2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习-灰姑娘试镜成长-读后续写导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Amy, you should go for it,” Artie said, giving my shoulder a squeeze as we stood gazing at the poster. “Cinderella — auditions (试镜) this Thursday after school,” the words showed. “Me?” My voice came out full of doubt. “Come on, Amy. You probably know the entire play by heart. You are the best person for Cinderella!” he encouraged. I knew he was being kind, but he probably wasn’t wrong. I could recite almost every single line in the play. The story was my all-time favorite. When we reached the hall on Thursday, I wished I hadn’t signed up for this audition. It had been easier to feel hopeful several days ago when my name was the only one on the paper. Since then, seven other girls had added their own names to the list, including Sherry Anderson, the head cheerleader (拉拉队长). Only one of us would land the lead role, and chances were I would only get a small, unimportant part, or in the worst case, serve as an understudy (替角). Luckily, we were given a moment to practice before the auditions began. “Good,” Mr. Cordoza said approvingly as he stopped by and listened to my practice. I felt a glimmer of hope. “Now let’s see how you get on performing on the stage in front of everyone.” He clapped his hands for attention, signaling the start of the auditions. Sherry Anderson was up first. She showed great confidence as she recited her lines, shining as usual with her attractive grace and infectious energy. Although the lines sounded somewhat empty, her stage presence was truly eye-catching. Then it was my turn. As I climbed the stairs to the stage, I tripped, nearly falling flat on my face. I felt my cheeks burning. “Take your time,” Mr. Cordoza said gently. “Sorry, I...I...” I mumbled. I tried to calm my breathing, but the nerves tightened in my throat. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）逻辑连贯，情节完整，语言流畅。 I took a deep breath and gathered my courage. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Several days later, the audition result came out. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I was encouraged by Artie to sign up for the Cinderella audition--- _________________ --- I became unconfident as more competitors signed up for the audition--- _________________ --- I practiced hard and gained slight recognition from Mr. Cordoza--- _________________ --- Sherry performed confidently but emotionally empty on stage--- _________________ --- I tripped on stage and got extremely nervous before my performance 4. 细节问答 Why did Artie encourage Amy to try out for the role? ：___________________________________ What made Amy lose confidence before the audition?：_________________________________ What was Amy’s worry about the audition result?：________________________________________________ What did Mr. Cordoza think of Amy’s practice?：__________________________________________ What was Sherry’s performance like?：_____________________________________________ What accident happened to Amy on stage?：_________________________________________________ What does the story intend to teach us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 主人公Amy在朋友Artie的鼓励下报名灰姑娘主角试镜→_________________ →多名对手报名参赛，尤其是优秀的拉拉队长Sherry，让Amy极度不自信→Amy认真练习，获得老师初步认可→_________________ →Sherry率先登场，舞台气场强大但情感空洞→Amy登台时意外绊倒，紧张失语、陷入慌乱→（续写）Amy调整心态、克服紧张，用真挚情感完成表演、打动众人→（续写）试镜结果公布，Amy成功拿下主角，领悟真诚与勇气远比外在气场更重要 6．情感线 I：doubtful but hopeful→___________→anxious and unconfident→___________→flustered and embarrassed→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：__________________________________________________________________ 英文：__________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式积累 （摘抄文中宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、并列句）___________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长感悟类：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1: I took a deep breath and gathered my courage. 衔接句1——How did Amy adjust herself? How was her performance different from Sherry’s? ___________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Several days later, the audition result came out. 衔接句2——What was the result? What did Amy learn from this experience? ___________________________________________________________________________ 三、段落续写框架 第一段：我深吸一口气，鼓起勇气。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：几天后，试镜结果公布了。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四、段落续写写作 I took a deep breath and gathered my courage. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Several days later, the audition result came out. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Amy（热爱话剧、熟记台词、内心不自信、临场失误但勇于突破自我、最终逆袭成长的主人公）；Artie（善良热心、鼓励支持主人公的朋友）；Mr. Cordoza（专业公正、注重表演真情实感的老师）；Sherry（气场强大、自信耀眼但表演缺乏情感的竞争对手） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 I was encouraged by Artie to sign up for the Cinderella audition--- I was familiar with the play and had great potential for the role --- I became unconfident as more competitors signed up for the audition--- The excellent competitor Sherry made me lack confidence --- I practiced hard and gained slight recognition from Mr. Cordoza--- I regained a little hope before the audition --- Sherry performed confidently but emotionally empty on stage---Her brilliant stage pressure brought me more stress --- I tripped on stage and got extremely nervous before my performance 4. 细节问答 Why did Artie encourage Amy to try out for the role?：Because Amy knew almost all lines of the play and was the perfect fit for Cinderella. What made Amy lose confidence before the audition?：Seven more competitors signed up, especially the confident and excellent head cheerleader Sherry. What was Amy’s worry about the audition result?：She feared that she could only get a minor role or even work as an understudy. What did Mr. Cordoza think of Amy’s practice?：He thought Amy practiced well and showed approval for her performance. What was Sherry’s performance like?：She was confident and graceful with strong stage presence, yet her performance lacked true emotion. What accident happened to Amy on stage?：She tripped when climbing the stage stairs, which made her extremely nervous and embarrassed. What does the story intend to teach us?：True excellence lies in sincere inner expression rather than superficial confidence. Courage and genuine feelings help us shine. 5．情节线 主人公Amy在朋友Artie的鼓励下报名灰姑娘主角试镜→她熟读剧本，具备出演主角的实力→多名对手报名参赛，尤其是优秀的拉拉队长Sherry，让Amy极度不自信→Amy认真练习，获得老师初步认可→试镜正式开始，强大的对手让她压力倍增→Sherry率先登场，舞台气场强大但情感空洞→Amy登台时意外绊倒，紧张失语、陷入慌乱→（续写）Amy调整心态、克服紧张，用真挚情感完成表演、打动众人→（续写）试镜结果公布，Amy成功拿下主角，领悟真诚与勇气远比外在气场更重要 6．情感线 I：doubtful but hopeful→discouraged and insecure→anxious and unconfident→slightly hopeful→flustered and embarrassed→calm, confident and enlightened（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：主人公Amy在话剧试镜中遭遇临场失误与紧张，顶住压力调整心态，凭借真挚饱满的表演战胜气场强大的对手，成功赢得主角，收获成长与自信。 英文：Despite stage fright and an accidental fall on stage, Amy calmed down and delivered a sincere performance. She finally won the lead role, learning that genuine emotion and courage outweigh superficial brilliance. 8. 句式积累 非谓语动词：Artie said, giving my shoulder a squeeze as we stood gazing at the poster. 状语从句：Although the lines sounded somewhat empty, her stage presence was truly eye-catching. 宾语从句：I wished I hadn’t signed up for this audition. 并列句：She showed great confidence as she recited her lines, shining as usual with her attractive grace and infectious energy. 9. 本文主题 成长感悟类：真正的优秀从不在于外表耀眼的气场，而在于真诚的内心、勇敢的突破与踏实的沉淀。 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1 衔接句1——How did Amy adjust herself? How was her performance different from Sherry’s? Shaking off embarrassment and nervousness, Amy focused on her lines, performing with sincere feelings that touched the audience deeply. Paragraph 2 衔接句2——What was the result? What did Amy learn from this experience? Amy surprisingly got the lead role. She realized that genuine emotion and courage are the most shining highlight on the stage and in life. 三、段落续写框架 第一段：我深吸一口气，鼓起勇气。 →①我摆脱尴尬与紧张，平复慌乱的情绪→②抛开杂念、全心投入，饱含真情演绎台词→③真挚的表演打动老师和观众，收获热烈掌声； 第二段：几天后，试镜结果公布了。 →①我意外成功拿下灰姑娘主角，倍感惊喜→②老师肯定我的真情演绎，点明表演的真谛→③我顿悟成长道理，褪去自卑，学会勇敢真诚地绽放自我。 四、段落续写范文 I took a deep breath and gathered my courage. Shaking off my embarrassment and nervousness, I cleared my mind and focused entirely on the classic story I loved so much. Gradually, I calmed down and began to deliver my lines gently and sincerely. Unlike Sherry’s cold but brilliant stage performance, my interpretation was filled with true feelings and delicate emotions. When I finished my performance, the whole hall fell silent for a second before bursting into warm and loud applause. Several days later, the audition result came out. To my overwhelming joy, I was announced to play the lead role of Cinderella. Mr. Cordoza told me that a perfect performance relied on sincere emotion rather than just confident appearance. This precious experience greatly boosted my confidence. I learned that true beauty lies in inner sincerity and courage. From then on, I no longer underestimated myself and dared to embrace every challenge in life bravely. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $