Unit4 作文专练 2025-2026学年冀教版七年级英语下册

冀教版7下unit 4作文专练 Write a reply about making friends 题目一：回复邮件（交笔友） 题目： 假设你是李华，你收到了一封来自英国笔友Tom的邮件，他想和你交朋友。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 表达你很高兴和他交朋友； 2. 介绍你自己的基本情况（如年龄、爱好、喜欢的科目等，至少2点）； 3. 询问他的更多情况，表达希望保持联系的愿望。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为书信，属于应用文中的书信类，具体是“回复邮件”。写这封信的核心是：友好热情、介绍自己、主动了解对方。交朋友是双向的，学生不能只介绍自己，也要关心对方。这封信的语气要亲切、真诚，就像在跟一个新朋友聊天。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：表达高兴的心情 开头要先回应对方的来信，表达你很高兴收到他的邮件，并且愿意和他交朋友。例如：“I was so happy to get your email”“Thank you for writing to me”“I would love to be friends with you”。这样的开头能让对方感受到你的热情和友好。 第二段：介绍自己的基本情况 至少写出2点关于自己的信息。可以从这些方面选：年龄（I am 13 years old）、年级（I am in Grade 7）、爱好（I like playing basketball and reading）、喜欢的科目（My favorite subject is English）、家庭（I live with my parents）等。介绍要真实、简单，让对方对你有一个初步的印象。可以加上一两个小细节，比如“I have a pet dog named Lucky”，这样更有亲切感。 第三段：询问对方并表达期待 主动了解对方的情况，例如：“What about you? What do you like to do in your free time?”“Do you have any hobbies?”。最后表达希望保持联系的愿望，例如：“I hope we can write to each other often”“I am looking forward to your reply”。这样的结尾能让友谊继续发展下去。 三、语言与格式提醒 书信格式：称呼（Dear Tom,）、正文、结束语（Yours sincerely,）、签名。语气要亲切自然。可以用问句来了解对方，让信件有互动感。开头可以用“Thank you for your email”来回应对方的来信。 重要句型与词组 · Thank you for your email. I was so happy to hear from you. · I would love to be friends with you. · Let me tell you something about myself. · I am ... years old and I am in Grade... · My favorite subject is... because... · In my free time, I like to... · What about you? What do you like to do? · I hope we can write to each other often. · I am looking forward to your reply. · hear from you, tell you about myself, in my free time, write to each other 高分范文 Dear Tom, Thank you for your email. I was so happy to hear from you. I would love to be friends with you. Making friends from different countries is really exciting. Let me tell you something about myself. I am 13 years old and I am in Grade 7. My favorite subject is English because I like learning new words and talking with people. In my free time, I like playing basketball and reading storybooks. I also have a pet dog named Lucky. He is very cute and I love playing with him after school. Now I want to know more about you. What is your favorite subject? Do you have any hobbies? Do you have a pet too? I hope we can write to each other often and become good friends. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题目二：书信（回复求助信） 题目： 假设你是王明，你的朋友张丽给你写了一封信，她说自己性格内向，不敢主动和同学说话，很难交到朋友，很苦恼。请你给她写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 表达理解她的感受，并安慰她； 2. 给她提出交朋友的具体建议（至少2条，如先从微笑打招呼开始、参加集体活动等）； 3. 鼓励她尝试你的建议，并告诉她你会帮助她。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为书信，属于应用文中的书信类，具体是“回复求助信”。这封信的核心是：先共情理解、再给出建议、最后鼓励支持。初一学生写这样的信，要学会站在朋友的角度思考问题，用温暖的语言去安慰和帮助对方。这封信的目的是“帮助朋友走出困境，交到朋友”。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：表达理解并安慰 先让朋友知道你很关心她，你理解她的感受。例如：“I am sorry to hear that you are feeling sad”“I understand how you feel. Making friends can be hard sometimes.”“Don’t worry too much. Many people feel shy at first.”。这段的目的是让朋友感到“有人懂我”，她才会愿意听你的建议。 第二段：提出具体建议 至少写出2条具体的、可操作的建议。例如：“先从微笑和打招呼开始。每天早上对同学说‘早上好’，慢慢地大家就会熟悉你”“参加一些集体活动，比如体育课、班级大扫除，这样你会有更多机会和同学说话”“主动帮助别人。比如同学忘记带笔了，你借给他，他就会感谢你”“可以先和坐在旁边的同学聊天，聊聊作业或周末做了什么”。建议要简单、容易做到，不要一下子说“你要变得开朗”，那样太难了。 第三段：鼓励并表达支持 鼓励她试试你的建议，告诉她你相信她能做到。例如：“I believe you can do it. Just take one small step every day.”“Remember, everyone has their own pace. It’s okay to be shy.”最后表达你会帮助她，例如：“If you want, we can practice together. You are not alone.”这样的结尾能给朋友力量和信心。 三、语言与格式提醒 书信格式：称呼（Dear Zhang Li,）、正文、结束语（Yours sincerely, / Love,）、签名。语气要温柔、真诚，像朋友之间说心里话。避免说教，多用“Maybe you can try...”“I think it might help if you...”这样温和的表达。不要批评朋友“你太害羞了”，而要鼓励她“你可以慢慢来”。 重要句型与词组 · I am sorry to hear that you are feeling sad. · I understand how you feel. Making friends is not always easy. · Don’t worry too much. Many people feel shy at first. · Here are some suggestions that may help you. · You can start by... · Try to... It will help you... · I believe you can do it if you take small steps. · Remember, you are not alone. I am always here for you. · make friends, feel shy, say hello, join activities, help others, take small steps 高分范文 Dear Zhang Li, I am sorry to hear that you are feeling sad about making friends. I understand how you feel. Many people feel shy at first, and it can be hard to talk to new people. But don’t worry too much. You are a kind person, and I know you can make good friends. Here are some suggestions that may help you. First, you can start by smiling and saying hello to your classmates every morning. A simple “Good morning” is easy to say, and it makes people feel warm. Soon they will say hello back to you. Second, try to join group activities like class cleaning or sports. When you work together with others, it is easier to start a conversation. You can also help others. For example, if a classmate forgets to bring a pen, you can lend yours. Small acts of kindness make people like you. I believe you can do it. Just take one small step every day. Remember, you are not alone. I am always here for you. If you want, we can practice talking to others together. You will get better and better. I am proud of you for trying. Yours sincerely, Wang Ming 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $