2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---雪山求生 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 "When my water bottles froze solid before 10 pm, I knew not to fall asleep," says Boyd Severson, 56, of the night he spent hid between car-size stones a thousand feet below the summit of 13, 245-foot Mummy Mountain in Rocky Mountain National Park. As freezing top winds reached 50 to 70 mph, he used every piece of his clothing-a shell, jacket, hat, spare socks, and rubbish bag for a vest-then wrapped bandages around his ankles and neck for keeping warm. Alone, afraid, and with no help coming, he encouraged himself for a night out in a September snowstorm. Severson rarely hiked alone, but partners had been tough to find that Monday, And the day had dawned（破晓）,so he'd headed up the trail, sending frequent messages to a friend from his BlackBerry as a safeguard. By l:30 pm, he was standing on the top of the mountain. Despite clouds racing in from the west, Severson didn't yet realize how severely he'd made mistakes in ignoring to check the weather forecast. He could still see stones through the decreasing visibility, so he walked down quickly. It wasn't until he reached an unfamiliar draw that he realized he'd gone off course; he hadn't been in the broad valley he climbed up, after all. Severson had followed a different set of stone piles, heading east rather than south, and landed in a narrow tundra bowl between Mummy and Mt. Dunraven. He laid low in the wood but the storm kept building, so he started back up the 2,000-foot hill, hoping to go back over his steps to the starting point of the trail by flashlight. When darkness fell gradually, snowfall blocked his view. With zero visibility, he found a crack（裂缝）between three rocks and bent himself down. In wind down to -30°F, he moved his muscles to stay warm, wishing he could call his wife. But neither cell phone nor BlackBerry connected. "I never thought I was going to die," he says. "But I was worried about severe frozen damages." 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 By dawn, when Severson appeared weak, a search was in full swing. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Severson initially waited out in the crack. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Severson planned a solo hike--- _________________ --- he reached the mountain top--- _________________ --- he went off course in the snowstorm--- _________________ --- he hid in a rock crack to survive the freezing night 4. 细节问答 Why did Severson hike alone? ：___________________________________ What mistake did he make before hiking?：_________________________________ Why did he get lost?：________________________________________________ How did he fight against the freezing cold?：__________________________________________ Why couldn't he get in touch with others?：_____________________________________________ What trouble was he faced with in the wild?：_________________________________________________ What can we learn from his survival experience?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 西弗森独自登山，全程向朋友发消息保障安全→_________________ →忽略天气预警，登顶后天气骤变→_________________ →风雪中迷路、视线全无，被迫躲进石缝御寒→熬过极寒夜晚、濒临冻伤→（续写）清晨搜救全力展开→（续写）他坚持等待救援、最终成功获救 6．情感线 calm and confident→___________→anxious and scared→___________→persistent and hopeful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 求生励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: By dawn, when Severson appeared weak, a search was in full swing. 衔接句1——Who launched the search? How was the search going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Severson initially waited out in the crack. 衔接句2——What did he do later? What was the final result? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：清晨，虚弱的西弗森迎来了全力开展的搜救行动。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：西弗森起初在石缝中耐心等待。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写（考场作答区） By dawn, when Severson appeared weak, a search was in full swing. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Severson initially waited out in the crack. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Severson（谨慎细心、意志坚定、顽强坚韧的登山爱好者）；rescuers（专业尽责、高效救援的搜救人员） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Severson planned a solo hike--- he messaged his friend for safety before climbing --- he reached the mountain top--- ignoring weather warning, he headed down carelessly --- he went off course in the snowstorm--- the storm worsened and total darkness came --- he hid in a rock crack to survive the freezing night 4. 细节问答 Why did Severson hike alone?：Because it was hard for him to find hiking partners that Monday. What mistake did he make before hiking?：He ignored checking the weather forecast before his hike. Why did he get lost?：He followed wrong stone piles and headed east instead of south, going off course. How did he fight against the freezing cold?：He put on all his clothes, used a rubbish bag as a vest, wrapped bandages around ankles and neck, and kept moving muscles. Why couldn't he get in touch with others?：There was no signal for his cell phone and BlackBerry in the wild mountain. What trouble was he faced with in the wild?：He suffered from severe snowstorm, freezing low temperature, zero visibility and no way to contact the outside world. What can we learn from his survival experience?：Stay calm and persistent in danger, and never ignore safety warnings. What does the story tell us?：Strong will and calm judgment can help people survive extreme difficulties, and safety awareness is vital for outdoor activities. 5．情节线 西弗森独自登山，全程向朋友发消息保障安全→顺利登顶，未留意骤变的天气→忽略天气预警，登顶后天气骤变→风雪中走错路线、彻底迷路→风雪中迷路、视线全无，被迫躲进石缝御寒→熬过极寒夜晚、濒临冻伤→（续写）清晨搜救全力展开→（续写）他坚持等待救援、最终成功获救 6．情感线 calm and confident→careless and unaware→anxious and scared→desperate but determined→persistent and hopeful→relieved and grateful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：登山者西弗森因忽视天气预报、独自登山误入险境，在暴风雪与极寒环境中躲于石缝顽强坚持，最终迎来搜救、成功脱险。 英文：Hiker Severson got lost in a severe snowstorm after ignoring the weather forecast. He struggled to stay alive in freezing temperatures all night and was finally rescued with the help of search teams. 8. 句式 状语从句：As freezing top winds reached 50 to 70 mph, he used every piece of his clothing to keep warm. 非谓语动词：He headed up the trail, sending frequent messages to a friend as a safeguard. 宾语从句：He didn't realize how severely he had made mistakes. 定语从句：He found a crack between three rocks where he could shelter from the wind. 并列句：He had no signal, nor could he walk further in the heavy snow. 9. 本文主题 求生励志类：危难之中保持冷静与坚守，顽强的意志能够突破绝境；敬畏自然、重视安全预警是户外出行的重中之重。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: By dawn, when Severson appeared weak, a search was in full swing. 衔接句1——Who launched the search? How was the search going? His friend failed to receive his messages and called for help, and professional rescuers started a widespread mountain search at dawn. Paragraph 2: Severson initially waited out in the crack. 衔接句2——What did he do later? What was the final result? He kept moving to avoid frostbite, tried to signal for help, and was eventually spotted and saved by rescuers. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：清晨，虚弱的西弗森迎来了全力开展的搜救行动。 →①朋友失联报警，救援队清晨进山全力搜救→②风雪渐停，搜救队大范围搜寻失踪登山者→③虚弱的他紧盯外界，期盼救援到来； 第二段：西弗森起初在石缝中耐心等待。 →④他不敢松懈，持续活动身体防止冻伤→⑤发现搜救队员后奋力挥手、发出声响求救→⑥最终成功获救，深刻领悟安全与坚持的意义。 四.段落续写（标准范文） By dawn, when Severson appeared weak, a search was in full swing. Having received no messages from Severson overnight, his friend grew extremely worried and reported his missing to the park rangers immediately. As the sky turned bright, a professional rescue team was dispatched to the mountain. Despite leftover snow and cold winds, the rescuers searched every possible trail and valley carefully, hoping to find the lost hiker before it was too late. Severson, exhausted and frozen, clung to the last hope and struggled to stay awake. Severson initially waited out in the crack. To avoid severe frostbite, he kept shaking his body and stamping his feet constantly. When he heard faint shouts in the distance, he gathered all his strength to scream and wave his arms wildly. Fortunately, his effort paid off. The rescuers spotted him soon and rushed to his rescue. They wrapped him in warm blankets and sent him to receive medical treatment. Though suffering from slight frostbite, Severson felt extremely grateful. This experience taught him never to ignore weather warnings and always value safety. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $