内容正文:
冀教英语七下Unit1 作文
Introduce a place to your friend — A Trip to the Great Wall
写作目标
结合本单元“Introduce a place to your friend”核心任务,用一般现在时介绍长城基础特点,一般将来时规划简单游玩行程。
题目解析
1. 体裁:书信体介绍文,写给朋友邀请同游长城,符合本单元“谈论旅行、介绍地点”的写作要求。
2. 人称:以第一人称(I/we)分享想法,第二人称(you)与朋友互动,贴合日常交流场景。
3. 时态:介绍长城属性用一般现在时,规划游玩行动用一般将来时(will),紧扣本单元语法重点。
4. 核心要求:80-100词,用简单句串联,内容围绕“长城很有名、计划周六去、带食物拍照、期待一起玩”展开,无复杂历史或生僻词汇。
范文
Dear Tom,
How are you these days? I want to invite you to visit the Great Wall with me this Saturday. The Great Wall is very famous in China. It’s long and old, and many people come to see it every year.
We can go there by bus. My mom will help us prepare some bread and water. When we climb the Great Wall, we can take many nice photos. We can also talk and laugh on the way. I think we will have a really good time.
Do you want to go with me? I’m looking forward to your answer.
Yours,
Li Ming
中文翻译
亲爱的汤姆:
你最近好吗?我想邀请你这周六和我一起去爬长城。长城在中国非常有名,它又长又古老,每年都有很多人来参观。
我们可以坐公交车去那里,妈妈会帮我们准备一些面包和水。爬长城的时候,我们能拍很多好看的照片,路上还可以说说笑笑。我觉得我们一定会玩得很开心。
你愿意和我一起去吗?期待你的回复。
你的朋友
李明
素材积累
核心短语(均为初一基础词汇)
1. invite sb. to do sth. — 邀请某人做某事
2. by bus — 坐公交车
3. prepare sth. — 准备某物
4. take photos — 拍照
5. look forward to — 期待
基础句型(简单易懂,可直接仿写)
基础句型
仿写句子
I want to invite you to visit the Great Wall.
I want to invite you to visit the park.
It’s long and old.
It’s big and beautiful.
I think we will have a good time.
I think we will see nice views.
学生写作填空练习
Dear Lily,
How are you? I want to invite you to visit the Great Wall with me this ______(时间,如Sunday). The Great Wall is very famous in China. It’s long and old, and many people visit it every year.
We can go there ______(交通方式,如by bike). My dad will prepare some ______(食物,如cakes) for us. We can ______(活动,如sing songs) on the way and take many photos. I think we will have a great time.
Do you want to go with me? I’m looking forward to your answer.
Yours,
Lucy
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