2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---安检口的善意，奶奶的水彩 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I’d completely forgotten the rules about liquids in carry-on luggage. So when I went through airport security, my heart instantly sank — my favorite watercolor set might be seized. I immediately begged the security attendant to let me take it on the plane, explaining it was a gift from my grandma, for she knew how passionate I was about painting. The security attendant, a kind-faced woman with a faint paint stain on her uniform sleeve, checked my ID and boarding pass for a long time. She glanced down at the well-worn watercolor set — its case decorated with childlike sunflower sketches, clearly drawn by a kid — and then back at my red, tear-filled eyes. A faint, nostalgic (怀念的) smile crept at her lips. I later learned that she’d thought of her own granddaughter, a young artist who’d sobbed bitterly over seized paints during a trip years before. Rules were rules, she knew that, but some things felt far too precious to simply dump into a trash bin. I held the watercolor set stubbornly, whispering over and over, “It’s from my grandma. I was gonna use it at the art camp.” She gave me a soft, reassuring look, patted my shoulder gently, then gently took the watercolor set and carefully placed it into a small box beside her desk. I held my breath, hoping against hope. Then she smiled professionally and said: “Have a pleasant flight!” With those words, I knew it was over. The loss of grandma’s gift left a sharp ache in my heart. Finally, I turned away, dragging my feet toward my gate, and boarded the plane to the art camp. The art camp was bittersweet. I made some friends and learned a lot, but I felt empty without my grandma’s paints. Watching my classmates create colorful works, I felt a sharp pain of sadness. A week flew by, and soon it was time to go home. As I walked slowly toward the baggage claim area at the airport, tired but hopeful, I had no idea what a lovely surprise was waiting for me. 注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按给定开头语续写两段。 Suddenly, a familiar figure caught my eye. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I opened the case, my favorite watercolor set lay there quietly. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I forgot the carry-on liquid rules--- _________________ --- I begged the security attendant to keep my watercolor set (a gift from grandma)--- _________________ --- the attendant took the watercolor set, I thought I lost it--- _________________ --- I attended the art camp with regret--- a week later, I went home and walked to the baggage claim area 4. 细节问答 Why did my heart sink when going through airport security? ：___________________________________ Why was the watercolor set precious to me?：_________________________________ What did the security attendant look like?：________________________________________________ Why did the security attendant have a nostalgic smile?：__________________________________________ What did the security attendant do with the watercolor set?：_____________________________________________ How did I feel during the art camp?：_________________________________________________ Where was I going when the story ended?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 我忘记随身行李液体规定→_________________ →过安检时，我担心奶奶送的水彩套装被没收，向安检员恳求→_________________ →安检员收下水彩套装，我以为彻底失去了它→我带着遗憾参加艺术营，虽有收获却满心失落→一周后，我结束营地生活回家，走向行李提取处→_________________ →（续写）我看到熟悉的身影，惊喜不已→（续写）我打开盒子，找回了心爱的水彩套装，明白真相后满心温暖 6．情感线 I：anxious and worried→___________→disappointed and sad→___________→tired but hopeful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Suddenly, a familiar figure caught my eye. 衔接句1——Who was the familiar figure? What did he/she do? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I opened the case, my favorite watercolor set lay there quietly. 衔接句2——What did I find besides the watercolor set? What was the truth? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：Suddenly, a familiar figure caught my eye. →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：When I opened the case, my favorite watercolor set lay there quietly. →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Suddenly, a familiar figure caught my eye. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I opened the case, my favorite watercolor set lay there quietly. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（热爱绘画、珍视亲情、重感情的孩子）；the security attendant（善良、细心、有同理心的安检员）；my grandma（疼爱孙女、支持孙女爱好的老人） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 I forgot the carry-on liquid rules--- I went through airport security and my watercolor set was almost seized--- I begged the security attendant to keep my watercolor set (a gift from grandma)--- the security attendant thought of her granddaughter and felt sympathetic--- the attendant took the watercolor set, I thought I lost it--- I boarded the plane and attended the art camp--- I attended the art camp with regret--- a week later, I went home and walked to the baggage claim area 4. 细节问答 Why did my heart sink when going through airport security? ：Because I forgot the rules about liquids in carry-on luggage and my favorite watercolor set might be seized. Why was the watercolor set precious to me?：Because it was a gift from my grandma, and she knew how passionate I was about painting. What did the security attendant look like?：She was a kind-faced woman with a faint paint stain on her uniform sleeve. Why did the security attendant have a nostalgic smile?：Because she thought of her own granddaughter, a young artist who’d sobbed bitterly over seized paints during a trip years before. What did the security attendant do with the watercolor set?：She gently took it and carefully placed it into a small box beside her desk. How did I feel during the art camp?：It was bittersweet. I made friends and learned a lot, but felt empty and sad without my grandma’s watercolor set. Where was I going when the story ended?：I was walking toward the baggage claim area at the airport after the art camp. What does the story tell us?：Kindness and empathy can warm people’s hearts; small acts of goodness can bring unexpected surprises, and the love behind precious gifts is worth cherishing. 5．情节线 我忘记随身行李液体规定→过安检时，我的水彩套装因含液体可能被没收→过安检时，我担心奶奶送的水彩套装被没收，向安检员恳求→安检员联想到自己的孙女，心生同情→安检员收下水彩套装，我以为彻底失去了它→我带着遗憾参加艺术营，虽有收获却满心失落→一周后，我结束营地生活回家，走向行李提取处→（续写）我看到那位安检员，她正拿着一个盒子等我→（续写）我打开盒子，找回了心爱的水彩套装，得知安检员特意帮我保管，满心温暖与感动 6．情感线 I：anxious and worried→desperate and tearful→disappointed and sad→tired but hopeful→surprised and grateful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：我忘记随身行李的液体规定，过安检时担心奶奶送我的水彩套装被没收，向善良的安检员恳求。安检员联想到自己的孙女，虽需遵守规则，却悄悄帮我保管了套装。我带着遗憾参加艺术营，一周后回家时，在机场行李提取处偶遇安检员，找回了心爱的水彩套装，感受到了陌生人的善意与温暖。 英文：I forgot the rules about liquids in carry-on luggage and worried that my watercolor set, a gift from my grandma, would be seized when going through airport security, so I begged the kind security attendant. The attendant thought of her own granddaughter and, though needing to follow the rules, quietly kept the set for me. I attended the art camp with regret, and when I went home a week later, I met the attendant at the baggage claim area and got my watercolor set back, feeling the kindness and warmth from a stranger. 8. 句式 状语从句：So when I went through airport security, my heart instantly sank — my favorite watercolor set might be seized. 非谓语动词：Explaining it was a gift from my grandma, I immediately begged the security attendant to let me take it on the plane. 宾语从句：I explained it was a gift from my grandma, for she knew how passionate I was about painting. 定语从句：The security attendant, a kind-faced woman with a faint paint stain on her uniform sleeve, checked my ID and boarding pass for a long time. 并列句：I made some friends and learned a lot, but I felt empty without my grandma’s paints. 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：善意与同理心能温暖人心，陌生人的小小善举也能带来大大的惊喜；珍视亲情与身边的温暖，那些藏在细节里的善意，总能治愈人心。 二.情节构造 Suddenly, a familiar figure caught my eye. 衔接句1——Who was the familiar figure? What did he/she do? It was the kind security attendant from my departure. She was standing near the baggage claim area, holding a small box in her hand and looking around, seemingly waiting for someone. When I opened the case, my favorite watercolor set lay there quietly. 衔接句2——What did I find besides the watercolor set? What was the truth? Besides the watercolor set, there was a small note. It said she had kept the set for me and brought it here to return it, hoping I could enjoy painting with it. I finally knew her kind intention. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：Suddenly, a familiar figure caught my eye. →①我看到了出发时的那位安检员，她正拿着一个盒子在等候→②我连忙走过去，她认出了我，笑着把盒子递给我→③我又惊又喜，疑惑地看着她和手中的盒子； 第二段：When I opened the case, my favorite watercolor set lay there quietly. →④盒子里除了水彩套装，还有一张小纸条→⑤我读完纸条，得知安检员特意帮我保管套装，特意来归还→⑥我满心感激，明白善意总能带来温暖的惊喜。 四.段落续写 Suddenly, a familiar figure caught my eye. It was the kind security attendant with a paint stain on her sleeve, standing not far from the baggage carousel, holding a small box tightly. I couldn’t believe my eyes and rushed over. She smiled when she saw me, her eyes warm and kind. “I’ve been waiting for you,” she said gently, handing me the box. My hands trembled as I took it, my heart filled with confusion and anticipation. When I opened the case, my favorite watercolor set lay there quietly. Its sunflower-decorated case was still intact, just as I’d left it. Beside it was a small note: “I couldn’t bear to let such a precious gift be wasted. Hope you enjoy your painting.” Tears filled my eyes. I looked up to thank her, and she patted my shoulder softly. That day, I realized that a little kindness can bring great warmth and unexpected surprises. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $