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2025级 B2U5-Writing a speech 审核人:高一英语备课组
Book 2 Unit 5 Writing a speech
年 级 班 级 姓 名 使用时间
Learning aims: To master the structure, language and the content of each paragraph of a speech.
Important and difficult points: Understand and apply the organizational structure of a speech.
I. Preview Case (预习案)
Write down the words, phrases and expressions according to the Chinese meanings.
1.很荣幸做某事_________________________ 2.有机会做某事___________________________
3.发表演讲_____________________________ 4.众所周知______________________________
5.在...中起着重要的作用 __________________________________________________
6.身心感到放松 __________________________________________________________
7.减轻我们的压力________________________ 8.对... 有抚慰的作用_______________________
9.走出困境______________________________ 10.一种通用语言__________________________
11.对...大有帮助__________________________12.我认为_______________________________
13.没有...就不能...________________________ 14.感谢您的聆听 _______________________
II. Exploring Case(探索案)
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等类型。一般来说,演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场合发表的讲话文稿,是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体。演讲是把自己的观点、主张见解和思想感情传达给观众,使他们信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣。
Task 1 (基本框架)
Text style
演讲稿
Tense
以一般现在时为主,有时讲述经历时用一般过去时
Tone
礼貌得体,避免口语化
Person
以第一人称为主
Structure
三段式
1. 内容上的现实性(realistic)。
演讲稿的观点主要来自身边的生活或学习,材料也是如此。需真实可信,是为了解决身边的问题而提出和讨论的。
2. 情感上的说服性(persuasive)。
演讲稿一定具有说服力和感染力。祈使句,感叹句,强调句等句式可达到此目的。
3. 特定情景性(situational)。
演讲稿要与特定的情景相融合,适应不同的场合和听众。
Para 1 Beginning
(自我介绍)表示荣幸
提出发言的主题
Para 2 Body
陈述与主题相关的内容 ——
是什么、为什么、怎么做
演讲稿
Para 3 Ending
结尾:总结+感谢
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Task 2 范文赏析
音乐在我们的日常生活中扮演着很重要的角色,请根据以下提示在班级发表以“The role of music”为主题的演讲。
1.音乐可以使我们放松身心,缓解压力;
2.音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心;
3.音乐能够抚慰我们的心灵,帮助我们走出困境;
4.音乐可以帮我们更好地了解别的文化。
The role of music
Dear fellow classmates,
Good morning! It’s a great honour to have the opportunity to give a speech about "The role of music" here.
As we all know, music plays an important role in our life. To begin with, it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, thus helping reduce our pressure at work and in life. Second, music can excite and encourage us as well when we meet various troubles and feel sad. Moreover, music can have a comforting impact and help us step out of difficulty when we're worried. Last but not least, music, as a universal language, can be of great help to learn another culture.
As far as I'm concerned, music is part of our life. We can't live a happy life without the company of music. Thank you for your listening!
III. Sentence Bank
· 开场句型
1. I’m xxx. It’s my honor/privilege to stand here to deliver my speech.
2. Ladies and gentlemen, I am delighted to give a speech here. The topic of my speech is…
3. Boys and girls, I feel greatly honored , I’d like to share my ideas on…
4. Good morning, everybody! It's my honor to speak here and I am very glad to share the topic …with you.
5. Honorable judges, distinguished guests, ladies and gentlemen, Good evening! I feel really honored to stand here and make day a speech today. /I'm going to dive deep into the topic… with you.
· 中间句型
过渡语① 第一:initially/ first of all /to begin with/at first/ first and foremost/ What should be mentioned first is that…
② 第二:in addition, besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover…
③ 最后:finally/eventually/last but not least…
1.There is no doubt that...... 毫无疑问......
2.It is universally acknowledged that...... 大家普遍认为......
3.When it comes to......, we must recognize that...... 谈到......,我们必须认识到......
4.Some people argue that...... However, others believe that...... Personally, I side with the latter because...... 有些人认为……,然而另一些人认为…….。我个人支持后者,因为…
5.Can you imagine a world where......? Without......, this could become our reality.
你能想象一个...…的世界吗?如果没有......,这可能成为现实。
· 结尾句型
1.I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening!
2.Thank you for your listening, and I hope my speech today can inspire each one of you to take action.
3.In conclusion, I truly believe that with our joint efforts, we can make a big difference in this world.
4.Let's take action today, because every small step counts. Thank you for listening!
5.That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your attention and patience.
· 其他类型演讲稿赏析
假设你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿,主要内容包括:
1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题;2.骑自行车的益处,如节能环保、有利健康等。
参考词汇:低碳生活 low-carbon life 节能 energy saving
Good morning, everyone, I'm Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. It's a great honor for me to stand here and give a speech, whose topic is “Let's Ride Bicycles”.
As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve these problems then? As far as I'm concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas. What's more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let's take the responsibility for building up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Changes begin with you. Thank you for your attention!
(2021 浙江卷) 假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.介绍活动安排;3.表达祝愿。
Dear friends from New Zealand,
Good afternoon! I, on behalf of all the students, feel greatly honored to convey our warmest welcome to all of you. I believe that your visit will definitely promote the communication and cooperation between two schools.
To make your stay here rewarding and unforgettable, we have a wide range of activities arranged. As scheduled, you are to be shown around our school after the welcoming ceremony, which helps to give a glimpse of our gorgeous campus. Besides, some optional classes on traditional Chinese culture are also scheduled, such as paper-cutting and calligraphy, enabling you to get a deeper insight into our Chinese culture. Ultimately, a fabulous show will be held in the evening, where everyone are welcome to show their extraordinary talents, boosting better mutual understanding between us and adding a brilliant touch to your stay here. I am fully convinced that it will be a treasured memory for everyone.
I sincerely hope you a pleasant stay here and an enjoyable trip in China. Thank you.
三、(2022届惠三调)为迎接校庆一百周年(the 100th Anniversary of School Foundation),你校英语社将举行一场演讲比赛,主题为“My School and Me”。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.学校的变化;2.你的变化;3.期望与祝福。
My School and Me
Good morning, everyone! The 100th Anniversary of School Foundation is approaching.(背景)It is my honor to deliver my speech titled My School and Me. (介绍主题)
Great changes have taken place in both my school and me.When I stepped into the campus, classes were only held indoors, while nowadays students are provided with hands-on lessons in workshops and labs. Besides, multimedia facilities have been introduced, thus enabling us to study more efficiently. (要点1:学校变化) As to me, I have become much more open-minded and confident, especially when giving presentations. I am no longer what I was three years ago. (要点2:我的变化)
Here, I’d like to convey my sincere gratitude and best wishes to our school. May our school enjoy brighter prospects in the next century! (要点3:盼望与祝愿)Thank you for your attention! (演讲结尾用语要致谢)
IV. Exercise Case(练习案)
(2021-2022学年惠州市高一期末考试作文)假如你是李华, 你校英语社团将举行一场英语演讲比赛,主题为“My Favorite Song”。请你写一篇参赛英文演讲稿,内容包括:
1.介绍你最喜欢的一首歌曲;
2.谈谈它对你的影响。
注意:1.不得出现真实姓名2.词数:100左右;3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Song
Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua. ____________________________________________
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B2Unit 5 Writing
Speech
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I.Preview Case
have a population of...; with a population of ...
1.很荣幸做某事
2.有机会做某事
3.发表演讲
4.众所周知
5.在...中起着重要的作用
6.身心感到放松
7.减轻我们的压力
8.对... 有抚慰的作用
9.走出困境
10.一种通用语言
11.对...大有帮助
12.我认为
13.没有...就不能...
14.感谢您的聆听
It’s a great honour to do sth
have the opportunity to do
give/make/deliver a speech
as we all know / as is known to all
play an important role in
feel relaxed both mentally and physically
reduce our pressure
step out of difficulty
have a comforting impact
be of great help to
a universal language
as far as I'm concerned
can't ...without...
thank you for your listening
II. Exploring case
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一.演讲稿的写作特点
1. 内容上的现实性(realistic)。
演讲稿的观点主要来自身边的生活或学习,材料也是如此。需真实可信,是为了解决身边的问题而提出和讨论的。
2. 情感上的说服性(persuasive)。
演讲稿一定具有说服力和感染力。祈使句,感叹句,强调句等句式可达到此目的。
3. 特定情景性(situational)。
演讲稿要与特定的情景相融合,适应不同的场合和听众。
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LOGO
段落结构
Ladies and gentlemen,
Hello, everyone!
称呼
第一段
自我介绍
表示荣幸
提出发言主题
第二段
陈述与主题相关的内容 ——
是什么、为什么、怎么做
第三段
总结/呼吁+感谢观众
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The role of music
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! It’s a great honour to have the opportunity to give a speech about "The role of music" here.
As we all know, music plays an important role in our life. First, it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, thus helping reduce our pressure at work and in life. Second, music can excite and encourage us as well when we meet various troubles and feel sad. Moreover, music can have a comforting impact and help us step out of difficulty when we're worried. Last but not least, music, as a universal language can be of great help to learn another culture.
As far as I'm concerned, music is part of our life. We can't live a happy life without the company of music. Thank you for your listening.
III. Sentance Bank
1. I’m xxx. It’s my honor/privilege to stand here to deliver my speech.
2. Ladies and gentlemen, I am delighted to give a speech here. The topic of my
speech is…
3. Boys and girls, I feel greatly honored to have the opportunity to be with..,
Today, I’d like to share my ideas on…
4. Good morning, everybody! It's my honor to speak here and I am very glad to
share the topic …with you.
5. Honorable judges, distinguished guests, ladies and gentlemen, Good evening!
I feel really honored to stand here and make a speech today. I'm going to dive
deep into the topic… with you.
I am honored to...这是演讲的第一大王牌句型,几乎每一场演讲都要以这个句型作为开场白。有人提出,这个句型已经到了陈词滥调(cliche)的地步。但是,谦虚永远是一种美德,这个句型之所以能被古今中外无数演讲大师所采用,当然有其吸引人的地方。
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过渡语
① 第一:initially/ first of all /to begin with/at first/ first and foremost/ What should be mentioned first is that…
② 第二:in addition, besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover…
③ 最后:finally/eventually/last but not least…
1.There is no doubt that...... 毫无疑问......
2.It is universally acknowledged that...... 大家普遍认为......
3.When it comes to......, we must recognize that....谈到......,我们必须认识到......
4.Some people argue that...... However, others believe that...... Personally, I side with the latter because...... 有些人认为……,然而另一些人认为…….。我个人支持后者,因为…
5.Can you imagine a world where......? Without......, this could become our reality.
你能想象一个...…的世界吗?如果没有......,这可能成为现实。
正文句型
结尾要简洁,不要拉拉扯扯。特别是不要受汉语影响,说些类似"准备不足,请谅解","请批评指正"这样的废话。最普通的结尾就是:Thank you very much for your attention.
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That’s all I want to say about this topic. Thank you.
Thank you for your listening/attention.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
I hope everyone finds your stay here an enjoyable experience.
I wish you the best of luck in everything you do.
结尾要简洁,不要拉拉扯扯。特别是不要受汉语影响,说些类似"准备不足,请谅解","请批评指正"这样的废话。最普通的结尾就是:Thank you very much for your attention.
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假设你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿,主要内容包括:
1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题;2.骑自行车的益处,如节能环保、有利健康等。
参考词汇:低碳生活 low-carbon life 节能 energy saving
Sample 1
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Good morning, everyone, I'm Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. It's a great honor for me to stand here and give a speech, whose topic is “Let's Ride Bicycles”.
As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve these problems then? As far as I'm concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas. What's more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let's take the responsibility for building up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Changes begin with you. Thank you for your attention!
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Sample 2
假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
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Dear friends from New Zealand,
Good afternoon! I, on behalf of all the students, feel greatly honored to convey our warmest welcome to all of you. I believe that your visit will definitely promote the communication and cooperation between two schools.
To make your stay here rewarding and unforgettable, we have a wide range of activities arranged. As scheduled, you are to be shown around our school after the welcoming ceremony, which helps to give a glimpse of our gorgeous campus. Besides, some optional classes on traditional Chinese culture are also scheduled, such as paper-cutting and calligraphy, enabling you to get a deeper insight into our Chinese culture. Ultimately, a fabulous show will be held in the evening, where everyone are welcome to show their extraordinary talents, boosting better mutual understanding between us and adding a brilliant touch to your stay here. I am fully convinced that it will be a treasured memory for everyone.
I sincerely hope you a pleasant stay here and an enjoyable trip in China. Thank you.
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Sample 3
【22届惠三调】
为迎接校庆一百周年(the 100th Anniversary of School Foundation),你校英语社将举行一场演讲比赛,主题为“My School and Me”。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.学校的变化; 2. 你的变化; 3.期望与祝福。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My School and Me
Good morning, everyone!
...
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My School and Me
Good morning, everyone! The 100th Anniversary of School Foundation is approaching.(背景)It is my honor to deliver my speech titled My School and Me. (介绍主题)
Great changes have taken place in both my school and me.When I stepped into the campus, classes were only held indoors, while nowadays students are provided with hands-on lessons in workshops and labs. Besides, multimedia facilities have been introduced, thus enabling us to study more efficiently. (要点1:学校变化) As to me, I have become much more open-minded and confident, especially when giving presentations. I am no longer what I was three years ago. (要点2:我的变化)
Here, I’d like to convey my sincere gratitude and best wishes to our school. May our school enjoy brighter prospects in the next century! (要点3:盼望与祝愿)Thank you for your attention! (演讲结尾用语要致谢)
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IV. Exercise Case
(2021-2022学年惠州市高一期末考试作文)假如你是李华, 你校英语社团将举行一场英语演讲比赛,主题为“My Favorite Song”。请你写一篇参赛英文演讲稿,内容包括:
1.介绍你最喜欢的一首歌曲;
2.谈谈它对你的影响。
注意:
1.不得出现真实姓名
2.词数:100左右;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Song
Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It’s my great honor to to stand here to make a speech about my favorite song---I Believe I Can Fly.
It was a song that was introduced to me when I was at the ninth grade, a vital period for me. I was too anxious about my grades to focus on study. Luckily, I came across this powerful song. Its inspiring melody and warm lyrics are full of strength. Every note gives me courage and every word lifts up my spirits. It pours endless power into my heart, helping me cheer up and face pressure bravely. From then on, whenever I was upset or stuck in trouble, after listening to it, I felt so encouraged that I could concentrate on study again.
In a word, I Believe I Can Fly has a deep influence on me and teaches me to believe in myself bravely. It is this song that cheers me up on my way to growth. Thanks for listening.
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音乐在我们的日常生活中扮演着很重要的角色,请根据以下提示以“The role of music”为题写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。
1.音乐可以使我们放松身心,缓解压力;
2.音乐可以振奋并鼓舞人心;
3.音乐能够抚慰我们的心灵,帮助我们走出困境;
4.音乐可以帮我们更好地了解别的文化。
注意:不可逐句翻译,可根据你自己对音乐的理解适当发挥、拓展。
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