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My Friday morning did not go as planned. On the agenda was cleaning Pawley the parrot’s cage. Pawley, a beautiful bright-blue Indian ringneck, has been a source of entertainment for years. His repeated words include “You’re a good boy!” “Hey, baby!” and “Kentucky Fried Parrot,” and he recently learned to meow. Oh, and he whistles (吹口哨) a number of tunes — his wolf-whistle is spot-on.
He usually shakes and drops feathers everywhere when he bathes, so an outdoor shower is always best. I rolled his cage outside. As usual, I opened the cage door, assuming he would hang upside down and just watch me, like always. He’d never flown away before. This time, he did — flying over the treetops.
Panicked, I whistled his favorite tunes, hoping he’d answer me and lead me to him. No such luck. I headed down the street, wolf-whistling and yelling, “Hey, baby! You’re a good boy!” I quickly realized this might sound a bit odd to my neighbors. I searched nearby yards, peeking over fences and calling his name, but there was no sign of him. Now terrified for Pawley, I felt my heart race. Fear took over. I imagined Pawley starving, falling from a tall tree, or being eaten by a hungry squirrel — each image worse than the last. How could I have been so careless?
Having no other choice, I decided to turn to the Internet. I immediately returned home, fired up my computer, and posted on social media: “Please be on the lookout for our bright blue parrot.” I attached photos and a list of his words, expecting good news.
Just as I was sitting on pins and needles, my phone rang. It was my neighbor Joy. “Hey, Sue! I saw a big blue bird fly across our backyard and land in a tree. I saw your post — could this be your bird?” A bit of relief came over me. I grabbed a banana — Pawley’s favorite — and rushed to Joy’s backyard.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为 150个左右;
(2)逻辑连贯,情节完整,语言流畅。
With hope, I entered Joy’s backyard.
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After thanking Joy, I headed home with Pawley in my hands.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
I planned to clean my parrot Pawley’s cage on Friday morning--- _________________ --- Pawley flew away unexpectedly when I opened the cage outdoors--- _________________ --- I searched everywhere frantically but found no trace of him--- _________________ --- I posted missing information on social media for help--- _________________ --- Neighbor Joy called to tell me she spotted a blue parrot in her yard
4. 细节问答
What is special about the parrot Pawley? :___________________________________
Why did the author take the cage outdoors?:_________________________________
Why did the author feel panicked and terrified?:________________________________________________
What did the author do to find the lost parrot?:__________________________________________
How did the neighbor offer help?:_____________________________________________
What kind of person is the author?:_________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
周五早晨我计划给鹦鹉清理笼子→_________________ →户外开窗时,从未飞走的鹦鹉意外高飞逃走→我慌乱四处搜寻,呼喊鹦鹉专属口号却毫无踪迹→_________________ →我万分焦虑,在社交媒体发布寻鸟启事求助→邻居Joy来电告知看到蓝色鹦鹉→(续写)我满怀希望前往,用香蕉和专属声音成功吸引、安抚鹦鹉→(续写)带着鹦鹉平安回家,吸取教训、细心守护,收获暖心感悟
6.情感线
I:calm and routine→___________→panicked and terrified→___________→hopeful and relieved→___________(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:__________________________________________________________________
英文:__________________________________________________________________
8. 句式积累
(摘抄文中宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、固定句型)___________________________________________________________________________
9. 本文主题
生活叙事类:_______________________________________
二、情节构造
Paragraph 1: With hope, I entered Joy’s backyard.
衔接句1——What did the author see and do to catch Pawley?
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Paragraph 2: After thanking Joy, I headed home with Pawley in my hands.
衔接句2——What lesson did the author learn and what change would she make?
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三、段落续写框架
第一段:我满怀希望地走进乔伊的后院。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:谢过乔伊后,我抱着波利回家。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
四、段落续写写作
With hope, I entered Joy’s backyard.
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After thanking Joy, I headed home with Pawley in my hands.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
Sue(粗心愧疚、深爱宠物、积极寻找鹦鹉的主人公);Pawley(会说话、会吹口哨、活泼可爱的蓝色鹦鹉);Joy(热心善良、及时提供线索帮助邻居的好心人)
2.视角
第一人称
3.时空线
I planned to clean my parrot Pawley’s cage on Friday morning--- I intended to give the parrot an outdoor bath and clean the cage --- Pawley flew away unexpectedly when I opened the cage outdoors--- The parrot broke the routine and flew over the treetops suddenly --- I searched everywhere frantically but found no trace of him--- I felt extremely guilty and worried about Pawley’s safety --- I posted missing information on social media for help--- I waited anxiously for any useful news --- Neighbor Joy called to tell me she spotted a blue parrot in her yard
4. 细节问答
What is special about the parrot Pawley?:He is a bright-blue parrot that can speak several sentences, meow and whistle various tunes accurately.
Why did the author take the cage outdoors?:Because the parrot would drop feathers everywhere while bathing, so an outdoor shower was better.
Why did the author feel panicked and terrified?:The parrot flew away suddenly, and she was worried that it would starve, fall or be attacked by other animals.
What did the author do to find the lost parrot?:She searched nearby streets and yards, shouted familiar slogans, and posted missing posts online with photos.
How did the neighbor offer help?:Joy noticed the blue parrot in her backyard and contacted the author immediately after seeing the social media post.
What kind of person is the author?:She is caring, responsible and affectionate to her pet, and willing to try every means to fix her mistake.
What does the story tell us?:Carelessness may lead to accidents, but sincere efforts and kindness from others can remedy mistakes, and we should cherish every precious companion.
5.情节线
周五早晨我计划给鹦鹉清理笼子→按照惯例准备户外给鹦鹉洗澡清洁→户外开窗时,从未飞走的鹦鹉意外高飞逃走→我慌乱四处搜寻,呼喊鹦鹉专属口号却毫无踪迹→内心充满愧疚与担忧,害怕鹦鹉遭遇危险→我万分焦虑,在社交媒体发布寻鸟启事求助→邻居Joy来电告知看到蓝色鹦鹉→(续写)我满怀希望前往,用香蕉和专属声音成功吸引、安抚鹦鹉→(续写)带着鹦鹉平安回家,吸取教训、细心守护,收获暖心感悟
6.情感线
I:calm and routine→shocked and panicked→panicked and terrified→anxious and uneasy→hopeful and relieved→grateful and cherished(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:主人公在户外给鹦鹉清洁笼子时,因疏忽导致鹦鹉飞走,她焦急四处寻找并线上求助,最终在热心邻居的帮助下找回宠物,也深刻吸取了粗心的教训。
英文:Due to carelessness, the author’s lovely parrot flew away unexpectedly. After a frantic search and online help, she finally found her lost parrot with the help of her kind neighbor and learned a valuable lesson.
8. 句式积累
状语从句:As usual, I opened the cage door, assuming he would hang upside down and just watch me.
非谓语动词:Panicked, I whistled his favorite tunes, hoping he’d answer me.
宾语从句:I quickly realized this might sound a bit odd to my neighbors.
固定句型:Just as I was sitting on pins and needles, my phone rang.
9. 本文主题
生活叙事类:粗心易酿意外,珍惜陪伴、做事谨慎,心怀感恩善待身边的人与事物。
二、情节构造
Paragraph 1
衔接句1——What did the author see and do to catch Pawley?
I spotted the blue parrot trembling on the tree branch, then soothed him with familiar whistles and his favorite banana, finally gaining his trust.
Paragraph 2
衔接句2——What lesson did the author learn and what change would she make?
I felt extremely grateful for Joy’s help, vowed to be more careful in the future, and cherished the precious time with my lovely parrot.
三、段落续写框架
第一段:我满怀希望地走进乔伊的后院。
→①我一眼看到波利蜷缩在树梢,胆怯不安、不敢下落→②我轻声吹起熟悉的口哨、呼唤专属口号,拿出香蕉安抚它→③波利放下戒备,缓缓飞落我肩头,成功被找回;
第二段:谢过乔伊后,我抱着波利回家。
→①我满心愧疚与庆幸,紧紧抱着失而复得的波利→②深刻反思自己的粗心大意,下定决心今后谨慎照看宠物→③从此用心守护这份陪伴,倍加珍惜和波利相处的时光。
四、段落续写范文
With hope, I entered Joy’s backyard. Sure enough, I caught sight of my bright-blue Pawley perched nervously on a high tree branch. He looked scared and hesitant, not daring to fly down. Softly, I whistled his favorite tune and called out his familiar slogans. Attracted by my voice and the sweet banana in my hand, Pawley tilted his head and stared at me. After a few seconds of hesitation, he spread his wings and flew gently onto my shoulder. I stroked his feather softly, feeling immense joy well up in my heart.
After thanking Joy, I headed home with Pawley in my hands. Holding my lovely parrot tightly, I felt incredibly grateful for the neighbor’s timely help. I also blamed myself deeply for my previous carelessness. From this unforgettable experience, I learned a valuable lesson. In the days that followed, I never dared to take chances again. Whenever I cleaned his cage outdoors, I would keep a close eye on Pawley. Most importantly, I cherished every moment with my precious little companion.
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