Unit3-4 单元话题写作指导 2025-2026学年外研版英语八年级下册

Unit3话题写作指导 团队协作 ▶话题分析 本单元围绕“团队协作”这一话题展开，对应的写作任务主要有两类。 - 第一类写作任务是讲述有关团队协作的故事。开头可讲述团队遭遇的问题或困境，随后介绍团队成员如何靠协作逐步克服困难并取得了成功，结尾部分通常写自身感受与收获； - 第二类写作任务是介绍团队协作的方法。在写作时，首先要阐释团队协作的重要性，接着从不同方面详细说明具体的协作方法，最后进行总结。 时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。 常用表达： - Here is my advice... - First/Second/Third, you should... - You'd better... - Why not...? - It's important (for you) to... - What's more, you can... ▶写作实例 人们常说，“一个人可以走得很快，但一群人可以走得更远。”你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题进行征文活动。请根据以下提示，以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。 参考词汇：Unity is strength.（团结就是力量） 注意：1. 词数不少于 80； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 ①Importance → Good ideas → Better ideas ②Ways（包含沟通、协作等） ③Ending [思路点拨] 主题：Be a Good Team Member 1. 指出团队协作的重要性，并引出下文 参考表达：an old saying..., It tells people..., better ideas, how can you become..., Here is... 2. 从三个方面阐述如何成为一名优秀队员 参考表达：First, communicate more... / Second, it's important to cooperate with... / Finally, trust... 3. 总结全文，发出倡议 参考表达：plays an important role in... / Let's work together to...  [教材典句] - Here is my advice... - First, you should discuss the matter with Lisa. - It was dangerous to climb without oxygen, but they knew Liu needed it. 【经典范文】 Be a Good Team Member There is an old saying in China, "Unity is strength." It tells people the importance of teamwork. By discussing problems with members in the team, we can come up with better ideas. But how can you become a good team member? Here is ① my advice: First ②, we should ③ communicate more with each other. We’d better ③ listen to other people actively and express ourselves bravely. Second ②, it’s important to cooperate ④ with others. Finally ②, trust your teammates. All in all, teamwork plays an important role in our daily life. Let’s ⑤ work together to build a brighter future. 【亮点点评】 ① 用“Here is...”引出下文“成为一名优秀队员”的建议。 ② 用 First, Second, Finally 条理清楚地说明如何成为优秀队员。 ③ 用 should 和 had better 给出第一条建议——多交流。 ④ 用“It + be + 形容词 + to do sth.”给出第二条建议——合作很重要。 ⑤ 用“Let’s do...”发出倡议，并总结全文。   Unit4话题写作指导 帮助他人 ▶话题分析 本单元的话题为“帮助他人”。写作任务可以介绍一次帮助他人的经历，也可以叙述一次当志愿者的活动。不管是写哪方面的内容，都应先介绍帮助他人的过程，再写结果如何或自己的感受。写作时，介绍帮助他人的过程应用一般过去时，介绍自己的感受应用一般现在时；人称以第一、三人称为主。 常用句型： - It was time for me to offer... - ...was deeply touched by... - A kindness is never wasted. - We must learn that there is nothing greater than to do something for others. ▶写作实例 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英文给你的笔友 Peter 写一封电子邮件，向他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。 1. 上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上了年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。 2. 王红与老人交流后，主动扶他过马路。 3. 路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。 4. 王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。 5. 你认为…… 参考词汇：盲人 blind man 徘徊 wander 要求：1. 词数 80 左右。2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I'm writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong. Last Thursday, ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua [思路点拨] 帮助盲人过马路： ①点明写电子邮件的原因（已给出）：tell you a story about ②具体描述事情经过：Last Thursday, Wang Hong, saw an elderly blind man wandering, thought, cross the road, the drivers stopped their cars and waited, said goodbye ③我的感受：a warm-hearted and kind girl, learn from her, try my best to help others [教材典句] It was time for her to offer mine. I was deeply touched by their courage and hard work. We must learn that there is nothing greater than to do something for others. Her quiet act of kindness reminded me that true strength lies not in grand gestures, but in consistent, selfless care. I resolved to carry that lesson forward—not as a distant ideal, but as daily practice, choosing empathy over indifference, action over hesitation, and generosity over reserve. [经典范文] Dear Peter, It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I'm writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong. Last Thursday, Wang Hong saw an elderly blind man wandering around the street corner. She thought it was time for her to offer her helping hand. She communicated with the old man and helped him cross the road. The drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently. After they crossed the road, Wang Hong said goodbye to him. The old man was deeply touched by her. I think Wang Hong is really a warm-hearted and kind girl. I should learn from her and try my best to help others. We must learn that there is nothing greater than to do something for others. What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply! Yours, Li Hua [亮点评析] ① 用 It was time for sb to do... 句式表达王红想及时帮助盲人的优秀品质。 ② 用 be deeply touched by 结构生动展现老人被王红行为感动的状态。 ③ 用“There be nothing greater than...”结构指明为他人做点儿事是无比伟大的，强化对助人行为价值的肯定。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $