2026年北京市朝阳区九年级英语一模写作范文

2026年北京市朝阳区九年级英语一模写作范文

 

书面表达题目：

在学习和生活中，我们总会通过某些经历发现自己的进步。某英文网站在开展以“Better Me”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次让你变得更好的经历，以及你从中收获。

提示词语:

       worried, work harder, keep trying, success

提示信息:

       Describe your experience of improving yourself.

       What have you learned from the experience?

注意：

       词数50个左右；

       开头已给出，不计入总词数。

I’d like to share my experience of improving myself.____________________

___________________________________________________________________________

 

  写作范文  

 

(1)   范文 1

I’d like to share my experience of improving myself. Last term, I was worried about my math grades because I always made careless mistakes.

So I decided to work harder and made a study plan which helped me practice every day.

Although I met many difficulties, I kept trying until I got better results. From this experience, I learned that success comes from hard work and persistence. Now I believe I can solve any problem as long as I never give up.

【好词汇】

       be worried about - 对……感到担心 

       make careless mistakes - 犯粗心的错误 

       decide to do sth. - 决定做某事 

       make a study plan - 制定学习计划 

       practice every day - 每天练习 

       keep trying - 不断尝试 

       as long as - 只要 

       give up - 放弃 

【写作句子结构】

1. I was worried about... because... 

       翻译: 我因为……而对……感到担心 

       例句: I was worried about my English because I couldn’t remember new words. 

       例句翻译: 我因为记不住新单词而对英语感到担心。

2. Although + 句子1, 主语 + kept trying until + 句子2 

       翻译: 虽然……，但主语一直努力直到…… 

       例句: Although the running was tiring, I kept trying until I reached the finish line. 

       例句翻译: 虽然跑步很累，但我一直努力直到到达终点线。

3. From this experience, I learned that + 句子 

       翻译: 从这次经历中，我学到了…… 

       例句: From this experience, I learned that practice makes perfect. 

       例句翻译: 从这次经历中，我学到了熟能生巧。

4. Now I believe + 宾语从句 + as long as + 条件状语从句 

       翻译: 现在我相信……，只要…… 

       例句: Now I believe I can improve myself as long as I keep trying. 

       例句翻译: 现在我只要不断尝试，就能让自己变得更好。

【范文翻译】

我想分享我提升自己的经历。上学期，我担心自己的数学成绩，因为我总是犯粗心的错误。所以我决定更加努力，并制定了一个学习计划，这个计划帮助我每天练习。 

虽然我遇到了很多困难，但我一直努力直到取得了更好的成绩。从这次经历中，我学到了成功来自努力和坚持。现在我相信，只要永不放弃，我就能解决任何问题。

 

(2)   范文 2

I’d like to share my experience of improving myself. When I first joined