2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---人生由我书写励志故事 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 If your life were a book and you were the author, how would you want your story to go? That’s the question that changed my life forever. Growing up in the hot Las Vegas desert, all I wanted was to be free. I would daydream about traveling the world, living in a place where it snowed, snowboarding to my heart’s content, and I would picture all of the stories that I would go on to tell. At the age of 19, the day after I graduated high school, I moved to a place where it snowed and became a snowboarder. With this job all I needed was a snowboard and I could go anywhere. For the first time in my life, I felt free, independent and completely in control of my life. That was, until my life took an unexpected turn. I went home from work early one day with what I thought was the flu,and less than 24 hours later I was in the hospital on life support with less than a two percent chance of living. It wasn’t until days later as I lay unconscious that the doctors diagnosed me with blood infection. Over the course of two and a half months I lost a kidney (肾) and both of my legs below the knees. When my parents wheeled me out of the hospital I felt like I had been pieced back together like a doll. I thought the worst was over until weeks later when I saw my new legs for the first time. The legs were blocks of metal with pipes bolted together for the ankles and a yellow rubber foot with a raised rubber line from the toe to the ankle to look like a vein. Tears streaming down my face, I strapped on these artificial legs and stood up. They were so painful that all I could think was, how was I ever going to travel the world in these things? How was I ever going to live the life full of adventure and stories, as I always wanted? And how was I going to snowboard again? 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.每段的开头语已为你写好，不计入词数。 I went home, crawled into bed and tried to escape from reality. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Four months later I was back up on a snowboard. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The author dreamed of traveling and snowboarding freely --- _________________ --- She suffered a severe blood infection and lost a kidney and lower legs --- _________________ --- She saw her ugly artificial legs and fell into despair --- _________________ 4. 细节问答 What was the author’s lifelong dream? ：___________________________________ What did the author do after graduating from high school?： _________________________________ What sudden disaster happened to the author?： ________________________________________________ What terrible loss did the author suffer from the illness?： __________________________________________ How did the author feel when she first saw her artificial legs?： _____________________________________________ What confused and upset the author most?： _________________________________________________ What change will happen to the author later?： ________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者从小向往自由生活，梦想环球旅行、单板滑雪、拥有精彩人生→_________________ →19岁圆梦滑雪，却突发重病，失去一个肾脏和双腿下半部分→_________________ →初次看到丑陋的假肢，作者极度痛苦，怀疑梦想彻底破灭→_________________ →（续写）作者陷入低谷逃避现实，最终醒悟、决心重塑人生→（续写）刻苦训练重返雪场，突破身体局限，活成自己想要的模样 6．情感线 I：free and joyful→___________→painful and desperate→___________→awake and determined→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 励志成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I went home, crawled into bed and tried to escape from reality. 衔接句1——How did the author feel in despair? What made her cheer up finally? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Four months later I was back up on a snowboard. 衔接句2——How did the author train and perform? What realization did she get? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我回到家，爬上床，试图逃避现实。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：四个月后，我重新站上了滑雪板。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 I went home, crawled into bed and tried to escape from reality. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Four months later I was back up on a snowboard. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（热爱自由、心怀梦想、绝境逆袭、坚韧顽强的主人公）；parents（疼爱、陪伴、支持主人公的父母） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The author dreamed of traveling and snowboarding freely --- She realized her dream of snowboarding at 19 and gained freedom --- She suffered a severe blood infection and lost a kidney and lower legs --- She received artificial legs after recovery --- She saw her ugly artificial legs and fell into despair --- She doubted whether she could realize her dream again 4. 细节问答 What was the author’s lifelong dream?：She dreamed of traveling the world, living in snowy places and snowboarding freely. What did the author do after graduating from high school?：She moved to a snowy place and worked as a snowboarder. What sudden disaster happened to the author?：She was diagnosed with a severe blood infection and was on life support. What terrible loss did the author suffer from the illness?：She lost a kidney and both legs below the knees. How did the author feel when she first saw her artificial legs?：She felt painful, hopeless and desperate. What confused and upset the author most?：She doubted she could travel the world and snowboard again with artificial legs. What change will happen to the author later?：She will cheer up, overcome hardships and return to snowboarding bravely. What does the story tell us?：We are the author of our own life. No hardship can stop us from pursuing dreams if we are determined and brave. 5．情节线 作者从小向往自由生活，梦想环球旅行、单板滑雪、拥有精彩人生→高中毕业圆梦，前往雪地成为滑雪者，收获自由与掌控感→19岁圆梦滑雪，却突发重病，失去一个肾脏和双腿下半部分→历经两个月治疗保住性命，却换上丑陋笨重的假肢→初次看到丑陋的假肢，作者极度痛苦，怀疑梦想彻底破灭→作者陷入深度绝望，逃避现实，质疑人生→（续写）作者陷入低谷逃避现实，最终醒悟、决心重塑人生→（续写）刻苦训练重返雪场，突破身体局限，活成自己想要的模样 6．情感线 I：free and joyful→sudden and helpless→painful and desperate→lost and confused→awake and determined→strong and proud（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：热爱自由与滑雪的作者在青春韶华突患重病、致残失腿，陷入人生绝境，最终挣脱绝望、刻苦训练，重新站上雪板，诠释了人生由自己书写的真谛。 英文：The author, who dreamed of a free and adventurous life, was severely disabled by a sudden illness and fell into despair. However, she regained courage, overcame physical hardships and returned to snowboarding, writing her own wonderful life story. 8. 句式 状语从句：I would daydream about traveling the world, living in a place where it snowed. 宾语从句：I thought the worst was over until weeks later when I saw my new legs for the first time. 定语从句：That’s the question that changed my life forever. 非谓语动词：Tears streaming down my face, I strapped on these artificial legs and stood up. 并列句：I felt free, independent and completely in control of my life. 9. 本文主题 励志成长类：命运无法定义人生，自己才是人生的执笔人，直面苦难、逆势翻盘，便能重塑人生、绽放价值 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I went home, crawled into bed and tried to escape from reality. 衔接句1——How did the author feel in despair? What made her cheer up finally? Trapped in deep despair, I lost hope for life, but I soon recalled my original dream and realized I could not give up easily. Paragraph 2: Four months later I was back up on a snowboard. 衔接句2——How did the author train and perform? What realization did she get? Through constant painful training, I mastered snowboarding with artificial legs, understood that life’s story depends on myself. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我回到家，爬上床，试图逃避现实。 →①我终日深陷绝望，无法接受残缺的自己→②回忆曾经的梦想，我不甘就此认输、荒废人生→③我下定决心直面痛苦，坚持康复训练，挑战极限； 第二段：四个月后，我重新站上了滑雪板。 →①我克服假肢带来的疼痛与不便，熟练掌握滑雪动作→②我自由驰骋雪地，重拾久违的快乐与自由→③我深刻领悟，人生由自己书写，苦难挡不住追梦的脚步。 四.段落续写（满分范文） I went home, crawled into bed and tried to escape from reality. For days, I was trapped in deep sorrow and hopelessness, refusing to talk to anyone or practice walking with my artificial legs. I thought my adventurous life was totally ruined. However, the question “how would you want your story to go?” constantly echoed in my mind. I realized I couldn’t let disability ruin my dream. Instead of giving up, I decided to rewrite my life story bravely. I started strict daily rehabilitation training, enduring endless pain patiently. Four months later I was back up on a snowboard. It was extremely tough to keep balance on the snow with my artificial legs. I fell down countless times and got injured repeatedly, but I never gave up. Gradually, I adapted to my new legs and mastered skiing skills again. Flying across the white snow, I felt the long-awaited freedom once more. I finally understood: life is just like a book. No matter how tough the plot is, I am always the author who can decide its ending. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $