2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---一场治愈人心的徒步 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Jennifer, do you hike?” Karen said to me. “Yes, I hike,” I replied. Karen’s slim figure and sun-kissed cheeks suggested she was a regular hiker. “Great, do you want to come with us tomorrow? We will meet in front of Bobbie’s house at 6:30 before it is too hot, and we will go over to Thunderbird Mountain. It is about three miles in total. Does that sound OK?” Three miles. I wasn’t sure how long that was, partly because I didn’t actually hike. I was somewhat familiar with the area where they planned to go, but our family had just moved from Oregon to Arizona. I walked our dog around the neighbourhood all the time before we moved here. But I wasn’t sure if I had gone three miles. Being new to town and excited about an invitation from women I wanted to befriend, I accepted, saying, “Sure. That sounds great. We all benefit from hiking.” When this hiking conversation among my new friends occurred, I was at a monthly dinner for moms in my new neighborhood. The group was four women in their forties, all with high-school kids, jobs, a fondness for reading and music and tricks for simplifying work-life. I was honored to be invited since making friends in my forties in a new town wasn’t easy. After this re-location for my husband’s career, making friends wasn’t as simple for me as it was for him. He came to the community for a full-time position at a busy university. Our teenaged son and daughter immediately plugged into school through sports and clubs. I was enormously grateful for the ease of the transition for my family, but nervous for myself. So, while at the monthly ladies’ gathering, when hiking came up, I just played along, wanting to try something new. The next day, I got up early and carefully selected comfortable hiking clothes. When I arrived at the designated friend’s driveway a little early, Karen was standing there waiting. “Hey, Jennifer, I’m glad that you can come to hike,” she said cheerfully and hugged me. When the others joined us, we started walking. I was sweaty and a little out of breath before we even started going uphill. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “So where did you hike in Oregon?” one of them asked, offering me a bottle of water. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ By accepting the invitation to hike that day, I received a lot. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 My family moved to a new town--- _________________ --- I was invited to hike with new lady friends--- _________________ --- I pretended to be a hiker to make friends--- _________________ --- I joined the hiking trip and felt exhausted at the beginning 4. 细节问答 Why did the author accept the hiking invitation? ：___________________________________ Why was it hard for the author to make new friends?：_________________________________ What do we know about the author’s new friends?：________________________________________________ What was the author’s real hiking experience?：__________________________________________ How did the author feel at the start of the hike?：_____________________________________________ Why did the author’s family adapt to the new life easily?：_________________________________________________ What would the friends do when knowing the author’s situation?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者一家搬家来到新城镇→作者中年迁居，难以结交新朋友→邻里妈妈聚会收到徒步邀约，为融入朋友谎称自己擅长徒步→第二天作者赴约徒步，刚开始就气喘吁吁、体力不支→朋友提问戳破作者的“谎言”→_________________ →（续写）朋友暖心包容、陪伴鼓励作者→（续写）作者收获真挚友谊，明白真诚与勇敢尝试的意义 6．情感线 I：lonely and anxious→___________→nervous and awkward→___________→touched and warm→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式积累 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: “So where did you hike in Oregon?” one of them asked, offering me a bottle of water. 衔接句1——How did the author respond? How did friends react to her honesty? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: By accepting the invitation to hike that day, I received a lot. 衔接句2——What did the author gain from this experience? What was her final feeling? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：一位朋友递来水，询问作者在俄勒冈州的徒步经历。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：那天接受徒步邀约，让我收获良多。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写（150词左右） “So where did you hike in Oregon?” one of them asked, offering me a bottle of water. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ By accepting the invitation to hike that day, I received a lot. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Jennifer（迁居新城市、渴望交友、真诚善良的中年母亲）；Karen及邻里妈妈们（热情友善、包容温暖的新朋友） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 My family moved to a new town--- I struggled to make new friends--- I was invited to hike with new lady friends--- I pretended to be an experienced hiker to fit in--- I joined the hiking trip and felt exhausted at the beginning 4. 细节问答 Why did the author accept the hiking invitation? ：She was new in town and eager to make new friends, so she wanted to fit in and try new things. Why was it hard for the author to make new friends?：It was difficult for a middle-aged person to build new social connections after moving to a strange town. What do we know about the author’s new friends?：They are warm middle-aged moms with families, who love reading, music and hiking. What was the author’s real hiking experience?：She had no real hiking experience and only walked her dog in the neighborhood before. How did the author feel at the start of the hike?：She felt sweaty, out of breath and exhausted even before climbing uphill. Why did the author’s family adapt to the new life easily?：Her husband had a full-time university job and her kids joined school sports and clubs quickly. What would the friends do when knowing the author’s situation?：They would understand her, encourage her patiently and accompany her warmly. What does the story tell us?：Sincerity and brave attempts bring true friendship, and courage to step out of comfort zone brings unexpected gains. 5．情节线 作者一家搬家来到新城镇→作者中年迁居，难以结交新朋友→邻里妈妈聚会收到徒步邀约，为融入朋友谎称自己擅长徒步→第二天作者赴约徒步，刚开始就气喘吁吁、体力不支→朋友提问徒步经历，作者坦诚坦白真相→朋友们温柔包容、耐心陪伴鼓励作者完成徒步→（续写）作者放下顾虑，轻松相处→（续写）作者收获真挚友谊，领悟勇敢尝试与真诚待人的意义 6．情感线 I：lonely and anxious→grateful and excited→nervous and awkward→embarrassed and guilty→touched and warm→fulfilled and happy（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：迁居新城镇的作者苦于难以交友，为融入新邻里谎称自己擅长徒步，徒步途中体力不支后坦诚真相，最终收获了朋友们的包容与真挚友谊。 英文：Having moved to a new town and struggling to make friends, the author pretended to be a hiker to fit in. After honestly admitting her inexperience, she received warm tolerance and sincere friendship from her new friends. 8. 句式积累 状语从句：Being new to town and excited about an invitation, I accepted the offer happily. 非谓语动词：Karen’s slim figure and sun-kissed cheeks suggested she was a regular hiker. 宾语从句：I wasn’t sure if I had gone three miles before. 并列句：My husband had a stable job, and my kids adapted to school life quickly. 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：勇敢走出舒适圈、真诚待人，能够收获温暖的友谊与全新的自我成长。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: “So where did you hike in Oregon?” one of them asked, offering me a bottle of water. 衔接句1——How did the author respond? How did friends react to her honesty? The author confessed her lie awkwardly, and her friends showed understanding and encouraged her patiently. Paragraph 2: By accepting the invitation to hike that day, I received a lot. 衔接句2——What did the author gain from this experience? What was her final feeling? She gained precious friendship, learned to step out of comfort zone and adapted to new life better. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：一位朋友递来水，询问作者在俄勒冈州的徒步经历。 →①作者尴尬坦诚自己没有徒步经验、此前撒了谎→②朋友们没有责怪，反而温柔安慰、放慢脚步等候→③作者放下顾虑，坚持跟随大家完成徒步； 第二段：那天接受徒步邀约，让我收获良多。 →④作者不再胆怯，主动和朋友们交流相处→⑤收获真挚温暖的邻里友谊，摆脱孤独→⑥领悟真诚与勇敢尝试的价值，从容拥抱新生活。 四.段落续写范文（150词左右） “So where did you hike in Oregon?” one of them asked, offering me a bottle of water. Overwhelmed by embarrassment, I hesitated for a moment and finally confessed the truth honestly. I admitted that I had no real hiking experience and lied just to make new friends. To my great relief, no one laughed at me. Instead, they comforted me warmly, saying everyone started from beginners. They slowed down their pace constantly, waited for me patiently and chatted with me to ease my tension. With their company, I plucked up my courage and kept moving forward. By accepting the invitation to hike that day, I received a lot. I gained far more than a simple hiking experience. I met a group of kind and sincere friends who treated me with tolerance and warmth. I no longer felt lonely and anxious in the new town. Gradually, I integrated into the new community. This experience taught me that true friendship lies in sincerity rather than perfect performance. Stepping out of my comfort zone bravely brought me unexpected warmth and beautiful new life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $