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英 语
八年级下册 WY
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Unit 6Living with nature
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.沙漠 ________
2.环境 _____________
3.雨量 __________
4.短缺;不足;缺乏 __________
desert
environment
rainfall
shortage
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5.作为……而闻名 ____________________
be known/famous as
【解析】知识拓展
be known/famous for 意为“因……而出名”。
6.在特定的时间 __________________
7.像……一样…… _____________
8.扮演一个重要的角色 ________________________
at certain times
as... as...
play an important role
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】We have a very close relationship with nature.
(have a relationship with…)
→仿写:农民与自然有着密切的关系,因为他们依靠天气和季节来种植庄稼。
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Farmers have a close relationship with nature because they depend on
weather and seasons for growing crops.
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10.【教材原句】This is one of the best memories of my childhood.(one of)
→仿写:长江是世界上最长的河流之一。
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The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world.
【解析】链接狂K
“one of the/one’s+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”结构的详细讲解见狂K重点
P29。
11.【教材原句】That’s nearly as long as the Yellow River! (as… as…)
→仿写:湖像镜子一样清澈,倒映出大自然的美丽景色。
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The lake is as clear as a mirror, reflecting the beautiful scenery of
nature.
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12.【教材原句】Now, more and more young people are taking action to protect
it.(take action)
→仿写:是时候让每个人都采取行动减少污染了。
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It’s time to let everyone take action to reduce pollution.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Nature is the cradle of life, providing us with everything we need.
(开篇点题,强调自然的重要性)
However(However表转折,引出下文), human activities like cutting down
trees are severely damaging it.
To protect nature, we should start with small acts. Reduce waste by
recycling and reusing. Save energy by turning off lights when they are not in use.
Plant more trees to improve the environment.(用祈使句列举措施)
Only when we all take action, can we preserve nature’s beauty and ensure
a sustainable future for generations to come (段尾进行总结,升华主题).
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
随着全球气候变化的加剧,极端天气事件频发,给农业生产带来了巨大挑战。
为了保障粮食安全和稳定供应,科学家和农民们一直在探索新的农业技术。其中,
温室(greenhouse)技术作为一种能够控制作物生长环境的方法,已经显示出其巨
大的潜力和价值。请结合提示,介绍温室技术。
What an idea of changing the environment;
How protect plants from bad weather and pests;
provide a warm environment for plants;
ensure a food supply
Hope …
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要求:1.词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
第一步 审
体裁:说明文
时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:第三人称介绍
内容要点:介绍温室技术
写作结构:总——分——总
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第二步 列
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The greenhouse is an idea of changing the
environment. It can be found in many places, like
farms and gardens. People started using greenhouses
a long time ago to grow plants in a controlled
environment.
Some amazing facts about greenhouses are that
they can protect plants from ① bad weather and pests.
The glass or plastic cover traps heat, creating a
warm and suitable space for plants. This way,
farmers can grow crops better. ________________________________
①“protect… from…”这一
短语简洁明了地表达了温
室的保护功能,是描述防
护关系的常用且有效的表
达;
②结尾用 As technology
develops自然过渡到温室
技术的未来,结构完整。
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Greenhouses are very important as they ensure a
stable food supply.As technology develops ② , people
will surely keep using and improving ③ this useful
idea. ③用keep using and
improving 体现对温室技
术的未来展望。
这篇文章运用了“总——分——总”的“三段式”写作结构,要点齐全,语言流畅,
全面介绍了温室技术的相关知识。文中a long time ago、“protect… from…”、As
technology develops等表明了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些短语也是文中
的亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
水是生命之源,我们要保护好家乡的河流。学校英文网站将开展题为
“Protecting Rivers Around Us”的征文活动,请结合下列提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:1.Why should we protect the rivers?
2.What can we do to protect them?
注意事项:1.词数90左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Protecting Rivers Around Us
Rivers are very important to us.____
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【参考范文】
Protecting Rivers Around Us
Rivers are very important to us.They provide clean water for us, so
it’s our duty to protect them wisely.However, many rivers have been
seriously polluted.To solve the problem, some actions must be taken.
First, we should stop people from throwing litter into the
rivers.Second, some laws should be made to prevent factories from
pouring dirty water into the rivers.Last, it’s necessary to plant more
trees on both sides of the rivers because trees can keep soil in place
during storms.
The rivers play an important role in our daily life.They will be
more beautiful if we protect them well.
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