内容正文:
英 语
八年级下册 RJ
1
2
3
Unit 5 Nature’s Temper
4
A
课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
5
刷写作
6
写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.地震 ____________
2.准备(工作);预备 _____________
3.最坏的;最糟糕的 _______
earthquake
preparation
worst
刷写作
返回目录
7
4.幸亏;感激地 ____________
5.志愿者 ___________
6.出现问题;发生故障 __________
7.醒来 _________
8.突然;猛地 _________________
thankfully
volunteer
go wrong
wake up
all of a sudden
刷写作
返回目录
8
二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】Did your family make any preparations before the typhoon landed?
(make preparations)
→仿写:如果你做好准备的话,你将会很容易克服这次困难。
_______________________________________________________________________
If you make good preparations, you will overcome the difficulty easily.
10.【教材原句】The power went out.(go out)
→仿写:卧室里的灯过了一会儿就灭了。
__________________________________________________
The bedroom light went out after a moment/while.
刷写作
返回目录
9
11.【教材原句】Thanks to her knowledge and quick thinking, one schoolgirl was
able to save over 100 lives.(thanks to)
→仿写:多亏我们的努力,我们才能按时完成任务。
__________________________________________________________
Thanks to our hard work, we can finish the task on time.
12.【教材原句】By the time the bus came, I was cold and wet.(by the time)
→仿写:当工人们到达那里时,水已经淹没了整个城镇。
_______________________________________________________________________
_____________
By the time the workers got there, the water had already covered the
whole town.
刷写作
返回目录
10
第2阶 经典范文模板
It is quite normal to have heavy snow in winter(介绍灾难).The heavy
snow is very dangerous, causing the snowslide (介绍灾难导致的后果) and so
on.
How to protect ourselves during the heavy snow? Here are some
suggestions.First, stay away from snow-covered trees and billboards because they
can fall and hurt people.Second, it is best to wear cleats to avoid falling
down.Third, we had better not go out. If we have to go out, we must pay
attention to safety.Also, we must be careful of holes under the snow.
(用First、Second、Third、Also列举自我保护的方法)
Snow can bring us happiness if we learn to protect ourselves.(总结)
刷写作
返回目录
11
第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025北京期末]假如你是李华,不久前,你的家乡出现了特大暴雨天气,
受损严重。家乡人民众志成城,积极抗洪救灾。你的笔友Peter非常关心你和你的
家乡,想了解一下这次灾害的情况。请你用英文写一封邮件,简述家乡受灾的基
本情况,谈谈令你印象深刻的人或事以及你的感受。词数80左右(开头和结尾已
给出,不计入总词数)。
提示词语:flood; damage; seriously; neighbour; inspiring
刷写作
返回目录
12
提示问题:
(1)What was your hometown like during the flood?
(2)Who or what impressed you?
(3)How did you feel?
Dear Peter,
__________
Yours,
Li Hua
刷写作
返回目录
13
第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般过去时为主
人 称:以第三人称为主
内容要点:描写洪水中家乡的样子,给自己留下深刻印象的人或事以及自己的感受
写作结构:总—分—总
刷写作
返回目录
14
第二步 列#5
刷写作
返回目录
15
__________________________________
Dear Peter,
Thank you very much for your concern. ①
Disastrous rain occurred in my hometown, causing
serious damage. Many low-lying communities flooded. My
hometown was full of muddy water.
The PLA men arrived immediately to rescue the
villagers of the flooded areas.And they did their best to
fight against the flood. ② They supplied the villagers with
fresh vegetables and food.Some medical teams were
organized to help us so that we could have a healthy
diet. __________________________________
①开篇点题,简洁明
了,直接感谢笔友的
关心,并引出下文要
讲述的家乡遭遇洪水
灾害的主题。
②do one’s best to
do sth是一个常用的
表达,表示“尽某人
全力去做某事”。
刷写作
返回目录
16
After a long time, everything went on very well.
And that was a sign of victory.I was deeply moved by
people who helped us. ④
Yours,
Li Hua ③so that引导的状语
从句使句子更加完整
和有条理。
④结尾部分总结了文
章的主题,并表达了
作者对救援人员的感
激之情。
文章开头简洁明了,主体部分详细描述了洪水灾害的情况,条理清晰,层次分
明,使读者能够清晰地了解整个事件的过程,结尾简洁有力,与开头相呼应,使
文章结构完整。
续表
刷写作
返回目录
17
第4阶 实战演练
【2025山东德州调研】假如你是一名中学生,正参加英语写作大赛,请你根
据以下内容写一篇英语短文,介绍在不同的灾害中保护自己的方法,同时提出预
防措施。
刷写作
返回目录
18
注意事项:
(1)要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯;
(2)词数80左右;
(3)文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
________________
刷写作
返回目录
19
In recent years, there have been many disasters, such as floods,
earthquakes, fires, sandstorms and so on.
When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure
not to walk through the flood water.If an earthquake happens, we can
hide under a strong desk and stay away from windows.If a fire happens,
we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the
ground.
刷写作
返回目录
20
Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters.We can
plant more trees and protect wild animals.We can also share some
related information with others.
Hope we can have a better world in the future.
Value statement:Nature is both a kind mother and a cold-blooded killer.
刷写作
返回目录
21
$