内容正文:
英 语
七年级下册 JJ
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Unit 5 Our neighbourhood
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单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.有礼貌的;客气的 ________
2.充满 ____________
3.到处;处处 ________________
4.种植蔬菜 _________________
polite
be full of
here and there
grow vegetables
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二、佳句仿写
5.【教材原句】There are trees and flowers everywhere.(there be)
→仿写:社区里有许多商店,例如杂货店、面包房等。
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There are many stores in the neighbourhood, such as grocery stores,
bakeries and so on.
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6.【教材原句】My school is in the middle of the town.(in the middle of)
→仿写:在城镇中心有一个电影院。
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There is a cinema in the middle of the town.
7.【教材原句】The people here live a simple life.(live a... life)
→仿写:村里的农民过着平静的生活。
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The farmers in the village live a peaceful life.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
My Neighbourhood
I live in a quiet and friendly neighbourhood(描述社区特点).
There is a park, a supermarket, and a library near my home (介绍社区周
围设施).Many families live here, and children often play together in the park
(描述社区活动).What I like most about my neighbourhood is the sense of
community. People are kind and always ready to help each other (描写人物特
点).The park is my favourite place because I can relax and play sports there.
To make our neighbourhood better, I will organise a clean-up day with my
friends.We will pick up litter and plant some flowers (为社区提供的服务)to
make our area more beautiful.
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025河北唐山期末]请以“My dream neighbourhood”为主题,给校刊投稿。
提示:
1.What’s your dream neighbourhood like?
2.What can you do in your neighbourhood?
3.What’s your favourite place? Why?
要求:
1.短文须包括提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2.短文不要涉及真实的人名和校名;
3.词数:80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
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My dream neighbourhood
I’m glad to share my ideas about my dream neighbourhood.
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This is my dream neighbourhood. Do you like it?
第一步审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:根据所给要点写出社区设施和社区活动等
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第二步列#4
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My dream neighbourhood
I’m glad to share my ideas about my
dream neighbourhood. My dream
neighbourhood is a peaceful and lively place.
①There are ② many tall trees and beautiful
flowers everywhere, making the air fresh and
sweet. ①开头引入:文章开篇直入主
题,明确表达“理想社区”是“宁静
又充满活力”的,简洁自然地引
出下文;社区设施分层描述,从自
然环境、休闲场所、生活配套三
个方面展开,分别说明各设施的
功能(散步、读书、购物),涵
盖了居住所需要的核心元素,内
容全面且贴近生活。
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In this neighbourhood, there is ② a big
park where I can take a walk after
dinner. There is ② also a library with a large
number of books. The library is my favourite
place, because I can read many books there
on weekends. Besides, there are ② some nice
shops where I can buy delicious food and
interesting toys.
This is my dream neighbourhood. Do you
like it? ②文中多次运用 there be 句型,
符合七年级下册的语法要求,句
式简洁规范。
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本文紧扣“梦想社区”主题,内容充实且层次清晰。开篇直接点明梦想社区“宁静
又充满活力”的整体特点,并以“绿树繁花”勾勒出清新环境,给人直观感受。主
体部分围绕社区设施展开,通过大公园、图书馆及商店等具体场景,展现社区在
休闲、学习、生活等方面的优势,细节描写贴合日常生活,容易引发共鸣。全文
围绕“理想社区”展开,逻辑连贯,无冗余信息。
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025甘肃平凉期末】家乡是我们成长的摇篮,也是我们心灵的港湾。请你
根据以下思维导图的提示,以“I love my hometown”为题,用英语写一篇80词左
右的短文(短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数)。
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要求:1.内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。
I love my hometown
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【参考范文】
I love my hometown
My hometown is a beautiful village.It is near a big town.And great
changes have taken place in my hometown.
In the past, there were only a few small shops, no library or any
tall buildings.But now, there are lots of new tall building, and
streets are clean and wide.We also have a big park where people can
relax and exercise, and children can play games.
I really like these changes.They make our life more convenient and
comfortable.Welcome to my hometown if you have time.And, I love my
hometown!
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【解析】温馨提示
take place与 happen均意为“发生”。
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