备或应对措施;
3. 说明提前做好灾害防护准备的重要性。
要求:80-100词
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How to Stay Safe During Natural Disasters
Natural disasters can happen suddenly, so knowing how to stay safe is key. Two common ones for teens are floods and snowstorms.
For floods, if water starts rising near your home, you should move to higher floors right away. Never walk or drive through deep water—it might hide holes or electric wires. For snowstorms, prepare emergency supplies like bread and hot water before it comes. When going out, wear warm clothes and non-slip shoes to avoid falling on icy roads.
Preparing in advance can save lives. It helps us stay calm instead of panicking when disasters hit. By learning these skills, we can protect ourselves and even help our families stay safe too.
自然灾害可能突然发生,因此掌握安全防护方法至关重要。对青少年而言,两种常见的自然灾害是洪水和暴风雪。
应对洪水时,若家附近水位开始上涨,应立即转移到较高楼层。切勿蹚过或驾车穿过深水区域——水下可能隐藏着坑洞或电线,存在安全隐患。应对暴风雪时,要在灾害来临前准备好面包、热水等应急物资。外出时,需穿戴保暖衣物并穿上防滑鞋,避免在结冰的路面上摔倒。
提前准备能挽救生命。它能帮助我们在灾害来临时保持冷静而非慌乱。通过学习这些防护技能,我们不仅能保护自己,甚至还能帮家人确保安全。
Unit6
本单元的主题是“如何与不同文化背景的人沟通”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇,就如何遵守中国习俗提供一些建议。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①明确指出跨文化沟通中需注意的习俗;②说明关注这些方面的原因;③对比中西习俗差异,强调入乡随俗的重要性。
写作实例
假如你是李华,你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件。请认真阅读下面的邮件,根据邮件的内容用英
语回复。
To:lihua@china.com
From:davidsmith@britain.com Subject: Hangzhou
Dear Li Hua,
I’m going to Hangzhou this summer vacation. But I know very little about Chinese customs. Are there any
customs I should pay attention to when I get to China? Can you tell me something about Chinese customs? I’m looking forward to your reply.
All the best,
David
注意:1.词数80左右;2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名和校名;3.可适当发挥,使全文连贯。
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Dear David,
I’m thrilled to hear that you're planning to visit Hangzhou this summer vacation! I’m sure you'll have an amazing time here.
When in China, there are several customs you should know. First, it’s polite to greet people with a smile and a nod, and shaking hands is also common. When dining, remember not to stick your chopsticks upright in the rice bowl, as it’s associated with funerals. Instead, place them on the chopstick rest. If you’re invited to a Chinese home, it’s a good idea to bring some small gifts, like some fruits or flowers. Besides, during traditional festivals like the Spring Festival, people exchange red envelopes for good luck.
I can’t wait to hear about your adventures in Hangzhou! If you have any other questions, feel free to let me know. Have a safe and enjoyable trip!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
随堂训练
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假设你是中国赴法国的交换生李丹,请你根据下面表格中的内容,描述中国和法国餐桌礼仪的不同之处。
In China
In France
don’t stick your chopsticks into the food
put the bread on the table
start eating after older people
don’t put your elbows on the table
don’t use your chopsticks to hit an empty bowl
don’t eat anything with your hands except bread
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要求:1. 文章须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, I’m Li Dan. Now, I’m having a great time on an exchange program in France.
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Hello, I’m Li Dan. Now, I’m having a great time on an exchange program in France. While eating French food with the local people, I find that French table manners are really different from those in China.
In China, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into the food. It’s polite to start eating after older people. You’re not expected to use your chopsticks to hit an empty bowl. When you aren’t eating, do not wave your chopsticks around.
In France, you should not put your bread on your plate. You are supposed to put it on the table! How strange! It is impolite to put your elbows on the table, but you can put your hands on it. You are not expected to eat anything with your hands except bread. What’s more, do not hold your plate while you are eating.
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请你写一篇短文,分享一次你遇到外国文化习俗时的经历,内容需包含:
1. 经历的场景(如和外国朋友见面、参加跨文化活动);
2. 你遇到的文化差异是什么(如问候方式、礼仪习惯);
3. 当时你的感受(需使用embarrassed/surprised等情感类形容词);
4. 这次经历让你明白的道理(结合“入乡随俗”的理念,需使用so...that或unless引导的从句)。
要求:80-100词
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A Cultural Surprise I Experienced
Last year, my class welcomed an American exchange student named Lily. One weekend, she came to my home for dinner, and I planned a warm welcome with my mom’s homemade dumplings.
When she arrived, Lily stretched out her arms to hug me. I was so embarrassed that I froze for a second—we usually shake hands when meeting friends in China. During dinner, she fumbled with chopsticks and laughed, saying forks were easier for her. I taught her how to hold them gently, and she soon made her first dumpling. Later, she told me hugs are a common greeting in her country to show friendliness.
This experience made me realize we should learn about different cultures’ customs first so that we won’t create awkward moments. It also taught me that “when in Rome, do as the Romans do” helps build better connections.
去年,我们班迎来了一位名叫莉莉的美国交换生。有一个周末,她来我家吃晚饭,我特意准备了妈妈做的家常饺子,想给她一个温暖的欢迎。
莉莉到的时候,伸开双臂想要拥抱我。我尴尬得愣了一下——在中国,我们和朋友见面通常是握手。吃饭时,她笨拙地拿着筷子,笑着说用叉子对她来说更容易。我教她怎么轻轻握住筷子,很快她就成功夹起了第一个饺子。后来她告诉我,在她的国家,拥抱是常见的问候方式,用来表达友好。
这次经历让我意识到,我们应该先了解不同文化的习俗,这样才能避免出现尴尬的时刻。它也让我明白,“入乡随俗”有助于建立更融洽的人际关系。
Unit7
本单元的主题是“文学作品”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇,向读者介绍近期读过的小说。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①介绍书籍的书名、作者、创作背景及社会评价;②概述小说的主要人物、核心情节及关键冲突;③阐述从故事中获得的启示或情感共鸣;④说明推荐该书的理由及个人阅读体验。
写作实例
假定你是李辉,你被邀请参加英语社团组织的读书报告会。请选择一本名著小说,写一篇英文读书报告。
内容包括:1.总体介绍;2.主要情节;3.你的评价。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.报告中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
This is a reading report on
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This is a reading report on Journey to the West. It is a classic Chinese fantasy novel written by Wu Cheng’en. The story follows Tang Sanzang and his three disciples—the Monkey King, Zhu Bajie and Sha Wujing—on their adventure to the Western Paradise for Buddhist scriptures.
The novel tells how they overcome 81 difficulties on the way. For example, the Monkey King uses his magic stick to fight against demons, while Zhu Bajie often makes funny mistakes. The most exciting part is when they reach the Western Paradise after years of hardship.
I love this book because it shows the power of teamwork. Each character has weaknesses, but they help each other grow. Through this book, I better understand the saying “True heroes never give up”, which always encourages me to face challenges bravely. I strongly recommend it to anyone who loves exciting stories with deep meaning.
随堂训练
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书籍是人类进步的阶梯,一本好书能给予我们无尽的启迪与力量。请你选择一本印象最深刻的书,撰写一篇读书报告。
写作要点:
1. What is the book about? (Title, author, and main idea.)
2. What happens in the story? (Main character and key events.)
3. Why do you like it? (What do you learn? Would you recommend it?)
要求:
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数不少于100。
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Not long ago, I finished reading Anne of Green Gables, which was written by the Canadian author Lucy Maud Montgomery. This book mainly focuses on the growth of Anne Shirley, a lively and imaginative orphan.
Anne was sent to Green Gables by accident — Matthew and Marilla, the owners of the farm. They had planned to adopt a boy to help with farm work at first. At the beginning, Marilla felt upset about Anne’s constant daydreaming and silly mistakes, such as dyeing her hair green by chance. However, Anne’s kindness and enthusiasm gradually won them over. She made a close friend named Diana, worked hard at her lessons, and even gave up her chance to go to college to take care of Marilla after Matthew passed away. Finally, she grew into a responsible young woman.
I really love this book because Anne teaches me to find happiness in small things and face difficulties with a positive attitude. I strongly recommend it to all my classmates—it can help us be grateful for the love around us.
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请你写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的一本书,内容需包含:
1. 书籍的名称、作者及所属类型(如fantasy、mystery等);
2. 你何时读完这本书的(需使用现在完成时);
3. 你最喜欢的书中角色及喜欢他/她的原因;
4. 这本书让你学到的道理(结合“成长、勇气”等主题)。
要求:80-100词
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My Favorite Book
My favorite book is Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone by J.K. Rowling, a wonderful fantasy novel that has cast a magic spell on readers worldwide.
I have already finished reading it twice since last summer—once alone and once with my best friend. My favorite character is Harry Potter, the young hero. He is brave and kind: even when facing the evil Voldemort, he never gives up. He also values friendship deeply, always standing up for Hermione and Ron when they are in trouble.
This book teaches me a precious lesson: true courage isn’t the absence of fear, but acting bravely even when scared. It also tells me to treasure friendship, as it’s one of the most powerful “magics” in life. I’ll keep rereading it whenever I need a little courage.
我最爱的书是J.K.罗琳所著的《哈利·波特与魔法石》,这是一部精彩的奇幻小说,让全球读者为之着迷。
自从去年夏天以来,我已经把这本书读了两遍——一次是独自阅读,另一次是和我最好的朋友一起读。我最喜欢的角色是年轻的主人公哈利·波特,他勇敢又善良:即便面对邪恶的伏地魔,也从不放弃。他还非常珍视友谊,每当赫敏和罗恩遇到麻烦时,他总会为他们挺身而出。
这本书教会我一个珍贵的道理:真正的勇气不是没有恐惧,而是即使害怕,也依然勇敢行动。它还告诉我要珍惜友谊,因为友谊是生活中最强大的“魔法”之一。每当我需要一点勇气时,我就会再读一遍这本书。
Unit8
本单元的主题是“志愿服务”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和现在完成时,撰写志愿者申请信。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①明确申请的志愿岗位;②阐述服务动机;③展示相关技能与经验;④表达对于未来服务的决心与期待。
阳光儿童医院计划在暑假招募一批志愿者,服务内容为:帮助医院打扫卫生、照顾生病的小朋友。假如你是第一中学的王凯,请按照要求给该项目的负责人周先生写一封申请信。
内容提示:1.申请成为志愿者; 2.说明自己乐于助人,善于帮助小朋友。
要求:1.申请信需要涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;2.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Zhou,
I’m Wang Kai from No. 1 Middle School.
Yours,
Wang Kai
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Dear Mr. Zhou,
I’m Wang Kai from No. 1 Middle School. I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position at Sunshine Children’s Hospital during the summer holiday. I hope to help with cleaning the hospital and taking care of the sick children.
First, I’ve always been passionate about helping others. Last year, I volunteered at a community center where I organized drawing classes for kids, and I realized how much joy small acts of kindness can bring. I'm good at communicating with children—whether it’s telling stories to cheer them up or helping them with simple activities. Also, I'm patient and responsible when working with young patients.
I’m confident that my enthusiasm and experience can make me a suitable volunteer. Helping others has always been my belief, and I’m eager to make a real difference in these children’s lives.
Yours,
Wang Kai
随堂训练
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假如你是李华,你校正在举办“讲述志愿故事,传递志愿精神”系列活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿,介绍自己的志愿者经历,呼吁大家积极参加志愿活动,共建美好社会。
提示:
1. Why do we do volunteer work?
2. What volunteer work did you do?
3. How did you feel about it?
要求:
1.书写规范,词数100左右;
2.要点齐全,条理清晰,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
Nowadays, many young people volunteer to help people in their free time. ________
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Nowadays, many young people volunteer to help people in their free time. Volunteer work is of great importance. It can not only help those in need but also bring us happiness.
I have been a volunteer for two years. My duty is to visit the elderly in the nursing home once a week. We have been to five nursing homes and helped more than 200 old people so far. We often helped them clean rooms, chatted with them and even taught them how to use a mobile phone. Seeing the big smiles on their faces, I felt our work was worth the effort.
From this experience, I realize that even small actions can make a difference to others’ lives. Just as the saying goes, “Today you, tomorrow me.” We want to do even more, but we can’t do it all alone. Will you join us as a volunteer? Let’s give a hand together!
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请你写一篇短文分享你在养老院的志愿服务经历,内容需包含:
1. 你何时开始在养老院做志愿者(用since或for体现持续时长);
2. 你在养老院常做的2-3件事(如陪老人聊天、教老人用手机等);
3. 这段志愿经历让你明白的道理(结合“关爱老人”的主题)。
要求:80-100词,合理运用本单元的志愿服务词汇、现在完成时(since/for)语法。
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My Volunteer Experience at a Nursing Home
I have been a volunteer at the nearby nursing home since last September. Every Sunday morning, I go there to spend two hours with the elderly.
What I do most often is chat with them—they love talking about their past lives, like how they raised their kids or played games when they were young. Sometimes, I read newspapers aloud for those with poor eyesight. I also teach them simple phone skills, such as making video calls to their grandchildren. At first, I was a little nervous, but now we’re like family.
This experience taught me that the elderly need more than just food and a place to live—they need companionship. Volunteering here makes my weekends more meaningful, and I’ve learned to be more patient and caring. It’s not just a “task” but a way to send warmth to those who need it most.
自从去年九月起,我就成了附近养老院的一名志愿者。每周日上午,我都会去那里,和老人们共度两小时时光。
我最常做的事就是陪他们聊天——老人们很喜欢讲自己过去的生活,比如他们当年是怎么抚养孩子的,或是年轻时玩过哪些游戏。有时候,我会给视力不好的老人大声读报纸;我还会教他们一些简单的手机操作技巧,比如给孙辈打视频电话。一开始我还有点紧张,但现在我们相处得就像一家人一样。
这段经历让我明白,老人需要的不只是食物和住处——他们更需要陪伴。在这里做志愿让我的周末变得更有意义,我也学会了更有耐心、更体贴他人。这不仅仅是一项“任务”,更是一种给最需要温暖的人传递温情的方式。
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专题03 书面表达背默及训练
Unit1
本单元的主题是“闲暇时间的活动”,要求学生能够运用所学的词汇、语法及句式描述个人在休闲时间的爱好,并探讨放松对生活的重要性。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①休闲活动的类型与内容(如运动、艺术、科技等);②参与活动的体验与感受;③兴趣爱好对个人成长的积极影响。
中考书面表达与此主题相关的命题形式多样,例如在论坛回帖中分享个人爱好、撰写日记记录兴趣培养过程、通过书信向朋友推荐有益的休闲活动等。写作内容通常涵盖以下要点:休闲活动的类型与细节,结合个人经历说明兴趣的起源,强调兴趣爱好对身心健康、技能提升或人际交往的作用等。
1.写作实例
在繁忙的学习生活中,你是如何度过宝贵的空闲时间的呢?有没有哪件事能够让你放松身心,给你带来乐趣和自信呢?请以“One thing I always do in my free time”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己在空闲时间总是做的一件事。
要点:(1)你在空闲时间喜欢做什么事?
(2)你为什么喜欢做这件事?
(3)你从这件事中收获了什么?
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名、地名等);4.词数不少于80。
One thing I always do in my free time
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One thing I always do in my free time
Hobbies are like keys to a peaceful mind. They help me balance study and life while I discover hidden talents.
My favourite free-time activity is cycling. I started this activity when I was nine, after receiving a blue bicycle as a gift. At first, I wobbled and fell often, but my father taught me to keep trying. Now, I ride through parks and quiet streets every weekend.It lets me feel the wind on my face and enjoy nature’s beauty. Watching cherry blossoms while cycling in spring always lifts my spirits. I find it fun to explore new routes, and it makes me really happy when I reach the top of a hill after a tough climb. Cycling also helps me stay energetic and focused on school tasks.
This hobby not only keeps me healthy but also teaches me to embrace challenges bravely. Every ride reminds me that effort leads to rewarding views.
随堂训练
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下表是哈尔滨市某中学八年级学生业余活动的调查结果。假设你是李冰,你的英国笔友Mike看了这个调查结果以后想了解你是如何安排你的业余活动的。请你给他写一封回信,介绍你的业余活动, 并告诉他你喜欢该活动的原因。词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
What do you do in your free time?
Doing sports
Reading books
Using electronic products
(电子产品)
Taking art lessons
Others
20%
15%
35%
10%
20%
Dear Mike,
How are you doing? Knowing that you’re interested in my free-time activities, let me tell you about them.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Bing
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请你写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的业余活动,内容需包含:
1. 你最喜欢的业余活动是什么;
2. 你是何时、如何开始这项活动的;
3. 你平时会怎样参与这项活动;
4. 你喜欢它的原因(比如帮助放松、锻炼技能等)。
要求:80-100词
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Unit2
本单元的主题是“保持健康”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和表达,谈论健康问题、提供建议。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①描述健康问题与身体状况;②针对不适症状给出合理建议;③分析日常生活中的安全隐患,并讨论预防措施。
1.写作实例
假设你是李华,最近有许多人感染了甲型流感病毒 (influenza A virus)。请你根据以下表格中的提示,以“How to prevent the influenza A virus”为题,谈谈我们应该怎样预防甲
型流感病毒。
How to prevent the influenza A virus
wash our hands often
do some sports, such as...
wear masks (口罩)
eat healthy food and drink more water
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数不少于80。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
How to prevent the influenza A virus
Many people have the influenza A virus these days. What should we do to prevent it?
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How to prevent the influenza A virus
Many people have the influenza A virus these days. What should we do to prevent it? It’s important for us to take steps to stay healthy.
First, keep hands clean. Wash them often with soap, especially before eating and after touching public things. Second, wear masks in busy places. They can help stop the virus from spreading. Also, do sports regularly, like walking or playing basketball, to make our bodies strong. Eating healthy food like fruits and vegetables, and drinking more water are good too. Try not to stay close to people who are sick, and avoid crowded places when possible.
In short, small habits make a big difference. Following these tips can protect us and others. Let's take care of ourselves and stay away from the virus.
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假如你是李华,请阅读你朋友Mike发来的邮件,并用英语写一封回信。在回信中至少给出三条切实可行的保护视力的建议(如控制使用电子产品的时间,在运动、饮食等方面养成好习惯)。词数不少于100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
Is everything going well? I’ve been spending a lot of time reading and using electronic devices lately. Now I have become nearsighted. What should I do to protect my eyes and improve my eyesight (视力)? Would you please give me some advice?
All the best,
Mike
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear about your eyesight problem. But don’t worry.
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Li Hua
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请围绕“日常如何保持健康与安全”写一篇短文,内容需包含:
1. 列举2-3个日常中常见的健康/安全风险(如用眼疲劳、厨房意外等);
2. 针对每个风险给出具体的建议(使用本单元的建议表达);
3. 呼吁大家重视日常的健康与安全,学会照顾自己(运用反身代词)。
要求:80-100词
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Unit3
本单元的主题是“情绪管理”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和句式,谈论生活中的不同情绪,向情绪低落的朋友提供建议,或向帮助自己的人表示感谢。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①描述让自己产生某种情绪的具体经历;②分析情绪产生的原因;③以感谢信的形式阐述他人帮助自己应对情绪的具体经历并表达感激之情。
写作实例
假如你是外国语学校的学生李华,在外教Mr. Brown的帮助下,你的性格发生了很大变化,你变得积极开朗,并在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛 (English Opera Competition) 中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信,主要内容包括:
1.对Mr. Brown表示感谢;
2.简述自己的变化;
3.简述Mr. Brown对你的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果;4.邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。
要求:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);2.须包含所有要点提示,可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;3.信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mr. Brown,
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Dear Mr. Brown,
Thank you so much for helping me become a better person! Your care and encouragement have made a big difference in my life.
I used to be shy and quiet. I was afraid to speak in front of others and hardly made friends. In your classes, you always smiled at me and asked questions to make me talk. When I was too nervous to answer, you said, “It’s okay to make mistakes!”Once, you stayed with me for an hour to prepare for the English Opera Competition, teaching me how to express emotions through voice and gestures. Bit by bit, I gained confidence and started to enjoy speaking English and making friends. Last week, I won first prize in the competition!
None of these would have happened without you. I hope you can come to my home for dinner this weekend. My parents want to thank you too! Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours, Li Hua
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你的好朋友因期中考试临近,正被压力困扰,请你分享一些解压小技巧来帮助他缓解紧张情绪,并鼓励他一起冲刺好成绩。短文内容不得少于80词。
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请围绕“如何应对负面情绪”写一篇短文,内容需包含:
1. 列举2-3种青少年常见的负面情绪(如stressed、lonely等)及产生的原因;
2. 针对每种情绪给出具体的调节建议(需使用so that引导的目的状语从句);
3. 呼吁大家学会积极管理情绪,保持良好心态。
要求:80-100词
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Unit4
本单元的主题是“自然奇观”,要求学生能够通过列数字、作比较等写作手法,向读者介绍一种自然景观。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①介绍自然奇观的基本信息;②运用数据对比突出其“独特性”;③描述人类与自然奇观的互动;④呼吁敬畏与保护自然。
写作实例
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人,因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示问题:Which places of interest should I visit? How can I get there? What’s it famous for?
要求:1.内容应包含所有提示,可适当发挥;2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;3.100词左右。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
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Dear Mary,
I.m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. I highly recommend visiting Qinghai Lake, one of the most stunning places here.
Located in the northeastern part of Qinghai Province, Qinghai Lake covers an area of over 4,500 square kilometers, making it China’s largest inland saltwater lake. Its deepest point reaches around 26 meters, holding a huge amount of water. You can ride a bike along the 360-kilometer-long lakeside road, taste delicious local yogurt, or take a boat trip to Bird Island. Every year, from April to June, over 100,000 migratory birds, like bar-headed geese and brown-headed gulls, gather there. Taking a high-speed train to Xining and then a bus to the lake is a convenient choice.
I’m sure this place will bring you unforgettable memories. Looking forward to your arrival!
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请根据下面表格中的信息, 以The Niagara Falls为题写一篇100词左右的短文。
Where
northeast of North America
Description
two parts:
Horseshoe Falls: the larger part is in Canada, 56 metres in height, 675 metres in width;
American Falls: the smaller part is in America, over 50 metres in height, more than 300 metres in width
Evaluation
one of the greatest wonders in the world, source of hydroelectric(水力发电的) power
The Niagara Falls
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请你写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的一处自然奇观,内容需包含:
1. 这处自然奇观的名称及所处位置;
2. 它的2-3个独特特点(需使用形容词/副词的最高级);
3. 它吸引你的原因(可结合其景观、意义等)。
要求:80-100词
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Unit5
本单元的主题是“自然灾害”,要求学生以第一人称叙事,结合过去进行时,生动展现一天中因天气或灾害引发的系列事件。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①以时间为线索,描述从清晨到晚上的具体经历;②运用“while+过去进行时”“when+一般过去时/过去进行时”等结构,衔接事件发展;③融入环境描写和个人感受。
写作实例
2025年5月12日是第17个全国防灾减灾日,结合你所经历的一次自然灾害,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈令你印象深刻的事以及你的感受。
要求:1.词数不少于80;2.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁;3.短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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In my memory, countless days have passed by, but there’s one day I’ll never forget—the day a huge rainstorm unexpectedly hit my hometown, turning everything upside down.
It started early in the morning. When I was cheerfully getting ready for school, dark clouds suddenly covered the sky like a giant black blanket. Thunder rumbled in the distance. Soon, heavy rain poured down. The raindrops were as big as coins.
While I was struggling to walk to school with an umbrella, strong winds, as if they were angry beasts, blew it away in an instant. I got completely wet. Classes were canceled because of the rising flood. I felt so scared that I held my mom's hand tightly, hoping the rainstorm would stop soon.
This day taught me nature’s power and the importance of being prepared. It’s truly a day to remember, one that left a deep mark on my heart.
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假如你是李明,你的城市曾经经历了一场大型自然灾害(如地震、洪水或台风等)。今年是该自然灾害发生三周年,学校想做一个专题活动,提醒人们积极应对自然灾害。请根据以下提示写一篇英语发言稿,讲述那场灾害发生的情况、人们的反应以及你从中学到的经验。
提示:
1.灾害的类型、发生时间及地点;
2.你和家人/朋友的感受及反应;
3.克服困难及灾后情况的描述;
4.从中学到的经验或你的感悟。
注意:
1.短文须包含上述提示信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数不少于80(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
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请围绕“自然灾害中的安全防护”写一篇短文,内容需包含:
1. 列举2种青少年常见的自然灾害(如flood、snowstorm);
2. 针对每种灾害,给出具体的安全准备或应对措施;
3. 说明提前做好灾害防护准备的重要性。
要求:80-100词
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Unit6
本单元的主题是“如何与不同文化背景的人沟通”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇,就如何遵守中国习俗提供一些建议。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①明确指出跨文化沟通中需注意的习俗;②说明关注这些方面的原因;③对比中西习俗差异,强调入乡随俗的重要性。
写作实例
假如你是李华,你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件。请认真阅读下面的邮件,根据邮件的内容用英
语回复。
To:lihua@china.com
From:davidsmith@britain.com Subject: Hangzhou
Dear Li Hua,
I’m going to Hangzhou this summer vacation. But I know very little about Chinese customs. Are there any
customs I should pay attention to when I get to China? Can you tell me something about Chinese customs? I’m looking forward to your reply.
All the best,
David
注意:1.词数80左右;2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名和校名;3.可适当发挥,使全文连贯。
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Dear David,
I’m thrilled to hear that you're planning to visit Hangzhou this summer vacation! I’m sure you'll have an amazing time here.
When in China, there are several customs you should know. First, it’s polite to greet people with a smile and a nod, and shaking hands is also common. When dining, remember not to stick your chopsticks upright in the rice bowl, as it’s associated with funerals. Instead, place them on the chopstick rest. If you’re invited to a Chinese home, it’s a good idea to bring some small gifts, like some fruits or flowers. Besides, during traditional festivals like the Spring Festival, people exchange red envelopes for good luck.
I can’t wait to hear about your adventures in Hangzhou! If you have any other questions, feel free to let me know. Have a safe and enjoyable trip!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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假设你是中国赴法国的交换生李丹,请你根据下面表格中的内容,描述中国和法国餐桌礼仪的不同之处。
In China
In France
don’t stick your chopsticks into the food
put the bread on the table
start eating after older people
don’t put your elbows on the table
don’t use your chopsticks to hit an empty bowl
don’t eat anything with your hands except bread
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要求:1. 文章须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, I’m Li Dan. Now, I’m having a great time on an exchange program in France.
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请你写一篇短文,分享一次你遇到外国文化习俗时的经历,内容需包含:
1. 经历的场景(如和外国朋友见面、参加跨文化活动);
2. 你遇到的文化差异是什么(如问候方式、礼仪习惯);
3. 当时你的感受(需使用embarrassed/surprised等情感类形容词);
4. 这次经历让你明白的道理(结合“入乡随俗”的理念,需使用so...that或unless引导的从句)。
要求:80-100词
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Unit7
本单元的主题是“文学作品”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇,向读者介绍近期读过的小说。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①介绍书籍的书名、作者、创作背景及社会评价;②概述小说的主要人物、核心情节及关键冲突;③阐述从故事中获得的启示或情感共鸣;④说明推荐该书的理由及个人阅读体验。
写作实例
假定你是李辉,你被邀请参加英语社团组织的读书报告会。请选择一本名著小说,写一篇英文读书报告。
内容包括:1.总体介绍;2.主要情节;3.你的评价。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.报告中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
This is a reading report on
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This is a reading report on Journey to the West. It is a classic Chinese fantasy novel written by Wu Cheng’en. The story follows Tang Sanzang and his three disciples—the Monkey King, Zhu Bajie and Sha Wujing—on their adventure to the Western Paradise for Buddhist scriptures.
The novel tells how they overcome 81 difficulties on the way. For example, the Monkey King uses his magic stick to fight against demons, while Zhu Bajie often makes funny mistakes. The most exciting part is when they reach the Western Paradise after years of hardship.
I love this book because it shows the power of teamwork. Each character has weaknesses, but they help each other grow. Through this book, I better understand the saying “True heroes never give up”, which always encourages me to face challenges bravely. I strongly recommend it to anyone who loves exciting stories with deep meaning.
随堂训练
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书籍是人类进步的阶梯,一本好书能给予我们无尽的启迪与力量。请你选择一本印象最深刻的书,撰写一篇读书报告。
写作要点:
1. What is the book about? (Title, author, and main idea.)
2. What happens in the story? (Main character and key events.)
3. Why do you like it? (What do you learn? Would you recommend it?)
要求:
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数不少于100。
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请你写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的一本书,内容需包含:
1. 书籍的名称、作者及所属类型(如fantasy、mystery等);
2. 你何时读完这本书的(需使用现在完成时);
3. 你最喜欢的书中角色及喜欢他/她的原因;
4. 这本书让你学到的道理(结合“成长、勇气”等主题)。
要求:80-100词
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Unit8
本单元的主题是“志愿服务”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇和现在完成时,撰写志愿者申请信。与此相关的主要写作维度有:①明确申请的志愿岗位;②阐述服务动机;③展示相关技能与经验;④表达对于未来服务的决心与期待。
阳光儿童医院计划在暑假招募一批志愿者,服务内容为:帮助医院打扫卫生、照顾生病的小朋友。假如你是第一中学的王凯,请按照要求给该项目的负责人周先生写一封申请信。
内容提示:1.申请成为志愿者; 2.说明自己乐于助人,善于帮助小朋友。
要求:1.申请信需要涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;2.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Zhou,
I’m Wang Kai from No. 1 Middle School.
Yours,
Wang Kai
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Dear Mr. Zhou,
I’m Wang Kai from No. 1 Middle School. I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position at Sunshine Children’s Hospital during the summer holiday. I hope to help with cleaning the hospital and taking care of the sick children.
First, I’ve always been passionate about helping others. Last year, I volunteered at a community center where I organized drawing classes for kids, and I realized how much joy small acts of kindness can bring. I'm good at communicating with children—whether it’s telling stories to cheer them up or helping them with simple activities. Also, I'm patient and responsible when working with young patients.
I’m confident that my enthusiasm and experience can make me a suitable volunteer. Helping others has always been my belief, and I’m eager to make a real difference in these children’s lives.
Yours,
Wang Kai
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假如你是李华,你校正在举办“讲述志愿故事,传递志愿精神”系列活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿,介绍自己的志愿者经历,呼吁大家积极参加志愿活动,共建美好社会。
提示:
1. Why do we do volunteer work?
2. What volunteer work did you do?
3. How did you feel about it?
要求:
1.书写规范,词数100左右;
2.要点齐全,条理清晰,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
Nowadays, many young people volunteer to help people in their free time. ________
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请你写一篇短文分享你在养老院的志愿服务经历,内容需包含:
1. 你何时开始在养老院做志愿者(用since或for体现持续时长);
2. 你在养老院常做的2-3件事(如陪老人聊天、教老人用手机等);
3. 这段志愿经历让你明白的道理(结合“关爱老人”的主题)。
要求:80-100词,合理运用本单元的志愿服务词汇、现在完成时(since/for)语法。
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