2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习-暴雪温情-读后续写导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成完整的短文。 The Warmth in the Heavy Snow Last Saturday, a record-breaking snowstorm swept across New York City. The wind roared like a wounded monster, and snow poured down like a white curtain. Soon the whole city lay buried under a thick, unbroken blanket of snow that shone like crushed diamonds in the faint gray light. I woke up hungry, but the refrigerator was completely empty: no milk for coffee, no bread for breakfast, not even a single egg left. When I checked the cupboard, the shelves were just as bare: there were no daily necessities left at home. The only thing I spotted in the corner was an old iron shovel (铲子)my dad had left behind after last winter’s snowstorm. I knew I had to go out to buy some urgently, or I’d be stuck without basic supplies for the rest of the storm. But when I tried to open the front door, my hand froze on the handle. It wouldn’t move even an inch. Heavy snow had piled up tightly against the door all night, forming a solid wall that locked me inside. I pushed and pulled again and again. My shoulders ached and I was breathing hard and fast. But all my efforts were in vain. The snow held firm, a silent, unyielding barrier between me and the outside world. Staring out of the window helplessly, I watched the snow spinning wildly in the bone-chilling wind. Travel bans had shut down almost all traffic across the city, and there was no sign of people on the street. A wave of fear and anxiety swept over me, cold and sharp as the wind outside: My parents were working far away in another state, and the phone lines had gone dead hours ago, so I had no way to reach anyone for help. Just as I sank to the floor, desperate and alone, a faint but firm knock on the door broke the terrible silence. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）逻辑连贯，情节完整，语言流畅。 “Hello? Is anybody in?” It was Mrs. Wilson, my next-door neighbor. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After twenty minutes of hard work, the door was finally opened. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 A severe snowstorm hit New York City heavily, covering the whole city in thick snow--- _________________ --- The author found no food or daily supplies at home and needed to go out for shopping--- _________________ --- Thick snow blocked the front door, trapping the author indoors--- _________________ --- The author failed to open the door and felt scared and desperate with no way to ask for help--- _________________ --- A sudden knock on the door brought a glimmer of hope 4. 细节问答 What was the weather like that day? ：___________________________________ What trouble did the author face at home?：_________________________________ Why couldn’t the author get out of the house?：________________________________________________ Why did the author feel extremely desperate?：__________________________________________ What was the only tool the author found at home?：_____________________________________________ What kind of atmosphere did the heavy snow create?：_________________________________________________ What does the story intend to tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 特大暴雪席卷纽约，全城被厚雪覆盖，天气极端恶劣→_________________ →作者家中物资耗尽，急需外出采购补给→大门被积雪封死，反复尝试开门均失败→全城交通停运、通讯中断，父母远在外地，作者孤立无援、陷入绝望→_________________ →邻居Wilson太太突然敲门，带来转机→（续写）邻居得知困境，主动帮忙铲雪，二人通力合作→（续写）大门成功打开，邻居暖心提供物资帮助，作者在严寒中收获邻里温情 6．情感线 I：helpless and anxious→___________→desperate and lonely→___________→grateful and warm（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：__________________________________________________________________ 英文：__________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式积累 （摘抄文中比喻句、状语从句、非谓语、并列句）___________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情叙事类：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1: “Hello? Is anybody in?” It was Mrs. Wilson, my next-door neighbor. 衔接句1——What did the author tell Mrs. Wilson? What did Mrs. Wilson do to help? ___________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: After twenty minutes of hard work, the door was finally opened. 衔接句2——What did they see after opening the door? What warmth and help did Mrs. Wilson bring? What did the author realize? ___________________________________________________________________________ 三、段落续写框架 第一段：“有人在家吗？”是我的邻居威尔逊太太。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：经过二十分钟的辛苦努力，门终于打开了。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四、段落续写写作 “Hello? Is anybody in?” It was Mrs. Wilson, my next-door neighbor. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After twenty minutes of hard work, the door was finally opened. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（独自在家、遭遇暴雪被困、无助焦虑、最终收获温情的主人公）；Mrs. Wilson（善良热心、体贴细心、雪中伸出援手的暖心邻居） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 A severe snowstorm hit New York City heavily, covering the whole city in thick snow--- The extreme snowstorm caused severe inconvenience to citizens --- The author found no food or daily supplies at home and needed to go out for shopping--- The author faced the problem of material shortage --- Thick snow blocked the front door, trapping the author indoors--- The author was completely locked in the house with no way out --- The author failed to open the door and felt scared and desperate with no way to ask for help--- Bad weather and broken communication made the author totally isolated --- A sudden knock on the door brought a glimmer of hope 4. 细节问答 What was the weather like that day?：A terrible record-breaking snowstorm swept the city, with strong wind and heavy snow. What trouble did the author face at home?：There was no food or daily necessities left at home, leaving nothing for daily life. Why couldn’t the author get out of the house?：Thick snow piled against the door all night, forming a solid snow wall that blocked the door tightly. Why did the author feel extremely desperate?：The traffic was banned, the phone lines were dead, and parents worked far away, making it impossible to ask for help. What was the only tool the author found at home?：An old iron shovel left by his father last winter. What kind of atmosphere did the heavy snow create?：It created a cold, silent, helpless and depressing atmosphere. What does the story intend to tell us?：Severe weather can bring cold and difficulties, but kindness and neighborhood warmth can drive away coldness and despair. 5．情节线 特大暴雪席卷纽约，全城被厚雪覆盖，天气极端恶劣→风雪肆虐，城市陷入沉寂与冰封→作者家中物资耗尽，急需外出采购补给→大门被积雪封死，反复尝试开门均失败→全城交通停运、通讯中断，父母远在外地，作者孤立无援、陷入绝望→绝境之中倍感无助，濒临崩溃→邻居Wilson太太突然敲门，带来转机→（续写）邻居得知困境，主动拿铲帮忙铲雪，二人合力清理积雪→（续写）大门成功开启，邻居送来生活物资，严寒风雪中的邻里温情温暖了作者的内心 6．情感线 I：helpless and anxious→frustrated and frightened→desperate and lonely→surprised and hopeful→grateful and warm（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：一场特大暴雪将独自在家的作者困于屋内，物资耗尽、求助无门的他陷入绝望，热心邻居及时赶来帮忙，在严寒风雪中为他送去珍贵温暖。 英文：Trapped indoors by a severe snowstorm with no supplies or way to ask for help, the author fell into despair, but his kind neighbor offered timely help, bringing great warmth in the bitter cold weather. 8. 句式积累 比喻句：The wind roared like a wounded monster, and snow poured down like a white curtain. 状语从句：When I tried to open the front door, my hand froze on the handle. 非谓语动词：Staring out of the window helplessly, I watched the snow spinning wildly in the bone-chilling wind. 并列句：My parents were working far away in another state, and the phone lines had gone dead hours ago. 9. 本文主题 温情叙事类：风雪无情人有情，平凡的邻里善意，足以驱散绝境中的寒冷与绝望，温暖人心。 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1 衔接句1——What did the author tell Mrs. Wilson? What did Mrs. Wilson do to help? The author told Mrs. Wilson his terrible situation. Without hesitation, the kind neighbor fetched a shovel and worked together with him to clear the thick snow blocking the door. Paragraph 2 衔接句2——What did they see after opening the door? What warmth and help did Mrs. Wilson bring? What did the author realize? Facing the endless heavy snow, the author was moved deeply as Mrs. Wilson shared food and daily supplies with him. He realized that kindness is the warmest light in cold difficulties. 三、段落续写框架 第一段：“有人在家吗？”是我的邻居威尔逊太太。 →①我立刻回应，向她诉说自己被困断粮、无法求助的困境→②威尔逊太太十分同情，毫不犹豫回家取来铲子→③我们二人并肩发力，合力清理门前厚厚的积雪； 第二段：经过二十分钟的辛苦努力，门终于打开了。 →①凛冽寒风扑面而来，但我的内心倍感温暖→②威尔逊太太贴心送来食物和生活用品，解决我的燃眉之急→③我满心感激，领悟到风雪再寒，人间善意永远温暖治愈。 四、段落续写范文 “Hello? Is anybody in?” It was Mrs. Wilson, my next-door neighbor. Overjoyed, I quickly responded and explained my awkward situation. Knowing I was trapped alone with no supplies and no way to seek help, Mrs. Wilson showed great sympathy. She comforted me patiently and immediately fetched her shovel. Without any hesitation, she began to clear the thick snow piled against the door. I grabbed my dad’s old shovel and joined her right away, both of us working hard against the bitter cold wind. After twenty minutes of hard work, the door was finally opened. The freezing wind rushed in, yet my heart was filled with overwhelming warmth. To my great surprise, Mrs. Wilson had prepared plenty of food and daily necessities for me. She told me she had worried about me living alone in the terrible storm. Looking at her kind smile, I felt extremely grateful. This unforgettable experience taught me that even in the coldest storm, the warmth of kindness from others can always drive away despair and light up the darkest moment. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $