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英 语
八年级下册 人教版
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Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.奇观;惊叹 ________
wonder
【解析】链接狂K
wonder的详细讲解见狂K重点P20。
2.特别的;不寻常的 _________
3.北部的;向北的 __________
unusual
northern
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4.可能变化的 ____________
5.一点一点地;逐渐地 _____________________________
6.旅行者;游客 ____________________
changeable
bit by bit/little by little
traveller/traveler
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】By the way, do you know why it’s called the Yellow River?
(by the way)
→仿写:顺便问一句,几点了?
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By the way, what’s the time?
8.【教材原句】Later, we sat in a special pool at the top of the falls.(at the top
of)
→仿写:太阳从积雪的山峰顶端升起。
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The sun rises at the top of the snow-capped peak.
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9.【教材原句】Climbers must also deal with thin air, high cliffs, and
changeable weather.(deal with)
→仿写:科学家通过研究气候变化的影响来应对冰川融化。
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Scientists deal with melting glaciers by studying climate change
impacts.
【解析】链接狂K
deal with 的详细讲解见狂K重点P13。
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10.【教材原句】Located on the northeastern coast of Australia, the Great Barrier
Reef is one of the most amazing places to visit.(located on)
→仿写:一座小岛位于平静的湖上。
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A tiny island is located on the calm lake.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Today I visited Mount Huang(介绍景观), one of the wonders of the
natural world.
Mount Huang lies in the south of Anhui Province (介绍黄山的位置) and
attracts millions of tourists every year.Early in the morning, when I arrived there
by car, it was raining(介绍参观时间及天气状况). As soon as I got out of the
car, I began to climb the mountain (介绍活动).About half an hour, the clouds
suddenly began to clear and the rain stopped. The sun also rose(描述当时的天
气情况). While I was climbing the mountain, I enjoyed the sea of clouds,
wondrous pines and unique rocks(介绍景色).
I really had a good time.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假设你是王浩宇,你们班的交换生Tim想在暑假参观一处自然奇观。请你根据
下列内容提示,用英语写一封80词左右的邮件,向他推荐世界上最深的峡谷——
雅鲁藏布大峡谷。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容提示:
◆Length: Approximately 505 kilometres
◆Depth: about 6 kilometres (deepest point)
◆Reputation: The Plant Museum (植物博物馆); The Animal Kingdom
(动物王国)
◆Best travel time: Spring and summer
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要求:
1.词数:80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.书写美观,段落清晰;
3.标点准确,注意细节。
Dear Tim,
I’m writing to tell you something about one of the greatest wonders of the
natural world in China—the Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon. ____
Yours,
Wang Haoyu
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第三人称为主
内容要点:雅鲁藏布大峡谷的长度、深度、美誉及最佳旅游时间
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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Dear Tim,
I’m writing to tell you something about one of
the greatest wonders of the natural world in China—
the Yarlung Zangbo Grand Canyon.
It’s in Xizang, China. It is about 505 kilometres
long. And it is the deepest canyon in the world. The
deepest depth of it reaches around 6 kilometres. As a
place that all nature lovers want to visit, the Yarlung
Zangbo Grand Canyon is home to thousands of plants
and animals.It’s called “The Plant Museum” and “The
Animal Kingdom”. ① The best time to visit it is spring
and summer.② ________________________________
①用“be called+名词短
语” 的被动句式,简洁
概括大峡谷的生态地
位,增强说服力;
②用 “The best time to
do sth is…”结构,直接
给出游览建议,贴合书
信 “分享实用信息” 的
功能;
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I’m sure you will have a great time there. ③
Yours,
Wang Haoyu ③用 “I’m sure+宾语从
句”,以友好的祝福收
尾,符合书信的亲切语
气。
这篇习作运用了“总—分—总”的“三段式”写作结构,要点齐全,语言流畅,全面
介绍了雅鲁藏布大峡谷的情况。文中home to、 The best time to visit it等表明
了作者灵活运用所学知识的能力,这些短语和句型也是文中的亮点。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
泰山(Mount Tai)被联合国教科文组织评为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友
人到你学校参观后准备去那旅游,请结合以下要点向你的朋友简单介绍一下泰山。
1.Located in the middle of Shandong Province; a famous tourist attraction in
China;
2.A half-hour drive from the city centre; by train;
3.Watch the sunrise.
注意:词数80—100(开头已给出,不计入总词数),包含所有要点,可适当
发挥。
Mount Tai is one of the most fantastic natural wonders in China.____
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【参考范文】
Mount Tai is one of the most fantastic natural wonders in China.It
is in the middle of Shandong Province.
It’s a famous tourist attraction in China.Every year thousands of
Chinese and foreigners visit it.It’s not far.It takes you about a half
hour to get there from the centre of the city by car.You can also go
there by train.Autumn is the best season to climb Mount Tai.On the top
of the mountain, you can enjoy the beautiful sunrise.And the sunrise is
wonderful.
Mount Tai is really a nice place to visit.
Value statement:Nature makes us wonder. That is why it is wonderful.
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