Unit 4 Period 4 Writing-【新课程能力培养】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第一册学习手册（人教版）

高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版） Period 4 写作点拨 如何写好关注信 关注信(letter of concern)属于应用文的 范畴。关注信是作者就某一个问题或一些现 象，表达自己的关心，并提出自己的一些看法 和解决办法的文体。 一、基本结构 开头：简单介绍写信的缘由。 主体：针对对方问题（如生病等）进行有 针对性的鼓励和安慰，并适当提出自己的建 议。注意语气一定要委婉，能体现出自己对 对方的关切之情。 结尾：简单的希望或祝福。 二、增分佳句 1.开头常用句式 DI'm shocked/awfully sorry to hear that... 2It was a great shock to hear that... 3It broke my heart to hear that... 4I just can't tell you how sad I was when I heard that... 5I can't tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that... 6I am writing to express my deep sympa- thy/care for you. 2.主体常用句式 DI understand how you feel now. 2I know the way you feel very well. 3You'll always have a support in me. 4It's true that attitude decides everything. 68)学 Writing So you should never give up no matter what hap- pens. 5Please let me/us know if there is any- thing I/we can do. 6If I can be of any help,please don't hesi- tate to let me know. 3.结尾常用句式 DI'm looking forward to... 2I hope our caring will help to comfort you. 3I hope that time will take away the sor- row of your recent loss. 4 Remember that my heart and my thoughts are with you. 典例赏析 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文 报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设 你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为 Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了 自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习 和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一 封回信。 内容要点如下： 1.表示理解并给予安慰； 2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.信的开头与结尾已写好，但不计入总 词数。 参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪 Hi Worried, I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. Yours, Jamie 参考范文 Hi Worried, I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.Actually,everyone will have one of those periods when everything seems to be going wrong.Therefore,it is unnec- essary to be worried.You should learn self-con- trol,which can help avoid saying and doing something that you'll regret.The following are three suggestions. To begin with,sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers is a good choice as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so.Another effective suggestion is that you should take more physical exercise,which can lift your spirits.Last but not least,keep an opti- mistic attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you. I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.May you get rid of your trouble soon. Yours, Jamie UNIT 4 BODY LANGUAGE 词句品鉴 Dactually,therefore,to begin with,last but not least的使用使文章更加连贯，过渡自然 有力。 ②t作形式主语代替真正的主语一不 定式。 ③动名词作主语，体现了作者扎实的语 言功底。 ④祈使句+and+陈述句，并含有省略了 that/which的定语从句，丰富了句式。 ⑤be of benefit运用贴切。 名师点评 全文结构严谨，语言运用富于变化，层次 分明，错落有致，内容充实，建议诚恳。 写作模板 Dear I am writing to express my deep sympathy/ care for you.You have asked me for my advice with regard to (再述对方来信 的诉求)，and I will try to make some sugges- tions here In my humble opinion,you would be wise to take the following action: (建 议的内容).Asto I suggest (需要具体到某一方面).In addi- tion, (其他的建议).I'm sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行 动的信心和决心). I hope (表达愿望) Yours sincerely, 学 (69 高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版） 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落 开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。 We have a pit bull(比特犬).We found him a few weeks ago,walking along the road in a rural area.He jumping on cars,we thought maybe his family was camping somewhere near- by,so we passed him by.A few hours later,on our return trip,he was still in the same place,a- gain,trying to get folks to stop for him.When he saw us,he laid down in the middle of the road,so we were unable to get around him. We stopped the car and looked around for a few minutes,trying to figure out if anyone was around from whom he was separated.It didn't appear so.Then,we took a good look at the dog.He had no collar and he was really thin. We decided he was abandoned. My husband said,"If he doesn't bite me when I try to pick him up to put him in the car, then we have a new dog.The dog happily joined us with no fight at all.The only thing we were in danger of was getting licked to death. 70)学 He kept sticking his head between the two front seats and thanking us for picking him up. The dog was clearly on the road for some time.He was extremely under weight.He was covered in scars and new wounds.We have guessed that some of the scars were from when he was on the road.We thought of possible fights with coyotes,but he also looked as though he was used to fighting other dogs.We figured his incredibly sweet personality was the reason why he was abandoned.He can't have been a good fighting dog. Therefore,we fed him a lot over the course of the next two weeks and he gained over twenty pounds. Paragraph 1: We took him to the vet, Paragraph 2: Now we all love the dog very much.He once helped save me from trouble.高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版） 8.【情境助记】 By contrast 9.【情境助记】 (1)by comparison (2)compare;with (3)are com- pared to (4)Compared to/with 10.【情境助记】 (1)get through (2)will get through (3)to 11.【情境助记】 (1)broke down (2)broke out (3)broke off (4)breaks up Ⅲ.小试牛刀 一、用所给单词的适当形式填空 1.favours 2.reaction 3.approved;approval;approving 4.differences:different:differ 5.varies 二、按要求完成下列句子 1.approved of us making a video to record our experiences 2.witnesses four different seasons 3.Opinions on table manners differ greatly 4.have an important meeting to attend that afternoon 5.do me a favour 三、语篇填空 1.However 2.definitely 3.used 4.than 5.that 6.similarities 7.amazing 8.the 9.are 10.In Period 2 Using Language I.重点知识讲解 1.【情境助记】 (1)occupied;occupied (2)occupies (3)is occu- pied 2.【情境助记】 (1)stare at (2)glanced at (3)glaring at 3.【情境助记】 (1)distinguish;from (2)distinguished for 4.【情境助记】 (1)anxiety (2)anxious about (3)anxious for 5.【情境助记】 (1)embarrassed (2)embarrasses 6.【情境助记】 (1)of (2)shameful (3)to ask 7.【情境助记】 (1)bothering (2)getting (3)with 8.【情境助记】 (1)adjusts:to (2)is adjusted (3)to adjust to 66 9.【情境助记】 (1)to forget (2)There (3)to/towards 10.【情境助记】 (1)call me up (2)was called off 11.【情境助记】 (1)react to (2)reaction 12.【情境助记】 (1)in other words (2)have a word with Ⅲ.小试牛刀 一、用所给单词的适当形式填空 1.occupation 2.distinguished 3.adjustment 4.anxi- ety 5.reliable 二、按要求完成下列句子 1.will feel ashamed 2.Don't bother to turn to me for help 3.can be employed to express our feelings 4.not all of us do well in 5.adjust yourself to 三、语篇填空 1.is used 2.easily 3.is 4.meanings 5.but 6.If 7.a 8.with 9.it 10.Following Period 4 Writing 读后续写 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1: We took him to the vet,who said the dog appears to be in good health,despite his having been abandoned.He figured out the dog is about two or three years of age,from the condi- tion of his teeth.Then the vet gave him all the required shots and applied some medicine to the scars and new wounds.A- bout a month later,the dog changed into a strong and lovely one.He is both sweet and gentle. Paragraph 2: Now we all love the dog very much.He once helped save me from trouble.One day my husband went to work in a hurry,for- getting to turn off the gas.I was sleeping soundly when I heard the dog barking like crazy.I was woken up,realizing something unusual must have happened in our house.It turned out that the house was filled with gas,which made me in danger.I owed it to the dog that I avoided a disaster.Since then,the pit bull has become a member of our family.