Unit8 作文专练 2025-2026学年冀教版七年级英语下册

冀教版7下unit 8作文专练 Write about endangered species 题目一：倡议书（呼吁保护濒危动物） 题目： 假设你是学校动物保护社团的社长，你发现很多人对濒危动物不了解，也不重视保护它们。请你以社团名义写一份英文倡议书，呼吁大家关注和保护濒危动物。内容包括： 1. 介绍一两种濒危动物（如大熊猫、老虎、海龟等）及其现状（数量很少）； 2. 分析它们濒危的原因（至少2点，如森林被砍伐、被猎杀等）； 3. 提出具体的保护建议（至少2条），呼吁大家行动起来。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为倡议书，属于应用文中的公开号召类文体。初一学生写这份倡议书的核心是：动物要具体、原因要清楚、建议要可行。“濒危动物”这个话题能唤起学生的同情心和责任感。关键是要用简单的语言说清楚“它们为什么越来越少”和“我们能做什么”。语气要真诚、有紧迫感，但不能太吓人。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：介绍濒危动物及其现状 选择学生比较熟悉的一两种濒危动物，写出它们现在的处境。例如：“Pandas are one of the most famous endangered animals. There are only about 1,800 pandas left in the wild.” “Tigers are also in danger. A hundred years ago, there were more than 100,000 tigers. Now there are fewer than 4,000.” 用数字对比会让现状更有冲击力，让学生意识到问题的严重性。 第二段：分析濒危的原因 至少写出2点原因，要简单明了。常见原因有：人类砍伐森林，动物失去家园；有人为了动物皮毛、骨头等猎杀它们；环境污染；气候变化等。例如：“First, people cut down forests to build houses and farms, so animals lose their homes. Second, some people kill tigers for their fur and bones. This is very cruel.” 原因要客观，不要过于情绪化。 第三段：提出建议并呼吁 至少写出2条具体的、学生能做到的建议。例如：“We can save paper so fewer trees are cut down. Less paper means more forests for animals.” “Never buy things made of animal fur or bones.” “Tell your friends and family about endangered animals. The more people know, the more help we can give.” 最后用有力的号召结尾：“Let’s protect these amazing animals before it is too late. Take action today!” 三、语言与格式提醒 倡议书开头用“Dear schoolmates,”，结尾用号召句。数字对比可以用“There are only... left”来强调稀少。建议部分用“First, Second, Third”使条理清晰。 重要句型与词组 · I am writing to call on everyone to protect endangered animals. · ... is one of the most famous endangered animals. · There are only about... left in the wild. · Why are they in danger? · First, people cut down forests, so animals lose their homes. · Second, some people kill them for their fur / bones / teeth. · Here is what we can do to help. · Never buy things made from endangered animals. · Save paper and plant more trees. · Let’s work together to save them before it is too late. · endangered species, in the wild, lose their homes, be killed for, take action 高分范文 Dear schoolmates, I am writing to call on everyone to protect endangered animals. Pandas are one of the most famous endangered animals in the world. There are only about 1,800 pandas left in the wild. Tigers are also in great danger. One hundred years ago, there were more than 100,000 tigers. Now there are fewer than 4,000. These animals may disappear forever if we don’t help them. Why are they in danger? First, people cut down too many forests to build houses and farms. Pandas and tigers lose their homes and cannot find enough food. Second, some people kill tigers for their beautiful fur and bones. This is very cruel and against the law. Without our help, these amazing animals will have no future. Here is what we can do. First, never buy things made from animal fur or bones. Second, save paper so fewer trees are cut down. Less paper means more forests for animals. Third, tell your friends and family about endangered animals. The more people know, the more help we can give. Let’s work together to save them before it is too late. Take action today! Animal Protection Club 题目二：书信（给朋友介绍濒危动物） 题目： 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom想了解中国有哪些濒危动物。请你给他写一封回信，向他介绍一种中国濒危动物（如大熊猫、扬子鳄、金丝猴等）。内容包括： 1. 介绍这种动物的名称、外形和生活环境； 2. 说明它为什么濒危（至少2点）； 3. 介绍中国为保护它所做的努力（至少1点），并呼吁大家一起保护。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为书信，属于应用文中的书信类。这封信的核心是：信息准确、感情真挚、有知识性。学生需要向外国朋友介绍中国的濒危动物，这既是一个练笔的机会，也是传播保护意识的窗口。语气要友好、积极，既要说明问题的严重性，也要展示中国做出的努力，让朋友感到希望。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：介绍动物的基本信息 写出动物的名字、外形特点和生活在哪里。例如：“I want to tell you about the giant panda. Pandas have black and white fur. They look very cute and move slowly. They live in the mountains of Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu. Pandas eat bamboo for about 14 hours every day.” 这些信息要有趣、好记，让朋友对这种动物产生好感。 第二段：说明濒危的原因 至少写出2点原因，同上一个题目类似。例如：“First, pandas’ home — the bamboo forests — have been cut down. They have less food to eat. Second, pandas give birth to very few babies. A mother panda usually has only one cub every two years.” 原因要客观、准确。 第三段：介绍保护努力并呼吁 写出中国为保护这种动物做了哪些事。例如：“China has set up many nature parks for pandas. There are more than 60 panda reserves. Scientists also help pandas have more babies.” 最后发出呼吁：“Protecting pandas also helps other animals and the environment. I hope people all over the world can work together to save endangered animals.” 这样的结尾既有希望又有行动方向。 三、语言与格式提醒 书信格式：称呼（Dear Tom,）、正文、结束语（Yours sincerely,）、签名。介绍动物时可以用描述性语言（like, look like, live on）。可以用“Did you know that...”开头增加趣味性。 重要句型与词组 · Thank you for your letter. I am happy to tell you about... · ... is an endangered animal in China. · They live in... and eat... · They are in danger because... · First, people cut down forests where they live. · Second, they have very few babies. · To protect them, China has set up nature parks. · Scientists also work hard to help them. · I hope we can all do something to save these beautiful animals. · endangered, in the wild, nature reserve, protect their home, give birth to 高分范文 Dear Tom, Thank you for your letter. I am happy to tell you about an endangered animal in China — the giant panda. Pandas have black and white fur. They look very cute and move slowly. They live in the mountains of Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu. Pandas eat bamboo for about 14 hours every day. That is their favorite food. Sadly, pandas are in great danger. First, people cut down many bamboo forests to build roads and farms. Pandas have less food and less space to live. Second, mother pandas give birth to very few babies. A panda usually has only one cub every two years. That is why their number grows so slowly. But there is good news. China has set up more than 60 nature parks for pandas. In these parks, pandas are safe and bamboo is protected. Scientists also help pandas have more babies. Because of these efforts, the number of pandas is slowly increasing. I hope people all over the world can learn from China and protect other endangered animals too. Every small action counts. Let’s save them together. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $