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Unit 7 Charities单元同步写作课讲义
一、单元主题和写作要求:
本单元围绕“International charities(国际慈善机构)”展开,介绍了奥比斯、世界自然基金会、国际救助儿童会等多家国际慈善组织,重点以访谈形式讲述了奥比斯“飞行眼科医院”如何帮助贫困地区眼疾患者的故事,引导学生关注社会问题,理解慈善的意义。
通过本单元学习,学生需能够准确运用与慈善相关的词汇(如 charity, volunteer, medical treatment, operation, cure, afford等)、被动语态(一般现在时和一般过去时的被动语态),以及描述帮助、表达感谢和建议的句型,来介绍一个慈善组织的工作、阐述慈善的重要性,或表达个人参与慈善的意愿与感悟。同时,学生需具备信息整合、观点表达和基本的数据引用能力,为中考书面表达中“社会公益”“人物介绍”“观点表达”等话题奠定坚实基础。
二、出题方向和命题形式:
方向1:介绍一个慈善组织的基本信息、工作内容及意义。(信息介绍类说明文)
(1)常见的命题形式:
· 提示类作文(给出组织名称和要点,要求补充细节);
· 命题作文(如 “The Work of Orbis” “UNICEF: For Every Child”);
· 发言稿/演讲稿(如参加学校“慈善之星”演讲比赛,介绍一个你了解的慈善组织)。
(2)考察重点:
· 信息整合能力(从教材或给定材料中提取关键信息并组织成文);
· 词汇与句型运用(与医疗、救助、帮助相关的词汇,以及被动语态);
· 结构清晰度(按“背景-工作内容-意义”的逻辑顺序展开)。
方向2:谈论慈善的重要性或参与慈善活动的意义,结合具体事例阐述观点。(观点论述类议论文)
(1)常见的命题形式:
· 话题作文(如 “Why Are Charities Important?” “The Power of Helping Others”);
· 材料作文(给出一段关于慈善的数据或故事,要求学生发表看法);
· 日记(记录自己参加的一次慈善活动及感悟)。
(2)考察重点:
· 观点表达清晰度(使用主题句、支撑句和结论句);
· 论证能力(举例或引用数据支撑观点,如教材中“超过10亿人患有眼疾”等);
· 情感态度与社会责任感(体现对弱势群体的关心和对慈善行为的肯定)。
方向3:写一封感谢信,以受助者的身份向慈善机构或志愿者表达谢意。(应用文)
(1)常见的命题形式:
· 书信/邮件(如教材P6的感谢信,要求仿写);
· 命题写作(如 “A Thank-you Letter to Orbis” “Dear Dr Ma”)。
(2)考察重点:
· 书信格式规范性(称呼、正文、结束语、署名);
· 情感表达的真实性(描述受助前后的变化,表达感激之情);
· 语言得体性(使用 grateful, thanks to, change one’s life 等表达)。
三、典型范文分析:
方向1:介绍一个慈善组织的信息
The Work of Orbis
Orbis is an international charity that helps people with eye problems. It is famous for its Flying Eye Hospital, a special plane.
Many people around the world cannot see clearly because of eye problems. Sadly, about 90 per cent of these cases can be cured, but the poor cannot afford medical treatment. Orbis uses its flying hospital to go to these people. Volunteer doctors do operations on the plane to help them see again.
Moreover, Orbis also trains local doctors and nurses. They are invited onto the plane to learn new skills. In this way, more people can benefit from Orbis’s work. Last year, over 38,000 training classes were held.
Orbis is really important because it gives hope and light back to people in need. I hope more people will support it.
【范文分析】
(1)语篇类型
信息介绍类说明文:围绕Orbis慈善机构,介绍其特色(飞行医院)、工作内容(做手术、培训)及意义,向读者传递信息并呼吁支持。
(2)篇章结构
总-分-总:
开头(总起):点明Orbis的身份和最大特色(Flying Eye Hospital)。
正文(分述):分两层展开——①直接帮助患者(做手术);②间接帮助更多患者(培训当地医生)。
结尾(总结):升华主题,强调Orbis的意义并发出呼吁。
(3)词汇句型运用
①Orbis is a charity that helps people with eye problems.(that引导定语从句,精准定义)
②...about 90 per cent of these cases can be cured, but the poor cannot afford medical treatment.(引用数据,增强说服力;but体现转折)
③Volunteer doctors do operations on the plane to help them see again.(不定式to help表目的)
④In this way, more people can benefit from Orbis’s work.(In this way总结上文做法,引出结果)
⑤...it gives hope and light back to people in need.(“希望和光明”比喻生动)
(4)逻辑衔接
显性衔接:使用Moreover(递进)、In this way(因果/总结)等连接词。
隐性逻辑:由“是什么”到“做什么”再到“为什么重要”,符合认知规律。
(5)时态运用
以一般现在时为主(介绍客观事实和常规工作,如 is, helps, does),穿插一般过去时(引用去年数据 were held)和前一句的can/cannot(说明能力与现状)。
方向2:谈论慈善的重要性
Why Are Charities Important?
Charities play an important role in making the world a better place. But why are they so important?
First, many people suffer from illnesses or poverty. They cannot afford basic medical care or food. Charities like Orbis and UNICEF can help them. For example, Orbis provides free eye operations to the poor. Without it, millions of blind people would have no hope.
Second, charities not only give direct help but also teach people new skills. In Orbis, local doctors are trained to perform eye operations. In UNICEF, teachers are trained to educate children. This way, people can help themselves in the long run.
Finally, charities bring people together. Many volunteers work selflessly. Their kindness encourages more people to care for others.
In a word, charities save lives, teach skills, and spread kindness. That is why they are so important.
【范文分析】
(1)语篇类型
观点论述类议论文:围绕“慈善为何重要”这一中心论点展开论述,说服并唤醒社会责任感。
(2)篇章结构
总-分-总:
开头(总起):提出中心论点并设问引出下文。
正文(分述):用First, Second, Finally引出三个分论点——①直接帮助弱势群体;②传授技能,授人以渔;③凝聚人心,传递善意。每个分论点都结合具体例子。
结尾(总结):总结三个分论点并重申中心论点。
(3)词汇句型运用
①Charities play an important role in making the world a better place.(play a role in 地道表达)
②Without it, millions of blind people would have no hope.(Without虚拟语气,突出重要性)
③...not only give direct help but also teach people new skills.(not only...but also 递进结构)
④In the long run(从长远来看,高级短语)
⑤In a word, charities save lives, teach skills, and spread kindness.(排比句,有节奏感,总结有力)
(4)逻辑衔接
显性衔接:使用First, Second, Finally, For example, In a word等清晰的逻辑信号词。
隐性逻辑:分论点从“解决眼前困难”到“培养长期能力”再到“社会影响”,层层递进。
(5)时态运用
以一般现在时为主(陈述客观事实和普遍真理,如 play, suffer, are trained, bring)。假设性语句使用would(虚拟语气)。
方向3:写一封感谢信
Dear Dr Ma,
I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you and all the volunteers at Orbis.
One year ago, I was blinded by an accident. I lived in complete darkness and couldn’t afford to go to hospital. I almost lost all hope. Then, I heard about Orbis. Your Flying Eye Hospital came to my village, and I was operated on by your volunteer doctors. The operation was successful! Now, I can see my family’s smiles and the beautiful world again.
You not only gave me back my sight but also gave me a new life. I have returned to school and dream of becoming a nurse to help others like you did.
Thank you again for changing my life. I will never forget your kindness.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【范文分析】
(1)语篇类型
应用文(感谢信):以受助者身份向慈善机构表达谢意,传达真挚的感激之情并分享受助后的积极变化。
(2)篇章结构
书信格式规范:
称呼(Dear Dr Ma)、正文、结束语(Yours sincerely)、署名(Li Ming)。
正文结构:写信目的 → 过去困境 → 慈善组织的帮助 → 现在变化和未来梦想 → 再次感谢。
(3)词汇句型运用
①I am writing to express my sincere thanks to...(书信万能开头句)
②I lived in complete darkness and couldn’t afford to go to hospital.(描述困境,与教材语言高度一致)
③I was operated on by your volunteer doctors.(被动语态,强调受助事实)
④You not only gave me back my sight but also gave me a new life.(not only...but also 强调双重帮助)
⑤I will never forget your kindness.(情感收束句)
(4)逻辑衔接
按时间顺序展开:One year ago → Then → Now → in the future,逻辑清晰。
(5)时态运用
一般过去时(描述过去经历: was blinded, lived, came, was operated on);一般现在时(描述现状: can see, have returned, dream);一般将来时(表达愿望: will never forget)。
四、素材积累和写作支架:
1. 与本单元写作主题(International charities)相关的词汇替换练习:
原句
替换词汇
替换后的句子
Orbis is a good charity.
great / important / meaningful
Many people do not have money for treatment.
cannot afford / lack
Doctors do operations on the plane.
perform / carry out
Orbis helps blind people.
supports / gives a hand to
A lot of people suffer from eye problems.
patients / individuals
The plane is used as a training place.
centre / base
We hope more people will give money.
donate / offer
2. 与本单元写作主题(International charities)相关的句子:
(1)引出主题/表明意图
In this article, I will introduce an important charity called... 在这篇文章中,我将介绍一个叫作......重要的慈善机构。
Today, I’d like to talk about the work of Orbis and why it matters.今天,我想谈谈奥比斯的工作以及它的重要性。
Have you ever heard of the Flying Eye Hospital? Let me tell you about it.你听说过飞行眼科医院吗?让我来给你讲讲。
(2)描述人物/叙述事件
Many people suffer from eye problems, but they cannot afford to go to hospital.许多人患有眼疾,但他们却无力承担去医院的费用。
Before the operation, he lived in darkness and lost hope.手术前,他生活在黑暗之中,对生活失去了希望。
Thanks to the charity’s help, her life has changed a lot.在慈善机构的帮助下,她的生活发生了很大变化。
(3)列举例子/引用数据
For example, about 90 per cent of eye problems can be prevented or cured.例如,大约90%的眼部问题是可以预防或治愈的。
Take Orbis as an example. It has held over 38,000 training classes in one year.以奥比斯为例,它在一年内举办了超过38,000场培训课程。
UNICEF provides clean water, food, education and healthcare to children in need.联合国儿童基金会为有需要的儿童提供清洁的水、食物、教育和医疗保健。
(4)对比观点/文化差异(本单元较弱,可略提及中外慈善差异)
In China, there are also many charities like the Red Cross, while Orbis works internationally.在中国,也有许多像红十字会这样的慈善机构,而奥比斯则在国际上开展工作。
Different from local charities, international charities like Orbis can help people across borders.与当地慈善机构不同,像奥比斯这样的国际慈善机构能够跨越国界为人们提供帮助。
(5)提供建议
We can support charities by donating money or working as volunteers.我们可以通过捐款或担任志愿者来支持慈善事业。
It is meaningful to raise money for children in poor areas.为贫困地区的儿童筹集资金很有意义。
My advice is to learn more about charities and do what we can to help.我的建议是,多了解慈善机构,并尽我们所能去提供帮助。
(6)发表观点、感受和感悟
In my opinion, charities play an important role in building a fairer world.在我看来,慈善机构在构建一个更加公平的世界中发挥着重要作用。
I believe that even a small act of kindness can make a big difference.我相信,即使是一个小小的善举,也能产生巨大的影响。
This experience taught me that helping others brings happiness to ourselves as well.这次经历让我明白,帮助他人也能给自己带来快乐。
(7)表达情感
I am deeply grateful to the doctors who gave me back my sight.我深深地感激那些让我重见光明的医生。
Thanks to Orbis, I can see the world clearly again, and for this I will always be thankful.感谢奥比斯,让我能再次清晰地看世界,对此,我将永远心怀感激。
We should be proud of the volunteers who work selflessly to help people in need.我们应该为那些无私奉献、帮助有需要的人的志愿者们感到骄傲。
(8)衔接句子
First... Second... What’s more...首先……其次……再者……
However, many people cannot afford medical treatment.然而,许多人负担不起医疗费用。
Moreover, Orbis also trains local doctors and nurses.此外,奥比斯还为当地医生和护士提供培训。
3. 与本单元写作主题(International charities)相关的整篇仿写练习:
方向1:介绍一个慈善组织
The Work of UNICEF
UNICEF is an international charity that helps ____1____. It is famous for its ____2____.
Many people around the world ____3____. Sadly, about 90 per cent of these cases can be _____4___, but the poor cannot afford ____5____. UNICEF uses its _____6___ to go to these people. Volunteer doctors _____7___ on the plane to help them _____8___.
Moreover, UNICEF also trains ____9____. They are invited onto the plane to ___10_____. In this way, more people can ____11____. Last year, _____12___ training classes were held.
UNICEF is really important because it ____13____. I hope more people will ____14____.
方向2:谈论慈善的重要性
Why Are Charities Important?
Charities play an important role in ___1_____. But why are they so important?
First, many people ____2____ from illnesses or ____3____. They cannot afford ____4____ or food. Charities like Orbis and UNICEF can help them. For example, Orbis provides free eye operations to the poor. Without it, millions of blind people would ___5_____.
Second, charities not only give ____6____ but also teach people ____7____. In Orbis, local doctors are ____8____ to perform operations. In UNICEF, teachers are trained to ____9____. This way, people can ____10____ in the long run.
Finally, charities bring ____11____ together. Many volunteers work ___12_____. Their kindness encourages more people to ____13____.
In a word, charities ____14____, ____15____, and ____16____. That is why they are so important.
方向3:写一封感谢信
Dear Orbis,
I am writing to express my sincere ____1____ to you and all the volunteers.
_____2___ ago, I ____3____. I ____4____ and couldn't afford ____5____. I almost lost ____6____. Then, I heard about Orbis. Your Flying Eye Hospital came to my village, and I ____7____ by your volunteer doctors. The operation was ___8_____! Now, I can ____9____ again.
You not only gave me back my ___10_____ but also gave me a ____11____. I have returned to ___12_____ and dream of becoming ____13____ to help others like you did.
Thank you again for ____14____. I will never forget your ___15_____.
Yours sincerely,
Li Mei
五、能力达标练
1.仁者爱人,乐善好施是中华民族的传统美德。9月5日是国际慈善日,你校为了宣传慈善,打算在假期以“Willing Hands, Willing Hearts”为主题开展演讲大赛。假设你是李华,打算参加此项活动,谈谈你的慈善认知和规划,请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。要点如下:
1. What kind of charity do you want to introduce?
2. What can you do for this charity?
3. Why do we need to help people in need?
(参考慈善机构: ORBIS, Oxfam, UNICEF, WWF)
注意事项:
1. 演讲稿须包括所给提示内容,可作适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数不少于90个,演讲稿的标题与开头已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
4. 演讲稿内容必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。
Willing Hands, Willing Hearts
Kindness is catching. There are many charities around the world. Among them, I want to talk about ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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2.假如你是学生会主席吴非凡,号召同学们为李俊的妈妈踊跃捐款。请你用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.李俊是四中的学生,平时学习刻苦,成绩优秀;
2.他的爸爸是位工人,妈妈没有工作。他家境贫寒;
3.现在她妈妈患病住院,需要手术。希望大家踊跃捐款。
参考词汇: operation (n.手术); donate money to (捐款)
注意:1.短文须包含上面所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100 (短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Give a Helping Hand
Dear all,
A student from Number Four Middle School needs our help!
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Thanks a lot for your help!
Wu Feifan
3.某市开展了“为生命奔跑助威”的慈善马拉松活动,为当地的儿童医院募捐。假设你和同学们参与了这项活动,结合以下写作要点,分享你的经历。不低于80词。
写作要点:
1. 基本信息:时间、地点、活动目的。
2. 活动经过和结果。
3. 分享感悟。
Running for Life
Last Sunday morning, a 5-km charity run was held in the Sports Park.
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4.在世界图书日当天,市图书馆举办了“一本书,一份希望”活动,为山区小学捐赠图书。假设你是李立,你参加了这次活动,请根据表格要点,向你的朋友们分享这次的经历。词数不低于80。
写作要点:
时间
上周五
地点
市图书馆
目的
为山区小学建一个图书角
活动内容
①挑选并捐赠图书
②向山区小学生表达心意
感受
……
One Book, One Hope
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5.慈善如同一束光,能够照亮并彻底改变一个人的生命轨迹。增加对慈善机构的认知和帮助慈善事业意义重大。根据思维导图提示,写一篇不少于90词的短文,题目为“Helping Charities, Helping Ourselves”。
Helping Charities, Helping Ourselves
What charity do you want to introduce?
What can you do for the charity?
Why do we need to help people in need?
Helping Charities, Helping Ourselves
Charity is like a ray of light; it can light the way for those who are in the darkness. Among so many charities, I want to introduce ________ best.
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6.热心公益,争当志愿者,积极为文明实践、阳光助残、环境保护、为老弱服务等志愿项目作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你按以下要点,用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备作为志愿者参加的一次服务活动的计划。
要点:1. What type of volunteer do you want to be?
2. Why do you want to be a volunteer like that?
3. How will you work as a volunteer?
要求:1. 短文必须包含所有要求并适当发挥;
2. 词数 100左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to
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Unit 7 Charities单元同步写作课讲义
一、单元主题和写作要求:
本单元围绕“International charities(国际慈善机构)”展开,介绍了奥比斯、世界自然基金会、国际救助儿童会等多家国际慈善组织,重点以访谈形式讲述了奥比斯“飞行眼科医院”如何帮助贫困地区眼疾患者的故事,引导学生关注社会问题,理解慈善的意义。
通过本单元学习,学生需能够准确运用与慈善相关的词汇(如 charity, volunteer, medical treatment, operation, cure, afford等)、被动语态(一般现在时和一般过去时的被动语态),以及描述帮助、表达感谢和建议的句型,来介绍一个慈善组织的工作、阐述慈善的重要性,或表达个人参与慈善的意愿与感悟。同时,学生需具备信息整合、观点表达和基本的数据引用能力,为中考书面表达中“社会公益”“人物介绍”“观点表达”等话题奠定坚实基础。
二、出题方向和命题形式:
方向1:介绍一个慈善组织的基本信息、工作内容及意义。(信息介绍类说明文)
(1)常见的命题形式:
· 提示类作文(给出组织名称和要点,要求补充细节);
· 命题作文(如 “The Work of Orbis” “UNICEF: For Every Child”);
· 发言稿/演讲稿(如参加学校“慈善之星”演讲比赛,介绍一个你了解的慈善组织)。
(2)考察重点:
· 信息整合能力(从教材或给定材料中提取关键信息并组织成文);
· 词汇与句型运用(与医疗、救助、帮助相关的词汇,以及被动语态);
· 结构清晰度(按“背景-工作内容-意义”的逻辑顺序展开)。
方向2:谈论慈善的重要性或参与慈善活动的意义,结合具体事例阐述观点。(观点论述类议论文)
(1)常见的命题形式:
· 话题作文(如 “Why Are Charities Important?” “The Power of Helping Others”);
· 材料作文(给出一段关于慈善的数据或故事,要求学生发表看法);
· 日记(记录自己参加的一次慈善活动及感悟)。
(2)考察重点:
· 观点表达清晰度(使用主题句、支撑句和结论句);
· 论证能力(举例或引用数据支撑观点,如教材中“超过10亿人患有眼疾”等);
· 情感态度与社会责任感(体现对弱势群体的关心和对慈善行为的肯定)。
方向3:写一封感谢信,以受助者的身份向慈善机构或志愿者表达谢意。(应用文)
(1)常见的命题形式:
· 书信/邮件(如教材P6的感谢信,要求仿写);
· 命题写作(如 “A Thank-you Letter to Orbis” “Dear Dr Ma”)。
(2)考察重点:
· 书信格式规范性(称呼、正文、结束语、署名);
· 情感表达的真实性(描述受助前后的变化,表达感激之情);
· 语言得体性(使用 grateful, thanks to, change one’s life 等表达)。
三、典型范文分析:
方向1:介绍一个慈善组织的信息
The Work of Orbis
Orbis is an international charity that helps people with eye problems. It is famous for its Flying Eye Hospital, a special plane.
Many people around the world cannot see clearly because of eye problems. Sadly, about 90 per cent of these cases can be cured, but the poor cannot afford medical treatment. Orbis uses its flying hospital to go to these people. Volunteer doctors do operations on the plane to help them see again.
Moreover, Orbis also trains local doctors and nurses. They are invited onto the plane to learn new skills. In this way, more people can benefit from Orbis’s work. Last year, over 38,000 training classes were held.
Orbis is really important because it gives hope and light back to people in need. I hope more people will support it.
【范文分析】
(1)语篇类型
信息介绍类说明文:围绕Orbis慈善机构,介绍其特色(飞行医院)、工作内容(做手术、培训)及意义,向读者传递信息并呼吁支持。
(2)篇章结构
总-分-总:
开头(总起):点明Orbis的身份和最大特色(Flying Eye Hospital)。
正文(分述):分两层展开——①直接帮助患者(做手术);②间接帮助更多患者(培训当地医生)。
结尾(总结):升华主题,强调Orbis的意义并发出呼吁。
(3)词汇句型运用
①Orbis is a charity that helps people with eye problems.(that引导定语从句,精准定义)
②...about 90 per cent of these cases can be cured, but the poor cannot afford medical treatment.(引用数据,增强说服力;but体现转折)
③Volunteer doctors do operations on the plane to help them see again.(不定式to help表目的)
④In this way, more people can benefit from Orbis’s work.(In this way总结上文做法,引出结果)
⑤...it gives hope and light back to people in need.(“希望和光明”比喻生动)
(4)逻辑衔接
显性衔接:使用Moreover(递进)、In this way(因果/总结)等连接词。
隐性逻辑:由“是什么”到“做什么”再到“为什么重要”,符合认知规律。
(5)时态运用
以一般现在时为主(介绍客观事实和常规工作,如 is, helps, does),穿插一般过去时(引用去年数据 were held)和前一句的can/cannot(说明能力与现状)。
方向2:谈论慈善的重要性
Why Are Charities Important?
Charities play an important role in making the world a better place. But why are they so important?
First, many people suffer from illnesses or poverty. They cannot afford basic medical care or food. Charities like Orbis and UNICEF can help them. For example, Orbis provides free eye operations to the poor. Without it, millions of blind people would have no hope.
Second, charities not only give direct help but also teach people new skills. In Orbis, local doctors are trained to perform eye operations. In UNICEF, teachers are trained to educate children. This way, people can help themselves in the long run.
Finally, charities bring people together. Many volunteers work selflessly. Their kindness encourages more people to care for others.
In a word, charities save lives, teach skills, and spread kindness. That is why they are so important.
【范文分析】
(1)语篇类型
观点论述类议论文:围绕“慈善为何重要”这一中心论点展开论述,说服并唤醒社会责任感。
(2)篇章结构
总-分-总:
开头(总起):提出中心论点并设问引出下文。
正文(分述):用First, Second, Finally引出三个分论点——①直接帮助弱势群体;②传授技能,授人以渔;③凝聚人心,传递善意。每个分论点都结合具体例子。
结尾(总结):总结三个分论点并重申中心论点。
(3)词汇句型运用
①Charities play an important role in making the world a better place.(play a role in 地道表达)
②Without it, millions of blind people would have no hope.(Without虚拟语气,突出重要性)
③...not only give direct help but also teach people new skills.(not only...but also 递进结构)
④In the long run(从长远来看,高级短语)
⑤In a word, charities save lives, teach skills, and spread kindness.(排比句,有节奏感,总结有力)
(4)逻辑衔接
显性衔接:使用First, Second, Finally, For example, In a word等清晰的逻辑信号词。
隐性逻辑:分论点从“解决眼前困难”到“培养长期能力”再到“社会影响”,层层递进。
(5)时态运用
以一般现在时为主(陈述客观事实和普遍真理,如 play, suffer, are trained, bring)。假设性语句使用would(虚拟语气)。
方向3:写一封感谢信
Dear Dr Ma,
I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you and all the volunteers at Orbis.
One year ago, I was blinded by an accident. I lived in complete darkness and couldn’t afford to go to hospital. I almost lost all hope. Then, I heard about Orbis. Your Flying Eye Hospital came to my village, and I was operated on by your volunteer doctors. The operation was successful! Now, I can see my family’s smiles and the beautiful world again.
You not only gave me back my sight but also gave me a new life. I have returned to school and dream of becoming a nurse to help others like you did.
Thank you again for changing my life. I will never forget your kindness.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【范文分析】
(1)语篇类型
应用文(感谢信):以受助者身份向慈善机构表达谢意,传达真挚的感激之情并分享受助后的积极变化。
(2)篇章结构
书信格式规范:
称呼(Dear Dr Ma)、正文、结束语(Yours sincerely)、署名(Li Ming)。
正文结构:写信目的 → 过去困境 → 慈善组织的帮助 → 现在变化和未来梦想 → 再次感谢。
(3)词汇句型运用
①I am writing to express my sincere thanks to...(书信万能开头句)
②I lived in complete darkness and couldn’t afford to go to hospital.(描述困境,与教材语言高度一致)
③I was operated on by your volunteer doctors.(被动语态,强调受助事实)
④You not only gave me back my sight but also gave me a new life.(not only...but also 强调双重帮助)
⑤I will never forget your kindness.(情感收束句)
(4)逻辑衔接
按时间顺序展开:One year ago → Then → Now → in the future,逻辑清晰。
(5)时态运用
一般过去时(描述过去经历: was blinded, lived, came, was operated on);一般现在时(描述现状: can see, have returned, dream);一般将来时(表达愿望: will never forget)。
四、素材积累和写作支架:
1. 与本单元写作主题(International charities)相关的词汇替换练习:
原句
替换词汇
替换后的句子
Orbis is a good charity.
great / important / meaningful
Orbis is a great / important / meaningful charity.
Many people do not have money for treatment.
cannot afford / lack
Many people cannot afford / lack money for treatment.
Doctors do operations on the plane.
perform / carry out
Doctors perform / carry out operations on the plane.
Orbis helps blind people.
supports / gives a hand to
Orbis supports / gives a hand to blind people.
A lot of people suffer from eye problems.
patients / individuals
A lot of patients / individuals suffer from eye problems.
The plane is used as a training place.
centre / base
The plane is used as a training centre / base.
We hope more people will give money.
donate / offer
We hope more people will donate / offer money.
2. 与本单元写作主题(International charities)相关的句子:
(1)引出主题/表明意图
In this article, I will introduce an important charity called... 在这篇文章中,我将介绍一个叫作......重要的慈善机构。
Today, I’d like to talk about the work of Orbis and why it matters.今天,我想谈谈奥比斯的工作以及它的重要性。
Have you ever heard of the Flying Eye Hospital? Let me tell you about it.你听说过飞行眼科医院吗?让我来给你讲讲。
(2)描述人物/叙述事件
Many people suffer from eye problems, but they cannot afford to go to hospital.许多人患有眼疾,但他们却无力承担去医院的费用。
Before the operation, he lived in darkness and lost hope.手术前,他生活在黑暗之中,对生活失去了希望。
Thanks to the charity’s help, her life has changed a lot.在慈善机构的帮助下,她的生活发生了很大变化。
(3)列举例子/引用数据
For example, about 90 per cent of eye problems can be prevented or cured.例如,大约90%的眼部问题是可以预防或治愈的。
Take Orbis as an example. It has held over 38,000 training classes in one year.以奥比斯为例,它在一年内举办了超过38,000场培训课程。
UNICEF provides clean water, food, education and healthcare to children in need.联合国儿童基金会为有需要的儿童提供清洁的水、食物、教育和医疗保健。
(4)对比观点/文化差异(本单元较弱,可略提及中外慈善差异)
In China, there are also many charities like the Red Cross, while Orbis works internationally.在中国,也有许多像红十字会这样的慈善机构,而奥比斯则在国际上开展工作。
Different from local charities, international charities like Orbis can help people across borders.与当地慈善机构不同,像奥比斯这样的国际慈善机构能够跨越国界为人们提供帮助。
(5)提供建议
We can support charities by donating money or working as volunteers.我们可以通过捐款或担任志愿者来支持慈善事业。
It is meaningful to raise money for children in poor areas.为贫困地区的儿童筹集资金很有意义。
My advice is to learn more about charities and do what we can to help.我的建议是,多了解慈善机构,并尽我们所能去提供帮助。
(6)发表观点、感受和感悟
In my opinion, charities play an important role in building a fairer world.在我看来,慈善机构在构建一个更加公平的世界中发挥着重要作用。
I believe that even a small act of kindness can make a big difference.我相信,即使是一个小小的善举,也能产生巨大的影响。
This experience taught me that helping others brings happiness to ourselves as well.这次经历让我明白,帮助他人也能给自己带来快乐。
(7)表达情感
I am deeply grateful to the doctors who gave me back my sight.我深深地感激那些让我重见光明的医生。
Thanks to Orbis, I can see the world clearly again, and for this I will always be thankful.感谢奥比斯,让我能再次清晰地看世界,对此,我将永远心怀感激。
We should be proud of the volunteers who work selflessly to help people in need.我们应该为那些无私奉献、帮助有需要的人的志愿者们感到骄傲。
(8)衔接句子
First... Second... What’s more...首先……其次……再者……
However, many people cannot afford medical treatment.然而,许多人负担不起医疗费用。
Moreover, Orbis also trains local doctors and nurses.此外,奥比斯还为当地医生和护士提供培训。
3. 与本单元写作主题(International charities)相关的整篇仿写练习:
方向1:介绍一个慈善组织
The Work of UNICEF
UNICEF is an international charity that helps ____1____. It is famous for its ____2____.
Many people around the world ____3____. Sadly, about 90 per cent of these cases can be _____4___, but the poor cannot afford ____5____. UNICEF uses its _____6___ to go to these people. Volunteer doctors _____7___ on the plane to help them _____8___.
Moreover, UNICEF also trains ____9____. They are invited onto the plane to ___10_____. In this way, more people can ____11____. Last year, _____12___ training classes were held.
UNICEF is really important because it ____13____. I hope more people will ____14____.
挖空提示词: 1. children / 2. education programmes / 3. suffer from hunger /4. cured / 5. medical treatment / 6. flying hospital / 7. do operations / 8. see again / 9. local teachers / 10. learn new skills / 11. benefit / 12. thousands of / 13. gives hope to children in need / 14. support it
方向2:谈论慈善的重要性
Why Are Charities Important?
Charities play an important role in ___1_____. But why are they so important?
First, many people ____2____ from illnesses or ____3____. They cannot afford ____4____ or food. Charities like Orbis and UNICEF can help them. For example, Orbis provides free eye operations to the poor. Without it, millions of blind people would ___5_____.
Second, charities not only give ____6____ but also teach people ____7____. In Orbis, local doctors are ____8____ to perform operations. In UNICEF, teachers are trained to ____9____. This way, people can ____10____ in the long run.
Finally, charities bring ____11____ together. Many volunteers work ___12_____. Their kindness encourages more people to ____13____.
In a word, charities ____14____, ____15____, and ____16____. That is why they are so important.
挖空提示词:1. making the world a better place / 2. suffer / 3. poverty / 4. basic medical care / 5. have no hope /
6. direct help / 7. new skills / 8. trained / 9. educate children / 10. help themselves / 11. people / 12. selflessly /
13. care for others / 14. save lives / 15. teach skills / 16. spread kindness
方向3:写一封感谢信
Dear Orbis,
I am writing to express my sincere ____1____ to you and all the volunteers.
_____2___ ago, I ____3____. I ____4____ and couldn't afford ____5____. I almost lost ____6____. Then, I heard about Orbis. Your Flying Eye Hospital came to my village, and I ____7____ by your volunteer doctors. The operation was ___8_____! Now, I can ____9____ again.
You not only gave me back my ___10_____ but also gave me a ____11____. I have returned to ___12_____ and dream of becoming ____13____ to help others like you did.
Thank you again for ____14____. I will never forget your ___15_____.
Yours sincerely,
Li Mei
挖空提示词:1. thanks / 2. One year / 3. suffered from a serious eye problem / 4. lived in darkness /5. to go to hospital / 6. all hope / 7. was operated on / 8. successful / 9. see the world / 10. sight / 11. new life / 12. school /
13. a doctor / 14. changing my life / 15. kindness
五、能力达标练
1.仁者爱人,乐善好施是中华民族的传统美德。9月5日是国际慈善日,你校为了宣传慈善,打算在假期以“Willing Hands, Willing Hearts”为主题开展演讲大赛。假设你是李华,打算参加此项活动,谈谈你的慈善认知和规划,请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。要点如下:
1. What kind of charity do you want to introduce?
2. What can you do for this charity?
3. Why do we need to help people in need?
(参考慈善机构: ORBIS, Oxfam, UNICEF, WWF)
注意事项:
1. 演讲稿须包括所给提示内容,可作适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数不少于90个,演讲稿的标题与开头已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
4. 演讲稿内容必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。
Willing Hands, Willing Hearts
Kindness is catching. There are many charities around the world. Among them, I want to talk about ____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Willing Hands, Willing Hearts
Kindness is catching. There are many charities around the world. Among them, I want to talk about ORBIS.
ORBIS is a charity that helps blind people in poor areas. It uses a flying eye hospital to treat patients and train local doctors. Many people there cannot afford medical care, so ORBIS’s work is very important to them.
As students, we can do many things for ORBIS. We can organize charity sales at school to raise money for the flying hospital. We can also share ORBIS’s stories online to let more people know about their work.
We need to help people in need because everyone deserves a chance to live a happy life. Let’s hold out our willing hands and open our willing hearts to those in need.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:演讲稿,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:包含三个方面——介绍哪种慈善机构、能为该慈善做什么、为什么需要帮助有需要的人
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:文中不得提及真实的人名、校名;标题与开头已在答题卡上给出;词数不少于90;要点齐全
[第二步:构思布局]
四段式结构:
第一段:承接已给开头,选择要介绍的慈善机构
第二段:具体介绍该慈善机构
第三段:说明自己能为该慈善机构做什么
第四段:阐述为什么需要帮助有需要的人,呼吁行动
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:慈善机构介绍
机构选择:ORBIS/Oxfam/UNICEF/WWF/ICRC等
机构工作:helps blind people in poor areas/uses a flying eye hospital to treat patients and train local doctors/works to protect endangered animals and the environment/provides clean water, food, and education for kids who cannot get these basic things等
意义:its work is very important to them/giving them a safe place to grow up等
要点二:能为慈善做的事
活动:organize charity sales at school to raise money/share ORBIS’s stories online to let more people know about their work/make posters/volunteer to help/save our pocket money and donate it to their projects等
要点三:帮助他人的原因
原因:everyone deserves a chance to live a happy life/it makes the world a better place/spreads kindness and love等
要点四:呼吁结尾
呼吁:hold out our willing hands and open our willing hearts to those in need/Let’s use our willing hands and hearts to light up their lives等
2.假如你是学生会主席吴非凡,号召同学们为李俊的妈妈踊跃捐款。请你用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.李俊是四中的学生,平时学习刻苦,成绩优秀;
2.他的爸爸是位工人,妈妈没有工作。他家境贫寒;
3.现在她妈妈患病住院,需要手术。希望大家踊跃捐款。
参考词汇: operation (n.手术); donate money to (捐款)
注意:1.短文须包含上面所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100 (短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Give a Helping Hand
Dear all,
A student from Number Four Middle School needs our help!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks a lot for your help!
Wu Feifan
【答案】One possible version:
Give a Helping Hand
Dear all,
A student from Number Four Middle School needs our help!
The student’s name is Li Jun. He works very hard. He is a top student at school. He comes from a poor family. His father is a worker and his mother doesn’t have a job. What is more, his mother has been ill in hospital for some time and needs an operation. However, it will cost about 15,000 yuan. They can’t afford the operation. The doctor says it is important for her to have an operation as soon as possible.
I’m writing to ask you for help. Please donate money to his mother. Many hands make light work.
Thanks a lot for your help!
Wu Feifan
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文 (倡议书),以说明和号召为主,时态用一般现在时
明确要点:介绍学生基本情况、家庭困境、妈妈的病情及手术需求、发出捐款倡议
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my)、第三人称 (he/his)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:引出倡议背景,点明“有学生需要帮助”
主体段:分点介绍学生情况、家庭困境、妈妈的病情及手术紧迫性
结尾段:发出捐款倡议,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍学生基本情况
学习刻苦:works very hard/works very hard at all his subjects/studies diligently every day等
成绩优秀:is a top student at school/is one of the top students in his grade/gets excellent grades in exams/does well in all his lessons等
要点二:介绍家庭困境
家境贫寒:comes from a poor family/lives in financial difficulty/his family is not well-off等
父母职业:His father is a worker and his mother doesn’t have a job/His father works as a factory worker/His mother is unemployed/His mother has no job to support the family等
要点三:介绍母亲的病情与手术困境
病情住院:has been ill in hospital for some time/has been ill in hospital for weeks/is in hospital due to a serious illness等
手术需求:needs an operation/needs a necessary operation/requires an urgent surgery等
费用困境:can’t afford the operation/can’t afford the high medical cost/can’t pay for the expensive operation/lacks the money for the surgery等
手术紧迫性:the doctor says it is important for her to have an operation as soon as possible/the doctor says the operation must be done at once/without the surgery, her life will be in danger/it’s urgent for her to have the operation right away等
要点四:发出捐款倡议,升华主题
发起倡议:I’m writing to ask you for help/I’m calling on all of you to help/Please give a helping hand to this family/I hope you can offer your kind support等
捐款行动:donate money to his mother/donate some money to help her/give away pocket money to support the operation/contribute to the medical fund等
谚语拓展:Many hands make light work/Every little helps/Small donations can make a big difference/Together we can make a difference等
3.某市开展了“为生命奔跑助威”的慈善马拉松活动,为当地的儿童医院募捐。假设你和同学们参与了这项活动,结合以下写作要点,分享你的经历。不低于80词。
写作要点:
1. 基本信息:时间、地点、活动目的。
2. 活动经过和结果。
3. 分享感悟。
Running for Life
Last Sunday morning, a 5-km charity run was held in the Sports Park.
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【答案】例文
Running for Life
Last Sunday morning, a 5-km charity run was held in the Sports Park.
I ran to raise money for the local children’s hospital.
I trained for a month before the race. On that day, I kept running though I felt tired. Finally, I reached the finish line. My number was 800 — so I donated 800 yuan. I’m proud it can help children in the hospital.
After the run, a thank-you video was played. Children who got help smiled and said “Thank you”. I never knew running could save a life. Now I believe every drop of sweat is worth it.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文(活动经历回顾),全文以一般过去时为主(活动发生在上周日,属于过去经历)
明确写作要点①活动基本信息:时间、地点、本次活动举办目的②活动完整经过 & 最终结果③个人参与后的感悟与收获
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项:不泄露真实姓名、个人隐私信息,词数要求≥80 词
[第二步:构思布局]
开头段:总起句,交代活动时间、地点,开门见山点明活动举办目的
主体段:完整叙述活动全程经过、自身参与过程,交代活动最终成果
结尾段:总结本次活动体验,升华主题,抒发个人感悟与成长思考
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:活动基本信息
时间词汇:Last Sunday morning
地点词汇:the Sports Park
活动类型:a 5-km charity run (5 公里慈善跑)
活动目的句型:to raise money for the local children’s hospital (为当地儿童医院募捐)
要点二:活动经过和结果
赛前准备:train for a month (训练一个月)
过程描写句型:keep running though... (尽管疲惫依旧坚持奔跑)、reach the finish line (冲过终点线)
活动结果:donate money(进行捐款)、help the sick children in the hospital (帮助医院里的患病儿童)
要点三:个人感悟
感悟句型:every drop of sweat is worth it (所有汗水都有意义)
主题升华:small efforts can make a difference、the meaning of kindness and charity (善意与公益的意义)
4.在世界图书日当天,市图书馆举办了“一本书,一份希望”活动,为山区小学捐赠图书。假设你是李立,你参加了这次活动,请根据表格要点,向你的朋友们分享这次的经历。词数不低于80。
写作要点:
时间
上周五
地点
市图书馆
目的
为山区小学建一个图书角
活动内容
①挑选并捐赠图书
②向山区小学生表达心意
感受
……
One Book, One Hope
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【答案】例文:
One Book, One Hope
Last Friday, a book donation activity was held in our city library. It aimed to build a reading corner for a primary school in the mountains.
I chose ten of my favourite storybooks. I wrote some encouraging sentences in each book, like “Read and dream big”. All the books were collected and sent to the village. I imagined how excited the children would be when they opened them.
The small loss I experienced by giving the books could help them. I am proud to be part of this love chain.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,用一般过去时为主
明确要点:活动内容(挑选并捐赠图书、向山区小学生表示心意)、活动目的(为山区小学建一个图书角)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露学校名称和真实姓名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,概括活动时间和目的
主体段:说明自己选择图书的过程和心情
结尾段:总结感受,升华主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:活动介绍
活动性质:a book donation activity
活动时间:Last Friday
活动地点:in our city library
活动目的:It aimed to build a reading corner for a primary school in the mountains
要点二:捐书过程
具体过程:chose ten of my favourite storybooks/wrote some encouraging sentences in each book/All the books were collected and sent to the village等
心情感受:imagined how excited the children would be/I am proud to be part of this love chain等
5.慈善如同一束光,能够照亮并彻底改变一个人的生命轨迹。增加对慈善机构的认知和帮助慈善事业意义重大。根据思维导图提示,写一篇不少于90词的短文,题目为“Helping Charities, Helping Ourselves”。
Helping Charities, Helping Ourselves
What charity do you want to introduce?
What can you do for the charity?
Why do we need to help people in need?
Helping Charities, Helping Ourselves
Charity is like a ray of light; it can light the way for those who are in the darkness. Among so many charities, I want to introduce ________ best.
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【答案】例文:
Helping Charities, Helping Ourselves
Charity is like a ray of light; it can light the way for those who are in the darkness. Among so many charities, I want to introduce UNICEF best.
UNICEF is a powerful champion of children’s rights around the world. UNICEF is making great progress to create a better world for children. For example, it provides clean water and food, education and healthcare to children in need.
I’m ready to help UNICEF by donating money or working as a volunteer. Now, I’d like to send clothes and books to them. What’s more, I want to work as a volunteer and sign up for teaching in the mountain areas when I grow up.
We’re lucky to have charities like UNICEF. A little help from it can make a big difference to the world. I strongly believe that everyone can give a helping hand and make the world a better place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍想引入的慈善机构;
第二步:详细描述慈善机构的相关信息和自己能够为慈善机构所做的事;
第三步:书写结尾,升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①powerful有力量的
②a better world一个更好的世界
③grow up长大
④make a big difference产生影响
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I want to work as a volunteer and sign up for teaching in the mountain areas when I grow up. (时间状语从句)
②I strongly believe that everyone can give a helping hand and make the world a better place. (宾语从句)
6.热心公益,争当志愿者,积极为文明实践、阳光助残、环境保护、为老弱服务等志愿项目作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你按以下要点,用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备作为志愿者参加的一次服务活动的计划。
要点:1. What type of volunteer do you want to be?
2. Why do you want to be a volunteer like that?
3. How will you work as a volunteer?
要求:1. 短文必须包含所有要求并适当发挥;
2. 词数 100左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to
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【答案】例文
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to become a volunteer at a local nursing home.
I want to help the elderly because they often feel lonely and need companionship. I believe spending time with them can bring them joy and make a positive difference in their lives.
As a volunteer, I will visit the nursing home twice a week. I will read books to the elderly, chat with them, and help organize activities like singing or simple crafts. I will also assist the staff with small tasks to make their work easier.
I hope my efforts will bring smiles to their faces and show them that young people care about them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇计划类应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“为了培养责任感,计划成为当地养老院的志愿者”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“原因、计划做什么”几个方面重点介绍志愿服务的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。表达“希望自己的努力能给老人带来笑容,让他们感受到年轻人的关心”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①make a positive difference in在……方面产生积极影响
②assist with帮助
[高分句型]
①I believe spending time with them can bring them joy and make a positive difference in their lives.(宾语从句)
②I hope my efforts will bring smiles to their faces and show them that young people care about them.(宾语从句)
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