Unit 1 作文讲义 2025-2026学年译林版英语七年级下册

译林版7下unit1作文专练 Sweet home 题目一：感谢信 题目： 假设你是李明，你的家虽然不大，但非常温馨。请你给父母写一封感谢信，感谢他们为你创造了一个甜蜜的家。内容包括： 1. 描述家里让你感到温暖的地方或时刻（至少2点）； 2. 感谢父母为你做过的具体事情（至少2件）； 3. 表达你对家的爱和祝福。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为感谢信，属于应用文中的书信类。初一学生写感谢信的核心是：真情实感、具体小事、语言简单但真诚。学生不需要写很复杂的句子，关键是写出生活中的真实细节，让父母感受到孩子的感恩之心。话题“甜蜜的家”贴近每个学生的生活，容易写出真情实感。 二、写作要点分析 第一段描述家里温暖的地方或时刻：要写出至少两个具体场景或时刻。例如：“每天放学回家，妈妈已经在厨房做饭了，香味让我觉得很安心”“周末一家人坐在沙发上看电视，爸爸讲笑话，全家一起笑”。不要只说“我家很温暖”，要用画面说话。可以写客厅、餐厅、自己的小房间，或者某个特别的家庭传统。 第二段感谢父母的具体事情：要写出至少两件父母为你做过的事。例如：“妈妈每天早上六点就起来给我做早餐”“爸爸下雨天总是到校门口接我”“生病时爸爸妈妈整夜不睡照顾我”。事情要具体，越小越真实，越能打动人。避免笼统地说“谢谢你们照顾我”。 第三段表达爱和祝福：用简单真诚的话表达对家的爱和对父母的祝福。例如：“有你们在的地方就是最甜的家”“祝爸爸妈妈身体健康，天天开心”。这一段不需要太长，但要有真情实感。 三、语言与格式提醒 感谢信格式：称呼（Dear Mom and Dad,）、正文、结束语（Love, / Yours lovingly,）、签名。语气要亲切温暖，可以用“Love”作为结束语。适当用感叹句表达感情。 重要句型与词组 · I am writing to say thank you for giving me a sweet home. · Every day when I come home, I feel warm because... · The best time for me is when we... · Thank you for always... · I still remember the time when you... · You have taught me that home is not about a big house, but about love. · I love you more than I can say. · I wish you good health and happiness every day. · sweet home, feel safe, warm moment, take care of, be there for me 高分范文（118词） Dear Mom and Dad, I am writing to say thank you for giving me such a sweet home. Every day when I come home from school, I see the warm light in the kitchen and smell Mom’s cooking. That is the best feeling in the world. On weekends, we sit together on the sofa, watching TV and laughing. Those are the moments I love most. Thank you for everything you have done for me. Mom, thank you for getting up early every morning to make breakfast for me. Dad, thank you for walking me to school on rainy days. I still remember when I had a fever last winter, you stayed up all night to take care of me. Home is not a big house, but a place with you in it. I love you more than I can say. I wish you good health and happiness every day. Thank you for making our home so sweet. Love, Li Ming 题目二：邀请函 题目： 假设你叫王小红，你的好朋友张丽最近心情不好。你想邀请她周末来你家玩，让她感受你家的温暖。请你给她写一封邀请函，内容包括： 1. 关心她的心情，表达想邀请她来家里的愿望； 2. 介绍你家里有哪些温馨有趣的事情可以做（至少2件）； 3. 说明具体时间和地址，表达期待她来的心情。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为邀请函，属于应用文中的书信类。邀请好朋友来家里玩，核心是：真诚关心、有趣安排、热情期待。初一学生写给好朋友的邀请函，语气可以亲切自然，像平时说话一样，但要写清楚“做什么”和“时间和地点”。这个话题能让学生练习如何用英语邀请朋友、安排活动。 二、写作要点分析 第一段关心朋友并表达邀请：先表达对朋友心情的关心，让朋友感受到你在乎她。例如：“听说你最近不开心，我很担心你”“我想邀请你来我家玩，换换心情”。这样的开头让邀请不只是“来玩吧”，而是“我关心你，想让你开心”。 第二段介绍家里可以做的事情：至少写出两件具体的事情，最好是温暖有趣、适合好朋友一起做的。例如：“我们可以一起做饼干”“我妈妈会包饺子，你可以跟她学”“我们可以在我房间里看电影、吃零食”“我的猫生小宝宝了，你可以来看”。这些事情要能让人感到放松和快乐。 第三段说明时间和地址并表达期待：写清楚具体时间（周六下午两点）和地址（我家在光明小区3号楼205）。最后表达期待的心情，如“我迫不及待想见到你”“希望你能来，我们一起度过一个开心的下午”。 三、语言与格式提醒 邀请函格式：称呼（Dear Zhang Li,）、正文、结束语（Yours, / Love,）、签名。因为是写给好朋友，语气可以亲切自然，用感叹号表达热情。记得写清楚时间和地址，这是邀请函的必备信息。 重要句型与词组 · I heard that you have been feeling sad these days. I’m worried about you. · I would like to invite you to come to my home this weekend. · We can do many fun things together. · My mom said she can teach us how to... · We can also watch movies and eat snacks in my room. · Please come to my home at... The address is... · I really hope you can come. Let’s have a sweet day together. · cheer up, have a good time, feel better, be together 高分范文（126词） Dear Zhang Li, I heard that you have been feeling sad these days. I’m really worried about you. I would like to invite you to come to my home this Saturday afternoon. I think a change of place may help you cheer up. We can do many fun and warm things together. My mom said she can teach us how to make cookies. We can also watch funny movies and eat snacks in my room. Oh, and my cat just had three baby cats. They are so cute. You can play with them. I’m sure they will make you smile. Please come to my home at 2:00 p.m. this Saturday. The address is Building 3, Room 205, Guangming Community. If you don’t know how to get there, I can meet you at the school gate. I really hope you can come. Let’s have a sweet and happy afternoon together. Yours, Wang Xiaohong 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $