2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---追梦烘焙 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In a small and dusty village in England, there lived a young man named Tom Harper. His clothes were old and torn, and his shoes had holes that let in the rain. Tom lived in a tiny room above a noisy cafe, where he worked washing dishes for a few coins each day. Life was hard, but Tom had a dream: he wanted to own a bakery, filling the streets with the warm smell of fresh bread. Tom’s parents passed away when he was young, leaving him with nothing but a kind heart and a strong will. Every night, after cleaning the cafe’s pots, he sat by a flickering candle and read books about baking. He borrowed these books from Mrs. Green, the village librarian, who saw something special in Tom’s bright eyes. One day, a poster appeared in the village square. It announced a baking competition in London, with a grand prize of £10,000. Tom’s heart raced. This could be his chance! But the journey to London cost money, and Tom had none. He worked extra hours, saved every penny, and even sold his only coat to buy a train ticket. When the day came, Tom boarded the train with a small bag and a nervous smile. In London, the competition was held in a huge hall filled with the best bakers from across England. Tom felt small among them. He had no fancy tools, just an old wooden spoon and a recipe he’d created himself, a soft, golden loaf with herbs from the village fields. His hands shook as he mixed flour, water, and yeast (酵母). The shake resulted from not just his nervousness, but also the coldness. After what seemed to be a century, Tom finally completed his herb loaf. All the baked bread and cakes were presented to the judges. The judges tasted them carefully. Hours passed, and Tom’s stomach twisted with worry. It seemed hard for him to make it through the announcement of the winner, both psychologically and physically. Before the judges announced the winner, Tom’s eyes accidentally met a familiar figure’s eyes — Mrs. Green was among the audience! 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Mrs. Green was holding a coat and waving her hands at Tom. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the prize money, Tom opened a small bakery in his village. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Tom lived a poor life and worked in a cafe--- _________________ --- he dreamed of owning a bakery--- _________________ --- he tried his best to afford the competition trip--- _________________ --- he joined the competition nervously and spotted Mrs. Green 4. 细节问答 What was Tom’s life like? ：___________________________________ What was Tom’s dream?：_________________________________ Who helped Tom learn baking?：________________________________________________ What did Tom do to take part in the competition?：__________________________________________ What did Tom take to join the competition?：_____________________________________________ Why did Tom’s hands shake while baking?：_________________________________________________ What did Tom see before the result announcement?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 汤姆自幼孤苦，家境贫寒，在咖啡馆洗碗谋生→_________________ →偶然得知伦敦烘焙大赛，奖金丰厚→_________________ →倾尽所有、卖掉外套奔赴赛场→凭借自制配方参赛，紧张又寒冷→赛场偶遇格林夫人→（续写）受到鼓励、成功夺冠→（续写）回乡开店、传递温暖与善意 6．情感线 hopeful and persistent→___________→excited and determined→___________→anxious and uneasy→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 追梦励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Mrs. Green was holding a coat and waving her hands at Tom. 衔接句1——How did Mrs. Green help and encourage Tom? What was the competition result? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: With the prize money, Tom opened a small bakery in his village. 衔接句2——How did Tom run the bakery? What warm ending did the story have? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：格林夫人拿着外套，朝汤姆挥手示意。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：汤姆用奖金在村里开了一家小烘焙店。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写（考场作答区） Mrs. Green was holding a coat and waving her hands at Tom. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the prize money, Tom opened a small bakery in his village. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Tom（身世坎坷、勤奋坚韧、心怀梦想、善良纯粹的青年）；Mrs. Green（温柔善良、慧眼识珠、默默支持后辈的图书管理员）；judges（专业公正的比赛评委） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Tom lived a poor life and worked in a cafe--- he kept learning baking with Mrs. Green’s help --- he dreamed of owning a bakery--- a baking competition with a big prize was announced --- he tried his best to afford the competition trip--- he joined the competition with simple tools in cold and nervousness --- he joined the competition nervously and spotted Mrs. Green 4. 细节问答 What was Tom’s life like?：Tom lived a poor and tough life, working as a dishwasher in a cafe to make a living. What was Tom’s dream?：He dreamed of owning a bakery of his own. Who helped Tom learn baking?：Mrs. Green, the village librarian, lent him baking books and supported him. What did Tom do to take part in the competition?：He worked extra hours, saved every coin and sold his only coat to buy a train ticket. What did Tom take to join the competition?：He only took an old wooden spoon and his self-created herb loaf recipe. Why did Tom’s hands shake while baking?：Because he felt nervous and suffered from cold in the competition hall. What did Tom see before the result announcement?：He saw Mrs. Green, his kind helper, in the audience. What does the story tell us?：Diligence and persistence can fulfill dreams, and kindness will always bring warm rewards. 5．情节线 汤姆自幼孤苦，家境贫寒，在咖啡馆洗碗谋生→坚持夜晚自学烘焙，得到格林夫人的帮助→偶然得知伦敦烘焙大赛，奖金丰厚→为圆梦拼尽全力，变卖唯一外套奔赴赛场→倾尽所有、卖掉外套奔赴赛场→凭借自制配方参赛，紧张又寒冷→赛场偶遇格林夫人→（续写）受到鼓励、成功夺冠→（续写）回乡开店、传递温暖与善意 6．情感线 hopeful and persistent→eager and excited→excited and determined→inferior and nervous→anxious and uneasy→relieved and joyful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：贫寒青年汤姆怀揣烘焙梦想，日夜勤学苦练，为参加比赛倾尽所有，在贵人的鼓励下凭借努力夺冠，最终圆梦开店、传递温暖。 英文：Poor young Tom stuck to his baking dream, spared no effort to join a baking competition, won the championship with perseverance and kindness from others, and finally realized his dream of opening a bakery. 8. 句式 状语从句：When the day came, Tom boarded the train with a small bag and a nervous smile. 非谓语动词：Tom’s parents passed away when he was young, leaving him with nothing but a kind heart and a strong will. 宾语从句：He didn’t know whether he could win the competition among so many excellent bakers. 定语从句：He lived in a tiny room above a noisy cafe, where he worked washing dishes. 并列句：Life was hard, but Tom had a firm dream to own a bakery. 9. 本文主题 追梦励志类：寒门亦能逐梦，坚持与热爱可抵岁月艰辛；微小的善意温暖人心，奋斗终会兑现所有梦想。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Mrs. Green was holding a coat and waving her hands at Tom. 衔接句1——How did Mrs. Green help and encourage Tom? What was the competition result? Mrs. Green’s appearance warmed and encouraged Tom, and his unique and sincere bread won the judges’ recognition, helping him win the grand prize. Paragraph 2: With the prize money, Tom opened a small bakery in his village. 衔接句2——How did Tom run the bakery? What warm ending did the story have? Tom ran the bakery warmly, offered delicious bread for villagers, and repaid Mrs. Green’s kindness, living a fulfilling life. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：格林夫人拿着外套，朝汤姆挥手示意。 →①夫人悄悄赶来，送来外套给予温暖与鼓励→②汤姆重拾信心、平复紧张心态→③他的面包惊艳评委，成功斩获大赛冠军； 第二段：汤姆用奖金在村里开了一家小烘焙店。 →④他坚持用心制作面包，生意红火→⑤他善待村民、回馈帮助过自己的格林夫人→⑥坚守初心与善意，让温暖与香气铺满村庄。 四.段落续写（标准范文） Mrs. Green was holding a coat and waving her hands at Tom. Witnessing Tom trembling with cold, Mrs. Green’s gentle smile instantly warmed his heart. Her unexpected arrival gave him great courage and comfort. Soon, the judges announced the result. To everyone’s surprise, Tom’s simple but fragrant herb loaf defeated all fancy works and won the grand prize. Overwhelmed with joy and gratitude, Tom knew his endless efforts and Mrs. Green’s support finally paid off. With the prize money, Tom opened a small bakery in his village. He stuck to making fresh and tasty bread with carefulness and sincerity every day. The warm fragrance of bread soon spread across the whole village, attracting lots of customers. Tom always offered free bread to poor kids and thanked Mrs. Green regularly. He never forgot his tough days and the kindness he had received. For Tom, the bakery was not only a realized dream, but also a warm shelter to pass on love and warmth. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $