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英 语
七年级下册 JJ
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Unit 4 My friends
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单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.兴趣;趣味;利益 n. __________
2.关心 ____________
3.帮助某人 _____________
4.做某事有困难 _______________________________
5.交朋友 ______________
interest
care about
help sb out
have trouble (in) doing sth
make friends
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二、佳句仿写
6.【教材原句】They may love to play the same sports as you.(the same... as)
→仿写:我和我的好友住在同一个小区。
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I live in the same neighbourhood as my best friend.
7.【教材原句】You can find out more meanings of “friendship” with your friends.
(find out)
→仿写:他发现他的朋友喜欢篮球。
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He finds out his friend likes basketball.
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8.【教材原句】On the way, they had an argument.(have an argument)
→仿写:关于这场比赛,几个同学吵了一架。
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Several students had an argument about the game.
9.【教材原句】I don’t get along well with my classmates.(get along well with)
→仿写:我们和新老师相处得很好。
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We get along well with the new teacher.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
My friend and I
My friend is Lucy.(介绍姓名)We have both similarities and differences.We
are both interested in reading books. Whenever we have free time, we would
bury ourselves in different kinds of books.However, I am more outgoing while
she is a bit shy.(介绍相同点和不同点)
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Once, we went hiking together. On the way, I accidentally sprained my ankle.
Lucy didn’t leave me alone. Instead, she helped me sit down and carefully
examined my ankle. Then she supported me all the way back. I was really
touched.(通过具体事件说明友谊的坚固)
In my opinion, to make good friends, first, we should be sincere and honest.
Second, we should respect each other’s differences. Only in this way can we find
true friends and maintain a long-lasting friendship.(分点说明对交友的观点)#1.3
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文,向校英文网站投稿,介绍你最好的朋友。
提示:·What does your best friend look like?
·How did you become best friends?
·What have you learned from him/her?
提示词语: tall、encourage、help、kind
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要求:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
2.词数80个左右。
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第一步 审
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
人 称:以第一人称、第三人称为主
内容要点:根据提示问题介绍好友
写作框架:总—分—总
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第二步 列#3
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Friends are important to everyone. My best friend
is Lily.
She is tall with long straight hair ① and big bright
eyes. We became best friends on the first day of ②
school. I was nervous and she smiled, said “Hi”
and invited me to sit ② together. Soon, we became
friends and talked happily. We often study and play
sports ② together, sharing our lives. ①with短语作伴随状
语,描述外貌特征。
②使用了on the first
day of、invite sb to do
sth、play sports、learn
from等短语,使表达更
准确,富有可读性。
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From her, I’ve learned to be kind and
helpful.When I’m down, she always encourages me. ③ I
will learn from ② her and be better. ③句式多样,运用When
引导的时间状语从句,
内容丰富,读起来朗朗
上口。
开头直接点明朋友是重要的,并引出自己的好友;中间部分从好友外貌、性格特
点、结识过程、好友喜欢的活动几个方面介绍朋友,层次分明;结尾讲述了朋友
对我的影响,内容完整,语句通顺。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025河南许昌期末】有人认为朋友应该相似,有人认为朋友应该不同。你
校校报英语专栏正在开展主题为“How can teenagers make true friends?”的征文活
动。请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际,从以下两种观点中任选其一,用英语写
一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对该问题的看法。
Opin
ion make friends who are the
same as me make friends who are different from me
Reas
ons ·understand each other·do
something together... ·have a more interesting and colourful
life·learn something new...
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写作要求:
1.包含所选观点中的全部要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How can teenagers make true friends?
Everyone has his own way to make friends.____
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【参考范文】
How can teenagers make true friends?
Everyone has his own way to make friends.Different people have
different thoughts.Both views make sense, but I believe that teenagers
should make friends who are different from them.
Firstly, making friends who are different from us allows us to
learn new things.By interacting with people who are different, we can
broaden our horizons and gain new knowledge and skills.Secondly, having
friends who are different from us can make our lives more interesting
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and colourful.Every individual has a unique story to tell, and these
stories can add more depth and variety to our lives.
By respecting our differences, we can build a foundation of mutual
respect and understanding, which is necessary for a lasting friendship.
【解析】知识拓展
allow sb to do sth 允许某人做某事
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