Unit 5 大单元话题与写作-【初中必刷题】2025-2026学年八年级下册英语同步课件(人教版·新教材)浙江专用
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摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“Unit 5 Nature’s Temper”自然灾害主题展开写作训练,涵盖话题词汇、佳句仿写、范文模板及实战演练等内容。课堂导入从基础词汇如“earthquake”“preparation”和教材原句仿写入手,搭建从词句积累到篇章写作的学习支架,帮助学生衔接前后知识。
其亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心,通过话题词汇储备和佳句仿写夯实基础,结合经典范文模板的“总—分—总”结构及分点建议提升思维品质,实战演练则强化学习能力。例如仿写教材原句“make preparations”转化为实际语境句子,范文赏析拆解结构逻辑。学生能系统提升写作能力,教师可借助结构化资源高效教学。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级下册 人教版
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Unit 5 Nature’s Temper
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.地震 ____________
2.准备(工作);预备 _____________
3.最坏(的);最糟(的) _______
4.幸亏;感激地 ____________
5.志愿者 ___________
earthquake
preparation
worst
thankfully
volunteer
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6.出现问题;发生故障;搞错 __________
7.醒来 _________
8.突然;猛地 _________________
go wrong
wake up
all of a sudden
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】Did your family make any preparations before the typhoon landed?
(make preparations)
→仿写:如果你做好准备的话,你将会很容易克服这次困难。
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If you make good preparations, you will overcome this
difficulty easily.
10.【教材原句】The power went out.(go out)
→仿写:卧室里的灯过了一会儿就灭了。
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The bedroom light went out after a moment.
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11.【教材原句】Thanks to her knowledge and quick thinking, one schoolgirl was
able to save over 100 lives.(thanks to)
→仿写:多亏了大家的努力,我们才能按时完成工作。
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Thanks to everyone’s hard work, we can finish the work on time.
12.【教材原句】By the time the bus came, I was cold and wet.(by the time)
→仿写:当工人们到达那里时,水已经淹没了整个城镇。
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By the time the workers got there, the water had already covered the
whole town.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
It is quite normal to have heavy snow in winter.(介绍灾难)The heavy
snow is very dangerous, causing the snowslide and so on. (介绍灾难导致的后
果)
How can we protect ourselves during the heavy snow? Here are some
suggestions.First, stay away from snow-covered trees and billboards because they
can fall and hurt people.Second, it is best to wear cleats to avoid falling
down.Third, we had better not go out. If we have to go out, we must pay
attention to safety.Also, we must be careful of holes under the snow.
(用First、Second、Third、Also分别列举建议)
Snow can bring us happiness if we learn to protect ourselves.(末段进行总
结)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025北京期末]假如你是李华,不久前,你的家乡出现了灾害性特大暴雨
天气,受损严重。家乡人民众志成城,积极抗洪救灾。你的笔友Peter非常关心你
和你的家乡,他想了解一下这次灾害的情况。请你用英文回复邮件,简述家乡受
灾的基本情况,谈谈令你印象深刻的人或事以及你的感受。
提示词语:flood; damage; seriously; neighbour; inspiring
提示问题:
·What was your hometown like during the flood?
·Who or what impressed you?
·How did you feel?
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Dear Peter,
_________
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般过去时为主
人 称:以第三人称为主
内容要点:描写洪水中家乡的样子、给自己留下深刻印象的人或事以及自己的感受
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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Dear Peter,
Thank you very much for your concern. ①
Disastrous rain occurred in my hometown, causing
serious damage. Many low-lying communities were
flooded. It was full of muddy water. ________________________________
①开篇点题,简洁明
了,直接感谢笔友的
关心,并引出下文要
讲述的家乡遭遇洪水
灾害的主题。
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The PLA arrived immediately to rescue the villagers
in the flooded areas.And they did their best to fight
against the flood. ② They supplied the villagers with
fresh vegetables and food.Some medical teams were
organized to help us so that we could have a healthy
diet. ③ ②do one’s best to do
sth是一个常用的表
达,表示“尽全力去做
某事”。
③so that引导的目的
状语从句使句子更加
完整和有条理。
续表
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After a long time, everything went on very well.
And that was a sign of victory.I was deeply moved by
these people. ④
Yours,
Li Hua ④结尾部分总结了文
章的主题,并表达了
作者对救援人员的感
激之情。
文章开头简洁明了,中间部分详细描述了洪水灾害的情况,条理清晰,层次分
明,使读者能够清晰地了解整个事件的过程,结尾简洁有力,使文章结构完整。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025山东德州调研】近年来,我们身边发生了各种灾害。假如你是一名中
学生,正参加英语写作大赛,请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文,介绍在不同的
灾害中保护自己的方法,同时提出预防措施。
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注意事项:
(1)要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意;
(2)词数80左右;
(3)文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
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【参考范文】
In recent years, there have been many disasters, such as floods,
earthquakes, fires, sandstorms and so on.
When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure
not to walk through the flood water.If an earthquake happens, we can
hide under a strong desk and stay away from windows.If a fire happens,
we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the
ground.
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Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters.We can
plant more trees and protect wild animals.We can also share some
related information with others.
Hope we can have a better world in the future.
【解析】知识拓展
take action意为“采取行动”。
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