2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---冰洞绝境，自救求生 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At 11:15 a.m., I set out on a high-altitude training run in California's Sequoia National Park in sunny, 70°F temperatures. I was preparing for a marathon and came to the park for a scenic workout, and to see how close I could get to the 10, 500-foot passes on the top of the Great Western Divide. I climbed five miles and 1,000 feet before the trail's surface became snow-covered and dangerous enough that I had to turn around. On my run, I noted the potential instability of the five-foot-deep snow bridge over Franklin Creek, and I knelt to examine it. There were no visible signs of weakness, and the surface was rock hard-I guessed it could support a truck. I crossed without incident. Conditions past the stream stayed cool for the period of my run, but I expected the lower snow to soften as the day warmed. So when I approached the snow bridge again on my return trip, I examined it thoroughly. I knelt to look through the snow for cracks(裂缝)—danger signs. From my position, however, I couldn't see the bridge's base, which was losing strength as the stream water splashed(飞溅)the icy structure from below. Had I been able to see its base, I might have noted that it had weakened. I was two miles when the bridge collapsed beneath my feet. Falling into the fast-moving, 40°F water, I struggled against the powerful current, trying to stay afloat(漂浮的) and slow my passage through the tunnel. The powerful, snowmelt-fueled current swept me downstream, and I grasped anything that would keep the waist-deep stream from pushing me over the 10-foot waterfall downstream. By the time my freezing fingers caught a branch, the current had swept me 60 feet down a tunnel of ice. I grasped a pencil-size branch, with all my strength and moved slowly out of the rushing water into a cave barely large enough to keep my bent body, out of the powerful stream. I was looking for a way out, but the tunnel extended as far as I could see. In an attempt to calm myself and think clearly, I lay back and stared at the cave's ceiling. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Wise or not, my only choice was to cut through the roof of this icy cave. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I had to draw attention to myself. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The author went for high-altitude marathon training in a national park--- _________________ --- He checked and crossed a seemingly solid snow bridge safely--- _________________ --- The snow bridge weakened secretly due to running water below--- _________________ --- The bridge collapsed, sweeping him into icy water and an ice cave--- He calmed down and tried to find a way out 4. 细节问答 Why did the author run in the national park? ：___________________________________ What did the author think of the snow bridge at first?：_________________________________ Why did the snow bridge become dangerous later?：________________________________________________ What danger did the author face after falling into the water?：__________________________________________ How did the author survive the rushing current?：_____________________________________________ What was the author’s situation in the end of the given text?：_________________________________________________ What would the author do to escape the cave?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者为备战马拉松，前往国家公园进行高原跑步训练→途中遇到积雪覆盖的危险路段，发现一座看似坚固的雪桥→初次检查无裂痕、桥面坚硬，安全通过→日间升温，桥下水流持续冲刷导致雪桥基底悄悄松动→返程时雪桥突然坍塌，作者坠入冰冷激流→被水流冲入冰洞，艰难抓住树枝脱险、暂时避险→_________________ →（续写）作者决定凿开冰洞顶部求生、制造求救信号→（续写）成功引来救援、安全脱险，收获野外避险教训 6．情感线 I：calm and confident→___________→shocked and terrified→___________→calm and determined→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式积累 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；虚拟语气 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 自救成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Wise or not, my only choice was to cut through the roof of this icy cave. 衔接句1——Why did he choose this way? What efforts did he make? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I had to draw attention to myself. 衔接句2——What methods did he use to attract help? What was the final result? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：无论是否稳妥，凿开冰洞顶是我唯一的选择。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：我必须让别人注意到我。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写（150词左右） Wise or not, my only choice was to cut through the roof of this icy cave. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I had to draw attention to myself. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 The author（备战马拉松、具备运动经验、遇险冷静理智、善于自救的跑步爱好者） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The author went for high-altitude marathon training in a national park--- He encountered snow-covered dangerous trails on his way--- He checked and crossed a seemingly solid snow bridge safely--- The temperature rose and softened the snow--- The snow bridge weakened secretly due to running water below--- He failed to spot the hidden danger underneath--- The bridge collapsed, sweeping him into icy water and an ice cave--- He calmed down and tried to find a way out 4. 细节问答 Why did the author run in the national park? ：He was preparing for a marathon and wanted to take a high-altitude scenic training run. What did the author think of the snow bridge at first?：It looked solid and firm with no visible cracks, and he believed it was strong enough to bear heavy weight. Why did the snow bridge become dangerous later?：The rising temperature softened the snow, and the running stream splashed and weakened the bridge’s base secretly from below. What danger did the author face after falling into the water?：He was swept by fierce icy current and faced the risk of falling over a downstream waterfall. How did the author survive the rushing current?：He caught a small branch tightly and struggled out of the rushing water into a narrow ice cave. What was the author’s situation in the end of the given text?：Trapped in a dark endless ice cave, he calmed himself down to figure out a way to escape. What would the author do to escape the cave?：He would break the cave ceiling to get fresh air and create chances to attract rescuers’ attention. What does the story tell us?：Hidden dangers exist everywhere. We should never judge things only by their appearance, and staying calm and brave is the key to self-rescue in danger. 5．情节线 作者为备战马拉松，前往国家公园进行高原跑步训练→途中遇积雪险路，发现一座外观坚固的雪桥→仔细检查未见裂痕，安全通行→白天气温升高，桥下流水持续冲刷，雪桥基底暗中受损松动→返程时雪桥突然坍塌，作者坠入冰冷湍急的水流→险些被冲下瀑布，拼死抓住树枝躲入冰洞避险→身处幽深封闭冰洞，作者冷静心态、思考逃生方案→（续写）决定凿开冰顶开辟出口、获取空气→（续写）主动制造求救信号，成功获救，领悟野外危险不可貌相的道理 6．情感线 I：calm and confident→alert and cautious→shocked and terrified→desperate and cold→calm and determined→relieved and insightful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者在高原跑步训练时，因忽视雪桥暗藏的底部隐患不幸坠桥落水、被困冰洞，绝境中他保持冷静，主动自救求救，最终成功脱险，并收获深刻的安全警示。 英文：While training in a national park, the author fell into an icy cave due to the hidden collapse of a snow bridge. Trapped in desperation, he stayed calm, took active self-rescue measures and finally got saved, learning never to ignore hidden dangers. 8. 句式积累 虚拟语气：Had I been able to see its base, I might have noted that it had weakened. 非谓语动词：I struggled against the powerful current, trying to stay afloat. 定语从句：I grasped a pencil-size branch, with which I moved out of the rushing water. 状语从句：Conditions past the stream stayed cool but softened as the day warmed. 9. 本文主题 自救励志类：事物不可貌相，隐患常藏于暗处；身处绝境时，冷静勇敢、主动自救方能绝境求生。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Wise or not, my only choice was to cut through the roof of this icy cave. 衔接句1——Why did he choose this way? What efforts did he make? Trapped in the closed cave with no other way out, the author tried his best to break the ice ceiling to create an opening for air and escape. Paragraph 2: I had to draw attention to myself. 衔接句2——What methods did he use to attract help? What was the final result? He shouted for help and waved objects to signal for rescue, fortunately catching hikers’ attention and getting saved safely. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：无论是否稳妥，凿开冰洞顶是我唯一的选择。 →①冰洞封闭幽深、无其他出路，滞留只会失温遇险→②强忍寒冷疲惫，反复撞击冰层、凿开洞口→③成功透入阳光与空气，重获生机； 第二段：我必须让别人注意到我。 →①深知隐蔽洞穴难以被发现，立刻想办法求救→②间隔大声呼救、挥动碎冰吸引注意→③幸运被徒步者发现，成功获救、领悟安全真谛。 四.段落续写范文（150词左右） Wise or not, my only choice was to cut through the roof of this icy cave. Shivering violently in the freezing air, I knew staying trapped meant inevitable danger. Summoning all my remaining strength, I began striking the cave’s icy ceiling with my fists and hard branches. The thick ice resisted firmly at first, but persistent blows gradually created tiny cracks. After endless efforts, a small opening broke through, letting in bright sunlight and fresh air. The hope of survival instantly warmed my frozen body and cheered me up. I had to draw attention to myself. Knowing the hidden cave could hardly be noticed, I shouted for help loudly at intervals and waved pieces of broken ice through the opening. Luckily, a team of passing hikers caught sight of my signal and heard my weak cries. They rushed to rescue me and offered warm supplies. Finally, I escaped the icy cave safely. This narrow escape taught me a valuable lesson: never judge risks merely by appearances, for hidden dangers are the most terrifying enemies in the wild. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $