Unit 6 Rain or Shine 单元话题（天气变化）写作满分范文12篇-2025-2026学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（人教版）

**基本信息** 本专项围绕“天气变化”主题，以12篇写作范文构建基础入门、进阶拓展、能力综合实践三级难度体系，系统提升天气相关语言表达能力与逻辑组织能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |基础入门训练|4篇|表格信息转化、书信、天气预报写作，强调事实性描述|从季节/当前天气基础信息输出，构建天气描述核心词汇与句型| |进阶拓展训练|4篇|个人喜好论述、主题征文、图片情景描述、演讲稿，融入情感与观点|从客观描述过渡到主观表达，培养天气与生活关联的思维品质| |能力综合实践|4篇|多信息整合（朋友喜好/多日预报）、邮件推荐、全年天气与活动匹配，强调综合应用|整合多维度天气信息，提升跨情境语言运用与学习策略调适能力|

2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 6 Rain or Shine 单元话题（天气变化）写作满分范文12篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练4篇 1．假如你是李华，你的家乡一年四季天气情况如下表所述，请根据该表中所提示的信息，介绍一下你的家乡的气候状况，并根据实际情况描述去你的家乡旅行的最佳时间。 季节 气候特点 春 多风，有时会有沙尘暴(sandstorm) 夏 很热，也下雨 秋 天气凉爽，但是时间很短 冬 天气很冷，经常下雪 要求： 1、词数60—100词，短文信息内容完整，可适当增加细节。 2、文中不得出现真实的学校和姓名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to introduce the weather in my hometown. In spring, it’s windy and sometimes there are sandstorms. In summer, it’s very hot and it rains a lot. In autumn, the weather is cool, but it doesn’t last long. It is cold and it snows often in winter. The best time to visit my hometown is in autumn because the weather is pleasant. I hope you can come and enjoy it! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍一下你家乡的气候状况，并根据实际情况描述去你家乡旅游的最佳时间，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍你的家乡的气候状况； 第三步，介绍去你的家乡旅行的最佳时间。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth.想要做某事 ②a lot很多 [高分句型] The best time to visit my hometown is in autumn because the weather is pleasant. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom想了解你所在城市的天气情况。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一封信向他介绍： 1.描述当前的天气状况（如晴天、雨天等），并简单描写天气特点； 2.人们在这种天气下正在进行的活动； 3.大家对这种天气的感受。 要求： 1.词数：70左右； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How’s it going? I’m writing to tell you about the weather in my city. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Write to me soon! Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, How’s it going? I’m writing to tell you about the weather in my city. It’s sunny and warm today, with a clear blue sky. The air is fresh after yesterday’s rain. In the park, people are enjoying the pleasant weather: children are flying kites on the grass, and some elderly people are practicing tai chi under the trees. Everyone seems cheerful and relaxed under the vibrant sunshine. We all love such comfortable weather because it brings joy and energy to our daily life. Write to me soon! Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：书信作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”为主（描述当前天气和正在进行的活动）； ③提示：需涵盖天气状况、人们活动及感受三点，并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：直接描述天气状况（如晴、雨等）及特点（如空气清新、阳光明媚等）。 第二步：列举人们在该天气下的具体活动（如放风筝、打太极等），使用现在进行时。 第三步：表达人们对天气的感受（如开心、放松等），并简要说明原因。 [亮点词汇] ①pleasant weather宜人的天气 ②bring joy and energy带来快乐和活力 [高分句型] We all love such comfortable weather because it brings joy and energy to our daily life. (because引导原因状语从句) 3．请根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇关于各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。词数：80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 提示词汇：below zero (零度以下)，degree (度)。 　Good morning, everyone. Here is the weather report today. It’s rainy and snowy in Beijing. It’s very cold. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Enjoy your day! 【答案】【参考范文】 Good morning, everyone. Here is the weather report today. It’s rainy and snowy in Beijing. It’s very cold. The temperature in Beijing is around -5℃, so please wear warm clothes. Shanghai is cloudy all day with a temperature of about 8℃. Hong Kong is sunny and warmer at around 10℃, where you can do outdoor activities. While in Chengdu, there is thick fog today, so drivers must be careful when driving. The temperature in Chengdu is around 5℃. Dalian is cloudy and freezing at around -10℃. Xi’an is sunny after the rain with a temperature of about 0℃. Enjoy your day! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述天气情况； ③提示：根据表格内容及提示词汇，介绍各大城市未来24小时的天气。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头引出话题（已给出）； 第二步，分别介绍各地的天气情况； 第三步，结尾表达祝福（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①a bit一点儿 ②all day全天 ③thick fog浓雾 [高分句型] ①Hong Kong is sunny and warmer at around 10℃, where you can do outdoor activities. (where引导非限定定语从句) ②While in Chengdu, there is thick fog today, so drivers must be careful when driving.（so引导的结果状语从句） 4．假如你是中央电视台的天气预报员，请根据下表提示用英语写一则天气预报。 Cities Weather Beijing New York Moscow Toronto 提示词：雨伞umbrella 要求： 1. 内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone! Here is the weather report of some big cities. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s the weather report for today. Thank you for listening! 【答案】例文 Good morning, everyone! Here is the weather report of some big cities. It’s windy and cold in Beijing. You’d better stay at home or wear warm clothes when you go out. It’s cloudy in New York. In Moscow, the weather is fine and sunny in the morning, but it will be windy in the afternoon. So you need to take warm clothes with you. In Toronto the weather is bad. It’s rainy in the morning. Please remember to take an umbrella. The rain will stop in the afternoon, but it will still be cold. That’s the weather report for today. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：根据表格中四个城市（北京、纽约、莫斯科、多伦多）的天气图标信息写一则天气预报，并适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步：总述这是关于几个大城市的天气预报； 第二步：结合表格提示，介绍北京、纽约、莫斯科、多伦多的天气情况，并给出适当建议； 第三步：总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①weather report天气预报 ②wear warm clothes穿暖和的衣服 ③take an umbrella带雨伞 [高分句型] ①You’d better stay at home or wear warm clothes when you go out.（运用了“had better do”提建议的句型和“when”引导的时间状语从句） ②Please remember to take an umbrella.（运用了“Please remember to do...”的祈使句） 进阶拓展训练4篇 5．写作题目：My Favorite Weather 写作要求：描述你最喜欢的天气类型（如：晴天、雨天、雪天等）。 说明你喜欢这种天气的原因（如：可以做哪些活动，或者这种天气让你感觉如何）。 文章要求60词左右，语言通顺，语法正确。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Weather My favorite weather is sunny days. When the sun shines brightly, I feel happy and energetic. I can do many outdoor activities, such as playing football with friends or having a picnic in the park. The warm sunshine makes me feel relaxed and great. Sometimes I just sit outside and enjoy the beautiful day. I love sunny days because they are perfect for fun outdoor time. 【总体分析】①题材：话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：围绕最喜欢的天气（晴天）展开，描述其特点、可进行的活动以及个人感受。 【写作步骤】第一步：开门见山说明最喜欢的天气类型（晴天）； 第二步：用2-3句话描述喜欢的原因，包括感受和具体活动； 第三步：总结天气带来的积极影响，表达情感。 【亮点词汇】①sunny days晴天 ②energetic精力充沛的 ③outdoor activities户外活动 【高分句型】①When the sun shines brightly, I feel happy and energetic.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） ②I can do many outdoor activities, such as playing football with friends or having a picnic in the park.（运用了such as列举举例） 6．学校即将举办“My Weather-related Healthy Lifestyle”主题征文活动，邀请同学们分享自己的天气相关健康生活习惯、对天气与生活的理解，以及如何根据天气养成健康的生活方式。请你根据所学内容，写一篇80词左右的英语短文参赛。 写作要求： 1. 包含：天气与作息、出行、运动、情绪管理4个部分； 2. 贴合单元主题，使用单元核心词汇与句型； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确。     ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Weather-related Healthy Lifestyle I have a healthy lifestyle that fits different weather. First, I check the weather forecast daily to plan my routine: I go hiking on sunny days and read at home on rainy days. Second, I change clothes in time to keep warm or cool when going out. Third, I do indoor exercise on bad weather days to stay fit. Finally, I keep a positive mood whether it rains or shines. I believe adapting to the weather is the key to a healthy life. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：天气与作息、出行、运动、情绪管理四项健康习惯 确定人称：第一人称I/my 注意事项：词数80词左右，语句通顺，语法正确。 [第二步：构思布局] 总分结构： 开头总起：点明自己有随天气变化的健康生活方式 主体分述：用First/Second/Third/Finally依次写作息、出行、运动、情绪 结尾总结：表达对天气与健康生活的理解，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：天气与作息 根据天气安排日常作息：check the weather forecast daily, to plan my routine, go hiking, on sunny days, read at home, on rainy days 要点二：天气与出行 根据天气调整穿衣，保障出行健康：change clothes in time, to keep warm or cool, when going out 要点三：天气与运动 根据天气选择室内外运动：do indoor exercise, on bad weather days, to stay fit 要点四：天气与情绪管理 无论天气如何保持积极情绪：keep a positive mood, whether it rains or shines 要点五：主题升华 对天气与健康生活的理解：I believe..., adapt to the weather, the key to a healthy life 7．假设你是CCTV《世界各地》栏目的记者，请根据下面的图片以及内容提示，任选2幅图，给观众介绍在不同天气下，人们正在做的不同活动。 内容包括：*What’s the weather like in the pictures? *What are the people in the pictures doing? 要求：1．词数不少于50词； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名、班级； 3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around the World show. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     例文： Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around the World show. Look at the first place. It’s a snowy day. The children are making a snowman in the snow. They are wearing warm clothes and gloves. They look very happy because they can play with the white snow.   Now, let’s go to another place. The weather is sunny and warm. Some people are in the park. A boy is flying a kite in the sky. Some children are playing basketball on the playground. Others are sitting on the grass and enjoying the sunshine. What a wonderful day!   Different weather brings different fun. I hope you enjoy today’s show. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时和现在进行时为主   明确要点：不同天气、不同活动 确定人称：第一人称（I，记者身份）介绍，第三人称描述人物活动   注意事项：不得出现真实人名、班级；开头已给出 [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构：   开头段：已给出“Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around the World show.”，作为节目开场白   主体段：分两个场景描述 结尾段：总结不同天气带来不同乐趣，表达对观众的祝福   [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：不同天气 天气描述：snowy day/sunny/rainy/snowy/hot/warm/cool/cold/clear/dry/wet等 要点二：不同活动 地点：in the park//on the playground/at the ice rink/in the street/in the garden等 活动内容：flying a kite/playing basketball/enjoying the sunshine/make a snowman/walk a dog/take a dog for a walk/skate on the ice/ice skate等 结尾升华   主题句：Different weather brings different fun.  等 结束语：I hope you enjoy today’s show.等 8．假如你是李华，你校正在开展以“My Favorite Weather”为题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：你最喜爱的天气类型、喜爱此天气的原因以及你在这种天气状况下经常做的活动。 提示词语：snow, sunny, beautiful, swimming, kite, snowman 内容提示： ● What kind of weather do you like? ● Why do you like this kind of weather? ● What do you usually do in this kind of weather? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favorite weather is sunny weather. I love it because it is bright and warm, making every day feel cheerful and lively. The sun shines brightly, and the sky is blue with white clouds, which looks really beautiful. On sunny days, I usually do many interesting things with my friends. In summer, we often go swimming in the pool to cool down. On weekends, we fly kites in the park, and the wind carries our kites high in the sky. Sometimes I also read books in the yard under the sun. Sunny weather brings me happiness and energy, so it is my favorite kind of weather. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①喜爱的天气+原因；②对应天气下的活动 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意：用上提示词，不透露个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明主题 主体段：分写原因、活动 结尾段：总结升华 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：最喜爱的天气及原因 天气选择：sunny weather/sunny days 原因描述：bright and warm/look really beautiful/warm and cheerful/very pretty 要点二：该天气下常做的活动 活动内容：go swimmingfly kites/read books/swim in the pool/fly a kite/read outdoors 能力综合实践4篇 9．不同的天气给人不同的感觉，让人们做不同的事情。假如你是张华，请你根据写作要点提示和要求，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿：先介绍你对天气的看法，再谈谈你的几个好朋友和你自己最喜爱的季节或天气以及活动。 写作要点 参考句型 1. What’s your idea about weather? affect... feelings; do different things 2. What are your friends’ favourite weather and activities? (list at least three friends’) like... weather best because... make... 3. What about your favourite weather and activities? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚；行文连贯，可适当拓展； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3. 词数不少于80，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hi, I am Zhang Hua. I’d like to talk about the weather. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   例文： Hi, I am Zhang Hua. I’d like to talk about the weather. I think weather affects our feelings and makes us do different things in our daily lives. My friend Li Ming likes sunny days best because he can play basketball with his classmates. Wang Fang enjoys snowy weather since she loves making snowmen with her family. Zhao Qiang prefers rainy days as he feels relaxed listening to the rain quietly. My favorite is autumn. It’s cool and the sky is clear. I often go hiking with my family and enjoy the beautiful golden leaves. Different weather brings us different joys. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文（投稿短文），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍自己对天气的看法，描述至少三位朋友最喜欢的天气与活动，说明自己最喜欢的天气与活动 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实个人信息，要点齐全，词数不少于80词，开头不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：沿用题目给定开头，引出话题 主体段：先说明自己对天气的看法，再依次介绍三位朋友的喜好，最后描述自己最喜欢的季节与活动 结尾段：总结不同天气带来的不同乐趣 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：对天气的看法 核心短语：affect our feelings/makes us do different things/in our daily lives/has a great influence on our moods and behaviors/influences our daily choices and how we feel等 要点二：朋友们的天气与活动喜好 核心短语：likes sunny days best/play basketball with his classmates/enjoys snowy weather/making snowmen with her family/prefers rainy days；feels relaxed listening to the rain quietly/loves warm and sunny weather to play outdoor sports/enjoys snowy days to build snowmen and have snowball fights /prefers rainy weather to stay indoors and read books等 要点三：自己的天气与活动喜好 核心短语：favorite is autumn/cool and the sky is clear/go hiking with my family/enjoy the beautiful golden leaves/my favorite season is autumn for its mild and pleasant weather/like to go hiking and enjoy the colorful fall scenery等 要点四：总结 核心短语：brings us different joys/different kinds of weather bring us unique experiences and happiness/each type of weather has its own special charm and fun 10．假如你是李华，是学校的广播员，你每天为大家播报天气信息。下面表格列出了今明后三天的天气，请你为大家播报。要点： 星期 Friday Saturday Sunday 天气 建议 天气凉爽，适合课后与同学进行室外活动 雨天，最好待在家做作业、做家务 天气晴朗，适合和家人去公园游玩 注意： 1. 内容应包括所有提示内容，行文要通顺连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Hua. Now I’d like to tell you the weather report for today and the following two days. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. 【答案】One possible version: Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Hua. Now I’d like to tell you the weather report for today and the following two days. It’s cloudy today. So it’s cool. It’s a good time to play outside with your classmates after class. But tomorrow you have to stay at home because it’s rainy. You can do your homework and help your parents do some housework at home. On Sunday, the sun comes out again. It’s sunny and warm. It’s great to go to the park with your family. That’s all. 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：这是一篇天气报告类的应用文，用一般现在时 明确要点：需要介绍今天、明天和后天的天气状况以及根据不同天气给出相应的活动建议 确定人称：第三人称和第二人称为主 注意事项：语言表达要简洁明了，清晰传达天气信息和活动建议；时态使用一般现在时和一般将来时来分别描述当前和未来的天气 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：打招呼并表明身份，引出要介绍的天气报告内容 主体段：详细描述今天、明天和后天的天气状况以及对应的活动建议 结尾段：简单结束报告 [第三步：要点展示] 要点一：天气状况 具体状况：cloudy/rainy/sunny and warm 要点二：根据不同天气给出相应的活动建议 具体建议：play outside with your classmates/stay at home/do your homework and help your parents do some housework/go to the park 11．假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lily计划来你的家乡(hometown)旅游，她想了解一下当地的天气情况。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，给Lily写一封邮件，介绍一下你家乡一年四季的天气情况，向她推荐来你家乡旅游的最佳时间，并陈述理由。 Season Weather Spring warm but windy Summer hot and rainy sometimes Autumn cool and the air is fresh Winter cold and snowy 要求：不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Lily, How’s it going? Let me tell you something about my family and hometown. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me something about your family and the weather in your hometown? Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Lily, How’s it going? Let me tell you something about my family and hometown. The weather in my hometown is different in four seasons. In spring, it is warm but quite windy. Summer is hot and it rains sometimes. Autumn comes with cool days and fresh air. Winter is cold and it often snows here. I think the best time to visit my hometown is autumn. The weather is very comfortable, neither too hot nor too cold. The air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful. It is perfect for travelling and taking walks outside. I really hope you can come here soon. Can you tell me something about your family and the weather in your hometown? Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（邮件），用一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍家乡四季天气情况、推荐最佳旅游时间并陈述理由 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：开头结尾已给出，词数不少于 80 词（开头结尾不计入总词数） [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，表明要介绍家乡天气情况 主体段：分别介绍家乡四季天气情况，推荐最佳旅游时间并说明理由 结尾段：询问对方家乡情况 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍家乡四季天气情况 季节：spring/summer/autumn/winter 天气描述： Spring：In spring, it is warm but quite windy./Spring is a warm and windy season in my hometown. Summer：Summer is hot and it rains sometimes./In summer, it’s extremely hot and it often rains occasionally. Autumn：Autumn comes with cool days and fresh air./Autumn brings cool weather and the air is really fresh. Winter：Winter is cold and it often snows here./In winter, it’s very cold and snow falls frequently. 要点二：推荐最佳旅游时间并说明理由 推荐时间：I think the best time to visit my hometown is autumn./In my opinion, the most suitable time for you to come to my hometown is autumn. 理由说明： 天气舒适：The weather is very comfortable, neither too hot nor too cold./The climate in autumn is quite pleasant, not too hot and not too cold at all. 空气新鲜：The air is fresh./The air in autumn is extremely fresh and invigorating. 景色优美：The scenery is beautiful./The scenery in autumn is absolutely stunning. 适合出行：It is perfect for travelling and taking walks outside./It’s an ideal time for going on trips and taking leisurely walks outdoors. 12．假如你是张华，你的英国笔友Mike给你发来邮件说他想了解你家乡一年中的天气情况及适宜进行的各种活动，以便他决定明年何时来你家乡度假。请你给他回一封邮件，告诉他相关情况。 内容要点： Months Weather and temperature Activities From March to May Sunny and warm, rainy sometimes; 12℃-21℃ Ride a bike From June to September Sunny and hot; 29℃-39℃ Go swimming From October to November Cool, windy sometimes; 10℃-18℃ Rock climbing From December to February Freezing cold, snowy sometimes; -2℃-5℃ Build snowmen 要求： 1.邮件应包括所有的内容要点，可适当拓展，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2.邮件中不能出现真实的人名、校名； 3.词数不少于70（邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, Happy to get your e-mail. Let me tell you what the weather is like and what we can do in my hometown in a year. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. I’m looking forward to your visit to my hometown! Yours, Zhang Hua 【答案】 例文： Dear Mike, Happy to get your e-mail. Let me tell you what the weather is like and what we can do in my hometown in a year. From March to May, it is sunny and warm with temperatures between 12℃ and 21℃, though it rains sometimes. It’s a perfect time to ride a bike. Then from June to September, the weather becomes sunny and hot, about 29℃ to 39℃. You can go swimming to cool down. Next, from October to November, it is cool, sometimes windy, with temperatures from 10℃ to 18℃. Rock climbing is a great activity then. Finally, from December to February, it is freezing cold, sometimes snowy, and the temperature is between -2℃ and 5℃. We often build snowmen for fun. That’s all. I’m looking forward to your visit to my hometown! Yours, Zhang Hua 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件，用一般现在时 明确要点：详细描述家乡每个季节的天气特点、温度范围以及适合进行的活动 确定人称：第一人称和第三人称 注意事项：要准确描述天气和温度，语言表达要清晰流畅，符合书信的格式规范 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：通过表达收到对方邮件的喜悦，引出要介绍家乡天气和活动的主题 主体段：按照季节顺序，依次描述每个季节的天气、温度和适合开展的活动 结尾段：表达对对方来家乡参观的期待 [第三步：要点展示] 要点一：每个季节的天气特点 具体特点：sunny and warm/sunny and hot/cool, sometimes windy/freezing cold, sometimes snowy/extremely hot等 要点二：温度范围 温度范围：between 12℃ and 21℃/about 29℃ to 39℃/from 10℃ to 18℃/there is a significant temperature difference等 要点三：每个季节进行的活动 具体活动：ride a bike/go swimming/rock climbing/build snowmen/fly kites/make snowmen for fun等 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 6 Rain or Shine 单元话题（天气变化）写作满分范文12篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练4篇 1．假如你是李华，你的家乡一年四季天气情况如下表所述，请根据该表中所提示的信息，介绍一下你的家乡的气候状况，并根据实际情况描述去你的家乡旅行的最佳时间。 季节 气候特点 春 多风，有时会有沙尘暴(sandstorm) 夏 很热，也下雨 秋 天气凉爽，但是时间很短 冬 天气很冷，经常下雪 要求： 1、词数60—100词，短文信息内容完整，可适当增加细节。 2、文中不得出现真实的学校和姓名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom想了解你所在城市的天气情况。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一封信向他介绍： 1.描述当前的天气状况（如晴天、雨天等），并简单描写天气特点； 2.人们在这种天气下正在进行的活动； 3.大家对这种天气的感受。 要求： 1.词数：70左右； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How’s it going? I’m writing to tell you about the weather in my city. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Write to me soon! Best wishes, Li Hua 3．请根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇关于各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。词数：80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 提示词汇：below zero (零度以下)，degree (度)。 　Good morning, everyone. Here is the weather report today. It’s rainy and snowy in Beijing. It’s very cold. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Enjoy your day! 4．假如你是中央电视台的天气预报员，请根据下表提示用英语写一则天气预报。 Cities Weather Beijing New York Moscow Toronto 提示词：雨伞umbrella 要求： 1. 内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone! Here is the weather report of some big cities. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s the weather report for today. Thank you for listening! 进阶拓展训练4篇 5．写作题目：My Favorite Weather 写作要求：描述你最喜欢的天气类型（如：晴天、雨天、雪天等）。 说明你喜欢这种天气的原因（如：可以做哪些活动，或者这种天气让你感觉如何）。 文章要求60词左右，语言通顺，语法正确。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．学校即将举办“My Weather-related Healthy Lifestyle”主题征文活动，邀请同学们分享自己的天气相关健康生活习惯、对天气与生活的理解，以及如何根据天气养成健康的生活方式。请你根据所学内容，写一篇80词左右的英语短文参赛。 写作要求： 1. 包含：天气与作息、出行、运动、情绪管理4个部分； 2. 贴合单元主题，使用单元核心词汇与句型； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确。     ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是CCTV《世界各地》栏目的记者，请根据下面的图片以及内容提示，任选2幅图，给观众介绍在不同天气下，人们正在做的不同活动。 内容包括：*What’s the weather like in the pictures? *What are the people in the pictures doing? 要求：1．词数不少于50词； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名、班级； 3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around the World show. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李华，你校正在开展以“My Favorite Weather”为题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：你最喜爱的天气类型、喜爱此天气的原因以及你在这种天气状况下经常做的活动。 提示词语：snow, sunny, beautiful, swimming, kite, snowman 内容提示： ● What kind of weather do you like? ● Why do you like this kind of weather? ● What do you usually do in this kind of weather? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践4篇 9．不同的天气给人不同的感觉，让人们做不同的事情。假如你是张华，请你根据写作要点提示和要求，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿：先介绍你对天气的看法，再谈谈你的几个好朋友和你自己最喜爱的季节或天气以及活动。 写作要点 参考句型 1. What’s your idea about weather? affect... feelings; do different things 2. What are your friends’ favourite weather and activities? (list at least three friends’) like... weather best because... make... 3. What about your favourite weather and activities? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚；行文连贯，可适当拓展； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3. 词数不少于80，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hi, I am Zhang Hua. I’d like to talk about the weather. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你是李华，是学校的广播员，你每天为大家播报天气信息。下面表格列出了今明后三天的天气，请你为大家播报。要点： 星期 Friday Saturday Sunday 天气 建议 天气凉爽，适合课后与同学进行室外活动 雨天，最好待在家做作业、做家务 天气晴朗，适合和家人去公园游玩 注意： 1. 内容应包括所有提示内容，行文要通顺连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Hua. Now I’d like to tell you the weather report for today and the following two days. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. 11．假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lily计划来你的家乡(hometown)旅游，她想了解一下当地的天气情况。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，给Lily写一封邮件，介绍一下你家乡一年四季的天气情况，向她推荐来你家乡旅游的最佳时间，并陈述理由。 Season Weather Spring warm but windy Summer hot and rainy sometimes Autumn cool and the air is fresh Winter cold and snowy 要求：不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Lily, How’s it going? Let me tell you something about my family and hometown. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me something about your family and the weather in your hometown? Yours, Li Hua 12．假如你是张华，你的英国笔友Mike给你发来邮件说他想了解你家乡一年中的天气情况及适宜进行的各种活动，以便他决定明年何时来你家乡度假。请你给他回一封邮件，告诉他相关情况。 内容要点： Months Weather and temperature Activities From March to May Sunny and warm, rainy sometimes; 12℃-21℃ Ride a bike From June to September Sunny and hot; 29℃-39℃ Go swimming From October to November Cool, windy sometimes; 10℃-18℃ Rock climbing From December to February Freezing cold, snowy sometimes; -2℃-5℃ Build snowmen 要求： 1.邮件应包括所有的内容要点，可适当拓展，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2.邮件中不能出现真实的人名、校名； 3.词数不少于70（邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Mike, Happy to get your e-mail. Let me tell you what the weather is like and what we can do in my hometown in a year. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. I’m looking forward to your visit to my hometown! Yours, Zhang Hua 8 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $