摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级下册“成长”主题写作,通过话题词汇(如negative、lonely等)和佳句仿写(如动名词作主语、instead of结构)导入,构建“基础词句储备—经典范文模板—高分范文赏析—实战演练”的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握写作逻辑与表达。
其亮点在于分层训练设计,融合语言能力与思维品质培养。如话题词汇解析拓展用法(如“in some ways”关联on the way等短语)夯实语言基础,范文赏析以“总—分—总”结构(如How to Keep a Good Mood分点阐述)提升逻辑思维,实战邮件写作任务强化语言运用。既助力学生系统提升写作策略,又为教师提供同步训练资源,提高教学效率。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级下册 RJ
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Unit 3 Growing Up
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.消极的 __________
2.孤独的 ________
3.生气;愤怒 _______
4.对……过于苛刻 ____________
5.感到忧郁 ___________
negative
lonely
anger
be hard on
feel blue
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6.在某些方面 ______________
in some ways
【解析】知识拓展
on the way (to)在(去……)路上
along the way沿途
in this way以这种方式
by the way顺便问/说一下
in a way在某种程度上
7.充满 ___________________________
8.解决问题 ________________
be full of/be filled with
solve problems
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】Writing things down can also make you feel better.(动名词作主
语)
→仿写:穿颜色鲜艳的衣服能让人更快乐。
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Wearing bright-colo(u)red clothes can make people happier.
10.【教材原句】How do we deal with our emotions?(deal with)
→仿写:我们肯定会处理好所有的问题。
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We’ll surely deal with all the problems well.
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11.【教材原句】… we should always try our best to control our anger instead of
expressing it in bad ways.(instead of)
→仿写:我们应该谈论我们的问题,而不是把问题都藏在心里。
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We should talk about our problems instead of hiding them in our heart.
12.【教材原句】It’s more important to learn from your mistakes so that you
don’t repeat them in future.(so that)
→仿写:我们可以做运动,以便减轻压力。
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We can do sport so that we can reduce stress.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Good morning, everyone! Today, I want to talk about “Don’t Worry. Be
Happy”.(点明演讲主题)
Last month, I failed a maths test. I was so worried that I even lost interest
in studying.(介绍自己的经历)However, I decided to face it bravely. I asked
my teacher for help and made a new study plan.(介绍做法)Day by day, I
improved my grades.
Life is full of trouble.But worrying about it doesn’t solve the problems.
(总结心得)As the saying goes, “Every cloud has a silver lining!” Let’s be
happy and work hard. We’ll surely deal with all the problems well.(鼓励)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025安徽合肥期中]好的心情对我们的生活和学习都十分重要,假如你们
学校的英语俱乐部组织了一次征文大赛,主题是如何保持好心情,请你根据以下
提示,以“How to Keep a Good Mood”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
提示:#1.1
How to Keep a Good
Mood 1.smile
2.talk about your problems
3.wear bright-coloured clothes
4.do something good
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要求:
(1)词数80左右(作文开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Keep a Good Mood
A good mood makes our life and study easier and better.
第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:第一人称为主
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内容要点:微笑;交流;穿颜色鲜艳的衣服;做些好事
写作结构:总—分—总
第二步 列
开头:开篇点题。
A good mood makes our life and study… But what can we do to…?
中间:具体介绍如何保持好心情
First, we should… Second, we should… Third… can make… Finally, we
should…
结尾:总结全文
Keeping a good mood is… We should always…#1.5.6
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How to Keep a Good Mood
A good mood makes our life and study easier and
better. But what can we do to keep a good mood? __________________________________
①文章采用First、
Second、Third及
Finally分点阐述保持
好心情的方法,逻辑
层次分明,体现了作
者良好的行文构思能
力。
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First ①, we should smile often.Smiling is like
sunshine because it can make us happy and have a good
day. ② Second ① , we should talk about our problems with
our parents or friends instead of hiding them in our heart.
They can help us in some ways.Third ① ,wearing bright-
coloured clothes can make us happier.Finally ① ,we should
do something good for others. It can deal with our
unhappiness because helping others will bring us joy.
Keeping a good mood is important to us. We should
always keep a good mood and enjoy every day in our
life. ③ ②在说明具体方法
时,运用比喻手法,
将微笑比作阳光,生
动形象地展现了微笑
的作用,使表达更加
鲜活且富有感染力。
③结尾再次强调了好
心情的重要性,文章
结构完整,并引发了
读者的共鸣。
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本文围绕“如何保持好心情”展开,采用“总—分—总”结构,逻辑清晰,符合初中
英语写作的要求。首段以“好心情让生活和学习更轻松美好”总起,通过设问自然
引出核心话题;中间段落用First、Second、Third、Finally分点列举具体方法,内
容全面且贴近生活;结尾总结升华,呼应开头。
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第4阶 实战演练
假如你是 David,你的笔友Mark给你发来邮件,邮件中他谈到自己的烦恼:
性格比较内向,不善于与人交往,与同学的关系也不太融洽,所以在学习和生活
中压力很大。请你给他回一封邮件,提一些建议。词数80左右。邮件开头和结尾
已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
I am sorry to know that you are having a lot of problems.
_________
Yours,
David
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Dear Mark,
I am sorry to know that you are having a lot of problems.But I
think there is no need to worry about it.You are very clever.I hope my
advice can help.
I think you should talk more with your friends about your
problems.Try to be more outgoing and friendly to everyone.You can also
tell your parents or your teachers that you need some help.Finally you
should take part in some interesting activities after class to
communicate often with your classmates.
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Hope you’ll get along well with your classmates and make great
progress in your study.
Yours,
David
【解析】链接狂K
情态动词should的用法的详细讲解见狂K重点P11。
Value statement:A problem shared is a problem halved.
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